17. Are Aye Wy 6-2 v. 18. One's Abyss 5-1

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  1. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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  2. Are aye wy

    Are aye wy See what happens?

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    Right 14-18
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  3. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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  4. Are aye wy

    Are aye wy See what happens?

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    Yea um…
    Sorry to be honest, but this whores out of place
    So I’ll put this nine to one like a four hour day
    You can attempt to fight me, but dog I’ll hand you coffins
    So you can hold your ground…soon as I slam you on it
    Got more post than me already, he surfs till he’s too lazy to see
    He’s mad cause im bringing more comp then his daily routine
    Plus you cant get girls, cause they leave you hugging the floor
    You know your only mane squeeze involves tugging a horse
    Now you gotta be honest man, you know you’re my hottest fan
    I’ll plan an arial attack, then bury you in ‘comic san’
    Your not worth it, I’ll spit till you have a pitty pulse
    Then put more holes in one then tiger woods in mini golf
    Yea, you don’t belong in the top 30, your repping it worse
    I’ll even talk in cowboy slang, cause I’m reckon your verse
    My weapons’ll hurt, im far from racist, and the rest
    Cause the only ‘one’ I like comes with laces and a check

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  5. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    Jesus christ

    win? hahaha, son your not-dope
    Your string of victory is more like an etheopian jump-rope
    ya text is all whack shit: aka nothing
    I'll put fucking albino's in a full bady tan after this sonning
    writing devilish scriptures, destroying this faker
    fuck the eletric-slide, on the dance floor broads leave ya tazered
    when ya say your nice your not for real right
    Cause everyone knows this 'ray's' fake like artificial sunlight
    dude aint perfect, so beat me? hell no
    Are's verse gets more foul signs', then a karl malone elbow
    Get smashed and slammed, fuck ya raps..
    Ray WAS 'dope' before the fucking hippies started naming it crack
    full plated, ready for war? thats an understatement
    But you did drop a goodbar' once....i picked it up and ate it
    i'll trample my targets, etc. and such and such
    i thought everyone know's Wy....you fucking suck so much
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  6. -Kolli$ion-

    -Kolli$ion- 3-1-5

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    Vote= Are Aye Wy

    Reason:
    Feeling his punches. Don't get me wrong, Abyss came nice as fuck, but these were the key lines in Ray's verse that edged him to victory:

    "Now you gotta be honest man, you know you’re my hottest fan
    I’ll plan an arial attack, then bury you in ‘comic san’
    Your not worth it, I’ll spit till you have a pitty pulse
    Then put more holes in one then tiger woods in mini golf"

    Very nice shit from both of you....keep spittin y'all

    -K
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  7. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    Up Over NoShows
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  8. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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  9. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Pretty close, needs a breakdown...

    Are aye wy:
    Sorry to be honest, but this whores out of place
    So I’ll put this nine to one like a four hour day
    ----pretty nice, feelin it
    You can attempt to fight me, but dog I’ll hand you coffins
    So you can hold your ground…soon as I slam you on it
    ----good flip of an old concept, nice
    Got more post than me already, he surfs till he’s too lazy to see
    He’s mad cause im bringing more comp then his daily routine
    ----seen it before
    Plus you cant get girls, cause they leave you hugging the floor
    You know your only mane squeeze involves tugging a horse
    ----haha, nice wordplay
    Now you gotta be honest man, you know you’re my hottest fan
    I’ll plan an arial attack, then bury you in ‘comic san’
    ----pretty nice
    Your not worth it, I’ll spit till you have a pitty pulse
    Then put more holes in one then tiger woods in mini golf
    ----too played for peeps wit One in their name
    Yea, you don’t belong in the top 30, your repping it worse
    I’ll even talk in cowboy slang, cause I’m reckon your verse
    ----heh, wording was a little off, but good concept
    My weapons’ll hurt, im far from racist, and the rest
    Cause the only ‘one’ I like comes with laces and a check
    ----nice closer, good personal

    One's Abyss:
    win? hahaha, son your not-dope
    Your string of victory is more like an etheopian jump-rope
    ----heh, decent
    ya text is all whack shit: aka nothing
    I'll put fucking albino's in a full bady tan after this sonning
    ----played
    writing devilish scriptures, destroying this faker
    fuck the eletric-slide, on the dance floor broads leave ya tazered
    ----nice
    when ya say your nice your not for real right
    Cause everyone knows this 'ray's' fake like artificial sunlight
    ----good personal
    dude aint perfect, so beat me? hell no
    Are's verse gets more foul signs', then a karl malone elbow
    ----pretty nice
    Get smashed and slammed, fuck ya raps..
    Ray WAS 'dope' before the fucking hippies started naming it crack
    ----lol, nice flip
    full plated, ready for war? thats an understatement
    But you did drop a goodbar' once....i picked it up and ate it
    ----too played, seen it many times
    i'll trample my targets, etc. and such and such
    i thought everyone know's Wy....you fucking suck so much
    ----nice closer, good personal

    Both had good personals.. both had some played lines.. both had nice flips of old concepts.. both were consistent and had good overall impressions.. damn, yall are MAD close, lol. Basically, it comes down to who i thought had the best 1 or 2 punches. RAY had 1 more punch that i was feelin.. One had 1 more OK line i think, whereas RAY had a nice line instead of that decent line. So yea, you can see how damn close it was.. came down to one punch of a difference. RAY's mane squeeze line is what won it for him. Nice battle guys, feelin both verses. Could go either way, itll be close.

    Vote: Are Aye Wy
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  10. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    THE STREETS AINT HAPPY

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  11. Hal Jordan

    Hal Jordan One Hal of a Writer

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    vote = why or wy or whatever the fuck

    way better verse ,better punches..
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  12. EA Sports

    EA Sports New Member

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    this was a sick battle, their def was not one sided like most of the other battles this week. The flow from both competitors was good along with the punches.

    Are Aye
    (lol)
    Plus you cant get girls, cause they leave you hugging the floor
    You know your only mane squeeze involves tugging a horse

    One
    (lol)
    when ya say your nice your not for real right
    Cause everyone knows this 'ray's' fake like artificial sunlight
    (lol)
    i'll trample my targets, etc. and such and such
    i thought everyone know's Wy....you fucking suck so much

    I'm gonna have to go against the grain of the other voters and give this one to one. Maybe i am just seeing things differently but i was feeling his a tad bit more then Are's. God battle fella's and good luck next week.


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  13. SAYONCE

    SAYONCE New Member

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    decent battle...

    Are Aye Wy
    lines i liked....
    .."more comp/daily routine"..nice.
    .."mane squeeze/tugging a horse"..decent
    .."Arial attack/Comic San"...
    .."Ones i like/Laces and a check"..good closer..

    One's Abyss
    Lines i liked...
    .."Rays fake/Artificial sunlight"..good line,could have been done better though.
    .."Electric slide/tazered"..i just thought this was funny..nice ish.
    .."Foul Signs/Malones elbow"..decent..i just think the rbl has overdosed with sports punchies at the moment..

    Vote=Are Aye Wy...more punchies that i liked..simple as.

    good battle though..pz
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  14. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    this was a good battle..

    Are - I was feelin the horse line, comic san and the mini golf one, nice flow, pretty consistant verse.. good shit

    One's - I was feelin the tazered, sunlight and goodbar lines, nice flow, pretty consistant as well..

    line of the battle: writing devilish scriptures, destroying this faker
    fuck the eletric-slide, on the dance floor broads leave ya tazered

    that pretty much decided it

    vote = One's
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  15. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    Final
    RAY - 4
    One's Abyss - 2

    But, RAY Did Not Post Links. Making It
    RAY - 0
    One's Abyss - 2

    One's Abyss Wins
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