15. Tri Optix (6-2) v. 16. Charles (12-7)

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  1. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    15. Tri Optix v. 16. Charles

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  2. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  3. Tri Optix

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  4. Charles

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    Time to kick ass an' chew bubble gum .... and i'm allll outta gum

    Tri Optix pffffff

    Seen you in the club n' wonderd how old that ur bitch is
    Cause she shakin,undeveloped..like Polaroid Pictures
    Not to mention her manlyness..sumthin must be missin
    Such a Big Apple,her throat got its own subway system
    I'd wanna give you advice man,i'd try in the best way
    Cuz i'd tell u to quit while ur ahead..
    But that would mean you'd contine writing for decades
    Wanna move units wit a CD?Dont put ur wackness on it
    But when ya Cell out in the streets..people jack u for it
    I'll lay off the fag jokes,but this aint no joke,he's a fag
    Talkn bout namix on ur ass wit Craven strokin ya shaft?
    Your form hasnt been good either,now in a steep slump
    Career so downhill,it makes Everest look like a speed bump
    Secret eating is serious,i can see your fat and pompus
    With more dishes behind your back than Magic Johnson
    I'll be bustin some clips..make sure you dnt fuckin exist
    But when arms put to ya ass..its usually up to the wrist
    Stop talkin bout ur skills n stuff,thats real gay shit duke
    You toot ur own horn so much..
    ..A fuckin mad new york cab driver'd make way for you

    Bitch.
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  5. Tri Optix

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    Keep recyclin homeboy..

    Thats the 3rd time Ive seen you use that fuckin line.


    16-20..

    Kinda how you like your boyfriends to be,live without the bitches
    This kid stacks so many punches he's liable to put Snapple out of buisness
    Your stream of conciousness is weak..and I just dont fear the flow
    Yeah your lines are dooope..
    I loved em even more when Dough spit them 3 years ago
    Im ill enough to dominate your whole being, kid, Im a threat to your hard drive
    Kill you, then rob your grave like newbies in Epimetheus Archives
    Im big..you big...headed..fall back cuz your egos too large
    So TriGodly's gonna make it rain lightning just to put Charles in Charge
    Your words fake,Knock this kid out the frame like pictures from earthquakes
    Give half-pounds like birthweights, take Charles out like Princess Di on a first date..
    Tri Optix is the champ...watch my live shows and see me get amped
    Have the crowd gaspin for air like Charles walking up a wheelchair ramp
    So go ahead and talk shit kiddo, I take it as nothin but flattery
    Cuz Charles couldnt "look hard" standing in front of a fuckin Nerf Factory
    You wanna call me on kid? G'head and shoot yourself
    Charles wouldnt know a dope rhyme if it hit him..
    Then sat on his chest and introduced itself
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  6. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    Up' Over No Shows
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  7. Imperial

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    Yea Charles, back to ya regular style. =)

    This battle was nice.. Charles had a lotta good lines, his verse was real consistent. It was pretty original too, i was feelin it. Tri had a nice closer, some good personals too. But he started off a little shaky. His first few lines were played. He picked it up from there, but Charles had more lines that i liked. I jus felt his style more.

    Nice battle...

    Vote: Charles
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  8. Fatal Words

    Fatal Words .........

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    V- Charles

    I just tought he came better, he had lots of nice lines, maybe one or two i didnt like but most of his verse was real nice. Tri came iight at the start but then he picked it up..had some good lines with a few nice personals but his verse wasnt as consistant as Charles. good battel tho. pz
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  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    Charles:
    Seen you in the club n' wonderd how old that ur bitch is
    Cause she shakin,undeveloped..like Polaroid Pictures
    cool open
    Not to mention her manlyness..sumthin must be missin
    Such a Big Apple,her throat got its own subway system
    bwahaha, cool
    I'd wanna give you advice man,i'd try in the best way
    Cuz i'd tell u to quit while ur ahead..
    But that would mean you'd contine writing for decades
    ehh
    Wanna move units wit a CD?Dont put ur wackness on it
    But when ya Cell out in the streets..people jack u for it
    umm, nah
    I'll lay off the fag jokes,but this aint no joke,he's a fag
    Talkn bout namix on ur ass wit Craven strokin ya shaft?
    lol, cool personal
    Your form hasnt been good either,now in a steep slump
    Career so downhill,it makes Everest look like a speed bump
    haha, cool
    Secret eating is serious,i can see your fat and pompus
    With more dishes behind your back than Magic Johnson
    nah
    I'll be bustin some clips..make sure you dnt fuckin exist
    But when arms put to ya ass..its usually up to the wrist
    umm, nah lol
    Stop talkin bout ur skills n stuff,thats real gay shit duke
    You toot ur own horn so much..
    ..A fuckin mad new york cab driver'd make way for you
    ehh, cool closer

    cool verse
    I've seen so much better from u tho
    overall it wasn't that bad tho
    it was str8


    Tri Optix:
    Kinda how you like your boyfriends to be,live without the bitches
    This kid stacks so many punches he's liable to put Snapple out of buisness
    ehh, cool open
    Your stream of conciousness is weak..and I just dont fear the flow
    Yeah your lines are dooope..
    I loved em even more when Dough spit them 3 years ago
    haha
    Im ill enough to dominate your whole being, kid, Im a threat to your hard drive
    Kill you, then rob your grave like newbies in Epimetheus Archives
    haha, cool
    Im big..you big...headed..fall back cuz your egos too large
    So TriGodly's gonna make it rain lightning just to put Charles in Charge
    nah
    Your words fake,Knock this kid out the frame like pictures from earthquakes
    Give half-pounds like birthweights, take Charles out like Princess Di on a first date..
    ehh, decent
    Tri Optix is the champ...watch my live shows and see me get amped
    Have the crowd gaspin for air like Charles walking up a wheelchair ramp
    wtf lol
    So go ahead and talk shit kiddo, I take it as nothin but flattery
    Cuz Charles couldnt "look hard" standing in front of a fuckin Nerf Factory
    played
    You wanna call me on kid? G'head and shoot yourself
    Charles wouldnt know a dope rhyme if it hit him..
    Then sat on his chest and introduced itself
    nah

    cool verse
    I've seen better from u as well
    nothing really stood out
    u had like maybe 2 or 3 good lines
    overall was an ok verse


    vote = charles

    both were average at best in this one
    neither had any standout ish
    but charles was a little more consistent

    holla.
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  10. Charles

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    Thanks for the votes.

    This gives me faith in the rbl.I was soo close to quittin,good looks guys.

    My first up.
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  11. Idol Dot Z

    Idol Dot Z Capo Status

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    vote charles
    he had the overall better verse.
    Not to mention her manlyness..sumthin must be missin
    Such a Big Apple,her throat got its own subway system
    Your form hasnt been good either,now in a steep slump
    Career so downhill,it makes Everest look like a speed bump

    my fave lines not only from him but prolly the battle also.

    only thing from Tri that really stood out was
    Your stream of conciousness is weak..and I just dont fear the flow
    Yeah your lines are dooope..
    I loved em even more when Dough spit them 3 years ago

    everything else from you was mediocre. i know you can step it up.


    stay up.
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  12. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    Charles wins this pretty easily.

    A lot better punches and a better feel to his verse.

    Hit harder.


    2 cents
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  13. thousand words

    thousand words IF YOUR MOTHER ONLY BLEW

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    cHARLES IS SICK.

    HE GOT THIS WITH EASE

    i just like his verse alot more.

    v/ Chuck
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  14. Knucklez!

    Knucklez! New Member

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    wtf..

    Kinda how you like your boyfriends to be,live without the bitches
    This kid stacks so many punches he's liable to put Snapple out of buisness

    tri-optix either bit that opening line, or recycled it from a previous battle.

    either way,

    vote - charles.
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  15. Da Bizness

    Da Bizness Yuno Da bizness

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    welp......Tri, you came just average this time...i seen you come nicer in the battle arena...i didnt really like the snapple and nerf factory punches holmes....Charlie had a few nice punches and a punch i didnt like also but this was an average battle n' i think charlie got u this time Tri..

    vote=Charles
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  16. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    umm..

    no explination needed..

    v charles..
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  17. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    sweet..

    I think Ill go recycle my lines too..
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  18. Incephalon

    Incephalon The Devil's Inner Demon

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    v/charles easy, tri i was decent, didnt like him tho
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  19. Charles

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    Sweet..

    And you'll keep losing and losing..

    Dont be a fag.
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  20. The_Nebulotic

    The_Nebulotic Way Over your Heads.

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    lmao @ some of you guys' lines, enjoyable read.

    From Charles:

    I'd wanna give you advice man,i'd try in the best way
    Cuz i'd tell u to quit while ur ahead..
    But that would mean you'd contine writing for decades

    Your form hasnt been good either,now in a steep slump
    Career so downhill,it makes Everest look like a speed bump
    Secret eating is serious,i can see your fat and pompus
    With more dishes behind your back than Magic Johnson


    Feelin those, though the "writing for decades" line was way too long.

    From Tri-Optix:

    To be frank, I pretty much enjoyed Tri's entire verse. The only thing I wish he would've done is shorten his lines, because they're FAR too long and the makes the lines seem labored. Other than that, I thought the disses were pretty solid. I feel like I may be goin against the grain, but...

    My vote goes to Tri-Optix.

    Shorten those lines, buddy
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