17. Jersey Emcee 7-4 vs 18. N.Tavarez 4-1

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    in...going 16...and dropping early...
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  3. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    if i drop 1st it'll be less than 16..............................
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  4. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    thought u was dropping early.............anyway all you got is internet gun threats
    so might as well save em



    Fuck all your gun talk............. all I see is faking on the set
    Last time u seen AK play, the Utah Jazz were taking on the Nets
    You aint the best.... little bitch hope you aint thinking respect
    Cuz when J-Cee Chase, I'll snap his feet NSYNC with his neck
    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record
    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben
    You'll be leaving in stretchers, ride straight to your Grave Site
    Wont talk about your DR.............I'll respect ya Gay Rights
    Fuck what you say like, rehearsing only magnifies your Wackness
    And 'suckers aint born', ask Jerz......... it took em Practice
    You wack bitch... too weak for these punches, take your vitamins
    And when ya 'Chest Cave ' you can go run and try to Hide in It
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  5. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    Who r u???...


    You got madd secrets virgin boy, why hide em'...
    Cause the only breasts you get come with a soft drink and a side item...
    But fat bitches need love too, its evident he cracks em' yall...
    Just ask him, his 'Ladie Husky' like Connecticut Womens basketball...
    Plus ya bitch is unfaithful, im that dude that strokes her, man...
    That same pussy you eat, I be all in like a good poker hand...
    Your a son of a bitch, and I bet your verse'll embarrass her...
    So if people think your nice, I bet they're refering to your character...
    You need a father figure, so ask your mom to confess dude...
    That your ass was a mistake, and can't bond with a test tube...
    See Tavarez is Mexican, stuck with embedded scars...
    Cause he cant get a Visa, and hates commercials about the credit card...
    I'll stop picking on you about not being born in our nation...
    I lied, the only Tavarez votes round here are to reform immigration...


    Gun lines huh???...
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  6. Philly The Kid

    Philly The Kid New Member

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    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record
    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben

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    You got madd secrets virgin boy, why hide em'...
    Cause the only breasts you get come with a soft drink and a side item...


    Tav, didn't expect much from you but I thought it was actually a pretty good verse. I even liked the opener, just not a fan of any gun or reverse gun punches, so I didn't quote it. lol. You did get weaker at the end, but you started off strong and consistent.

    Jersey, not really bad, played concepts killed you though. The ladie huskie woulda been hot but Hensley used that Huskie vs Huskie line a week or two ago, so it just killed it. The test tube jawn was played and bad, and the poker lines are SO played now, but that was actually a decent twist. That referring to your character line was just wack as fuck though. lol. overall not a bad verse from you, just ur consistency was bad.

    v/N. Tav
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  7. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  8. |-paragon-|

    |-paragon-| The Phoenix

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    Tavarez:

    Fuck all your gun talk............. all I see is faking on the set
    Last time u seen AK play, the Utah Jazz were taking on the Nets

    Predictable concept.

    You aint the best.... little bitch hope you aint thinking respect
    Cuz when J-Cee Chase, I'll snap his feet NSYNC with his neck

    Nsync lines are played, not to mention dudes last name is pronounced "shah-say"not "chase". So.. that just made your punch like retarded. Hella stretched.

    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record

    Good. I guess everyone likes giving Oz shoutouts in this league.

    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben

    Good.

    You'll be leaving in stretchers, ride straight to your Grave Site
    Wont talk about your DR.............I'll respect ya Gay Rights

    Ehh..

    Fuck what you say like, rehearsing only magnifies your Wackness
    And 'suckers aint born', ask Jerz......... it took em Practice

    Good.

    You wack bitch... too weak for these punches, take your vitamins
    And when ya 'Chest Cave ' you can go run and try to Hide in It

    Seen this concept before.


    Jersey:

    You got madd secrets virgin boy, why hide em'...
    Cause the only breasts you get come with a soft drink and a side item...

    Seen this concept used the same way before.

    But fat bitches need love too, its evident he cracks em' yall...
    Just ask him, his 'Ladie Husky' like Connecticut Womens basketball...

    Seen this concept used before a few years ago.

    Plus ya bitch is unfaithful, im that dude that strokes her, man...
    That same pussy you eat, I be all in like a good poker hand...

    Bragging bout fucking peeps bitches. Oh boy..

    Your a son of a bitch, and I bet your verse'll embarrass her...
    So if people think your nice, I bet they're refering to your character...

    Predictable.

    You need a father figure, so ask your mom to confess dude...
    That your ass was a mistake, and can't bond with a test tube...

    Decent. Some fresh air for once. Ey.. it's better than breathing someone elses shit all the time.

    See Tavarez is Mexican, stuck with embedded scars...
    Cause he cant get a Visa, and hates commercials about the credit card...

    Umm.. it was okay.

    I'll stop picking on you about not being born in our nation...
    I lied, the only Tavarez votes round here are to reform immigration...

    Okay........... it's kinda funny, but Mexican immigrant jokes are kinds overdone don't you think?


    Okay.. I'm a just get straight to the point.

    Vote=Tavaraz for better wording and humor.
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  9. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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  10. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    tavarez

    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record
    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben

    jersey

    But fat bitches need love too, its evident he cracks em' yall...
    Just ask him, his 'Ladie Husky' like Connecticut Womens basketball...

    tavarez came better in this one. jers had nice lines but there all lines ive seen, even the one i quouted is a line ive seen before. still did his thing just hnot enough in this one. tavarez came with a couple fresh lines and it was enough to win.

    v/ tavarez
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  11. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record
    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben

    vs

    You got madd secrets virgin boy, why hide em'...
    Cause the only breasts you get come with a soft drink and a side item...
    But fat bitches need love too, its evident he cracks em' yall...
    Just ask him, his 'Ladie Husky' like Connecticut Womens basketball...

    THat Lady Husky line was me being nice. I mean, it was an ok punch, but not too powerful in the sense of hitting Tavarez enough for you to win this battle. I didn't really like this battle..not too many hard punches, but I felt N. Tavarez edged it with the two punches he did have as opposed to Jersey Emcee's Opener and the one following that. Your punches regressed after that.

    v/N Tavarez
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  12. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record
    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben


    vs

    But fat bitches need love too, its evident he cracks em' yall...
    Just ask him, his 'Ladie Husky' like Connecticut Womens basketball...


    v-Tav
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  13. Jersey_Emcee

    Jersey_Emcee aka LiQuiDliFe

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    everyone says they seen my lines before...where???...link me???...and i've been here since 01' n shit...im baffled...but nice verse N...that Jersey Girl line was funny as shit...
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  14. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record
    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben

    vs

    Your a son of a bitch, and I bet your verse'll embarrass her...
    So if people think your nice, I bet they're refering to your character...
    I'll stop picking on you about not being born in our nation...
    I lied, the only Tavarez votes round here are to reform immigration...

    v/tavarez. cool battle here. jersey came a little more played than tavarez did, the character line from jersey was nice but the two quoted from tava and the rest of his verse was just flat out more solid and heavier.

    good battle dukes, stay uppp.
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  15. Versatile

    Versatile Mr. Slip a Micky

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    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record

    v

    Your a son of a bitch, and I bet your verse'll embarrass her...
    So if people think your nice, I bet they're refering to your character...

    ....i think rise did that line better in like 2001....not saying you flipped it, just saying its not very original


    V- NT
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  16. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    Fuck all your gun talk............. all I see is faking on the set
    Last time u seen AK play, the Utah Jazz were taking on the Nets

    decent opener

    You aint the best.... little bitch hope you aint thinking respect
    Cuz when J-Cee Chase, I'll snap his feet NSYNC with his neck

    nah nsync lines are played

    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record

    decent

    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben

    ok

    You'll be leaving in stretchers, ride straight to your Grave Site
    Wont talk about your DR.............I'll respect ya Gay Rights

    nah

    Fuck what you say like, rehearsing only magnifies your Wackness
    And 'suckers aint born', ask Jerz......... it took em Practice

    nah

    You wack bitch... too weak for these punches, take your vitamins
    And when ya 'Chest Cave ' you can go run and try to Hide in It

    played to death

    overall: barely average verse..nothing in it stood out to me at all



    JE:



    You got madd secrets virgin boy, why hide em'...
    Cause the only breasts you get come with a soft drink and a side item...

    played

    But fat bitches need love too, its evident he cracks em' yall...
    Just ask him, his 'Ladie Husky' like Connecticut Womens basketball...

    a line like this was used a couple of weeks ago

    Plus ya bitch is unfaithful, im that dude that strokes her, man...
    That same pussy you eat, I be all in like a good poker hand...

    nah

    Your a son of a bitch, and I bet your verse'll embarrass her...
    So if people think your nice, I bet they're refering to your character...

    nah

    You need a father figure, so ask your mom to confess dude...
    That your ass was a mistake, and can't bond with a test tube...

    lol this was a good one

    See Tavarez is Mexican, stuck with embedded scars...
    Cause he cant get a Visa, and hates commercials about the credit card...

    lol

    I'll stop picking on you about not being born in our nation...
    I lied, the only Tavarez votes round here are to reform immigration...

    nice closer


    overall: a little above average..kinda half and half here


    vote=JE
    reason: he actually had a couple of good lines while tav had none
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  17. SPuL

    SPuL SP

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    On the brink of your death, you cant survive with that effort
    And fuck Daps.........But Oz'll give you "Five" for the record
    Im a home wrecker....see this stupid dude he pretend
    I been took 'Jersey Girl' home, and not that shitty movie w/ Ben

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    But fat bitches need love too, its evident he cracks em' yall...
    Just ask him, his 'Ladie Husky' like Connecticut Womens basketball...

    overall, cool battle here. good read. pretty good shit from both. I just think Taverez came a lil bit harder tho. good job by both tho

    v/NT
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  18. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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  19. Philmore Pockets

    Philmore Pockets New Member

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    tavarez had the 'five' and 'jersey girl' lines, they were pretty good. the rest of the verse was iffy man, what were u doin with that nsync line? jersey had some good shit, i felt that 'lady huskie' and 'be all in' lines.. this shit was hot too

    You need a father figure, so ask your mom to confess dude...
    That your ass was a mistake, and can't bond with a test tube...

    Jersey Emcee came with it in this battle, he get me vote

    v - jersey
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  20. Strike2

    Strike2 Man Meets Creator

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    lol strange battle... I mean I know jers had a pretty nice run in the past.. but I havent felt duke lately.. while tav has been suprising me every week...
    secondly Im surprised at the vote count... I got jers takin this easy... slightly less fresh concepts.. altho nice/character line was a real no no but harder hittin nastier punches.. jus more impact... Im all for creativity I mean battling's gay without it... but you cant sacrifice impact for it... Still I gotta give it up for N's cleverness... Ive seen jokes about kids records a million times but the daps line was pretty fresh, N sync thing was well thought off altho I woulda used it slightly different...
    Still I felt the impact was lesser then what jers did.. altho he walked a thin line as far as playedness went. The visa breast and husky line were good tho so
    vote Jers
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