15 Lyrical Sorcery 4-1 Vs 16 Epenthesis 8-1

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Epenthesis

    Epenthesis take u 2 school

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  3. Epenthesis

    Epenthesis take u 2 school

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    L.s....

    U not the wackest to enter a league, u tha wackest to leave
    Cus after this you'll sign out jus to avoid continuing a losin streak//
    How are u ranked above me? U never had competition
    Think Oz messed up ur rank las week but u shuda stayed in that division//
    An thaz on a real tip, ya punches weak as shit
    Enjoy it while u can cus seeded 15 is the highest peak u'll ever hit//
    Its no real decision whether u'll lose..ur headed for worse
    Cuz like the planet turned to voodoo dolls, im givin u a world of hurt//
    I dont gotta see this to the end..i'll drop an leave
    Like i had a vowel as my accomplice, i'm finishin this off with E's//

    I decided to jus go 10, pizzeace
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  4. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    real eager to get beat I see... droppin hella days early...

    checkin in.. 12 right.. aight man
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  5. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    oh... 10... that's cool too..
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  6. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    never posted on the first day of battle before.... but fuck it...

    Yeah, I’m ranked above you so just follow the leader
    A child that’s so eager to get blazed cuz his style is so meager
    Post on the first day of battle, showing you’re proud to be weaker
    With that display the RBL shouldn’t allow you to speak first
    Gay as can be, your contribution: bringing AIDS over beats
    I cripple the wak and with this fact you’ll be disabled for weeks
    The word Epenthesis puts emphasis on how these letters will kill
    While you’re using atomic microscopes to measure your skills………
    Your neck is revealed as your head pays the debt you’ve concealed
    The pressure you feel are punches imprinting this text to your grill

    done...
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  7. W A R C R Y

    W A R C R Y New Member

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    alright well this was alright


    Epenthesis

    U not the wackest to enter a league, u tha wackest to leave
    Cus after this you'll sign out jus to avoid continuing a losin streak//

    poor grammar, no multi, no flow, pretty weak punch

    How are u ranked above me? U never had competition
    Think Oz messed up ur rank las week but u shuda stayed in that division//

    ok, ranks have been fucked up for months, lol, don't hate on em now, weak punch

    An thaz on a real tip, ya punches weak as shit
    Enjoy it while u can cus seeded 15 is the highest peak u'll ever hit//

    wow, the "real tip" eh? once again no flow, and a pretty plain punch

    Its no real decision whether u'll lose..ur headed for worse
    Cuz like the planet turned to voodoo dolls, im givin u a world of hurt//

    wow, unbelievably stretched and in the end pretty wack. how are YOU gonna bring a world of hurt when the planet turns to voodoo dolls? lmao. and it had NO relevance with the setup

    I dont gotta see this to the end..i'll drop an leave
    Like i had a vowel as my accomplice, i'm finishin this off with E's//

    ooohhhhh, a vowel as your accomplice? talk about stretched. AND it was unoriginal.

    overall: 4.5/10


    Lyrical Sorcery

    Yeah, I’m ranked above you so just follow the leader
    A child that’s so eager to get blazed cuz his style is so meager

    ehhh, it was ok, not really too hard of a punch, decent opener tho

    Post on the first day of battle, showing you’re proud to be weaker
    With that display the RBL shouldn’t allow you to speak first

    altho it BARELY rhymed, the punch outshined a lot of what Epen was sayin

    Gay as can be, your contribution: bringing AIDS over beats
    I cripple the wak and with this fact you’ll be disabled for weeks

    ehhh, setup was stretched, but the punch came through. and HEY, there's a multi!!! nice

    The word Epenthesis puts emphasis on how these letters will kill
    While you’re using atomic microscopes to measure your skills………

    ha, atomic microscopes eh? boy, well whatever, it sorta worked. still had a multi which enhanced the flow 10 fold, and hit pretty hard

    Your neck is revealed as your head pays the debt you’ve concealed
    The pressure you feel are punches imprinting this text to your grill

    ehh decent closer, coulda been worded a TAD better but four multis in one couplet is nice

    edit in: "overall 6.4/10"

    damn, i really didn't think lyrical sorcery was that good, but this week he was by far better than Epenthesis


    i woulda underestimated him too, no offense LS

    vote-LS by a decent margin

    pz
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  8. QuicK SyllaBle

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    this was the wackest battle ever....but vote=epin

    uhhh no quotables from either....seemed first guy had better attempts at punches......jesus there is 5 days to drop ur verses.....put more thought into it or something....LS had a weak verse, there was nothing to it
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  9. Tony Elbow

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    U not the wackest to enter a league, u tha wackest to leave
    Cus after this you'll sign out jus to avoid continuing a losin streak
    ^^only decent lines in the battle..both should probably waited and wrote something hot for the positions your in..that line was Epenthesis so he get the vote

    Vote: Epenthesis
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  10. Anaphora

    Anaphora was here

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    Epen... I hear ya on the rankings thing... my opponent lost and move up as many spots as I went with a no show... I commented on Oz in my verse too haha. This was ok... the ending was kinda... I dunno... with ease? could've worded it better, talked about your opponent... something.

    LS: This seemed to be a lot of filler... nothing really hit very hard ya know? The closer was my favorite, but could've been worded better... you definitely had flow on your side, with a few multi's... but the punches just didn't do it for me this week...

    Vote: Epenthesis.
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  11. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    U not the wackest to enter a league, u tha wackest to leave
    Cus after this you'll sign out jus to avoid continuing a losin streak//

    blah \, really not cool
    How are u ranked above me? U never had competition
    Think Oz messed up ur rank las week but u shuda stayed in that division//
    ehhh, i mean ehhhh

    An thaz on a real tip, ya punches weak as shit
    Enjoy it while u can cus seeded 15 is the highest peak u'll ever hit//
    no connection, or creativity

    Its no real decision whether u'll lose..ur headed for worse
    Cuz like the planet turned to voodoo dolls, im givin u a world of hurt//
    alright attempt

    I dont gotta see this to the end..i'll drop an leave
    Like i had a vowel as my accomplice, i'm finishin this off with E's//
    played ass fuck
    I decided to jus go 10, pizzeace

    Yeah, I’m ranked above you so just follow the leader
    A child that’s so eager to get blazed cuz his style is so meager
    better then epenthesis opener, but ehh

    Post on the first day of battle, showing you’re proud to be weaker
    With that display the RBL shouldn’t allow you to speak first

    blah
    Gay as can be, your contribution: bringing AIDS over beats
    I cripple the wak and with this fact you’ll be disabled for weeks

    i actually like this, the flow is sweet

    The word Epenthesis puts emphasis on how these letters will kill
    While you’re using atomic microscopes to measure your skills………

    ehhhh

    Your neck is revealed as your head pays the debt you’ve concealed
    The pressure you feel are punches imprinting this text to your grill

    ehhhh

    this battle sux... OZ WE GOT NU CONTESTANT FOR STEP YA GAME UP
    but im givin it to LS, better flow, and more attempts at punches
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  12. Mr. Mynd

    Mr. Mynd The British Guy

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    Vote - Epen

    the best of a bad bunch, really. I didnt like that much from either .. both should probably get that boot camp thing. Heh

    Epen did slightly better. he gets my vote.
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  13. MANchyld

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    oh damn... thought I had this one locked down...

    not my best of course, but I thought it was better...

    I respect the votes... thanks people


    aye... somebody quoted me for their sig... that's cool... even tho he voted against me... LOL
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  14. Phesus Christ

    Phesus Christ Thinking u won, is losing

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    Yeah, I’m ranked above you so just follow the leader
    A child that’s so eager to get blazed cuz his style is so meager
    Post on the first day of battle, showing you’re proud to be weaker

    that just sounded so newbish...flow and all

    With that display the RBL shouldn’t allow you to speak first
    Gay as can be, your contribution: bringing AIDS over beats
    ^^ is that a diss?


    I cripple the wak and with this fact you’ll be disabled for weeks

    wtf hahahahahah!



    I'm not picking at you...just being real...but Epenthesis mos def takes this...I just didn't feel LS verse at all...I hope you don't take this the wrong way



    Vote- Epenthesis
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  15. W A R C R Y

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    U not the wackest to enter a league, u tha wackest to leave
    Cus after this you'll sign out jus to avoid continuing a losin streak//


    and THAT wasn't newb shit mannnnn????
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  16. Epenthesis

    Epenthesis take u 2 school

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    haha, yall hatin like i spent days on a verse. Look at the time i posted, the very first day and a 10 min verse. I can tell what sux an what doesnt, and yes my verse sucked. But...i'm up against someone who cant even beat THAT so it legitimizes it. Get some common sense. Pz.
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  17. MANchyld

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    lol @ you beat me wit that weak ass shit

    you know what...

    the only people that broke down both verses voted for me

    I think that says it all
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  18. Verse4tile

    Verse4tile ~*U.S*~

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    Epenthesis...
    U not the wackest to enter a league, u tha wackest to leave
    Cus after this you'll sign out jus to avoid continuing a losin streak//
    decent opener...nice attempt at a multi
    How are u ranked above me? U never had competition
    Think Oz messed up ur rank las week but u shuda stayed in that division//
    good punch, likin it
    An thaz on a real tip, ya punches weak as shit
    Enjoy it while u can cus seeded 15 is the highest peak u'll ever hit//
    nice attempt..jus stretched out the second line
    Its no real decision whether u'll lose..ur headed for worse
    Cuz like the planet turned to voodoo dolls, im givin u a world of hurt//
    this wasnt the best line, seen somethin like it before
    I dont gotta see this to the end..i'll drop an leave
    Like i had a vowel as my accomplice, i'm finishin this off with E's//
    decent closer...could have better i think though

    Lyrical Sorcery...
    Yeah, I’m ranked above you so just follow the leader
    A child that’s so eager to get blazed cuz his style is so meager
    meh..ive seen better from you..decent
    Post on the first day of battle, showing you’re proud to be weaker
    With that display the RBL shouldn’t allow you to speak first
    not really....didnt make sense to me
    Gay as can be, your contribution: bringing AIDS over beats
    I cripple the wak and with this fact you’ll be disabled for weeks
    good punch..should have gotten better wit the personls though
    The word Epenthesis puts emphasis on how these letters will kill
    While you’re using atomic microscopes to measure your skills………
    nice...best line i think..besided ur opener..
    Your neck is revealed as your head pays the debt you’ve concealed
    The pressure you feel are punches imprinting this text to your grill
    decent closer

    overall i feel that Epenthesis took it though wit more consistancy in his punches...lyrical i no u can come better mayun....keep at it..peace.

    Vote-Epenthesis
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  19. main eventtion

    main eventtion New Member

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    U not the wackest to enter a league, u tha wackest to leave
    Cus after this you'll sign out jus to avoid continuing a losin streak//
    How are u ranked above me? U never had competition
    Think Oz messed up ur rank las week but u shuda stayed in that division//

    This was an o.k line

    This wasn't a great battle



    Lyrical Sorcery you had some nice shit but i think epenthesis won

    vote epenthesis
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  20. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    FUCK IT... LOL

    even from your break downs... I smell some rats

    I feel like Mel Gibson in Conspiracy Theory... lol
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