19. Desenuts 9-5 Vs. 20. One's Abyss 4-0

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    Check.. going 16
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  3. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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  4. One's Abyss

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    Step to me? ptfff, your not as good as you used to be
    Although i can admit with ease- desenuts was tite until i hit puberty
    you bite styles one' after another- so how are you appauling fucker
    Dese stick his balls in mens gutters but calls it bowling without bumpers
    Fucking fagg, etheopians attack with more contrast then ya ass
    and your feeling more wood...... then the hands of a lumberjack
    Im ready for war, on the top, but your ass is normal floored
    Like blind scrabble players, no one looks at ya shit on the board
    utterance is out of the quesiton, when your hardley felt
    so i'll let this faggot have his title shot..............for the rstl
    Speaking of which, i heard your good at topicals dese,
    So im gonna add a twist....to your neck, hope you like the imagery
    You suck at everything you do, and ya boys thinks it true
    I'll kill your ghoster rider, along with your fuckin- typer to
    Your not hard, but you do lay the law' in your 'court yard
    I'll put dese away, like nasif hiding his gottdamn report card
    Now your saying fuck the world? well i'll just give it a twirl
    Oh Baby! OH baby!<--- conversation between 'desenuts' and his girl
    My lines are god, and the voters'll praise me everywhere
    but you dont belong in this league, like pedofiles in a daycare
    Faced fear? nah you suck dawg, gigli was a better flop
    I'd crush this cracker.. but i dont wanna get crumbs on my lab top
    Fade ya face with bold hits, the mag'll explode ya senseless
    im not doubtin your shit,........................... but everyone else is
    it's a shut out who all know who loses, dese can't do this
    your a pimp? and hit alot of pussy?-that explains the bruises
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  5. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    Class is now in session.. I see you've studied deep..
    done your homework on Dese.. so now it's time to teach.

    ones a bitch.. what were you thinking tryin to stop me G..
    with half your punches in your verse soundin like a plain ass biography..
    topin me? not likely.. you think your thin lines excite me..
    I'd have tougher competition from a midget in tights B..
    if loose lips could sink ships.. this bitch would put me to shame..
    cuz if thier half as ship-shape as his anus.. they could take down a plane..
    I'm takin down names.. and once a bitch tops the list..
    of yet another mother-fucker that I've jacked.. and then ripped..
    plantin my quips.. you get done son.. no question of defemation..
    since I'm giving 4-1 to one quicker than if he called information..
    leaving him chasing... loneliness is somewhat of his function.. see..
    he can always kick it with misery.. since at least it loves company..
    I've trumped kiddies worse than Donald.. left em flustered and stammered..
    but the only worse travesty thank dukes verse.. is his spelling and grammer..
    call this kid a tinker bell.. he can't handle a man...
    and his punches be like peter pan.. stayin in "never land"
    remember man.. I don't ever need the max to match you..
    shit.. after the first four.. I'd done allready passed you..

    pz..
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  6. One's Abyss

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  7. Jason123

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    hmmm......Desenuts didn't appeal to me much...One's abyss had the puberty line...and the lumberjack line.....

    but the gay jokes kinda got old.....but still.

    My vote - One's.
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  8. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Ones...

    First of all..your lines are very long and boring, no matter how good a punch is, lines that long make it boring, and take away from it. Get off these wack ass concept punches too.....just advice....take o leave

    Wasnt feeling alot of your shit. You need to work on creativity, and shorten them lines, to give them more impact. Whats good about reading 10 syllables of filler before every punch?

    DESENUTS

    I dunno what happened here. Alot of lines werent even punches :/ Alot without wordplay....case of the rush job ehhh?

    Vote One
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  9. Klobb

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    One's Abyss best lines

    Your not hard, but you do lay the law' in your 'court yard
    I'll put dese away, like nasif hiding his gottdamn report card
    Faced fear? nah you suck dawg, gigli was a better flop
    I'd crush this cracker.. but i dont wanna get crumbs on my lab top

    Desenuts best

    ---..

    I donno what happened to dese, wtf @ the opener..

    Vote Ones Abyss
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  10. Idol Dot Z

    Idol Dot Z Capo Status

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    vote One's

    Your not hard, but you do lay the law' in your 'court yard
    I'll put dese away, like nasif hiding his gottdamn report card

    best line of battle, and only good line of battle. ya need to step it up, i know ya could do better. much love tho.

    holla
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  11. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    ya, sorry for the subpar verse this week, i put together somthing while i was in georgia
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  12. Tethus

    Tethus straight up jerkoff

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    lop sided match, one's had a better verse

    dese came real weak compared to what he used to write, and one's came cool, but nothing like last week, overall good battle

    one-vote
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  13. Cane

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    one's abyss won.

    won abyss? HA..HAHAHAHA IM SO FUNNY

    anyway, yeah. desenuts just didn't impress me. no multis, weak punches. pretty much what everyone else in here said.

    vote-ones
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  14. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    eh, decent battle
    seems like dese is fallin off

    one's you came pretty nice.. cracker punch was nice, most were creative, multies were good, just an overall nice verse, good to see up and coming talent

    Dese ... I was expecting more, I was let down, weak punches .. some that COULD HAVE been good, but wording raped it..

    vote = Ones
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  15. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    i'll up this thread for no reason
    -1 for me
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  16. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    ones abyss took this easily..opener was fuckin fire

    dese was aiight..but..

    vote=ones abyss
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  17. U S E R

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    19. Desenuts loss... 9-6 20. One's Abyss won... 5-0
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