17. Client 1-0 VS 18. Juked 0-0

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Pent uP, Aug 28, 2006.

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  1. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    RSTL RULES AND REGULATIONS

    RULES AND REGULATIONS - THERE'S SOME NEW SHIT SO CLICK AND READ


    The Standard League Rules will still be Enforced

    Due Dates

    VERSES DUE: Friday 12:00am PST/3:00am EST
    Verses posted after the deadline will not count!

    VOTES DUE Sunday: 12:00am PACIFIC/3:00 Midnight EST
    Votes posted after the deadline will not count!

    • Check-in (Posting in your match to show that you are aware the match exists) is encouraged but not required.
    • Verses must incorporate at least one of the provided topics and must be at least 16 lines and must not exceed 64 lines.
    • Anyone who does not post at least 4 rap lines, incorporating at least one of the provided topics, is considered a no-show.
    • During check-in, you can ask your opponent to agree to a line limit (Minimum 16) and if your opponent agrees, Moderators will hold both participants to that limit.
    • Posting between 4-15 lines is considered a “show” but will not result in a match. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent posts between 16-64, you will lose the match but you will remain in the league. If you post 4-15 lines, and your opponent does not show, you will “Win by no-show”.

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    Topics: http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1006008
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  2. Client

    Client New Member

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    check, good luck
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  3. Juked

    Juked like 20 of the Lions.

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  4. Juked

    Juked like 20 of the Lions.

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    from da bay where we go dumb and rock
    stunna shades, weed smoke admist a hundid days
    shit dawg i love this shit
    shit dawg i love this shit dawg
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  5. Client

    Client New Member

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    One must desire something to be alive.

    Throughout my days I never paid attention to my ways
    The same trees were blazed while the same CD’s were played
    No time for praise, the haze had me dazed, staring at sun rays
    And in ablaze I was raised, giving no time of day to the phrase

    In time I grew older and the harsh realities of life grew colder
    And I realized to become fully alive…
    I couldn’t live trapped behind these boulders
    Because the worlds could shoulder will ride you to your death
    So I finally found a passion in life which gave me a new breath
    I began to write nonstop, the characters and plots kept me alive
    And when recording, the strive for the vibe is how I survived
    The beat of the drums kept me revived, never cared about fame
    But I wanted recognition so I thrived to be critically acclaimed
    I felt ashamed without a name; the acknowledgment, I deserved
    From the city streets to the suburbs my words needed to be heard
    In time my verbs would be slurred by all earth’s ethnic diversities
    Like Tupac and Shakespeare, I want to be remembered for eternity


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    If I tried to rush an ending it would be wack and if I took the proper time to finish it, I would no show so I'll just post what I got cuz seeing what he has I should win easily. Damn ehhh I'll finish this and put it in the OM.
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  6. SacriFICE

    SacriFICE TRUspeak

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    [hide]Um, well.... not sure what happened here, but there isn't really much to critique and the winner is quite obvious...so

    vote: Client[/hide]
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  7. SteveThaGreat

    SteveThaGreat Zeus

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    [HIDE]wtf...


    juked-- the "i want to be a wack, gay rapper like bone crusher" league is down the street faggot. sign out immediately and go to the writer's dojo or whatever it is here and try to understand what competitive writing is on hip hop sites like this..


    client-- obviously, you hada much better verse and you didn't need to come hard but you did exactly what you needed to do to get a win. good job.


    vote=client[/HIDE]
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  8. David Lama

    David Lama oh yea?

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    [hide]well, juked obviously didnt post a real verse and if this is getting voted on I might as well vote on it and get a easy link lol.. client was better, obviously he was, I mean, dude actually posted a verse, not a couple of no show bars.. so yea its obvious that client won this one.

    vote - Client[/hide]
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  9. TheReturn

    TheReturn Life of the Party

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    Lol, weeeeell...

    Not much to say here except Client came better in his 17 lines than Juked did in his 4. Why post a no show verse 6 hours before verses are even due? This isn't even 2 lines of breakdown, but I didn't count it as one of my four votes. Oh well.


    Vote - Client

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  10. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    [hide]This is a no brainer... vote Client

    he showed up and the other cat didnt, with a decent verse against a no show verse...

    but a small critique on client... u had good inners, the verse was heartfelt, would like to see more...[/hide]
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  11. Adderall XR 30

    Adderall XR 30 New Member

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    Vote=Client

    The end

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  12. Got Life?

    Got Life? Resident Megalomaniac

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    Juked...well to give you 3 lines of feedback on this is nearly impossible, but yea...this was clearly a no-show post even though you said you had already written your shit a few days ago...that to me means you're an idiot...and the 4 bars you put up weren't anything special...

    Client...congrats on having an easy win this week...from what I read the flow was on point...obviously you didn't finish the piece, but it was on point for what it was...hope to see you stay with it and see how you develop in the league...

    vote for Client...cause he actually had a verse?

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  13. MrMister

    MrMister Urizen

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    [HIDE]vote - client

    juked - while your piece showed real promise
    I mean the lay out and rhyme scheme were definitly on point
    you had me in there when you told me the boys thing
    I was hoping to get a real twist to make this the story of all stories
    but then I guess you kinda lost inspiration
    which is messed up cus you coulda had this

    Client - for such a short piece you defintly came on point
    flow rhyme scheme and even concept were all ok
    you killed it nicely for such a short piece
    there isnt much more I can say

    yeah so a no show 4 piece against a no show 16 bar piece
    (or sum like that)
    pretty easy so there you go[/HIDE]
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  14. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    THIS IS NOT A BATTLE TO BE VOTED UPON! DROP FEEDBACK IF YOU WANT FOR Client

    Juke takes the L, and is signed in next week, he just better vote
    VOTES IN THIS BATTLE ARE NOT CREDITED TOWARDS YOUR 4 MINIMUM
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  15. Juked

    Juked like 20 of the Lions.

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    i just moved to the eastcoast from the west so im used to the deadlines being early..i forgot about the time change and it was friday night i just took my chances on him no showing.

    sign me out if i gotta vote to start next week at 0-1...
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  16. Pent uP

    Pent uP I'd Like to Fight Ten Men

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    ^^ima discuss getting u banned for poor sportsmanship

    Client is 2-0 but does not move up in ranks for not voting
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