19.Highpaw the Cyst 3-0 Vs 20.Eye-dill 3-1

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Oct 5, 2003.

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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  2. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    18. U are a terrorist... what is your next scheme?...-IV

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    my heart is filled with anger, jealously, pain, evil, hell and drama
    plus insanity, I'm driven by the wrath and ideas of osama
    and I'ma bomb a building, until every vowel is told or said
    they'll explain everything, including the reason I wear the towel on my head
    there is no question, I need help but not a therapist
    I've been against the world from the start, since before I was a terrorist
    which makes me the king, ya can't compare the next to jack
    so step aside an let me prepare the next attack
    beware, my text is back.. I'll break any boy, or girl member
    cuz bein a terrorist is a joke, like what we did to the world trade center
    americans don't think it's funny but we stand in shiver
    cuz bombing New York wasn't shit......... our next plan is bigger
    I know we haven't struck, but don't think we are not presently active
    when we're actually makin a plan to take the president captive
    and it's gonna work, there's no way your stopping us
    it doesn't matter if the FBI, the NYPD, or whoever, is watching us
    we got it covered, we are basically invisible
    and take our time on every mission, cuz we are patiently invincible
    so whether ya died on 9/11, or passed away on the day after
    get ready for the second coming...... cuz you all will die in the next disaster!

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  3. HighPawTheCyst

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    18. U are a terrorist... what is your next scheme?...-IV





    well, it seems that planes to buildings isn't relevant to repeat
    cause the only thing we did was leave sediments and debree
    we put a dent in the population not benelevent with our deeds
    are presence was just to weak, the president still can breathe
    no medicine was achieved, but anthrax failed unexpected
    we almost got em, they were shocked when we used the mail as a weapon
    we hailed for a second, and i know we failed but depression
    impales their intestines yearly as the date sails the eleventh
    the tales aren't too pleasant, yet, they're not supposed to be
    we played around with the black out, and left the coast asleep
    everyone is back to normal except for the ocean breeze
    of cane isa an act of violence that wasn't controled by me
    but hopefully they all forgot of past terrorists acts
    cause i've set a blue print that has planned terrible facts
    and people wont see it coming my clans set to attack
    on a holiday next year and my camps ready for that
    but one chance pressures the actions in which, we can achieve
    we've devised a weapon disabling people to breath
    the demons in me feed off all the evil i keep
    cause i got a fetish for seeing a person scream and then bleed
    but intrigued in a scheme to leave the US beneath in the sea
    i've secretly heaved an idea to decrease em with glea
    it's easy but seems diffucult when i speak of the theme
    to completely delete em all without one reason but greed
    see i need to be king, and get paper a dictator to all
    so i've created a plot to have em all just vapor and fall
    and now im taking a shot, that's quite fatal it stops
    a person's heart from beating you think it's basic it's not
    it stays in a posture, that'll just float around and attack
    created inside of a lab it's oderless and in mass
    what it does is it hits your lungs and both of them then collapse
    then you start coughing up blood and the chocking begins to grab
    ahold of you and in fact the moment that it's attatched
    your life begins to fade and your focus turns into black
    it's not a notion on that the abola virus is back
    it's just anthrax again but this time i broke it into a gas

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  4. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    good shit, let's get some votes.
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  5. SIN2

    SIN2 as we speak

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    nice....battle....

    but High simply took this he put more into it more imagry....no alotta vocab but he had enuff to take it to me....

    Eye i know u coulda came nicer...i dunno u didnt have enuff to keep me readin....and plus it wasnt real entertainin just a borin story....no offense....
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  6. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    no medicine was achieved, but anthrax failed unexpected
    we almost got em, they were shocked when we used the mail as a weapon
    we hailed for a second, and i know we failed but depression
    impales their intestines yearly as the date sails the eleventh

    that was hot..

    both had nice drops.

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  7. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Over No Shows
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  8. HighPawTheCyst

    HighPawTheCyst New Member

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  9. SamGoodY

    SamGoodY trully inspired...

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    highpaw...

    just seems he put a lil more effort into his verse and it payed off... more detail and vivd imagary... not to take away from dill, but paw easily took this one in my view...
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  10. Nu-SeNsE

    Nu-SeNsE WHERE THE $$$'S COME FROM

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    i liked both verses....

    dill- thought u used osama a bit to much and was based on 9/11. it was like u were just repeatin it in a rap not tellin us ur nxt scheme but hey it was still dope.....

    paw- i liked ur verse u got off 9/11 straight away them started to rep bout ur scheme

    both- shit hot flow. gr8 wordplay and imagery
    overall highpaw took it by a string of a 'thread'

    vote- HighPawTheCyst
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  11. Gummo

    Gummo New Member

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    Vote: HPTC

    Over all better verse, eyedill could have came a lot better and brought more to the table.. why he didnt? i dont know, he knew that highpaw wasnt going to come soft... that pretty much sums it up..
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  12. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    High took this, simple as that. Eye dill was cool, but his story went nowhere. It was just the rantings of a terrorist. HIgh actually had a "story," in the sense that there was a character and an idea. Neither were true stories...but HIgh's was just ill. The multies and the simplistic nature of the "next plan of attack" made it even scarier...

    Think, what would happen if anthrax was a gas...COT DAYUM!

    vote: HIgh...just for being more advanced.
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  13. WiSDoM

    WiSDoM I t0k yer wifes virginity

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    High...damn son that verse was d0pe..u started off nicely with a tight opener..and just continued all the way thru...kept me reading thruout..high put a lot more thought and effort into this...

    eye ur verse was str8..nothing special...seemed alittle medicore to me..could of used improvement on it...decent drop..but not enough ta beat high..

    vote = high
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  14. Vember

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    vote-Highpaw

    simply took this with way more effort and better creativity, Eyedill just couldnt stop rappin about trade centers/osama/9-11/terrorist, just rap about your next plan, u didnt even do that, u just rapped about bein a terrorist
    High paw clearly took this
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  15. Maddest of Men

    Maddest of Men Just Call Me Madman

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    I felt you both could have come better, HPTC had a good verse, but simple mechanical errors that could have been fixed were left ignored. Eye, you had a good concept, you just didn't elaborate on it, and if you had, I feel it would have been a much better verse. But I can only vote on whats in front of me, and not where it could have gone

    Vote=HPTC
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  16. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    HighPaw wins
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