17. Mc Enferno Vs. 18 Mr. Rstl

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Sep 14, 2003.

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  1. Nebz

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  2. MC ENFERNO

    MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane

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    The kid is Here
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  3. Mr.RSTL

    Mr.RSTL Rstl-Soon to be Champ

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    LoL im here Cheater

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  4. MC ENFERNO

    MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane

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    Sticks and Stones will break my bones and words will never hurt me.


    Fucc all the arguing lets just try to make this good for the Fans
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  5. Mr.RSTL

    Mr.RSTL Rstl-Soon to be Champ

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    Topic #20

    edited for the deadline
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  6. Mr.RSTL

    Mr.RSTL Rstl-Soon to be Champ

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    [size=+1]Feel It[/size]

    Im writing this letter to whom it may concern
    Everyone faces trials of tribulation I guess it ya turn
    Stay firm remember the further u go the less it burns
    Life gives us lesson’s an take it as a lesson Learned
    I can’t put into to words, how bad I feel
    It may seem surreal but every wound takes time to heal
    Never conceal, ya thoughts, feelings and such
    Become her crutch stay an let her feel ya gentle touch
    It may not appear as much, her fight with this is a beatable one
    Don’t seem as none, but somewhere somehow its been done
    Look at the long Run, She has a Beautiful son
    With his smile the worse loss feels like you won
    N Forget about the past, none of that now can be undone
    It just begun, I know ya pain feels like a hundred ton
    Stay strong, hold on and as you read this let it ease ya pain
    You can weather this storm just let my words shield the rain
    By the stage you read this is will be too late
    My cancer took over at an incredible rate
    Its my time now, im headed for the pearly gates
    Life is life, and this is just my fate….


    Boom!
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  7. MC ENFERNO

    MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane

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    Mc Enferno ft 50 Cent(Topic 18)

    Chrous by 50 Cent
    I was up in the club/
    A 5th of Hennesy in my mug/
    I took a copule x but I aint in to takin drugs/
    I saw this girl tina and she had a nice rack and a butt/
    I never met here once but I wanted to fuck/

    Verse 1 by Mc Enferno
    And that was all I remember/
    I woke up sometime in December/
    My name is Mark, I gotta a brother and a sister named Ginger/
    I hear my mom yell out, "Hey Mark it's time for Dinner/
    I get up to see a note that says "Call me Ginger,"/
    I got on the same clothes so I reach in my pocket/
    And I found out that somebody must've stolen my wallet/
    I walk out to everybody laghing and shit/
    I look in the mirror to see a tatto in the shape of a dick/
    I hope it's fake so I try to jsut erase with spit/
    But it wont go away/
    So I hear something that no one should say/
    My dad looks at me and says "Hey Mark are you gay,"/
    Outta nowhere mom's like "Kids go out and play,"/
    I am all alone so it sort of feels like Judgment Day/
    I know it's not true but I aint got nothin to say/
    I dont know Brenda but I guess I'll try it/
    Cause if we really had sex, then she wont Deny it/
    I pray on the phone, as the number I dial it/
    A gay guy picks up the phone and he says "Hi, this is Bryan,"/
    I look out the window I think to myself that it must be a lie/
    "The air was suffocated with snow, as white sheets split the sky"/

    To BE continued
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  8. Papa_Smurf

    Papa_Smurf Junior Jedi

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    Hoo boy... Now that was some wierdness...

    Ok the first guy didn't do the right topic. He wrote about himself having cancer, when it was supposed to be about a friends sister having cancer... I saw some parts that seemed like he was talking about someone else... but he confused me.

    The second guy just decided, what they hell might as well tell everyone I'm gay a few times, that seems to be the best way to go...

    Anyhow, I'm giving this vote to the second guy, at least he did what his topic was about.

    Peace
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  9. Mr.RSTL

    Mr.RSTL Rstl-Soon to be Champ

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    This vote doesnt Count, why?
    Its called Creativity, I flipped the concept instead of
    coming out with an ending that was thought i flipped it to where i was writing, a Letter To "Her" sister from the sister with cancer point of view, the last time I checked U can be best friends with your sister....
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  10. Papa_Smurf

    Papa_Smurf Junior Jedi

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    That's the way I saw it, if that's the way you feel about my vote then don't count it, but I ain't gonna change it.
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  11. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Up Over No Shows
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  12. MC ENFERNO

    MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane

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    Hey I think the vote should count and the only reason you are saying it should not count is because it was againsAnd too the guy who voted I am not gay. That was just a keystyle you idiot
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  13. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    ^ Vote Doesnt Count
    0-0, it was obvious papa didnt
    see the verses plot
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  14. MC4SiGHT

    MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO

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    vote-MR.Rstl

    this was plain and simple, he murdered enferno who's verse was horribly wrote, the bars were uneven the flow was off and the rhyme scheme very simplistic, plus to be continued? what lol....Mr. Rstl had a solid verse and i enjoyed his take on the topic...it was a lot more creavtive because im fairly sure 50 cent didnt stop by to do a text collab with you on a forum board...

    just my thoughts....
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  15. MC ENFERNO

    MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane

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  16. Alias Breaker

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    Vote - mr rstl

    He easily got this, enferno's verse was very simplistic. lacked all good storytelling elements really. mr rstl's verse had much more appeal, well done. votes for him
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  17. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Mr.RSTL-wins
    MC ENFERNO-losses
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