133. freedom vs 134. Grimage

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. spanky freedom

    spanky freedom ora tour

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  3. Grimage

    Grimage things lookin grim

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  4. Grimage

    Grimage things lookin grim

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    you gettin spanked hard ..battlin grim bitch you'll regret it
    ..im getting rid of your freedom like a fuckin white supremasist..
    beat you body you'll be all shade ..kid u gettin filled with lead
    ..my bullets like ya favorite song, cuz they stays up in your head..
    stick your bladder all up in your brain ...so u piss out of ya face
    ..your neck is tryna run from me, so im cuttin right to the chase..
    battling me bitch you out your picture ..kind of like a frame
    ..none of spanky's punches landin like blown up airplanes..

    nevermind the 12 8 is good enought match me
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  5. spanky freedom

    spanky freedom ora tour

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    nicka' talkn: "8 is good enough, 'match me'" /
    you ok? no one stood up and clapped B.. u stand afoot ya friends laughing// with me, at you like bush, if u would defend ACLU///
    ur hyped as the hood in a castle, rolling dice/ im pulln ya tasstle for ya last school promoting the likes//
    obie trice could fcking scroll up less white.. on his payroll/ than i might up todays post to see whats wrote by this a-hole// u came with nothing to trade bro.. if this a track, u'd have to pay toll/ i'll take votes by the way tho.. so sit back till they say so///
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  6. spanky freedom

    spanky freedom ora tour

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    ACLU= american civil liberties union
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  7. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    Grimage's best
    beat you body you'll be all shade ..kid u gettin filled with lead
    ..my bullets like ya favorite song, cuz they stays up in your head..

    Spanks best
    obie trice could fcking scroll up less white.. on his payroll/
    than i might up todays post to see whats wrote by this a-hole//

    I got Grimage taking this one. Overall just a better rhyme scheme and some decent concepts. No one really had any disses worth a damn though.
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  8. SAYONCE

    SAYONCE New Member

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    not a great battle...

    grim took it though..with better punchies..Free's stuff got lost in that horrid scheme
    Like Ariz said,Grim had some decent concepts,but were let down in the usage,like the "getting rid of Freedom" concept and the "favorite song"idea..still the better verse..

    Vote=Grimage

    pz.
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  9. Omnific

    Omnific your head here...

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    vote-grimage

    basically what the guy above me said, grim had the better punches and frees layout was confusin, kept lossin the flow....battle was kinda weak

    -om'
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  10. Stalis Orion

    Stalis Orion DiViNeHaTrEd aka ResiduaL

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    Grimage barely took this one IMO.

    Grim...opener was ok, needed rewordin' but a cool concept, song in ya head line was aight, closer was eh.

    Freedom, first, i don't do this but many kids hate on that style look. You should make ya bars evened out, line by line instead of all bunched up.
    A-Hole line was aight and the pay toll line was decent...had potential, rhyme scheme was ok just needed rewording done, and defintiely better concepts.

    Close match up, not really noteworthy...
    Grim takes it by a notch.
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  11. Barocka

    Barocka New Member

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    Vote= Grimage

    I just did not like ova dudes flow...
    It seemed like it was forced...no dis...
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  12. Monolith

    Monolith *slowly claps*

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    I wasnt feelin Grimage at all

    Freedom just had a funner verse to read..

    vote=Spanky freedom
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  13. Martyr da Great

    Martyr da Great .Is Jiggy wit It.

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    Vote=Grim.
    He had the overall better verse
    to me.
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  14. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    vote - grim

    more hard hittin, solid, and creative.. the other kat really didnt bring much to the table.. not enough battlin mechanics up in his verse.. enjoyed readin em both though...

    pz
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  15. in awe

    in awe solo

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    beat you body you'll be all shade ..kid u gettin filled with lead
    ..my bullets like ya favorite song, cuz they stays up in your head..

    this was real nice, grims verse was better overall but both dropped solid verses.

    vote-grim
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  16. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    vote - grimage


    more of a text verse and had a few decent lines.... opening was o.k.

    spanky - the a-hole/payroll couplet was nice but change your structure dawg...


    return the favor and vote on theFRANCHISE v. Post Office
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  17. VerbalWeaponz

    VerbalWeaponz Unholy-Syndicate

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    not tha best battle but decent....but grim took this one...likin his concepts n shiz.....

    V-grim

    Verbal
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  18. this battle was horrible..

    vote - grimage.

    freedom, you fuckin suck.
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  19. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    up over no shows
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  20. spanky freedom

    spanky freedom ora tour

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    damn
    it's this bad?

    awe naw hell naw bwoy
    i aint votn for sht




    check please..
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