17. Ill Nik A 12-4 vs 18. Ill Pav 9-3

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  1. U S E R

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  2. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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  3. ill pav

    ill pav New Member

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    make it 16
    =D
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  4. ill pav

    ill pav New Member

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    ill nik-A?

    Your 30 years old? someones outta put a cap in ya dude
    Cuz your such an old fart, terrance and phillip'll stop laughin at you
    So your posting 14? man give it a rest, end this week
    Cuz you previously tried to free'style, and got em a death penalty
    And its obvious really, I can tell you find rappin real hard
    Cuz your lines hold no weight! hell- they cant even balance the bar
    You also have no friends and your lifes really the belt
    I bet if you downloaded the bonzai buddy, hed unistall himself
    And you dont roll with thugs, you'll never bust dudes
    Cuz you chill with so many fruits,
    Even Kramer and Nueman are planning you jump you
    Its done duke.. and
    These noobs are turnin the rbl wack, I should pop these cowards
    And your doin your part, plus several others like mike in austin powers
    You fucken loser, whens the last time you actually had fun?
    And if lifes really a bitch, that explains why youve never had one
    You fucken loner, no one gives a fuck that your here dog
    Your just some spit in a bucket that even ants wouldnt go near of

    Geah..
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  5. UneekTestimony

    UneekTestimony New Member

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    -Sighs.

    Lack of creativity, but good lines though. I will edit this with my vote.
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  6. FLAMES.

    FLAMES. dboy fresh.

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    Why did you do that?^

    "I will edit this with my vote." ; )
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  7. ill pav

    ill pav New Member

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  8. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    All I need is 14...

    ^^Ya last post just got me laughin, cuz u got no chances
    Oz didn’t mess up ur record he just knew what was bout to happen
    cut the crap kid…cuz last week ur opponent bit & u edited ur verse out
    everyone already said it was wack what made u think it’d work now?
    get burned down, cuz nik’s sick wit it & u think u suited to win this
    & though its ill vs. ill…ur brain actually proves ur conditions
    Computer addictions plus dont play ball cuz leaving ur room’s a travesty
    this is battling, to me its a walk in the park for u it’s traveling
    Winning’s ur fantasy, cuz this puss has never had some
    & its gonna take the work of a Russian physiologist to give Pav lov
    Act dumb, but I came with my ammo to take u out in a flare of seconds
    & u'll shoot before I shoot but as a helpless scared expression
    dare address this? This isn’t a sneak preview but hope u inspired
    Cuz u can climb Ladder 49 & still couldn’t come close to this fire
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  9. ArgonTheWise

    ArgonTheWise Just Call Me Argon

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    Tough Call Here.

    Ill Nik-A:
    This the same dude from HHH, LO, and HHDB? Anyways, this verse was ok. Structure was good, nice and even. Flow was there. Multies were a bit inconsistant. Opener was a nice personal, a good way to clown your opponent with some shit that happened to him. You kept on that tip for the next couplet aswell, pulled it off decently. I wasn't feeling the ill vs. ill line at all. Traveling line was ok. Russian line was ehhh. Closer was ok.

    Ill Pav:
    You were more consistant with your multies, which made your flow better aswell. A terrence and philip line? Eh. Death Penalty line was some nice wordplay. Balance line was a mediocre flip on a played concept. Bonzai Buddy? Eh. I'm not sure what the hell was really going on with the Kramer/Newman line. I guess I just don't get it. Austin Powers line was pretty nice, but you could have worded it better. Life's a bitch line was the line of the battle, I think. Closer was cheesy as fuck.

    As I said, this a close one.

    Let's break my comments down...

    Ill Nik-A
    -Good flow.
    -Good structure.
    -3 Lines that I liked.
    -2 Lines that I didn't like.*

    Ill Pav
    -Consistent Multies.
    -Good Flow.
    -3 Lines that I liked.
    -4 Lines that I didn't like.*

    Ill Nik-A takes this.

    The reasons for my decision are denoted with *'s on my list.
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  10. Super.

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    You fucken loser, whens the last time you actually had fun?
    And if lifes really a bitch, that explains why youve never had one

    lmao, nice. but that was the only shit worth quotin from pav, everythin else was played and badly flipped.


    ^^Ya last post just got me laughin, cuz u got no chances
    Oz didn’t mess up ur record he just knew what was bout to happen
    cut the crap kid…cuz last week ur opponent bit & u edited ur verse out
    everyone already said it was wack what made u think it’d work now?
    get burned down, cuz nik’s sick wit it & u think u suited to win this
    & though its ill vs. ill…ur brain actually proves ur conditions

    nice personal shit. closer was cool also. cool verse overall.


    v/nikky

    he took it pretty easy in my eyes. pav had a lot of played shit throughout and had one line i liked. nikky was bringin it on the personal tip and had more nice lines.
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  11. Etch is a G

    Etch is a G The Forefront Kid

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    I'd said nik-A took this.. pav came kinda played with his concepts.. so that's why nik-A gets it...
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  12. tettris

    tettris weer goingg 2 huhwyiee!

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    Ill Nikka came some pretty good flips...though the life's a bitch line probably was the best line of the battle...shit was funny...unfortunately, this didnt win it alone...the consistency just wasnt there for Pav...sorry man...decent battle but...


    vote - Nikka
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  13. FLAMES.

    FLAMES. dboy fresh.

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    Vote-ill Nik A

    His walk in the park line did it for me, real clever & smart. I like that.

    Ill pav came aight.. he probably could've came better.

    He ain't have anything that stood.

    But that other Ill cat did. With a nice flow as well.
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  14. Beserker

    Beserker New Member

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    v- ill nika, had flow, creativity, punches.

    wasnt ill pav.
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  15. space nerd 2039

    space nerd 2039 New Member

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    ill pav tried biting creatical's style of punches and format and came up very wack. plus your wording was horrible. very bad verse really.

    ill nika had some funny lines more creative ish.

    vote- ilnika
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  16. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    ill nikka took this...i dug the walk in the park line...


    all in all this was a decent enough battle...neither was all that great, but i just feel that nikka came with a bit fresher stuff.


    so, he wins.


    v - ill nikka.
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  17. $(*H20*)$

    $(*H20*)$ Guest

    vote=ill nika

    He won by a slim margin but a margin nonetheless.................
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  18. Mr D.Black

    Mr D.Black Stephen Elwood

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    just me? or have i seen half that shit on RB?
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  19. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    i'm surprised ill pav didnt come better

    but still good no doubt, it wasnt enuff to take out Nikka


    vote - nikka

    based on stand out punches, consistency

    ^^Ya last post just got me laughin, cuz u got no chances
    Oz didn’t mess up ur record he just knew what was bout to happen
    cut the crap kid…cuz last week ur opponent bit & u edited ur verse out
    everyone already said it was wack what made u think it’d work now?
    get burned down, cuz nik’s sick wit it & u think u suited to win this
    & though its ill vs. ill…ur brain actually proves ur conditions
    Computer addictions plus dont play ball cuz leaving ur room’s a travesty
    this is battling, to me its a walk in the park for u it’s traveling

    illness up above
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  20. Kryogenix

    Kryogenix New Member

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    hmmm , close battle.
    v/ ill
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