19 Catatonic 5-1 vs 20 Zuchie 4-1

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  1. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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  2. CATATONIC

    CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head

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  3. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    20 is gravy

    best of luck to you
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  4. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    fuck with the flow

    WARNING: voters, bad luck when this dude gets a spanking
    cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings
    by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
    hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw
    u seem excited to die, time to ease this geeks boner
    when i said i'd hook you up with an IV, i didnt mean a date with the league's owner
    got ya ass handed to you before, now fall to defeat
    most ûûûûûs got you under control, i also got you under alt and delete
    you go all out, i put no work in this bitch
    how can i be ranked lower than a kid who quotes Twirk in his sig?
    peeps predicting you to win, dont go MIA cuz ya know what?
    they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up
    but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
    peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“
    cuz that’s all your worth, i write on white rounded corners
    Cat’s a piece of cake, and User’s b-day is right around the corner
    this faceless dyke, my lines might be what saves his life
    tryin to play kool when i smoke him, when he's really a Basic light
    still cant get pussy? this narc’s had it
    prolly cuz his girls pubic ‘region’is busy with bracket games in March Madness

    the ruler's back bitch....
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  5. CATATONIC

    CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head

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    *sends out APB for Zuchies flow* …THIS is flow…
    *sends out APB for what the phuck is a Zuchie*

    allow me to retort... relay the message, sans the baton
    as Cats punches leave Zuchs eyes black as African tannin salons
    My cannons is on, you battlin armed wit slings n water pistols
    pussy needs more’a support… shoulda brought ya garter wit you
    ya spits is hardly orig’nal, far from pivotal- they bars for ridicule
    verses like virgin panties- meant to be ripped but hard to get into
    The games on lock cockboy- these facts aint even worth fighting
    Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting
    in da locker room sword fighting... snappin pics instead of towels
    rolled off Wheel of Fortune for tryin ta buy dycks instead’a vowels!
    bad luck battlin me not Jowelz, dat cat'll hurt u but CAT'll murk u
    they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'
    idiot gone'n turned fool, congrats on graduatin to retarded
    battling like your jizz pre-penetration... lost before you started
    clueless degener-rate- I might catch charges if i continue
    cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you
    cop you a dirt plot to climb up into… help elevate ya game
    a shiny suit text crew?? no jokes, lets let that resonate in ya brain
    voters see evidence of the same- how u smokin me outmatched?
    well laid plans fall like your lifeless body... bagged n tossed out the hatch, batch.
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  6. WarLoKK

    WarLoKK www.espbeats.com

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    Zuch
    WARNING: voters, bad luck when this dude gets a spanking
    cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings
    ^^ lmfao

    by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
    hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw
    ^^ haha.. =)

    u seem excited to die, time to ease this geeks boner
    when i said i'd hook you up with an IV, i didnt mean a date with the league's owner
    ^^ lmao.. word word

    got ya ass handed to you before, now fall to defeat
    most ûûûûûs got you under control, i also got you under alt and delete
    ^^ haha!

    you go all out, i put no work in this bitch
    how can i be ranked lower than a kid who quotes Twirk in his sig?
    ^^ ha!

    peeps predicting you to win, dont go MIA cuz ya know what?
    they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up
    ^^ ohhhhhh

    but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
    peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“
    ^^ ohhh shit!

    cuz that’s all your worth, i write on white rounded corners
    Cat’s a piece of cake, and User’s b-day is right around the corner
    ^^ lmmfamoalmfol!!!!!!

    this faceless dyke, my lines might be what saves his life
    tryin to play kool when i smoke him, when he's really a Basic light
    ^^ daaaaamn

    still cant get pussy? this narc’s had it
    prolly cuz his girls pubic ‘region’is busy with bracket games in March Madness
    ^^ haha


    Catatonic
    allow me to retort... relay the message, sans the baton
    as Cats punches leave Zuchs eyes black as African tannin salons
    ^^ lol

    My cannons is on, you battlin armed wit slings n water pistols
    pussy needs more’a support… shoulda brought ya garter wit you
    ^^ haha

    ya spits is hardly orig’nal, far from pivotal- they bars for ridicule
    verses like virgin panties- meant to be ripped but hard to get into
    ^^ ehh.. too forced

    The games on lock cockboy- these facts aint even worth fighting
    Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting
    ^^ nice, but just seen it recently..

    in da locker room sword fighting... snappin pics instead of towels
    rolled off Wheel of Fortune for tryin ta buy dycks instead’a vowels!
    ^^ ehhh

    bad luck battlin me not Jowelz, dat cat'll hurt u but CAT'll murk u
    they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'
    ^^ haha

    idiot gone'n turned fool, congrats on graduatin to retarded
    battling like your jizz pre-penetration... lost before you started
    ^^ heh

    clueless degener-rate- I might catch charges if i continue
    cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you
    ^^ lol

    cop you a dirt plot to climb up into… help elevate ya game
    a shiny suit text crew?? no jokes, lets let that resonate in ya brain
    ^^ huh?

    voters see evidence of the same- how u smokin me outmatched?
    well laid plans fall like your lifeless body... bagged n tossed out the hatch, batch.
    ^^ nahh


    Zuch clearly took this.. Cat didnt come too bad, but Zuch just had so many ohhh shit lines I couldnt believe it.. the Username birthday line needs to go up in the top 10 punches this week.. damn.. Zuch really shook the rust off with this verse..

    Vote = Zuch
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  7. MiC TypsOn

    MiC TypsOn informer

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    ZUCH



    WARNING: voters, bad luck when this dude gets a spanking
    cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings
    by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
    hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw

    opener was dope.. lol feeling it. that mandible claw line was mad creative loving it......

    u seem excited to die, time to ease this geeks boner
    when i said i'd hook you up with an IV, i didnt mean a date with the league's owner
    got ya ass handed to you before, now fall to defeat
    most ûûûûûs got you under control, i also got you under alt and delete

    lmao at the iv line.. nice.. the second has been used alot before.. but it was switched nicely from the start of it.

    you go all out, i put no work in this bitch
    how can i be ranked lower than a kid who quotes Twirk in his sig?
    peeps predicting you to win, dont go MIA cuz ya know what?
    they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up
    but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
    peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“

    the twirp was ok..... but those next two were straight clowning. lmao.... liken them


    cuz that’s all your worth, i write on white rounded corners
    Cat’s a piece of cake, and User’s b-day is right around the corner
    this faceless dyke, my lines might be what saves his life
    tryin to play kool when i smoke him, when he's really a Basic light

    the user line was nice.. made me chuckle lol.. but the multi's were dope really feeling that.... the second 1 is coo....


    still cant get pussy? this narc’s had it
    prolly cuz his girls pubic ‘region’is busy with bracket games in March Madness

    lmao 2 the closer... nice....

    over all the verse was very consistant never fell off at all.. a few ok lines a few real dope... really feeling the verse


    CATATONIC



    allow me to retort... relay the message, sans the baton
    as Cats punches leave Zuchs eyes black as African tannin salons
    My cannons is on, you battlin armed wit slings n water pistols
    pussy needs more’a support… shoulda brought ya garter wit you

    the opener was quite cool.. lol quite creative.... second was'nt bad...

    ya spits is hardly orig’nal, far from pivotal- they bars for ridicule
    verses like virgin panties- meant to be ripped but hard to get into
    The games on lock cockboy- these facts aint even worth fighting
    Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting

    first one was nice lmao.. feeling it.. second was ok.. but revolved around this "candy rapper" which i was'nt feeling just to get a punchline for biting

    in da locker room sword fighting... snappin pics instead of towels
    rolled off Wheel of Fortune for tryin ta buy dycks instead’a vowels!
    bad luck battlin me not Jowelz, dat cat'll hurt u but CAT'll murk u
    they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'


    wasnt feeling the first.. but the double plays line was dope... =)


    idiot gone'n turned fool, congrats on graduatin to retarded
    battling like your jizz pre-penetration... lost before you started
    clueless degener-rate- I might catch charges if i continue
    cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you

    the jizz pre-penetration was ok... the second was again just ok......

    cop you a dirt plot to climb up into… help elevate ya game
    a shiny suit text crew?? no jokes, lets let that resonate in ya brain
    voters see evidence of the same- how u smokin me outmatched?
    well laid plans fall like your lifeless body... bagged n tossed out the hatch, batch.

    finished ok... alot of nice dissing which counts for something..... some real creative shit..... but was never consistant enough..... i feel u could have done alot better cata. in the end, u brought a nice verse.. but not enough for zuch IMO


    vote- zuch
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  8. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    WARNING: voters, bad luck when this dude gets a spanking
    cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings
    ^^Nice opener,play on Cat..overall nice bar..


    by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
    hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw
    ^^Lol!Good ole' wrestling..nice,flowed nicely.

    u seem excited to die, time to ease this geeks boner
    when i said i'd hook you up with an IV, i didnt mean a date with the league's owner
    ^^Like this bar,wouldve been good for last weeks wow,but whateva..nice..

    got ya ass handed to you before, now fall to defeat
    most ûûûûûs got you under control, i also got you under alt and delete
    ..again,nice punch..keyboard lines can be horrible,but this was pulled off nicely..

    you go all out, i put no work in this bitch
    how can i be ranked lower than a kid who quotes Twirk in his sig?
    Basic,hit..

    peeps predicting you to win, dont go MIA cuz ya know what?
    they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up
    Basic,hit nicely..good bar

    but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
    peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“
    lol,nice

    cuz that’s all your worth, i write on white rounded corners
    Cat’s a piece of cake, and User’s b-day is right around the corner
    User punch,ehh,worded nicely though..

    this faceless dyke, my lines might be what saves his life
    tryin to play kool when i smoke him, when he's really a Basic light
    ok,nothing special..ok bar

    still cant get pussy? this narc’s had it
    prolly cuz his girls pubic ‘region’is busy with bracket games in March Madness
    LOL!nice closer,funny punchline..some might not catch punches bout march madness..but nice..

    Great verse..i am not sure cat can top this...lets see...

    allow me to retort... relay the message, sans the baton
    as Cats punches leave Zuchs eyes black as African tannin salons
    Kinda played,but ok..

    My cannons is on, you battlin armed wit slings n water pistols
    pussy needs more’a support… shoulda brought ya garter wit you
    Liked the setup,2nd line coulda hit harder..but ok..

    ya spits is hardly orig’nal, far from pivotal- they bars for ridicule
    verses like virgin panties- meant to be ripped but hard to get into
    Ok,not the best similie..but ok..

    The games on lock cockboy- these facts aint even worth fighting
    Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting
    Nice,loved the candy rapper/bar play..nest bar so far..

    in da locker room sword fighting... snappin pics instead of towels
    rolled off Wheel of Fortune for tryin ta buy dycks instead’a vowels!
    ok..didnt catch..but its prolly ok..

    bad luck battlin me not Jowelz, dat cat'll hurt u but CAT'll murk u
    they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'
    ok bar,wasnt feelin totally,but not bad.

    idiot gone'n turned fool, congrats on graduatin to retarded
    battling like your jizz pre-penetration... lost before you started
    not very well worded at all..

    clueless degener-rate- I might catch charges if i continue
    cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you
    Basic,but ok imagery..

    cop you a dirt plot to climb up into… help elevate ya game
    a shiny suit text crew?? no jokes, lets let that resonate in ya brain
    ok,not feelin too much..

    voters see evidence of the same- how u smokin me outmatched?
    well laid plans fall like your lifeless body... bagged n tossed out the hatch, batch.
    Ok closer..


    This was a much better battle than i thought it'd be,zuchie came real nice n catatonic put up a good fight,came much iller than all the times i've seen him..my breakdown may nt show this,but overall cat came quite nice..but zuchie came hard with some fire lines, his opener was dope..good battle fellas..cta just couldnt do enough this time....

    vote - ZuChiE..
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  9. .Archive.

    .Archive. .Something Like Hova.

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    v/Zuch

    mankind line was hot

    everything else was prertty decent

    cata just doenst appeal to me ..the flow was average ..ur punches didnt appeal .. nothing spectacular out ya verse

    more consistency and better lines gives Zuch the win here ladies
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  10. afraid knot.

    afraid knot. Mr. Get Jerk'd In The RBL

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    vote = zuch
    but it's not as one sided as everyone says. catatonic came nice, but nothing was original.. zuch had a couple blowup lines..

    just like archive said, more consistent.
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  11. CATATONIC

    CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head

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    well i mean gahdam! lol-

    zuch's obviously got this joint... i can admit being beaten no problem...

    archive, if youve never felt my shyt- and others obviously have, just dont vote on my battles nahmean?

    that dont take anything away from Z on this joint... kid brought much heat. props again.

    imout for the weekend
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  12. Creatical

    Creatical Back up this bitch

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    catatonic-

    "Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting"
    -- ha.. felt this line. exhibited confidence, too.

    "they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'"
    -- cool. could'a been reworded.

    "I might catch charges if i continue
    cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you"
    -- sick


    zuch-

    "cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings"
    -- dope. top 10 potential indeed.

    "by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
    hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw"
    -- creative

    "they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up"
    -- ha

    "but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
    peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“"
    -- cool idea. could'a been reworded.



    both had lines that stood out to me.. but zuch was more consistant.

    vote - zuch
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  13. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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    good battle
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  14. toil

    toil New Member

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    i like catatonic, dudes who can admit when they lose obviously have their heads in the right place and get my respect, good looks.

    zuch did take this tho.

    his opener, 'amdible claw' and 'under control' lines were all dope.

    cat had a verse of ups and downs, but the ups were good; - 'lost before ya started' and 'virgin panties' were both real nice similies..ima mos def peep him again.

    vote=Zuch
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  15. Vadik

    Vadik New Member

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    I wanted Catatonic to win, I like him a lot,

    BUT,

    despite his niiiiiiiiiiice flow, he couldn't mess w/ Zuch. He had no real flaws in his verse, and some dope ass lines...

    Vote = Zuch
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  16. WarLoKK

    WarLoKK www.espbeats.com

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    Word to toil.. I gotta say after this battle I respect Catatonic alot more than I did before.. I never really gave him a chance, but he came dope this week and isnt bitchin about the votes.. he's straight in my book
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  17. Citizen X

    Citizen X UGHHHHHHHHHHH

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    cat came nice, i liked alot of his shit, it surprised me. but zuch came better with more creativity and consistency.

    vote - zuch
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  18. ZuChiE

    ZuChiE New Member

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  19. AeLuRUs

    AeLuRUs New Member

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    zuch wins


    he was just completely consistant, fire
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  20. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    Zuch .wins 3-0 (-6 for votes on Zuch)

    -m.CRUMB
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