15. Dat Gangsta 6-2 vs 16. Storm Bringa 5-1

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Storm Bringa

    Storm Bringa Mad as Hell

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  3. Dat Gangsta

    Dat Gangsta •••••••••••••

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  4. Dat Gangsta

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    storm binger lol, bringer of storms......

    i knew you should'nt have been 5-0 when i placed you in the rankings last week........



    i can use profanity, but in your context it's do then die
    cuz i'll have storm go to shambles, .. just to apologise
    I'll school you kiko but ya girl owns shit & your the end
    cuz seeing the 'head'master is a visit i'd recomend
    after i kill em, the RBL will soon find a replacement
    when storms rocking two-L's, like a fucking tradesman
    handed ur shot at fame & a loss you'll be given son....
    but chea you have two chances, they are slim to none
    i done rankings last week & i knew he would'nt bang?
    cuz i placed him with inkwell & i knew he could'nt hang
    storms gay, but i wont fault em, i guess that's heredetory
    you lose, so i'll only "sae-once" like a witch craft ceremony
    score out this idiot, he'll try, try & then again harder
    but nobodies written you off, they have permanent markers
    i be throwin fists n winnin with egos, your'e blagging fight's
    while i have punches with left's, & bragging right's





    Thefuckbackto a gay record
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  5. Storm Bringa

    Storm Bringa Mad as Hell

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    With that? BWAHAHAHAHAHAAA!!!

    LMAO@ you tryna sway votes already. Nice try.

    Blastin in 3......2......1

    BLA-DOW!!



    from the display you gave this week, there must be emotional damage
    "They wouldn't let me do rankings! Shit, I need the advantage"
    so don't say that Storm stole the win, you never had what it took
    you leavin 6-3 like problems in 'Sif's math book
    you wanna be hard; man, I bet ya muscles flexed
    how can you be DAT Gangsta when all you do is text?
    even if that wasn't true, you wouldn't be blastin teks
    you'd be on the street doin drive-bys tossin cassettes
    you gave yourself a supposedly easy win last week
    got more than you bargained for and then jetted the scene
    you started cryin cause the mods wouldnt let you rank
    but shut the fuck up cause you moved up thanks to Tang.
    you sittin tryna bitch cuz I aint choose to drop yet
    it's not good for you to whine with a typin impediment
    with a verse like that, you've no business tryna boast
    I shouldn't be 5-0? You shouldn't be tryna post


    there ya go.
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  6. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    this was a cool battle, storm bringa came aight not a bad verse, a couple decent punches... overall ok verse. dat gangsta came preety good that sae-once line was nice, so was that inkwell line..overall nice verse, storm came ok but i think dat gangsta got this one.

    vote - dat gangsta
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  7. Srevir Rm

    Srevir Rm WentFromGodToGodDamn

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    hmmm well honestly I havent' seen a real dope verse from SB for a while, but this turned out ok

    DG, your verse aight, no real multis, but the flow was still OK. your punches were decent, some hittin a lot harder than others, and the wordplay, altho somewhat forced, seemed to work for the most part.

    Storm, i liked how you approached the battle. The verse was direct and flowed pretty well. I felt myself enjoying the verse as I read it, not like (wtf was he doin here)...punches hit nicely, not too much wordplay, but i liked your scheme and style.

    Vote-Storm for a bit fresher style, a little more aggressiveness, and a more enjoyable verse.


    nice match, keep spittin

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  8. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    Hmm. Gonna have to break this one down.

    Dat Gangsta
    i can use profanity, but in your context it's do then die
    cuz i'll have storm go to shambles, .. just to apologise
    ^ Hmm.

    I'll school you kiko but ya girl owns shit & your the end
    cuz seeing the 'head'master is a visit i'd recomend
    ^ Daaamn!

    after i kill em, the RBL will soon find a replacement
    when storms rocking two-L's, like a fucking tradesman
    ^ Haha.

    handed ur shot at fame & a loss you'll be given son....
    but chea you have two chances, they are slim to none
    ^ Nah

    i done rankings last week & i knew he would'nt bang?
    cuz i placed him with inkwell & i knew he could'nt hang
    ^ Boo

    storms gay, but i wont fault em, i guess that's heredetory
    you lose, so i'll only "sae-once" like a witch craft ceremony
    ^ Haha, thats fresh.

    score out this idiot, he'll try, try & then again harder
    but nobodies written you off, they have permanent markers
    ^ Ehhh.

    i be throwin fists n winnin with egos, your'e blagging fight's
    while i have punches with left's, & bragging right's
    ^ Haha, thats dope.


    Storm Bringa
    from the display you gave this week, there must be emotional damage
    "They wouldn't let me do rankings! Shit, I need the advantage"
    ^ Ha. Coulda been worded better.

    so don't say that Storm stole the win, you never had what it took
    you leavin 6-3 like problems in 'Sif's math book
    ^ Ohhhh shit.

    you wanna be hard; man, I bet ya muscles flexed
    how can you be DAT Gangsta when all you do is text?
    ^ Heh.

    even if that wasn't true, you wouldn't be blastin teks
    you'd be on the street doin drive-bys tossin cassettes
    ^ Uhh.

    you gave yourself a supposedly easy win last week
    got more than you bargained for and then jetted the scene
    ^ Ha.

    you started cryin cause the mods wouldnt let you rank
    but shut the fuck up cause you moved up thanks to Tang.
    ^ Nice.

    you sittin tryna bitch cuz I aint choose to drop yet
    it's not good for you to whine with a typin impediment
    ^ Could've been better.

    with a verse like that, you've no business tryna boast
    I shouldn't be 5-0? You shouldn't be tryna post
    ^ LMAO!


    Well this wasn't a bad battle. Definately another close one. Damn, I hate these close ones. Storm had that Sif line and his closer which were just fuckin flames. That Sif line should definately be reachin the Punchline Pandemonium this week. Dat Gangsta had some fresh lines, that headmaster line was sick, Sae-once, and Braggin Rights were all sick as hell too - Damn. Both had their ups and downs, and I'd just say that DG edged it out by ONE up. This battle will definately be recievin some votes on both ends though.

    Vote - Dat Gangsta
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  9. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    v- storm

    both came kinda weak, but Storm had wittier punches
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  10. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    Storm - you got better than last I peeped.. NICE verse, gave you a good chance to win.. the shouldn't post line was nice and then 6-3 had me laughin.. good verse over all

    DG - two-L's/tools line was pretty clever, the sae-once line was nice and the inkwell line was nice, I think you won it with the head master tho, that shit was funny as fuck..

    vote = Dat Gangsta
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  11. Storm Bringa

    Storm Bringa Mad as Hell

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  12. Dat Gangsta

    Dat Gangsta •••••••••••••

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  13. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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    vote = dat gangsta.

    i liked his lines better, seemed wittier + storm's closer was crap.
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  14. Nu-SeNsE

    Nu-SeNsE WHERE THE $$$'S COME FROM

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    storm - that was dope verse man i liked this line

    so don't say that Storm stole the win, you never had what it took
    you leavin 6-3 like problems in 'Sif's math book
    ^dopeness

    and the closer:

    with a verse like that, you've no business tryna boast
    I shouldn't be 5-0? You shouldn't be tryna post
    ^funny as hell

    some of ur punches could have been worded better but overall 7/10 and again dope verse man

    DG - ur verse, same nice verse with some witty lines like

    I'll school you kiko but ya girl owns shit & your the end
    cuz seeing the 'head'master is a visit i'd recomend
    ^ genius i thought

    after i kill em, the RBL will soon find a replacement
    when storms rocking two-L's, like a fucking tradesman
    ^ humourous

    storms gay, but i wont fault em, i guess that's heredetory
    you lose, so i'll only "sae-once" like a witch craft ceremony
    ^ Haha niceness

    overall - 8/10

    these 3 i liked the most but if i have to vote and i dont wanna its too close to call but ima give it too DG just thought he had the overall better verse with more creative lines than storm...but gr8 battle guys keep it up

    vote - Dat Gangsta
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  15. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    Dat Gangsta wins
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