21. Cheemunga 12-4 vs. 22. PencILL 8-2

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    The RBL Rules and Regulations


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  2. PencILL

    PencILL OriGinaL TexT

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  3. PencILL

    PencILL OriGinaL TexT

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    Lesh do thish shun lesh do thish



    Guys be jealous when the dames see me penc spit flames easy
    My punches bout to split ya tounge like u entered the snake species
    You finna blow up son, this nig penc flex bombs
    An punches make u go arial like you was changin ya text font
    Now your on the slope watchin ya ish straight plummet
    Weathermen predictin ur future so cloudy even rain drops fall from it
    Kid not lastin, get launched like balloon flights
    When i smash ya bars all up like old west saloon fights
    You know im droppin flames, you cant doubt it kid
    Even if u dont laugh at my lines you'll still get a kick out of it
    Dont ever step on the mic you'll never make it B
    Coz this kid makes even the mic stand wanna take a seat
    Im killin this cat easy, doin it with some urgency
    Tryna find skill from him will be 'hard pressed' like our fuckin currency
    Ive seen ya lines, im convinced u never witnessed fightin
    Coz im make u deal with so much pain you'll be forced to get a business license
    U skinny as fuck son, better eat ya dinner slick
    Let's transport back to 2000 when ANY gun lines were considered sick
    Ur opponets been lackin skill, now u tryin me next
    Im about to step straight on ur lines like a fuckin sobriety test


    ya done shun ya done
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  4. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    hmmmm..
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  5. Deathscythe

    Deathscythe Guest

    hahah i know who u are penciLL..

    if everyone knows already..ill shut up


    -MUFFFY
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  6. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    i dont know about everyone, but i do. =)
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  7. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    No more posts til Chee drops his verse or I will kick you out.
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  8. cheemagun

    cheemagun THA RAWEST

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  9. cheemagun

    cheemagun THA RAWEST

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    this fag said he would win the championship.. then cant break into the top thirty.

    please..
    you fucking suck…… the ‘bar’ line was played shit
    and if any line was bananas.. monkeys probably ate it
    but on the real…… you wont get notice’d P
    cuz once they read my 1st punch they’ll go –n- vote for me
    who he think he’s hiding from?.. we know he be Opshins
    its like me and Muffffy at a whore house.. same ho we be poppin
    I’m the real mystery, your like who the hell is magun
    no secret my games ghetto.. while your games a gay fetish for one
    my beams beep on target, new shit believe the cops know
    I aim with inf’s like metal detectors.. so keep your mouth closed
    oral hygiene bitch, I’ma stay clowning kids
    fuck rinsing with Listerine nigguh…… straight down the shit
    Opshins don’t want it, If we fist fight your dead son
    I’ll pound your head into so much shock.. its like your head sprung
    your verse sucks.. no bull shit when mention’d your bland
    woulda gave you a couple of tips..
    then you wanted a full set of French on your hands
    you not that bad tho, just don’t lose sight of truth
    your verse is to write home about.. if you had a home to write it to

    sign in with Type Flow again.. bitch


    [jan]
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  10. PencILL

    PencILL OriGinaL TexT

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    rofl again....dq me coz im retarded...edit my verse and when i get done the guy posts...rofl i dont care dq me if u want if not then whatever
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  11. Yuno Alwin

    Yuno Alwin ..as usual

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    vote-Chee chee

    Im just a fan of hard words and his shit sounded a lil more hard hitting to me than pencill...seems like you were trying too hard at times pen and took away from the wit...
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  12. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    who he think he’s hiding from?.. we know he be Opshins
    its like me and Muffffy at a whore house.. same ho we be poppin


    ^lmfao

    Guys be jealous when the dames see me penc spit flames easy
    My punches bout to split ya tounge like u entered the snake species
    (ehh naw)
    You finna blow up son, this nig penc flex bombs
    An punches make u go arial like you was changin ya text font
    (coo;)
    Now your on the slope watchin ya ish straight plummet
    Weathermen predictin ur future so cloudy even rain drops fall from it
    (k)
    Kid not lastin, get launched like balloon flights
    When i smash ya bars all up like old west saloon fights
    (played concept..but ok wording)
    You know im droppin flames, you cant doubt it kid
    Even if u dont laugh at my lines you'll still get a kick out of it
    (good)
    Dont ever step on the mic you'll never make it B
    Coz this kid makes even the mic stand wanna take a seat
    (k)
    Im killin this cat easy, doin it with some urgency
    Tryna find skill from him will be 'hard pressed' like our fuckin currency
    (k)
    Ive seen ya lines, im convinced u never witnessed fightin
    Coz im make u deal with so much pain you'll be forced to get a business license
    (deal..business..i like)
    U skinny as fuck son, better eat ya dinner slick
    Let's transport back to 2000 when ANY gun lines were considered sick
    (noooo)
    Ur opponets been lackin skill, now u tryin me next
    Im about to step straight on ur lines like a fuckin sobriety test
    (nooooo)





    please..
    you fucking suck…… the ‘bar’ line was played shit
    and if any line was bananas.. monkeys probably ate it
    (good personal..)
    but on the real…… you wont get notice’d P
    cuz once they read my 1st punch they’ll go –n- vote for me
    (k)
    who he think he’s hiding from?.. we know he be Opshins
    its like me and Muffffy at a whore house.. same ho we be poppin
    (lmfao...good personal)
    I’m the real mystery, your like who the hell is magun
    no secret my games ghetto.. while your games a gay fetish for one
    (eh_
    my beams beep on target, new shit believe the cops know
    I aim with inf’s like metal detectors.. so keep your mouth closed
    (heh)
    oral hygiene bitch, I’ma stay clowning kids
    fuck rinsing with Listerine nigguh…… straight down the shit
    (huh? flew ova my head fam)
    Opshins don’t want it, If we fist fight your dead son
    I’ll pound your head into so much shock.. its like your head sprung
    (lol)
    your verse sucks.. no bull shit when mention’d your bland
    woulda gave you a couple of tips..
    then you wanted a full set of French on your hands
    (heh)
    you not that bad tho, just don’t lose sight of truth
    your verse is to write home about.. if you had a home to write it to
    (k finish)


    yo opshins is cool as fuck..but b/coz im a honest voter..

    ill give this to chee on consistency

    ophins might get dqued neway..hes hated like a maufcka
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  13. Emcee Sweets

    Emcee Sweets New Member

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    i think pencill took this. the verse did fall off bad with the last four bars but the rest was straight. i only like the whore house and opener from chee.

    vote pencill
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  14. MR_007

    MR_007 U TALKIN TO MR_007

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    Chee ur shit was crushin son. U are a battler on the real very impressed on how u spit it. Ur flow was nice too and the metaphors was decent too. U just was a fuckin dragon on the track.

    Pencill u did ur thing but u was as hard with the punches. If u woulda came a lil more harder u woulda probably got everyone attention handz down.

    VOTE - Chee
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  15. Stepp

    Stepp T-Bo

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    pencil had some nice lines the arial font and the business license where cool. nothing was directed at chee tho

    chee got personal and came hard hitting thur out his verse



    vote: chee
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  16. Beserker

    Beserker New Member

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    vote- chee, came more consistent & hard hitting yo.
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  17. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    wtf... i aint even like opshins...

    v/ penc...

    consistently more witty, nicer lines. i have no idea how people are saying chee was more consistent...
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  18. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    word...and kids saying he had personals...he had one...rofl i dont care though nice verse chee
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  19. Young Lac

    Young Lac New Member

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    if ur votin for this chee cat...jesus christ u need to be slapped
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  20. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Opshins, your never gonna get any better are you?
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