133 NoLimit Tank14 vs 134 Memento

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  1. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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  2. NoLimit Tank14

    NoLimit Tank14 New Member

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    da tank goes 10
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  3. NoLimit Tank14

    NoLimit Tank14 New Member

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    Cant beat tank, so long I been a prophet~
    dont throw in a towel, ull need 3 linen closets~
    im from the easy where we dont speak to clowns~
    your win numbers 0 and will be the same 10 weeks from now~
    dont underestimate da tank for a little twist of fame~
    when ya sexual preference's in the middle of ya name~
    take notice of the tank, get investing largest~
    beat you too such a pulp tropicana's pressing charges~
    im a problem at my age, a problem you wouldn't dare sort~
    im not on a different plane than you, its a whole other airport~

    da easy fo sheezy
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  4. M-theory

    M-theory Saint Esprit

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    VOTES
    http://www.board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7403715
    http://www.board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7409971
    http://www.board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7410248
    http://www.board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7421085
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    http://www.board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7421235


    I can't beat Tank, but I can devour him, and he probably beats himself
    'Cause this kid is such a pussy that even Ellen DeGeneres eats him out
    One question: Why I gotta battle this 14 year old Lil' Romeo groupie for?
    When his momma's still pissed that she has to change his poopy drawers
    Fuck it kid, I may be older than you, you may be the first dead in my pile
    But I don't care about your age and if I was gay I'd also be a pedophile
    You can talk about someone's sexual preference, it isn't such a big insult
    But you're diggin holes to rep the Easy when you just stepped to Difficult
    Memento's going to win the battle son, you ain't got one hope in sight
    I know what voters like and, well, you already posted your first open mic
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  5. whyte hype

    whyte hype DoNt TeSt Me

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    Tank section

    dont underestimate da tank for a little twist of fame~
    when ya sexual preference's in the middle of ya name~
    take notice of the tank, get investing largest~
    beat you too such a pulp tropicana's pressing charges~
    im a problem at my age, a problem you wouldn't dare sort~
    im not on a different plane than you, its a whole other airport~

    this was a pretty good section, started out kinda weak thou

    im sorry but this young'n got this i think,, maybe i didnt read into Memento verse to well but his shyt just seeemed more of an open mic kinda thang

    Vote = Tank....young gun.

    neither came really good thou

    go vote on my battle.......SMoke Trail vs Copywritten
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  6. kenny wayne

    kenny wayne New Member

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    tank murded momen...
    niether really came all that well but still

    the sexual preference line made me chuckle.
    momento you aint really have any stand out/killa lines like it.

    vote-tank
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  7. Wordage

    Wordage The Coming of Age....

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    Tank

    Cant beat tank, so long I been a prophet~
    dont throw in a towel, ull need 3 linen closets~
    7/10
    im from the easy where we dont speak to clowns~
    your win numbers 0 and will be the same 10 weeks from now~
    7/10
    dont underestimate da tank for a little twist of fame~
    when ya sexual preference's in the middle of ya name~
    8/10
    take notice of the tank, get investing largest~
    beat you too such a pulp tropicana's pressing charges~
    8/10
    im a problem at my age, a problem you wouldn't dare sort~
    im not on a different plane than you, its a whole other airport~
    9/10

    total= 39/50 (Tropicana & Airport line were my favorites)


    Momento

    I can't beat Tank, but I can devour him, and he probably beats himself
    'Cause this kid is such a pussy that even Ellen DeGeneres eats him out
    7/10
    One question: Why I gotta battle this 14 year old Lil' Romeo groupie for?
    When his momma's still pissed that she has to change his poopy drawers
    6/10
    Fuck it kid, I may be older than you, you may be the first dead in my pile
    But I don't care about your age and if I was gay I'd also be a pedophile
    6/10
    You can talk about someone's sexual preference, it isn't such a big insult
    But you're diggin holes to rep the Easy when you just stepped to Difficult
    8/10
    Memento's going to win the battle son, you ain't got one hope in sight
    I know what voters like and, well, you already posted your first open mic
    7/10

    total= 34/50 (Easy to Difficult was my favorite line here)


    vote= Tank14. Had better concepts and was just more creative with his disses. Especially near the middle and end of his verse. The airport closing line was dope. Momento had the one line I was feeling but other than that not much. Goodluck guys.
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  8. MuDFo0t

    MuDFo0t GooseBumps

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    Tank won, Memento sorta played off his verse and was mad stupid wack.

    vote- tank
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  9. : . :iza: . :

    : . :iza: . : New Member

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    ^^true...

    tank got this one easy...better punches and better wordplay...

    vote=tank...
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  10. Yukon & Eyeon.

    Yukon & Eyeon. New Member

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    Vote - Tank

    Tank had a decent verse from start to finish, some aight punches which I was feelin', Memento didn't came with much hard hittin' punches nothin' really I was feelin'.
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  11. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    Momento

    I can't beat Tank, but I can devour him, and he probably beats himself
    'Cause this kid is such a pussy that even Ellen DeGeneres eats him out
    ........eh, played concept and not great wording to be honest.. made a little better with your specific reference to ellen i s'pose tho..

    One question: Why I gotta battle this 14 year old Lil' Romeo groupie for?
    When his momma's still pissed that she has to change his poopy drawers
    ..........haha no way man, that was completely elementary, i would try to avoid using the word 'poopy' if i were you..

    Fuck it kid, I may be older than you, you may be the first dead in my pile
    But I don't care about your age and if I was gay I'd also be a pedophile
    .........eh, its aiight where ur going here.. this 'ol 'rape' concept or 'fucking' concept is getting real real old unless its flipped completely stellar and fresh though, and to top it off your wording was just not smooth man.. your punches are like phonetically choppy..

    You can talk about someone's sexual preference, it isn't such a big insult
    But you're diggin holes to rep the Easy when you just stepped to Difficult
    .........that was ur best line so far, still definately could stand some editing though partna.. but it was more original and interesting at least, and a lil personal shot there..

    Memento's going to win the battle son, you ain't got one hope in sight
    I know what voters like and, well, you already posted your first open mic
    .........well personal shot here at the end is nice, not really very 'punch' like outside of inferring his shit wasnt nice.. i woulda liked a lil more complexity to it..

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    Tank

    Cant beat tank, so long I been a prophet~
    dont throw in a towel, ull need 3 linen closets~
    ......hah, word.. havent seen a flip like this, i dig it.. nice start, and already far better delivery than your opponent here.. im pretty sure i see where this is gonna lead, but lets go on.

    im from the easy where we dont speak to clowns~
    your win numbers 0 and will be the same 10 weeks from now~
    .........ehh, nahh.. definately outshined by your first bar.. just a simple little hit here, no real substance or wit to it..

    dont underestimate da tank for a little twist of fame~
    when ya sexual preference's in the middle of ya name~
    ........heh, that was aiight there.. it was a nice thought, but could have been delivered a bit nicer.. even by incorporating the common phrase 'its his middle name', instead of saying 'middle of ya name', feel me at all? eh, anyway, pretty coo

    take notice of the tank, get investing largest~
    beat you too such a pulp tropicana's pressing charges~
    .........word, i feel this.. i've heard pulp lines popping up alot recently, but you had a nice little flip to it, niceness

    im a problem at my age, a problem you wouldn't dare sort~
    im not on a different plane than you, its a whole other airport~
    .........haha, dope ender.. again, 'plane' wordplay is REAAAAAAAAAAAAAL played, but you had a very smooth transition into some wit with 'whole nother airport'.. i feel it.. coo drop

    vote: tank

    why? Obviously a more experienced battler, shown through his concepts, but more importantly his wording. Definately could have gotten more personal though.

    anyway, good stuff guys, pc..
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  12. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    No limit tank, i liked that 'middle of ya name' line, good personal. The closer was coo too. I used the 'beat you to a pulp' concept a couple weeks ago, so blah at that line.. but overall a decent verse.

    Momento, you had a couple OK lines i guess, nothin special. I think tank jus had more standout lines than you. Stay up, you got some potential.

    Vote: NoLimitTank14
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  13. to be honest, i didn't like this battle at all..

    both verses seemed newbie-ish type.. but either way..

    vote - tank.
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  14. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    NoLimitTank14's best
    Cant beat tank, so long I been a prophet~
    dont throw in a towel, ull need 3 linen closets~
    im from the easy where we dont speak to clowns~
    your win numbers 0 and will be the same 10 weeks from now~
    Dope opener.
    dont underestimate da tank for a little twist of fame~
    when ya sexual preference's in the middle of ya name~
    Great punch there.
    take notice of the tank, get investing largest~
    beat you too such a pulp tropicana's pressing charges~
    Great line.
    im a problem at my age, a problem you wouldn't dare sort~
    im not on a different plane than you, its a whole other airport~
    Another great use of concepts.

    Memento's best
    I can't beat Tank, but I can devour him, and he probably beats himself
    'Cause this kid is such a pussy that even Ellen DeGeneres eats him out
    Funny. Raw punch.
    You can talk about someone's sexual preference, it isn't such a big insult
    But you're diggin holes to rep the Easy when you just stepped to Difficult
    Hot personal diss. Funny too.

    This was a very enjoyable read from a 133 vs. 134 battle. Solid verses by both. No Limit Takes this though. Just more elevated use of concepts here. Keep those fresh and you'll be in the top 30 in no time. Solid battle here.
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  15. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    yea i got tank taking this one, tropicana and closer were fresh some funny shit. rest was ehhh. memento had the ellen line, but nothin else really hit me..


    vote tank
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  16. M-theory

    M-theory Saint Esprit

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    indeed. good responses people... even though i'm not gettin one vote... my best line was more of something that could just help hold a good verse, but doesn't do shit for my verse really...

    first impression is the worst impression... i'm not big on battle verses... but i can bring more to the table so i'll do that...
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  17. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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    V/tank

    was just overall better and more nonplay'd

    Moment was kinda blah had one good punch

    so tank got this pZ
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  18. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    vote-tank..

    came tighter, but mamento came pretty tight too. tank just had the delivery an flow, an some of his punches outshined mamento..

    good battle here fella's..
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  19. VerbalWeaponz

    VerbalWeaponz Unholy-Syndicate

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    tank took this one deff.....punches were more consistant.....mem..u fell off toward tah end..did sound like an open drop.....

    v-tank

    Verbal
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  20. in awe

    in awe solo

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    vote tank

    the big easy line was dope, but tank had the airport line and a few others.
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