17. Magic Johnsen 4-0 vs 18. Imperial 12-8

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Parable-Dot-Comm

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    Gonna edit votes in here.. already got my verse..... goodluck.
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  3. Parable-Dot-Comm

    Parable-Dot-Comm New Member

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    I was steady, Kickin up Dust, I left, a dash in the sand..
    Text brash; in demand, Clockin 5 digits that could fashion a hand..
    Eyes focused, I noticed, Ya'll starin to fail- Im scarin the frail..
    I take some wins like I leave corpses, Only a hair 'n a nail..
    But I am the one, Calm in talks, Palmin' glocks, Panic, ME??..
    My text'll have u buildin a raft like the family.. of Manic- D..
    Ya'll smart?, I'll buck through the top 30, Show me they brains?..
    Johnson only been double-crossed when niccas throw me they chains..
    You down to die for the cause? Ohh, You a martyr? STOP..
    ....'For I take blades to your face like a barber shop....
    Imp, take a look at your crew, Now, Lets see mine..
    Vern beat you last week and Dill prolly bit ur sigs Epi line..
    I'm on my grind, Wanna be a Foreman? Endorse brake parts..
    ....Only time u've seen rubbers, U looked atcha fake parts....
    Tee up on ya faces, Leavin 18 holes in each, 'course..
    Ya'll are sub-par, I'ma be 5-0 like ur local police force..
    Saw you in the rankings, Writing: It was too appauling to start..
    Its hard to diss a netcee who fell off, with a crew falling apart..
    Elite is like Crystal Lake, Top guns, The pistol make..
    ...You not seein the camp...
    12 and 8 looks like a work schedule, You think UR bein the champ???..


    keep workin'..
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  4. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    My sig aint even got an Epi line.. fuckin illiterate ass. Learn how to make a personal.


    ..or jus read this and find out...

    Ya verses.. lines are stretched in every rap homey
    I mean, who needs 16+ syllables... jus to have multis !?
    I had more votes last week.. shit's so corny
    Should be facin Dust...
    Youre gettin swept.. cuz Janitor even voted for me!
    I was fuckin ripped off.. but that wont happen again
    Cuz if this ends up like a Ty.. ill be 'catchin the win'
    ..like the Pats defense... you use to live on the street, turd
    You must miss the underpass.. more than Colts recievers
    Thas enough bout football.. B-ballers never been coo
    Look at Shaq, he tried to rap.. and he was better than you!
    I picture death as somethin that happens to gay ass fags
    You 'picture' death.. outta the choices that I gave ya ass
    Take the facts, why MJ's not the best forward
    Id say hes weak for starters...
    ..but now, hes even weak for a bench warmer!
    My lines stick out in ya mind.. sharper than small lasers
    I left more spikes in ya face, than pro volleyball players
    Outta two MJ's, ya named after the one thas big!?
    You can still put it down... 'til I take this above the rim
    Fuck ice.. you got nothin to spend, ya poor
    You never saw chains on ya neck...
    ..but my chain-saw ya neck before
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  5. PHD Jr.

    PHD Jr. It was all a dream

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    M J

    I was steady, Kickin up Dust, I left, a dash in the sand..
    Text brash; in demand, Clockin 5 digits that could fashion a hand..
    ehh not feelin it good flow though

    Eyes focused, I noticed, Ya'll starin to fail- Im scarin the frail..
    I take some wins like I leave corpses, Only a hair 'n a nail..
    I don't get it...

    But I am the one, Calm in talks, Palmin' glocks, Panic, ME??..
    My text'll have u buildin a raft like the family.. of Manic- D..
    haha there u go..dope

    Ya'll smart?, I'll buck through the top 30, Show me they brains?..
    Johnson only been double-crossed when niccas throw me they chains..
    ok not a diss but not bad

    Imp, take a look at your crew, Now, Lets see mine..
    Vern beat you last week and Dill prolly bit ur sigs Epi line..
    nice personal

    I'm on my grind, Wanna be a Foreman? Endorse brake parts..
    ....Only time u've seen rubbers, U looked atcha fake parts....
    ehh not feelin it

    Tee up on ya faces, Leavin 18 holes in each, 'course..
    Ya'll are sub-par, I'ma be 5-0 like ur local police force..
    very nice

    Saw you in the rankings, Writing: It was too appauling to start..
    Its hard to diss a netcee who fell off, with a crew falling apart..
    ehh it was ok nothing special

    You down to die for the cause? Ohh, You a martyr? STOP..
    ....'For I take blades to your face like a barber shop....
    barber shops lines are played...


    Elite is like Crystal Lake, Top guns, The pistol make..
    ...You not seein the camp...
    12 and 8 looks like a work schedule, You think UR bein the champ???..
    nice ending

    Imperial

    Ya verses.. lines are stretched in every rap homey
    I mean, who needs 16+ syllables... jus to have multis !?
    nice kind of doesn't rhyme though...

    I had more votes last week.. shit's so corny
    Should be facin Dust...
    Youre gettin swept.. cuz Janitor even voted for me!
    ehh not feelin it

    I was fuckin ripped off.. but that wont happen again
    Cuz if this ends up like a Ty.. ill be 'catchin the win'
    nope

    ..like the Pats defense... you use to live on the street, turd
    You must miss the underpass.. more than Colts recievers
    not bad i liked it

    Thas enough bout football.. B-ballers never been coo
    Look at Shaq, he tried to rap.. and he was better than you!
    haha dope

    I picture death as somethin that happens to gay ass fags
    You 'picture' death.. outta the choices that I gave ya ass
    ok nothing special...

    Take the facts, why MJ's not the best forward
    Id say hes weak for starters...
    ..but now, hes even weak for a bench warmer!
    no no no

    My lines stick out in ya mind.. sharper than small lasers
    I left more spikes in ya face, than pro volleyball players
    not bad

    Outta two MJ's, ya named after the one thas big!?
    You can still put it down... 'til I take this above the rim
    nope

    Fuck ice.. you got nothin to spend, ya poor
    You never saw chains on ya neck...
    ..but my chain-saw ya neck before
    played off his verse but not bad line

    Overall I'm not trying to diss either one of you just saying my opinion and I broke this all the way down because I really thought this was close.
    In the end though I'm definitly going to have to say MJ took this after reading both verses twice and breaking it down I just feel he had more in his verse flow was good a little forced sometimes but still better his disses were better he just had the better verse

    nice battle though

    Vote = MJ
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  6. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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  7. Oneduh

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    Damn Imp.

    Best verse I saw from you in a long time
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  8. *~H20~*

    *~H20~* Guest

    hmmmmmmmmm
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  9. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    Okay, PHD Jr. should never vote again, as I'm sure he didn't get any one of IMp's punches...

    but this battle goes to Imperial, easy. Although MJ was cool, his lines weren't really that impressive. They didn't go beyond face value, there were no underlining its, or punches...

    I was steady, Kickin up Dust, I left, a dash in the sand..
    Text brash; in demand, Clockin 5 digits that could fashion a hand..
    Eyes focused, I noticed, Ya'll starin to fail- Im scarin the frail..
    I take some wins like I leave corpses, Only a hair 'n a nail..


    Okay, I didn't get that last line either...so its prolly too obtuse if several people have already said its confusing. Nice flow, and lyrics (I do notice those in battles) but other than that, you haven't dissed him yet.

    But I am the one, Calm in talks, Palmin' glocks, Panic, ME??..
    My text'll have u buildin a raft like the family.. of Manic- D..


    Okay, also not a diss. But it's cool lyrics, and a pretty nice 'self-props' line

    Ya'll smart?, I'll buck through the top 30, Show me they brains?..
    Johnson only been double-crossed when niccas throw me they chains..
    You down to die for the cause? Ohh, You a martyr? STOP..
    ....'For I take blades to your face like a barber shop....
    Imp, take a look at your crew, Now, Lets see mine..
    Vern beat you last week and Dill prolly bit ur sigs Epi line..


    Okay...you still haven't dissed HIM yet. You dissed his crew. You threatened him (that doesn't always go well with text voters) and you threatened us...lol...

    I'm on my grind, Wanna be a Foreman? Endorse brake parts..
    ....Only time u've seen rubbers, U looked atcha fake parts....
    Tee up on ya faces, Leavin 18 holes in each, 'course..
    Ya'll are sub-par, I'ma be 5-0 like ur local police force..


    Okay, let me just get it out now...(5-0/cops) lines might be seen as overused. But you prolly didn't know...but still.

    Saw you in the rankings, Writing: It was too appauling to start..
    Its hard to diss a netcee who fell off, with a crew falling apart..
    Elite is like Crystal Lake, Top guns, The pistol make..
    ...You not seein the camp...
    12 and 8 looks like a work schedule, You think UR bein the champ???..


    Am I the only person sick of these damn 3-lined bars, especially when people don't know how to do them right... To have it done correctly, the two 'smaller' lines have to equal (or come close to) the length of the larger one... Why is that last bar sooooo stretched, when it doesn't need to be and screws up the flow in your bar?!



    but Imp's verse on the other hand, was a lot more vicious and witty...

    ..or jus read this and find out...

    Ya verses.. lines are stretched in every rap homey
    I mean, who needs 16+ syllables... jus to have multis !?


    right off the top, a personal diss... and damn fitting one, considering my last comment on MJ's verse.

    I had more votes last week.. shit's so corny
    Should be facin Dust...
    Youre gettin swept.. cuz Janitor even voted for me!


    sigh...this 3-line bar is a lil' better. But nice wordplay. hard punch...


    I was fuckin ripped off.. but that wont happen again
    Cuz if this ends up like a Ty.. ill be 'catchin the win'
    ..like the Pats defense... you use to live on the street, turd
    You must miss the underpass.. more than Colts recievers


    lol. Nice wordplay, I haven't seen that 'smoking gun' punch yet. You know the one, there's one in every battle, immediately when you read/hear it you just KNOW the speaker won...

    Thas enough bout football.. B-ballers never been coo
    Look at Shaq, he tried to rap.. and he was better than you!
    I picture death as somethin that happens to gay ass fags
    You 'picture' death.. outta the choices that I gave ya ass


    damn, you're not letting him breath. (picked your/picture) ill.

    Take the facts, why MJ's not the best forward
    Id say hes weak for starters...
    ..but now, hes even weak for a bench warmer!


    THERE'S THE 'SMOKING GUN'

    battle over. NOthing MJ said could match this... That was ill! lol.

    My lines stick out in ya mind.. sharper than small lasers
    I left more spikes in ya face, than pro volleyball players
    Outta two MJ's, ya named after the one thas big!?
    You can still put it down... 'til I take this above the rim
    Fuck ice.. you got nothin to spend, ya poor
    You never saw chains on ya neck...
    ..but my chain-saw ya neck before


    yes, fine, fine, fine, fine, fine, fine and FINE!

    Vote; Imperial
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  10. Methodine

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    This battle was pretty good, MJ had a few real nice punches, and his multies were pretty good too, a few lines i wasnt feelin and others were aite, Imp's verse was dope, alot of nice punches in there and a good consistant verse, maybe one or two lines that could of been better but...

    vote=Imperial

    I felt he came more consistant and his punches were more direct and harder hitting
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  11. in awe

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    Take the facts, why MJ's not the best forward
    Id say hes weak for starters...
    ..but now, hes even weak for a bench warmer!


    dope
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  12. Venamis

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    Vote - Imp

    I was mos def feeling the bench warmer line and a few others

    You came pretty nic e this week man, I'ma keep my eye out on you in the future.

    Magic came pretty illin also, I don't think he brought what Imp brought tho..tight ass battle

    best battle in forever on here in a few weeks lol..tight shit yall.. good looks
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  13. Plausable

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    damn imp broguht it.. this was a dope as hell battle.. magic was nice always feeling his multi usage.. content was nice.. imp just had that power behind his lines.... i swear u can feel some of em are hard as hell.

    magic, i loved the manic d line.. but the 5-0 has been used a good few times before...

    imp.. opener was feeling alot, i liked the janitor and shaq lines..

    dope battle tho guys
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  14. *~H20~*

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    vote:MJ

    Nice vote but in my eyes MJ took it..........

    That starter bench warming line wasnt ill to me
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  15. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    nevermind.. im too confused, lol. Ill jus ask a MOD.
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  16. ST_UC

    ST_UC Please Try Me

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    Vote = IMP

    both verses were hot... MJ is nice with multis ... but they dont win battles... its too hard to make good punches using that many multis... (i guess?) i liked imps punches a little better than MJs multis... so i gave him the win
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  17. -BoZ

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    Nice shit y'all

    Gotta vote for IMP though, he had punches which were pretty hard hitting, hot battle though, no doubt.

    pz
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  18. Fatal Words

    Fatal Words .........

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    Vote- Imp

    Dope battle here, MJ came with a few dope punches..nice wordplay and good multis, however..he did lack in some parts of his verse..it was like on--off--on--off but still a nice verse..while Imp brought the heat...i like his style..the closer was dope..grimey. His flow was pretty good too..n i just thought he brought a lil more consistancy then MJ and thats why he gets my vote. pz
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  19. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    how is that shit confusing

    he's saying he wins, closely......by a hair and a nail, = barely



    we got some tards up on here
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  20. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    FUCK lol, I jus figured it out...

    i didnt know Boz and h2o were 2 different people.. i thought h2o was Boz's alias or some shit. For some reason, i got confused when i read theyre battle in the bottom 30. LMAO, nevermind.
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