17. MC Reflexx (6-3) vs. 18. DoYen (3-0)

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

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  2. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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  3. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    no showing would be the best for you so stay smart son
    cause you wouldn't be up to speed with a radar gun
    excuse me...but who's he? a bitch!...yep exactly
    a fag see...i pull princesses he likes to drag queen
    bad dreams, your name leaves me puzzled - astounded
    why no xxx...oh yea!..."MOM DOESN'T ALLOW IT"
    this punk has been doubted, so write your verse and take a full night
    you made it to 17, well next week you'll live the adult life
    you full of shit, my bullet clips, are pulling quick, and set to harm
    and in this quarrel, call me goro...im carrying extra arms
    so listen fag, quit your raps, your whole intent is wack
    and im mooning you under mistletoes, yelling out "KISS MY ASS"
    my fist are fast, and might just blaze when i hit em
    i keep shit in the bag, and he just hyperventilates with em
    anhialated the victim, im sending you the truth
    and then im giving you the boot, socks, a pair of jeans, a t-shirt, a sweater, a jacket, a hat, earmuffs, mittens.....


    merry christmas fag!
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  4. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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  5. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    we aint gettin votes vern you did it all wrong
    yer verse wasnt a diss, that was a fuckin love song
    the gloves're on, & bitch yer gettin the fist
    but first.. ya girls gotta have reflexx's kid
    who you messin with? hell yes i'm comin arrogant
    if any body in ya fam's gay we know you parent'd him
    how you fairin wimp? oh you dont want any of this?
    a hint bitch, yer comin up short like'a jewish boys christmas list
    misletoe's? yer givin more then head under them
    yer like a calculator always givin ya numbers to men
    that makes me wonder again cuz yer claimin your straight
    tryin to sound phat wont help by gainin weight
    ya like to boast how you bust nines & big uzies
    i bet you've took alotta men out to quiet dinners & the movies
    you'sa gay porn star and everyone's seen ya show on cable
    "vern gets more white cream around his hole then bagels"
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  6. Ninja Kid

    Ninja Kid AKA Jae Keeps

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    both had good punches imo. but vern didnt have any discernable flow, and his scheme wasnt too great either. plus i think reflexx had the better punches. so ya it was clear-cut IMO.

    vote - reflexx...
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  7. stickman

    stickman music entrepreneur

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    wasn't close..



    vote - Vern

    punches were more complex
    Reflexx didn't have one clever line, all that shit was played or straight stupid..
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  8. KnowSkills

    KnowSkills Prolix The Shit Talker

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    check it vern- your verse is different from no other in the sense that you've only got one hot line. "and in this quarrel, call me goro...im carrying extra arms" i'm all about video game references so kudos otherwise shit was pretty rough. basic punches and nothing to gauk at.

    reflexx-your verse was pretty dope for the most part. it wasn't spectacular but it was leaps and bounds better than verns because he had punches that made me chuckle substantially. and i had to change my drawers because i shit myself when i read these lines.

    "i bet you've took alotta men out to quiet dinners & the movies
    you'sa gay porn star and everyone's seen ya show on cable
    "vern gets more white cream around his hole then bagels"
    ^^^quotable...fuck what you heard.

    My Vote: MC Reflexx
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  10. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    wtf

    Reflexx had a bad verse... nothing really creative, witty or fresh.

    "how you fairin wimp? oh you dont want any of this?
    a hint bitch, yer comin up short like'a jewish boys christmas list"

    good god no.

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    you'sa gay porn star and everyone's seen ya show on cable
    "vern gets more white cream around his hole then bagels""

    worst line ever.

    v. vern
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  11. MENACE

    MENACE Jimmy Friday Tha Menace

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    quit hattin on em shadow his verse was hottness

    yo I AM voting for reflexx cuz his shit WAS witty and it was fresh
    both verses were hott

    i especially liked tha opening
    word up

    vernaculars verses were loong which is tha only reason i didnt vote for him, especially tha endin

    peace out

    vote reflex

    OnE
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  12. D.A.N.G.E.R.

    D.A.N.G.E.R. Fresh Emcee!

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    Vote-reflexx

    he came harder n had more flow
    was very consistent n i like that
    so he gets ma vote
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  13. 'Revelations'

    'Revelations' .....The End

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    LMFAO

    Vote - DoYen

    Reason:
    Better verse and not half as many corny ass lines as Reflexx....and he actually had better creativity and just a harder verse....everything from Reflexx was forced...or just didnt make sense....or was extremely weak
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  14. Oliver_Thenet

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    excuse me...but who's he? a bitch!...yep exactly
    a fag see...i pull princesses he likes to drag queen
    bad dreams, your name leaves me puzzled - astounded
    why no xxx...oh yea!..."MOM DOESN'T ALLOW IT"
    this punk has been doubted, so write your verse and take a full night
    you made it to 17, well next week you'll live the adult life
    my fist are fast, and might just blaze when i hit em
    i keep shit in the bag, and he just hyperventilates with em


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    how you fairin wimp? oh you dont want any of this?
    a hint bitch, yer comin up short like'a jewish boys christmas list
    that makes me wonder again cuz yer claimin your straight
    tryin to sound phat wont help by gainin weight
    you'sa gay porn star and everyone's seen ya show on cable
    "vern gets more white cream around his hole then bagels"


    vote vern.......but my breakdown is in two differnt levels......vern had.....cool/nice lines
    reflexx had some ok/barely sliding cuz your getting better.......your not on verns level though
    line for line his style,concepts and wording/setups got you beat. you'll prolly get there later tho flex.
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  15. Kaotic33

    Kaotic33 Owns You

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    Reflexx's punches were funnier and hit harder. vernacular's shit was a bit too long and stretched (especially last few lines) your punches werent as clever or witty but never the less, it was a good battle...no hate... but i gotta go with reflexx.
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  16. Mc Lyrical

    Mc Lyrical Lyrically -Ill-

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    reflexx's verse was funny as hell lol @ the bagel line dat made me laugh alot also punches hit harder, flow was ok u need to work on that a lil more multies were pretty good but a bit forced ok vern's was ok nothing too spectacular that made me go "oooooh" and ur closer was stretched as hell im not feeling that.

    vote: reflexx
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  17. Deus-ex

    Deus-ex New Member

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    V- vern acular. His punches were harder hitting and better worded. This battle was pretty blah concept wise and i have a feeling both could have come much better. props to both vern edges this one out.
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  18. Known Rapper

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    vote-vern

    excuse me...but who's he? a bitch!...yep exactly
    a fag see...i pull princesses he likes to drag queen
    bad dreams, your name leaves me puzzled - astounded
    why no xxx...oh yea!..."MOM DOESN'T ALLOW IT"
    this punk has been doubted, so write your verse and take a full night
    you made it to 17, well next week you'll live the adult life

    ^^ cool section

    mc reflexx came out kinda corny sometime

    the gloves're on, & bitch yer gettin the fist
    but first.. ya girls gotta have reflexx's kid
    who you messin with? hell yes i'm comin arrogant
    if any body in ya fam's gay we know you parent'd him

    ^^ rest i didn't feel
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  19. InfantBolo

    InfantBolo New Member

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    ayo how do set up some freestyle battles for myself i just started on here can some 1 help a bro out
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  20. InfantBolo

    InfantBolo New Member

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    ~~~~~z dont wanna feel this flow,
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