17. CzarKastRophee (4-3) vs. 18. Taylormade' (2-0) (Verses UP! VOTE NOW!)

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Taylormade`

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    my fellow americans ..

    This guy can get it quick, If u thought he was tough, even I could tell its wrong.
    Got his Infinite softness at concerts yelling at Elton john while pelting thongs.
    tailor made, u spelt it wrong. but Homo shit got this guy deadened quick.
    after Taylor made a look at me & tried to get my size measurements.
    dont care im against the gayest bitch, i do this shit for onlookers jack.
    its the reason its no options, & ur backed into a corner .. ur mom hookers at.
    I bury bitches, hey its YOUR funeral, but maybe ur death could be awakened.
    so i'd say the best thing taylor made .. he'll be dressed for the occasion.
    U aggressively Caucasian, yall a crazy bunch & im safely hunched u been a raper.
    so white ur whole life u tanned with no light, & ur inner nature is printer paper.
    this wiggers faker & i guess the gays have spoken, THATS y he's yodelayheyolin.
    If tailor made a choice, its paper folding, making bowls & lederhosen.

    u shoulda bobbed not weaved nigga.
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  5. Taylormade`

    Taylormade` New Member

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    whoa

    you went from the champ match to this, ya ish been faded
    you was blowing all that hot air now ya careers been deflated
    watch me make em tap out , with a couple of swift words
    he's usually a late poster, but tonight he'll submit first
    I seen forced lines, forced rhymes, and forced plays
    but you the FIRST nigga I seen with a forced name
    in my opinion, you rhyme like a baby your spits give me a bore
    but you're verses are well delivered... just let me cut the umbilical cord
    I been all over the net kid, I spit truth and beat foes
    but you stuck on this board, I suggest you use some cheat codes
    you're truly chick made so you deserve whatever you get dog
    cos if you reap what you sew, this nigga should get about 4 knit scarfs

    even though it says he can't edit after I post he does get to change his verse, right?
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  6. Rated-Are

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    yes nigga .. now delete that extra shit & lets get some votes.
    its already lookin like an abundance of no shows this week.

    even the fucking mod no showed ..
    .. & I got overlooked for a spot.
    im more active than a 13 year olds hormones.
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  7. Scene1

    Scene1 action!

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    tailor made, u spelt it wrong. but Homo shit got this guy deadened quick.
    after Taylor made a look at me & tried to get my size measurements.
    I bury bitches, hey its YOUR funeral, but maybe ur death could be awakened.
    so i'd say the best thing taylor made .. he'll be dressed for the occasion.

    U aggressively Caucasian, yall a crazy bunch & im safely hunched u been a raper.
    so white ur whole life u tanned with no light, & ur inner nature is printer paper.
    ^ dope multis



    watch me make em tap out , with a couple of swift words
    he's usually a late poster, but tonight he'll submit first
    I seen forced lines, forced rhymes, and forced plays
    but you the FIRST nigga I seen with a forced name
    you're truly chick made so you deserve whatever you get dog
    cos if you reap what you sew, this nigga should get about 4 knit scarfs

    its about even as far as lines i liked from each go, i felt like all 3 of czar's punches were real dope especially the printer paper one. Taylor's punches were alright, i liked the forced name flip and that knit scar one was awesome. But in the end, based of "haymakers" (I hate using that newbie ass word to describe text punches) i gotta go with Czar


    V Czar but it could easily go the other way


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  8. Funasty

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    Czar-didn't come with any thing felt until after the hooker punch, then it was consitent..flow was junk at times and the opener was a no no..

    Tailor: Only thing that caught my eye was the submit first punch, that was nice but that alone can't win this..

    V: Czar
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  9. ExodusIII

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    Czar dropped a nice verse... but his style makes it kinda hard to follow him...

    taylor's verse is very simple, str8 to the point... alot easier to read...

    this was pretty close but i'm giving it to taylor for these lines

    watch me make em tap out , with a couple of swift words
    he's usually a late poster, but tonight he'll submit first

    ..that was cool

    I seen forced lines, forced rhymes, and forced plays
    but you the FIRST nigga I seen with a forced name

    ... lol... nice personal

    this really could go either way... but for those 2 lines...

    vote=taylor
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  10. MoneyMatters

    MoneyMatters the duffle bag boy

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    i have to agree with ex on this one. i think the battle would have been a lot different if czars vers was easier to read. this style kind of makes things hard ta fallow. Taylor came with some nice punches here and there but nothing too outstanding. As far as punches go the battle was dead even. but id have to give this one to taylor made it was just structured better. good shit from both tho. big ups....
    vote=taylormade
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  11. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    versus

    Czar's wording goes over dudes heads', but alot of his concept are pretty creative. In my humble opinion Taylor only had two quote the rest was mediocre, making somewhat one-sided, keep wording on the readability Czar and you'll be killing, no bullshit, Vote - Czarkastrophee.
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  12. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    vote czar... dont really care for that style but, Taylor's was just aite... decent concepts, tho.

    backed into a corner line was pretty good...
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  13. Rezor_X

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    Vote = Czarkast

    He was much more creative. I think at times he tried to do too much, almost like he was overwhelmed with ideas... I think he pulled it together pretty well... but could work on his wording a bit. He had the hooker line, dressed for the occasion, and size measurements.

    Taylor had a good verse. It was simple, to the point, but nothing really stood out. I think your opener killed it for me. However, I thought the umbilical cord line was dope. Submit first and Forced name were also cool but the cheat codes line I really wasn't feelin.


    Two very different styles in this battle. Taylor was simple, yet effective... while Czar was more complex and a bit wild at times. I think Czar got it based on the fact that he was more creative.
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  15. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    I dunno Schad...Czar dropped a very dope piece but it was kinda hard to follow at times. The hooker line was hot and the printer paper punch was str8 as hell...Nice drop Czar

    Taylor...I really did like your verse. It was focused and an easy read. I felt that you had a better flow than Czar and that's what gave you the edge...by a lil bit. It could've went eiter way like evryone else was saying

    v=Taylor
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  16. SACK RI PHICE

    SACK RI PHICE Mister Fister

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    watch me make em tap out , with a couple of swift words
    he's usually a late poster, but tonight he'll submit first
    I seen forced lines, forced rhymes, and forced plays
    but you the FIRST nigga I seen with a forced name
    you're truly chick made so you deserve whatever you get dog
    cos if you reap what you sew, this nigga should get about 4 knit scarfs

    yo i was feelin all those from taylormade


    n these 2 were hoyt from carcastrophee


    dont care im against the gayest bitch, i do this shit for onlookers jack.
    its the reason its no options, & ur backed into a corner .. ur mom hookers at.
    U aggressively Caucasian, yall a crazy bunch & im safely hunched u been a raper.
    so white ur whole life u tanned with no light, & ur inner nature is printer paper.

    i gotta go with Taylormade' in the end though


    pz
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  17. Rated-Are

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    5-4 ..
    i always get these ol' nail biting shits.
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  18. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    vote=czar

    why? had a real nice verse although at times it wasn't consistent, nice punchlines

    Tailor, you had some dope punchlines too but I was feelin Czar's verse a little more
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