17. -Oz- 5-0 v. 18. POETIC SCRIPT 5-0

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  1. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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  2. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  3. -Oz-

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    If you dont peep emcee hookups...dont vote...you wont understand :/

    This week in RM....

    What a waste, Residuals banned for gayness, its truth no lie,
    But if thats the case, You should be hated, and then crucified,
    Before I lose I'll die, So I'm killin you, Or better yet fag,
    I'll Have Jeff Ban ya Username, Like ya posted the confederate flag,
    This whore stinks, and ya know ya got to be lame,
    When we gotta post more links, that ya got in your chain,
    Not stoppin me mayne, the shit you speak is played,
    So your Death is Certain, Like the CD Royce dropped today

    & the rest

    Call yaself a Poet, But you cant Write Scripts for the Street,
    Not even if ya walked around, with Chalk Gripped to ya Feet,
    Admit ya defeat, Why ya bothering with rap, just let it go,
    Ill make POE look like a joke, like simpsons halloween episodes,
    Your gonna die today, leave ya floatin in the ocean bitch,
    Cause you get Served on Fri-day's, even more than Fish,
    You'll never be rich, infact we shun your raps,
    Your future's so BLEEK, Jay-Z is considerin coming back,
    Lets talk rap, I heard Cam'rons "get the yayo", its lame but its true...
    Cuz even Cam'ron, will get to Cane before you,
    No more for you, Ya wack wit ya spits, we aint seeing ya shit,
    Cause not even an Actor would be caught, Reading From Script
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  4. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  5. poeticSCRIPT

    poeticSCRIPT 7-0, Contendership

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    only thing I gotta say about' ya verse, it isnt winning
    when all I read was wack, wack, wack
    ,......'& the rest'....was well,... worse than the begining

    lets do it..
    I got PBA to write for, its hood when I wreck you
    PBA,..you know.....that same league that wouldnt accept you
    rbl's at its worse, its blatently said but, see..
    im a bad guy, cus now this kid wont be happy he made it to 17
    Res got banned for bein' gay, silly...alright pause
    cause really Res was the only cat on RM who really liked Oz
    im bringing tight bars, N this hoe'll get handled
    you look like more of a bitch than the dude who posted this battle
    tried to diss me N failed, so i'll punch when I hurt' em
    cause your beating around that bush a little too much for a virgin
    list your flaws, ok pause....the people are knowin' em
    had to make it Oz aka Oz just so the people would notice' em
    this fag wouldnt show it, but he's a fag N he knows it
    I wont make it to cane? fine, but your ass wont even make it to orbit
    your basic, stop- my lines are leaving faces dropped
    with no flow, this guys the textcee equivelant to aesop rock
    your fame's a flop, and this dude isnt patient
    so poe'll get atleast 10 votes, like the new stipulations
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    Requisite So Necessary

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    In the end this battle was pretty close. Both came nicely, impressed me. Oz had some nice punches, few quotables, and an alright flow. Nothing personal, but managed to come nicley at Poetic. Poetic was funny as hell, some real direct personal lines. Some lines were ehh, but Poetic came funny and more consistent. So...

    Vote - Poetic
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  7. -Oz-

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    My shit been up 4 days. & you dropped last minute just to play off my shit like 4 times?
    wtf lol
    Upping
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  8. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    poe got it.
    I thought he came pretty nice.. in a way Oz did he had some good lines, but the playin off the verses actually saved poe. I think feeding is seriously gay, but he flipped it on you nicely. lol@ the orbit lines that shit was great flow was decent just came pretty consistant in this battle. Oz was off and on with flow, and punches wasn't all that consistant. It was an above basic verse had koo concepts, but I thought script came pretty nice even though he did feed. FAGGOT cough.. anyways
    V- script.
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    Uppin Over No Shows!
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  10. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    This whore stinks, and ya know ya got to be lame,
    When we gotta post more links, that ya got in your chain,

    taht was dope for oz, but the rest was just there, i didnt see the impact the lines made


    poetic came pretty dope, i liked it....personals were there, flow was aight, thought he was alot more consistent


    vote poetic, good battle though ozzy
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  11. Idol Dot Z

    Idol Dot Z Capo Status

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    oz i think the confederate flag line coulda been reworded to make doper. you had alot of bad wording, forced concepts and bad concepts.

    did like this tho
    This whore stinks, and ya know ya got to be lame,
    When we gotta post more links, that ya got in your chain,

    i think the fri-days one was kinda forced. nice rhyme scheme, i thinjk you'll be good wit better wording and concepts.

    poe had some nice punches, flow and his personals were pretty good.

    I got PBA to write for, its hood when I wreck you
    PBA,..you know.....that same league that wouldnt accept you

    haha nice

    and the Res/Oz line made me chuckle.

    pretty cool battle. but based on quality of material i have to give it to po.
    oz woulda been better with better wording and concepts.
    holla.

    vote po
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  12. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    I'm going with Poe...he had that ill flow and I liked his style... the little "pause" and "stop"'s were kinda cool to me, made his flow very conversational, rather than the mechanical styled set-up/punch I'm used to seeing...

    Oz was cool tho'... I liked the "writing for the street" line and the "chain" line..everything else was eh...like the Jay-Z/Bleek line, sorry, that's way overused. I mean, Jay-Z even used that himself...

    Poe was just iller and fresher to me...no beef, pz.
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  13. micshimmie

    micshimmie New Member

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    Oz was coo but Poetic's was just better. Plain and simple to see really. That pause shit is weird tho ahaha.

    Good battle nigs..

    Vote - POETIC
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  14. poeticSCRIPT

    poeticSCRIPT 7-0, Contendership

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  15. castro'DAMUS

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    poetic script wins
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