19. Ibeechu Farensquare 15-6 vs. 20. Eddie. 9-3

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

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  2. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    ight 16



    whack verses are a Whoot....and mine are hardly it...
    but ur verses are more like Arsenio Halls audience...
    wait...ur too young to remember them night themes
    shit..im battlin a kid that was practically BORN in the 90's
    fuk it...keep raising ur loses...it's obvious ur suckin now
    but imma keep Eddie's Wins-low enuff to have Urkel come around
    damn..another 90's reference...but i'll still get him
    Sauce had me against the ropes...
    but then I ducked his clothes line and dropped kicked him
    it'll be a cold day in hell when u considered the king of rhymin
    LHS the Total package...which is why Wheaties sales been climbin
    soundin all gay in ur audios....and u did it on purpose
    but u had Bolder lyrics than most cause I dropped one on ya after I heard it
    A guy in an electic chair had a last request to read ur last-verse
    he read it...
    they pulled the switch....n the autopsy showed he died of laughter
    okay...just to give you a chance....this last line'll be whack as fuck
    eddie....eddie.....eddie.....eddie....eddie...LHS......LHS......LHS......
    mmk...thas enuff
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  3. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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  4. Menso

    Menso Go Lakers!

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    lol @ Ibeech
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  5. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    grrrr....hurry up sauce
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  6. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    You cant write a verse on your own, its sickining
    You might not be a democrat, but you still wanna be ‘kerry’ to victory
    He was on the highway to fame and he knows it
    But then he ran into a road block,
    ….and got stomped the fuck out by adonis
    Ibeechur moms dope? Hell no, that’s deceitfull
    Cuz no one gives a shit about IM, kinda like the omish people
    Cuz dude, I see through your wack shit, you suck by far
    its like facin another person, your right is different from ours
    rappin behind bars, I got somethin to say
    You know your bad when your record resemble a fucking liscence plate
    But go ahead and talk shit, keep runnin about
    Cuz if im dick, that expliains why my names in your mouth
    You need to correct your punches, none of ‘em hit
    Your lines missed me so much,
    I thought your closer was ganna be a fucking kiss
    I movin up and your movin down, im sayin whats fair
    Cuz the truth about this is, I beat you…..fair and square

    eh.
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  7. Jot Flames

    Jot Flames I Wish I Was Al Murder U

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    i'm bout to vote.....fucked up my bad....
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  8. Jot Flames

    Jot Flames I Wish I Was Al Murder U

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    Vote/ Lil H.S.
    just to be plain serious these lines won my vote in the scuffle between these two..........

    But go ahead and talk shit, keep runnin about
    Cuz if im dick, that expliains why my names in your mouth


    Killer Lines Sauce that shit was funny......lol Good Shit!
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  9. Yuno Alwin

    Yuno Alwin ..as usual

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    no comment on the dick line being used...but other than that sauce verse still won...i liked the fucking kiss line...

    Ibeechu kinda blew it wit the winslow thing which a few people have done , than you fell off at the end and threw in some filler....better luck next time though dude

    vote- lil hot sauce
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  10. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    Wow...im signin out
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  11. Muffffy

    Muffffy Attack of the Muff

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    whack verses are a Whoot....and mine are hardly it...
    but ur verses are more like Arsenio Halls audience...
    (ok)
    wait...ur too young to remember them night themes
    shit..im battlin a kid that was practically BORN in the 90's
    (ok)
    fuk it...keep raising ur loses...it's obvious ur suckin now
    but imma keep Eddie's Wins-low enuff to have Urkel come around
    (..decent wordplay)
    damn..another 90's reference...but i'll still get him
    Sauce had me against the ropes...
    but then I ducked his clothes line and dropped kicked him
    (wtf that was gay)
    it'll be a cold day in hell when u considered the king of rhymin
    LHS the Total package...which is why Wheaties sales been climbin
    (not feeling)
    soundin all gay in ur audios....and u did it on purpose
    but u had Bolder lyrics than most cause I dropped one on ya after I heard it
    (no)
    A guy in an electic chair had a last request to read ur last-verse
    he read it...
    they pulled the switch....n the autopsy showed he died of laughter
    (LOL funny)
    okay...just to give you a chance....this last line'll be whack as fuck
    eddie....eddie.....eddie.....eddie....eddie...LHS......LHS......LHS......
    mmk...thas enuff
    (filler..wack)


    You cant write a verse on your own, its sickining
    You might not be a democrat, but you still wanna be ‘kerry’ to victory
    (Very played..omg)
    He was on the highway to fame and he knows it
    But then he ran into a road block,
    ….and got stomped the fuck out by adonis
    (hah i like)
    Ibeechur moms dope? Hell no, that’s deceitfull
    Cuz no one gives a shit about IM, kinda like the omish people
    (k)
    Cuz dude, I see through your wack shit, you suck by far
    its like facin another person, your right is different from ours
    (no)
    rappin behind bars, I got somethin to say
    You know your bad when your record resemble a fucking liscence plate
    (lool...funny..it doesnt..but he means the 15-6 shit..pretty funny)
    But go ahead and talk shit, keep runnin about
    Cuz if im dick, that expliains why my names in your mouth
    (OMG PLAYED WTF IS GOIN ON()
    You need to correct your punches, none of ‘em hit
    Your lines missed me so much,
    I thought your closer was ganna be a fucking kiss
    (NO)
    I movin up and your movin down, im sayin whats fair
    Cuz the truth about this is, I beat you…..fair and square
    (no)



    Man i thought eddie had this till he overwhelmingly fell off towards the end

    Those DIck in ur mouth/name shits

    really played fam

    v/ibeech on consistency
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  12. Young Lac

    Young Lac New Member

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    ^^^rotfl..word to that..

    tho ur verse wasnt too special...that winslow line SUCKED, and has been used 324234 times from like 01...
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  13. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    Ibeechu:

    whack verses are a Whoot....and mine are hardly it...
    but ur verses are more like Arsenio Halls audience...

    okay

    wait...ur too young to remember them night themes
    shit..im battlin a kid that was practically BORN in the 90's

    are you an old geezer then?

    fuk it...keep raising ur loses...it's obvious ur suckin now
    but imma keep Eddie's Wins-low enuff to have Urkel come around

    blah

    damn..another 90's reference...but i'll still get him
    Sauce had me against the ropes...
    but then I ducked his clothes line and dropped kicked him

    right

    it'll be a cold day in hell when u considered the king of rhymin
    LHS the Total package...which is why Wheaties sales been climbin

    i've seen that before..

    soundin all gay in ur audios....and u did it on purpose
    but u had Bolder lyrics than most cause I dropped one on ya after I heard it

    meh pretty good

    A guy in an electic chair had a last request to read ur last-verse
    he read it...
    they pulled the switch....n the autopsy showed he died of laughter

    okay

    okay...just to give you a chance....this last line'll be whack as fuck
    eddie....eddie.....eddie.....eddie....eddie...LHS......LHS......LHS......
    mmk...thas enuff

    what the fuck?


    Lil hot sauce:


    You cant write a verse on your own, its sickining
    You might not be a democrat, but you still wanna be ‘kerry’ to victory

    blah @ the kerry thing, petty wordplay

    He was on the highway to fame and he knows it
    But then he ran into a road block,
    ….and got stomped the fuck out by adonis

    lol ok

    Ibeechur moms dope? Hell no, that’s deceitfull
    Cuz no one gives a shit about IM, kinda like the omish people

    okay

    Cuz dude, I see through your wack shit, you suck by far
    its like facin another person, your right is different from ours

    okay

    rappin behind bars, I got somethin to say
    You know your bad when your record resemble a fucking liscence plate

    nice

    But go ahead and talk shit, keep runnin about
    Cuz if im dick, that expliains why my names in your mouth

    nice

    You need to correct your punches, none of ‘em hit
    Your lines missed me so much,
    I thought your closer was ganna be a fucking kiss

    nice

    I movin up and your movin down, im sayin whats fair
    Cuz the truth about this is, I beat you…..fair and square

    meh ... pretty good coulda been re-worded to make it better.

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    I've seen hot sauce come better, along with Ibeechu...both came very weak though, but it's pretty simple to spot out who took the win in this battle. Breaking it down...hot sauce had more creativity in his lines, along with much more consistent punches, barely any multies (were there any actually?) wordplay was "rofl." Ibeechu came with played-out punches, dude it seems like yer mad old cuz of those 90 lines lololol, I think you kinda under-estimated yer opponent here...that's all. Best lines from Hot sauce were the Kiss one...the license plate one...and that's 'bout it...as I broke it down above I'ma give this to Hot Sauce he just came harder. Good battle.

    Vote -- Lil hot sauce (eddie)
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  14. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    wait...ur too young to remember them night themes
    shit..im battlin a kid that was practically BORN in the 90's
    okay...just to give you a chance....this last line'll be whack as fuck
    eddie....eddie.....eddie.....eddie....eddie...LHS......LHS......LHS......
    mmk...thas enuff

    v

    He was on the highway to fame and he knows it
    But then he ran into a road block,
    ….and got stomped the fuck out by adonis
    rappin behind bars, I got somethin to say
    You know your bad when your record resemble a fucking liscence plate

    the last one coulda been worded better


    V- Ibeech on consistency
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  15. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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  16. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    wrestlin reference....just incase u didn't know
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  17. Mr. Skull

    Mr. Skull G.T.P.

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    Vote-Ibeechu... it was pretty much even except that LHS had some really blah is and IF had some kinda blah ish.. so consistency wins..
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  18. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    V/Ibeechu
    I dont think anyone got the total line. Both came average, obvious I beechu was slackin on hot sauce, but he still won.
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  19. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    yea that total package line was dope
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  20. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    lines i saw:

    beechu
    fuk it...keep raising ur loses...it's obvious ur suckin now
    but imma keep Eddie's Wins-low enuff to have Urkel come around
    it'll be a cold day in hell when u considered the king of rhymin
    LHS the Total package...which is why Wheaties sales been climbin
    A guy in an electic chair had a last request to read ur last-verse
    he read it...
    they pulled the switch....n the autopsy showed he died of laughter

    sauce

    He was on the highway to fame and he knows it
    But then he ran into a road block,
    ….and got stomped the fuck out by adonis
    You need to correct your punches, none of ‘em hit
    Your lines missed me so much,
    I thought your closer was ganna be a fucking kiss
    i'v used a concept like this a while back.. but haven't really seen it since, so i'm still givin u some credit

    i think beechu came alittle more original.

    vote - beech

    good shit tho
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