"1K? [a Thousand Questions]"

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  1. Novaman: RaWKiLLa

    Novaman: RaWKiLLa New Member

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    1K?

    A thousand questions in my mind
    Fighting to realize the purpose of my design
    Sown in the matrix of my mother by the Divine
    Yet born in iniquity, so my soul is inclined
    To commit spiritually heinous crimes against the Most High
    Satan whisipering in my ear with that same lie
    He told job, "Sale your soul, curse God, and die."
    But yet in still, I yearn to surrender my will
    To the One
    Who sent His only begotten Son
    In human flesh to taste death, and ressurect
    Those souls who were cleansed by His blood
    And sanctified by His words, never disturbed by the flood
    Rushed through the mouth of the enemy who taught us to kill our seed
    And we wonder why our future is stinking of darkness and agony
    But the voices in my ear tell me God is no One to fear
    To relish in my self-destruction and suicide
    Telling me there is no hope, nothing but what I see in the outside
    So I just close my eyes
    And revert back to these questions of my mind

    test
  2. 49th Prophet

    49th Prophet Dark Magic Inferno

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    I never saw any of your pieces before, but I really liked this one, the flow was good with it, and I really couldnt qoute one thing without qouting it all....really nice work....much love

    peace
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    "Yet born in iniquity, so my soul is inclined
    To commit spiritually heinous crimes against the Most High
    Satan whisipering in my ear with that same lie
    He told job, "Sale your soul, curse God, and die."
    But yet in still, I yearn to surrender my will
    To the One"

    boy where you been at? Thought you forgot all about the realm man. This was nice, not like the other piece i've read from you, this was mad short for u lol. Glad to see you back

    one luv
    test
  4. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    I think I have found another favorite among the realm...I loved this piece...without a doubt...I loved it entirely....
    test
  5. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    Who sent His only begotten Son
    In human flesh to taste death, and ressurect

    tight peice nicely written
    test
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