19. Name play. 1-0 vs 20. Schadenfreude 1-0

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    19. Name play. 1-0 vs 20. Schadenfreude 1-0
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  2. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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  3. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    NO QUESTION!!

    Damn, can't even pretend to care what this coward's about
    but I can't lose,
    cause you'd only hold a candle to Fue's, when your power's out
    you lame bore, forcing those lines just to get maimed whore,
    so throw another weak set-up and my punches'll start a gang-war
    Name's played, using cons I threw away, KOed by a few a day,
    cause the herb's lame, this bird brain threw a punch & it flew away
    look here pussy, don't ever question me, the fuck is you?
    weak-ass dude.....I'm WhaTz: "you're what the fuck is the use?"
    of coming up with fresh concepts to damage this cock fan,
    when super slut has such a fruity strut,
    ..........it'd make a great controller for Rock Band
    I’m hot fam, but haven't been spitting hard as I usually do,
    told KG I had to get to the bottom of the problem: he sent me you
    been said you sucked, that's why labels never considered ya,
    it's such a fucking shame, Name couldn't get signed in a signature
    choices are noshow or my bars, scarred from the start cake,
    so I guess between here and there meant rock and a hard place.

    lol, I'm ultra early, good luck to you dudeson.
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  4. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    just like the pats, one short of 19... ill take this whore down~
    remember when u thought you'd champ it? so does georgetown~
    u lost in my kingdom son, like a kid at disney, ur magic turned tragic~
    kinda like that style...
    that shit was played long before u stole it from magus~
    your name plays on Name play. are played,
    voters dont got amnesia~
    sorry, top 20 dont need ya,
    i got somethin for that forced shit, heres some milk of magnesia~
    nigga started his record over so he could shake off losin the champ match~
    he push the envelope on awful names, i pushed it back with anthrax~
    i fucking hate text, you slut, but my verses still pay the rent~
    you need to stick to it..
    you couldn't sell your mp3's, half your verse didn't even make cents....~
    you think its smart to post this early with THAT mess? fine..~
    voters: notice how i dont need dot-dot-dot's to cover up stretched lines~
    funny... i could be money, and this nigga still never could've handled me~
    you so lame.. you lost despite the fact everyone thinks I'm Daniel C.~
    my dude really put down the sticks and decided to start battlin' cats~
    the only video game playin german faggot ever who decided to dabble in rap~


    16 keyed up quick.

    good luck gettin back into the top 20.
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  5. DopeVisuals

    DopeVisuals Passion is the Pulse

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    This one is kinda tough to vote on actually...

    Let me Break it Down One By One.

    Schad:

    Damn, can't even pretend to care what this coward's about
    but I can't lose,
    cause you'd only hold a candle to Fue's, when your power's out
    you lame bore, forcing those lines just to get maimed whore,
    so throw another weak set-up and my punches'll start a gang-war
    Name's played, using cons I threw away, KOed by a few a day,
    cause the herb's lame, this bird brain threw a punch & it flew away
    look here pussy, don't ever question me, the fuck is you?
    weak-ass dude.....I'm WhaTz: "you're what the fuck is the use?"

    Didn't like any of this, Just multi's Nothin real clever, The
    First line wasn't even really on rhythm, which is always
    A bad way to start off a verse.


    of coming up with fresh concepts to damage this cock fan,
    when super slut has such a fruity strut,
    ..........it'd make a great controller for Rock Band
    I’m hot fam, but haven't been spitting hard as I usually do,
    told KG I had to get to the bottom of the problem: he sent me you
    been said you sucked, that's why labels never considered ya,
    it's such a fucking shame, Name couldn't get signed in a signature

    Like these lines, the bottom of the problem line was dope, the
    other 2 were soso, nothing too special. & The finisher wasn't very
    good either. Seems like you rushed your verse this week cuz
    I've read some really really dope stuff from you. So Just Get focused.


    Name Play:

    just like the pats, one short of 19... ill take this whore down~
    remember when u thought you'd champ it? so does georgetown~
    u lost in my kingdom son, like a kid at disney, ur magic turned tragic~
    kinda like that style...
    that shit was played long before u stole it from magus~

    The first line was a good idea/concept but man.. you really
    butchered the wording or somethin, cuz it just seems a bit off.
    Good idea tho for sure. Magus line was a good shot, even tho
    You stretched it out oddly to go against the rest of the verses
    scheme


    nigga started his record over so he could shake off losin the champ match~
    he push the envelope on awful names, i pushed it back with anthrax~

    Dope, liked it.

    your name plays on Name play. are played,
    voters dont got amnesia~
    sorry, top 20 dont need ya,
    i got somethin for that forced shit, heres some milk of magnesia~
    i fucking hate text, you slut, but my verses still pay the rent~
    you need to stick to it..
    you couldn't sell your mp3's, half your verse didn't even make cents....~

    These lines hurt real bad. You just used a you couldn't sell music
    Your verse doesnt even make sense/cents line.. Honestly lol.
    That was like back in 98 and even then it still sucked bad.
    I really hated seeing thta line in the middle there.


    you think its smart to post this early with THAT mess? fine..~
    voters: notice how i dont need dot-dot-dot's to cover up stretched lines~
    funny... i could be money, and this nigga still never could've handled me~
    you so lame.. you lost despite the fact everyone thinks I'm Daniel C.~

    Dope I think this is what got you the win along with the
    Anthrax line. However One comment, You said


    The line you used was good but it took away all its creditability
    Cuz you used ... & Short 5 Word lines & ~~~ throughout
    Your entire verse to do the same thing you just dissed him about.

    However, Schad disappointed me.

    Was hard to really choose my favorite but.

    Vote - Name Play.

    goodluck both
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  6. xEPITOMEx

    xEPITOMEx The Golden Rule

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    This one was pretty tight so a good battle to vote on. Pretty much I liked the style both of you came with but wasn't feeling a fair proportion of your lines all that much...

    e.g.
    look here pussy, don't ever question me, the fuck is you?
    weak-ass dude.....I'm WhaTz: "you're what the fuck is the use?"

    i fucking hate text, you slut, but my verses still pay the rent~
    you need to stick to it..
    you couldn't sell your mp3's, half your verse didn't even make cents....~
    ^I liked where you were going with this, but cents/sense? DV summed that up correctly


    Basically it comes down to a battle of the lines I thought were ill:

    Sch:
    "Name's played, using cons I threw away, KOed by a few a day,
    cause the herb's lame, this bird brain threw a punch & it flew away"

    "been said you sucked, that's why labels never considered ya,
    it's such a fucking shame, Name couldn't get signed in a signature"

    vs.

    NP:
    "sorry, top 20 dont need ya,
    i got somethin for that forced shit, heres some milk of magnesia~"

    "you think its smart to post this early with THAT mess? fine..~
    voters: notice how i dont need dot-dot-dot's to cover up stretched lines~"

    "my dude really put down the sticks and decided to start battlin' cats~
    the only video game playin german faggot ever who decided to dabble in rap~"


    Think NP made me laugh a bit more with his punches, and for me did enough to take this one...

    vote = Name Play
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  7. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    funny... i could be money, and this nigga still never could've handled me~
    you so lame.. you lost despite the fact everyone thinks I'm Daniel C.~


    lmao... i get no love.
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  8. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    Damn, can't even pretend to care what this coward's about
    but I can't lose,
    cause you'd only hold a candle to Fue's, when your power's out

    that was a dope opener


    Name's played, using cons I threw away, KOed by a few a day,
    cause the herb's lame, this bird brain threw a punch & it flew away

    I’m hot fam, but haven't been spitting hard as I usually do,
    told KG I had to get to the bottom of the problem: he sent me you

    cool verse from schadenfreude



    u lost in my kingdom son, like a kid at disney, ur magic turned tragic~
    kinda like that style...
    that shit was played long before u stole it from magus~

    doope personal


    nigga started his record over so he could shake off losin the champ match~
    he push the envelope on awful names, i pushed it back with anthrax~


    name play had two very dope lines in his verse, but i really wasnt feeling the rest of it...however the two i was feeling were punch pan worthy

    scha was hella consistent right from the get go and really didnt have any lines that i strongly disliked

    so going off of that my vote goes to Schadenfreude
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  9. Big Mack

    Big Mack Boss

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    Hard battle to pick a winner.

    I don't even wanna vote, but I gotta because of this five link shit. Schadenfreude, that dude came harder than Name, but names verses were alright.

    I know that when some rappers write, ................ means a pause.

    I gotta give the verse to Name though, He had more personal's.

    Vote=Name

    P.S. I hated that Cents line...argh. Man I hated that line
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  10. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    You're right, I'm not feelin' that line, either. Just keyed it off and didn't think twice about it. Went back to edit it out, but, someone had already voted.

    Good battle, Schade.
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  11. 2Shay

    2Shay Englands Finest

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    vs


    thought this was pretty 1 sided,
    name was more consistant,hit harder,
    shade use played concepts and admitted it so seemed like he was strugglin'

    Vote - Name
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  12. Chin Kwon

    Chin Kwon The Angkorian

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    Schad...

    Clever

    lol...aigh, coo

    the wording threw me off on this one. But you had the right idea..

    Nah

    heheh..dope.

    dope! Feelin that one.

    dope closer

    vs.

    Name play..

    not the best opener, but it works..

    nice..

    lol...nope!

    heheh, aigh..

    nah
    no

    didn't work, cause i have no idea who daniel c is.


    meh...


    Breakdown Dope battle. They both had great grasp on conceptual delivery so what it boils down to was how hard the lines were. I thought Name's verse was more directed towards his opponent...but Schad had some ill lines. That 'signature' line and the 'problem' line were ill. This was a hard one but...

    Vote: Schad for consistency and a very clean cut style that was both creative and direct.
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  13. MIC'ed Up

    MIC'ed Up Don't talk Just Spit

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    Schadenfruede:

    Damn, can't even pretend to care what this coward's about
    but I can't lose,
    cause you'd only hold a candle to Fue's, when your power's out

    been said you sucked, that's why labels never considered ya,
    it's such a fucking shame, Name couldn't get signed in a signature

    No doubt these lines were executed well I was feeling most of the spit but you did have multie filler here and there. You had decent wordplay and the flow was on track.

    Vs.

    Nameplay:

    nigga started his record over so he could shake off losin the champ match~
    he push the envelope on awful names, i pushed it back with anthrax~

    you think its smart to post this early with THAT mess? fine..~
    voters: notice how i dont need dot-dot-dot's to cover up stretched lines~

    Well I felt your two quotables hit harder and was more personal. You did beat around the bush a little but I thought you used your concepts better. Your flow wasn't nothing to write home about, you did manage to stray away from the filler shit though. This is the best battle I've read this week so far.

    Vote: Nameplay
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  14. Memorie

    Memorie Of The Long Term Breed

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    Schade:
    Nice verse, the beginning was tight, then the Set-gang war was ok ... The Set-up to bird-brain was iffy, could've been replaced but the punch was on-point ... The KG line was funny and the signature was tight ... The closer was ugly, didn't like it but whatever. Tight verse overall

    Nameplay:
    That Magus line was tight ... and Magnesia was fire. The anthrax was cool, and the Daniel C had me cracking the fuck up ... That closer reminded me of "Angry German Kid" on Youtube so it was awesome. That cents line was a HUGE negative nigga ... we know that you know, but I'm just re-supplying the know, you know? Get it? Got it? Good. NICE verse overall

    A tight battle, I thought Schade could've came a little better (trying not to butcher the Alias ...) but he had a few lines ... Name play definitely took the battle though, he had more punches and was much more diverse ... Entertaining from both sides nonethless

    Vote = Name play
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  15. xX_NASTY_Xx

    xX_NASTY_Xx Guest

    Schadenfreude

    Damn, can't even pretend to care what this coward's about
    but I can't lose,
    cause you'd only hold a candle to Fue's, when your power's out....HAHA

    you lame bore, forcing those lines just to get maimed whore,
    so throw another weak set-up and my punches'll start a gang-war....NOT DIGGIN THIS

    Name's played, using cons I threw away, KOed by a few a day,
    cause the herb's lame, this bird brain threw a punch & it flew away....NOPE

    look here pussy, don't ever question me, the fuck is you?
    weak-ass dude.....I'm WhaTz: "you're what the fuck is the use?"....LOL

    of coming up with fresh concepts to damage this cock fan,
    when super slut has such a fruity strut,
    ..........it'd make a great controller for Rock Band....EH

    I’m hot fam, but haven't been spitting hard as I usually do,
    told KG I had to get to the bottom of the problem: he sent me you....LOL NICE

    been said you sucked, that's why labels never considered ya,
    it's such a fucking shame, Name couldn't get signed in a signature....NOPE

    choices are noshow or my bars, scarred from the start cake,
    so I guess between here and there meant rock and a hard place....AIGHT

    Name play

    just like the pats, one short of 19... ill take this whore down~
    remember when u thought you'd champ it? so does georgetown~....LOL POOR GEORGETOWN

    u lost in my kingdom son, like a kid at disney, ur magic turned tragic~
    kinda like that style...
    that shit was played long before u stole it from magus~....FIRST LINE EH I LIKED THE SECOND LINE

    your name plays on Name play. are played,
    voters dont got amnesia~
    sorry, top 20 dont need ya,
    i got somethin for that forced shit, heres some milk of magnesia~....LOL NICE THE SHIT LINES ARE USUALLY PLAYED BUT I LIKE THIS ONE

    nigga started his record over so he could shake off losin the champ match~
    he push the envelope on awful names, i pushed it back with anthrax~....BOOO ANTHRAX

    i fucking hate text, you slut, but my verses still pay the rent~
    you need to stick to it..
    you couldn't sell your mp3's, half your verse didn't even make cents....~....AIGHT

    you think its smart to post this early with THAT mess? fine..~
    voters: notice how i dont need dot-dot-dot's to cover up stretched lines~....LOL................LOL

    funny... i could be money, and this nigga still never could've handled me~
    you so lame.. you lost despite the fact everyone thinks I'm Daniel C.~....NO LOVE LOL NO LOVE

    my dude really put down the sticks and decided to start battlin' cats~
    the only video game playin german faggot ever who decided to dabble in rap~....EH

    VOTE= Name play. Close but he edged it out with a more solid verse.
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  16. ~*^Abaddon^*~

    ~*^Abaddon^*~ New Member

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    reaaaal close battle man...


    Damn, can't even pretend to care what this coward's about
    but I can't lose,
    cause you'd only hold a candle to Fue's, when your power's out
    you lame bore, forcing those lines just to get maimed whore,
    so throw another weak set-up and my punches'll start a gang-war
    Name's played, using cons I threw away, KOed by a few a day,
    cause the herb's lame, this bird brain threw a punch & it flew away
    I’m hot fam, but haven't been spitting hard as I usually do,
    told KG I had to get to the bottom of the problem: he sent me you

    those lines were fresh as hell from schade, very dope drop



    u lost in my kingdom son, like a kid at disney, ur magic turned tragic~
    kinda like that style...
    that shit was played long before u stole it from magus~
    nigga started his record over so he could shake off losin the champ match~
    he push the envelope on awful names, i pushed it back with anthrax~
    you think its smart to post this early with THAT mess? fine..~
    voters: notice how i dont need dot-dot-dot's to cover up stretched lines~

    that anthrax line was def. the line of the battle, but everything else wasnt really tooo great


    ive read and reread yo...and im givin the battle to SCHADE in a close one
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  17. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    Uppin over the closed threads.
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  18. Taylormade`

    Taylormade` New Member

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    Shade:

    you lame bore, forcing those lines just to get maimed whore,
    so throw another weak set-up and my punches'll start a gang-war

    wasn't feeling the verse at all

    Nameplay:

    your name plays on Name play. are played,
    voters dont got amnesia~
    sorry, top 20 dont need ya,
    i got somethin for that forced shit, heres some milk of magnesia~
    nigga started his record over so he could shake off losin the champ match~
    he push the envelope on awful names, i pushed it back with anthrax~
    my dude really put down the sticks and decided to start battlin' cats~
    the only video game playin german faggot ever who decided to dabble in rap~\

    v/ Nameplay

    he had the much better verse
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  19. Willie Gallo

    Willie Gallo alias?

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    Damn, can't even pretend to care what this coward's about
    but I can't lose,
    cause you'd only hold a candle to Fue's, when your power's out

    very dope opener

    you lame bore, forcing those lines just to get maimed whore,
    so throw another weak set-up and my punches'll start a gang-war

    ...cool

    Name's played, using cons I threw away, KOed by a few a day,
    cause the herb's lame, this bird brain threw a punch & it flew away

    decent

    look here pussy, don't ever question me, the fuck is you?
    weak-ass dude.....I'm WhaTz: "you're what the fuck is the use?"

    nah, not feeling

    of coming up with fresh concepts to damage this cock fan,
    when super slut has such a fruity strut,
    ..........it'd make a great controller for Rock Band

    lol

    I’m hot fam, but haven't been spitting hard as I usually do,
    told KG I had to get to the bottom of the problem: he sent me you

    old concept, but you worded it nicely

    been said you sucked, that's why labels never considered ya,
    it's such a fucking shame, Name couldn't get signed in a signature

    been done

    choices are noshow or my bars, scarred from the start cake,
    so I guess between here and there meant rock and a hard place.

    decent closer


    pretty cool verse from schade, some lines were fire...some lines werent, but overall a good drop


    just like the pats, one short of 19... ill take this whore down~
    remember when u thought you'd champ it? so does georgetown~

    weak opener

    u lost in my kingdom son, like a kid at disney, ur magic turned tragic~
    kinda like that style...
    that shit was played long before u stole it from magus~

    cool personal

    your name plays on Name play. are played,
    voters dont got amnesia~
    sorry, top 20 dont need ya,
    i got somethin for that forced shit, heres some milk of magnesia~

    not good

    nigga started his record over so he could shake off losin the champ match~
    he push the envelope on awful names, i pushed it back with anthrax~

    woooow that was dope

    i fucking hate text, you slut, but my verses still pay the rent~
    you need to stick to it..
    you couldn't sell your mp3's, half your verse didn't even make cents....~

    lame

    you think its smart to post this early with THAT mess? fine..~
    voters: notice how i dont need dot-dot-dot's to cover up stretched lines~

    lol...

    funny... i could be money, and this nigga still never could've handled me~
    you so lame.. you lost despite the fact everyone thinks I'm Daniel C.~

    lame

    my dude really put down the sticks and decided to start battlin' cats~
    the only video game playin german faggot ever who decided to dabble in rap~

    lame closer


    Vote Schadenfreude....NP had the anthrax line and the stole from magus line but that ws it
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  20. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Well, I thought Schade had this one cuz of these lines

    you lame bore, forcing those lines just to get maimed whore,
    so throw another weak set-up and my punches'll start a gang-war
    Name's played, using cons I threw away, KOed by a few a day,
    cause the herb's lame, this bird brain threw a punch & it flew away
    look here pussy, don't ever question me, the fuck is you?
    weak-ass dude.....I'm WhaTz: "you're what the fuck is the use?"

    but when Nameplay said this

    u lost in my kingdom son, like a kid at disney, ur magic turned tragic~
    kinda like that style...
    that shit was played long before u stole it from magus~
    your name plays on Name play. are played,
    voters dont got amnesia~
    sorry, top 20 dont need ya,
    i got somethin for that forced shit, heres some milk of magnesia~

    it just hit a little harder to me

    vote=Name
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