17. Richard Corey 2-0 18. Out Writechas 1-1

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  1. Oneduh

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    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due FRIDAY night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Eastern
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

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    agree on an amount with your opponent
    in your check in. if no agreement is reached
    2nd person to drop must match the 1st person who dropped
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    Word of the Week


    Full Circle

    For more info on word of the week.. Check out the RBL magazine. ​
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1012543
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  2. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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  3. Out Writechas

    Out Writechas New Member

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    haha... aiight
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  4. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    I don’t believe this fag…I’ve known since last week you’re trash
    so I’ll do this the ski mask way…and damn near sweep that ass
    your record’s like this match, one on one…you won’t last for the win
    so the only way you’re getting 2-1 is if I beat ya ass with a friend
    I’ll tackle this kid…my point is well held, no one’s defendin’ yours
    No one’s taken Out side…I’d much rather beat his ass indoors…
    I’m like Jay-Z. …Even tho’ my money machine’s pumping green
    tick tick tick tick tick dough…
    best describes ya bitch’s need for Summer’s Eve
    Dude’s a faggot…They’ll close hook ups after this grisly scene
    and kids peep this and see what callin’ dudes Out really means…
    You’re not gangsta. Please, the bitch is soft like good sorbet.
    only thing outrageous about Outwritchas
    is that he thought ^^^ this was good wordplay.
    My craft is an art…and he said he’d blow my rapping apart
    I told him try it…but the pussy didn’t douche it but vaginal fart…
    Just let his sabbatical start…it was pathetic seeing this kid rejected
    I’ll never see a SadderDay…and neither will ya chance at a winning record
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  5. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    lol@ the doucheit line
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  6. Out Writechas

    Out Writechas New Member

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    listen cupcake,
    ya rhymes are soft, lines are off..whut else is there to this whore
    concepts are stuck in a time warp... he's still thinking it's 04
    ya just hit the jackpot...kid bout to get a cold mill showin 6 figures
    n the you'll be Dirt Rich.... after the slugs im bout pump in ya
    im coming full circle, get you in a headlock till i hear ya neck pop
    and Oneduh's coming full circle,
    counterclockwise to represent how many votes you'll cop
    scrypting is a fuckin joke, honestly dude... and now ya tryna start a new trend
    first you, then Resin...
    what other washed up heads ya tryna get that won't even crack the top 10
    Richard Pryor, Richard Gere even Denise Richards just to name a few
    yea, there's plenty of Rich's that are alot better than you
    but ima put you in a deeper plot than any of the movies they shoot
    when it comes to closers, dude.. i've got more Tight Ends than any NFL team
    while your offensive lines always tend to off set more than a receiver screen
    i use my knuckles for occasions like this, they constantly rock ya frame
    you use knuckles, whenever it comes to choosin characters in a Sonic game
    Rich is known to drop stories, so the building u work at should be a breeze
    scrypt a better ending?
    not even if Corey himself wrote, appeared n directed it for me
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  7. EnvYY

    EnvYY IM FROM THE GR8 718!

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    GOOD bATTLE....

    iN MY OPiNiON oUT GOT iT...
    i FELT HIS CONCEPT AND FLOW MORE AND HE SAID SOME DECENT PUNCHES.


    Richard Pryor, Richard Gere even Denise Richards just to name a few
    yea, there's plenty of Rich's that are alot better than you

    gOOD PERSONAL

    i use my knuckles for occasions like this, they constantly rock ya frame
    you use knuckles, whenever it comes to choosin characters in a Sonic game
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  8. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    wait wait wait, what's a "Word of the Week?"

    Do I have to use that or something?
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  9. HotDogVendorMan

    HotDogVendorMan New Member

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    ^ i just found this out last night from superap and yeah u do.
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  10. IronMic

    IronMic New Member

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    dis was one of the hotter battles of the week. you both came hard. too many quotables on both sides,it'll take up a whole page. Yall went line for line,both creative and clever. got strait to the point. i gotta give dis a tie. 1 vote a piece.
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  11. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    I don’t believe this fag…I’ve known since last week you’re trash
    so I’ll do this the ski mask way…and damn near sweep that ass

    I’ll tackle this kid…my point is well held, no one’s defendin’ yours
    No one’s taken Out side…I’d much rather beat his ass indoors…

    Dude’s a faggot…They’ll close hook ups after this grisly scene
    and kids peep this and see what callin’ dudes Out really means…

    vs.

    nothing

    Out's verse was lackluster
    It seemed like he rushed it
    His lines were simple and VERY stretched, which killed the flow
    While Corey's verse was solid, with good flow, and creativity
    Corey got this shit with ease

    v/ Richard Corey
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  12. J-HeAt

    J-HeAt From the Cocaine capital.

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    this was a tight battle... both came creative and had good punches... it was a hard decision. But i had to pick sum1... so i thought richard edged it out by a hair...

    vote-richard
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  13. youngflow

    youngflow New Member

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    your record’s like this match, one on one…you won’t last for the win
    so the only way you’re getting 2-1 is if I beat ya ass with a friend
    I’ll tackle this kid…my point is well held, no one’s defendin’ yours
    No one’s taken Out side…I’d much rather beat his ass indoors…

    vs.

    when it comes to closers, dude.. i've got more Tight Ends than any NFL team
    while your offensive lines always tend to off set more than a receiver screen
    i use my knuckles for occasions like this, they constantly rock ya frame
    you use knuckles, whenever it comes to choosin characters in a Sonic game

    pretty good battle...i was feeling corey's verse better...stronger punches and better flow...both good though

    vote-corey
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  14. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    Vote--> Rich Corey.
    Rhyming was smoother, punches were more well-thought out, and overall higher caliber verse. Out writchas was all over the place, just seemed like a real amateurish style, nothing made me say it was quoteable.

    line I liked.

    your record’s like this match, one on one…you won’t last for the win
    so the only way you’re getting 2-1 is if I beat ya ass with a friend/
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  15. wilmer deryou

    wilmer deryou New Member

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    RC

    your record’s like this match, one on one…you won’t last for the win
    so the only way you’re getting 2-1 is if I beat ya ass with a friend
    I’ll tackle this kid…my point is well held, no one’s defendin’ yours
    No one’s taken Out side…I’d much rather beat his ass indoors…

    You’re not gangsta. Please, the bitch is soft like good sorbet.
    only thing outrageous about Outwritchas
    is that he thought ^^^ this was good wordplay.
    My craft is an art…and he said he’d blow my rapping apart
    I told him try it…but the pussy didn’t douche it but vaginal fart…


    outwrite


    im coming full circle, get you in a headlock till i hear ya neck pop
    and Oneduh's coming full circle,
    counterclockwise to represent how many votes you'll cop

    but ima put you in a deeper plot than any of the movies they shoot
    when it comes to closers, dude.. i've got more Tight Ends than any NFL team

    Rich is known to drop stories, so the building u work at should be a breeze
    scrypt a better ending?
    not even if Corey himself wrote, appeared n directed it for me

    cool battle...but richard corey clearly got this....outwrite had some nice lines corey had the two hottest...took this

    vote-RC
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  16. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    ^dude, wtf are u doing? dont call him outwrite... thats my name... that kid aint me... get it straight please.....



    anyways... Outwritchas wasnt that bad... Corey won it though

    your record’s like this match, one on one…you won’t last for the win
    so the only way you’re getting 2-1 is if I beat ya ass with a friend
    I’ll tackle this kid…my point is well held, no one’s defendin’ yours
    No one’s taken Out side…I’d much rather beat his ass indoors…

    ^good shit... thought last 2 lines were OG cuz they aint been done on me yet i dont think....

    when it comes to closers, dude.. i've got more Tight Ends than any NFL team
    while your offensive lines always tend to off set more than a receiver screen

    ^that was cool from the wannabe.... just kidding

    anyways... one of the better battles this week.... I still hate outwritechas for makin his name so fuckin similar to mine.... i mean how can u feel cool with a name so similar?.. please do us both a favour and change it.... Kids with low IQ's are confusing u for me....
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  17. Slay-Eddie..

    Slay-Eddie.. New Member

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    RC..
    I don’t believe this fag…I’ve known since last week you’re trash
    so I’ll do this the ski mask way…and damn near sweep that ass
    ..dope..
    your record’s like this match, one on one…you won’t last for the win
    so the only way you’re getting 2-1 is if I beat ya ass with a friend
    ..ok..
    I’ll tackle this kid…my point is well held, no one’s defendin’ yours
    No one’s taken Out side…I’d much rather beat his ass indoors…
    ..meh..
    I’m like Jay-Z. …Even tho’ my money machine’s pumping green
    tick tick tick tick tick dough…
    best describes ya bitch’s need for Summer’s Eve
    ..dope..
    Dude’s a faggot…They’ll close hook ups after this grisly scene
    and kids peep this and see what callin’ dudes Out really means…
    ..ha..
    You’re not gangsta. Please, the bitch is soft like good sorbet.
    only thing outrageous about Outwritchas
    is that he thought ^^^ this was good wordplay.
    ..ok..
    My craft is an art…and he said he’d blow my rapping apart
    I told him try it…but the pussy didn’t douche it but vaginal fart…
    ..smh, decent flip i guess..
    Just let his sabbatical start…it was pathetic seeing this kid rejected
    I’ll never see a SadderDay…and neither will ya chance at a winning record
    ..ehh..

    vs..

    Out..
    listen cupcake,
    ya rhymes are soft, lines are off..whut else is there to this whore
    concepts are stuck in a time warp... he's still thinking it's 04
    ..neh..
    ya just hit the jackpot...kid bout to get a cold mill showin 6 figures
    n the you'll be Dirt Rich.... after the slugs im bout pump in ya
    ..ehh..
    im coming full circle, get you in a headlock till i hear ya neck pop
    and Oneduh's coming full circle,
    counterclockwise to represent how many votes you'll cop
    ..ok..
    scrypting is a fuckin joke, honestly dude... and now ya tryna start a new trend
    first you, then Resin...
    what other washed up heads ya tryna get that won't even crack the top 10
    ..ehh..
    Richard Pryor, Richard Gere even Denise Richards just to name a few
    yea, there's plenty of Rich's that are alot better than you
    but ima put you in a deeper plot than any of the movies they shoot
    ..ok..
    when it comes to closers, dude.. i've got more Tight Ends than any NFL team
    while your offensive lines always tend to off set more than a receiver screen
    ..ehh..
    i use my knuckles for occasions like this, they constantly rock ya frame
    you use knuckles, whenever it comes to choosin characters in a Sonic game
    ..dope..
    Rich is known to drop stories, so the building u work at should be a breeze
    scrypt a better ending?
    not even if Corey himself wrote, appeared n directed it for me
    ..ehh..

    vote - richard
    ..more quotables..
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  18. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    RC wins.
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