15. Oz 6-2 Vs 16. Vern Acular 6-2

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  1. U S E R

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  2. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Damn this shit is up fast....we doing 16!
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  3. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    16's cool...
    checkmate...
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  4. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    oz i so lame right...look...i dont play nice
    vern'll beat you to a 'pulp'...oz is 'o.j.'s wife
    you wont stay high-in rank, cause cats that read your ballots
    will see me knock the boy from oz like im smacking peter allen
    the laughs'll leave you sad N, you'll suffer a loss from me
    when i remove your spot from the top with a bucket of oxyclean
    oz is mean?...not really...he's known to be soft and he's
    quick to grab the balls before the rest...he goalies a soccer team
    approaching me's not the key-but...recyclers obviously need one
    to parental lock the HBO...cause Oz is just re-runs
    no talking to me son...see im mad at your text verse
    it's got me 'fed UP' like if fed ex and UPS merged
    replying yes sir is a must, cause my hobby is just to shoot
    "mind in the gutter?"...
    well sure...if other parts of your body is on the roof
    now you probably wanna dispute this - rather im winning or not
    but i dont penny your thoughts - moreless give a fuck of your 2 cents

    *boy from oz* is a broadway musical by peter allen
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  5. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Vern...
    The wack felt him, but his career will be fast gone,
    Like the black album, his first song will be his last song!!
    This is a past time for me, And you..dont dare to boast...
    I got you like Slow Wide Recievers, Ur Scared to post!!
    Ill play the host, We can listen to tunes when I slay ya,
    Too bad ya spinal disks dont play well in my player!!
    Ya da-re test me, but get scared when you faced me,
    Cuz like a good offensive line, Ill endanger your safety!!
    They placed me below you, so DG is best with ranks,
    Still ill leave this piece of shit underground like septic tanks!!
    Ive kept is gank-sta, when I put gats under your chin and spray,
    You'll be so A-Float, you could be in the macys day parade!!
    Get laid in the dirt, My guns play games...its has to be said,
    Ill fill you with holes, and play chinese checkers on ya head!!!
    But you learned a lesson instead, when ya felt hate kid,
    Prison dont make a man hard, but your cellmates did!!!
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  6. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    this was an aight battle..

    Vern came with a few fresh concepts, good flip on the 2 cents line, oxyclean line was nice and the oz line was good

    Oz your verse was kinda boring, mediocre punches at best, had me bored half way thru

    vote = Vern
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  7. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    Up' Over No Shows
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  8. Vandette

    Vandette New Member

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    vern dun diddly got it
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  9. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    vernacular took this. even though i hate his font.


    just fresher with the ideas/wording of his punches. came more original.


    v - Vernacular.
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  10. The Saurus

    The Saurus Two Times of a lotta shit

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    Vern's verse was put together much better. Line for line is was much more smooth, and some nice disses

    Vote Vern
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  11. god_son

    god_son Hollow Shellz

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    both didnt really have too much outstandng lines
    but i did like this couplet

    replying yes sir is a must, cause my hobby is just to shoot
    "mind in the gutter?"...
    well sure...if other parts of your body is on the roof


    vote- vern
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  12. Break it

    Break it TEXTACY

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    i'm gonna have to go with oz on this one i felt that he came harder wit the punches i expected most of the lines that came from vern just a difference in opinion i felt oz came harder

    vote-oz
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  13. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    Vern slaughtered dude. Oz' closer was koo - but Vern brought the heat. His flow 'n scheme is niceness. Makes for such an easy read. Opener was funny - loved the 'oxy clean' line. Very strong showing.

    Vote: Vern Acular
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  14. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Coo battle. Both had nice lines. I liked Oz's last three punches a lot. The rest were a little played or weak. I think Vern came more witty.. he was more consistent wit dope lines. And i liked his flow. I thought vern took it wit consistency. Good verses.

    Vote: Vern Acular
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  15. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    yes.. vern came more witty.. but this was closer than it seemed.. and Oz definitely DID heat up in the last three punches.. if all his punches had been that caliber.. he would have taken this from vern though..

    vote-Vern
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  16. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    Vern Acular

    oz i so lame right...look...i dont play nice
    vern'll beat you to a 'pulp'...oz is 'o.j.'s wife
    ---i've actually heard a flip very similar to this once before, but its not played out by any means.. aiight start, woulda been even nicer if it was new to me tho lol

    you wont stay high-in rank, cause cats that read your ballots
    will see me knock the boy from oz like im smacking peter allen
    ---this was ok, but a lil stretched being that im sure you knew that not too many hiphop fans are into the broadway scene lol

    the laughs'll leave you sad N, you'll suffer a loss from me
    when i remove your spot from the top with a bucket of oxyclean
    ......aiight aiight, sorta feeling it here

    oz is mean?...not really...he's known to be soft and he's
    quick to grab the balls before the rest...he goalies a soccer team
    .....well, really a goalie is more behind the rest of the soccer team- unless obviously your referring to his opponents soccer team... the concept was coo, but i think it coulda stood some editing, just re-wording wise..

    approaching me's not the key-but...recyclers obviously need one
    to parental lock the HBO...cause Oz is just re-runs
    ....ehh, he's gotten this flip a couple times.. i think inkwell just had one in the last couple weeks against him that was a lil better in my opinion.. but it was still aiight..

    no talking to me son...see im mad at your text verse
    it's got me 'fed UP' like if fed ex and UPS merged
    ........heh, well i think the wordplay is a little bit stretched hommie.. even if you flipped it to saying something like being Fed UPs, just by gettin the s in there i think it woulda sounded a lil better.. but it was pretty original for sure.. coo

    replying yes sir is a must, cause my hobby is just to shoot
    "mind in the gutter?"...
    well sure...if other parts of your body is on the roof
    ........lol

    now you probably wanna dispute this - rather im winning or not
    but i dont penny your thoughts - moreless give a fuck of your 2 cents
    ........pretty cool flip of two common concepts, i wasnt feelin it for an ending but it was still pretty nice..





    -Oz-

    The wack felt him, but his career will be fast gone,
    Like the black album, his first song will be his last song!!
    ...aiight aiight

    This is a past time for me, And you..dont dare to boast...
    I got you like Slow Wide Recievers, Ur Scared to post!!
    ......heard the 'ol post line before, normally used in reference to basketball- but to the same effect..

    Ill play the host, We can listen to tunes when I slay ya,
    Too bad ya spinal disks dont play well in my player!!
    ......likewise, i have heard 'slip discs' type shit before flipped like this, so it wasnt too stunning to me.. but it was still pretty nice..

    Ya da-re test me, but get scared when you faced me,
    Cuz like a good offensive line, Ill endanger your safety!!
    ....i dont know, i wouldnt have put more than one football reference in a verse unless it was flipped completely outside the box.. but this was cool, i liked it more than the other one..

    They placed me below you, so DG is best with ranks,
    Still ill leave this piece of shit underground like septic tanks!!
    .......aiight aiight, pretty decent here

    Ive kept is gank-sta, when I put gats under your chin and spray,
    You'll be so A-Float, you could be in the macys day parade!!
    ......nice idea, i dont think using the word "So" in there worked to your advantage, i think it conceptually fell off a little bit because of it.. relevent to turkey day, but i think that a gay pride parade woulda been funnier heh.. still coo tho

    Get laid in the dirt, My guns play games...its has to be said,
    Ill fill you with holes, and play chinese checkers on ya head!!!
    ....ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    But you learned a lesson instead, when ya felt hate kid,
    Prison dont make a man hard, but your cellmates did!!!
    .....hahaha, this was probably my favorite line of the battle, nice closer..



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    vote- Vern


    why? Well, i think this was really close... closer than some voters have implicitly stated.. but i do think that Vern came a bit more on the fresh tip than Oz.. I dont really get into the Sport-line punches unless they are flipped reaaaaaaaaaal ill.. its like just thinking of a new caliber gun to put to someones back like a '<insert name here> jersey'... i think the closer Oz had was dope, funny stuff.. but i think that Vern, in the end, came more consistent line to line.. pretty good reads guys.
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  17. U S E R

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    Vern wins.

    closed.
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