13. Tri Optix 4-1 Vs. 14. J-Nyce 7-3

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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  3. in..

    ill do 12 or 16.
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  4. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    You're in the Top-15?

    hmmm..

    what you need to know is..

    The difference between us...Tri Optix is just an ill muthafucka..
    While the only Top-Teens you'll ever see again..
    Has Lil Romeo and the Olsen Twins on the Cover..
    J-Who? Exactly..Step in my zone and get dropped son.
    Last time you ever came "off the chains"..
    Your slave-master started firing shot-guns
    Once again against a noobie..and that shits not-right.
    Your style doesnt just need work..
    Its 80 lbs. and starving..standin with a squeegee at stoplights
    Urban Legends is all over the Top 30..aint no avoidin us..
    My style is a lot like ciggarettes..even my filler is poisonous
    This kid is so fuckin wack..Fuck a J-Nyce..
    This kid is so fuckin wack......that I can beat him with sayin my lines twice
    And you can type lies..like you gettin hurt..when its actually murder
    J-Nyce "stacks more punches" then a Snapple Factory Worker
    You need to stand straight and look at me when I address you
    Hows it feel to know that Optix doesnt even need to Tri against you?
    This noob got his emotions on his sleeve...and hes STILL wearin it wrong
    Just hit this link kiddo...and take your ass back where it belongs.
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  5. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    postin for J-Nyce:


    tri's a fluke to contest.. so why try 'n shoot with the best..
    ..and tri just aint got a chance.. or community chest..
    better come wit his vest.. cuz my gat is gone blow faster..
    ..to have tri ''takin two'' like a clumsy actor..
    j is the master.. i swing punches wit no gaze..
    ..just to leave tri with more marks than roadways..
    get blown in the haze.. ya been wack, so plz stop it..
    ..cuz even blind kids dont wanna tri-optix..
    hit up wit rocks, bitch.. he sucks, to put it at rest..
    ..so polish up on ya game, and im not talkin ya chess set..
    ill beat him a mess.. last week his steez was crap..
    ..with a verse that was so ass, it made trina look flat..
    dude's gettin smacked.. fuck it.. beatin tri is a game..
    ..cuz now ur tooths gettin broke, and not from spendin some change..
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  6. Tri Optix

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    1-Up..

    If I have anything important to say..itll be here..so stay alert.
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  7. U S E R

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    uppin over no shows
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  8. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    2nd up...lmao..
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  9. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    Lmao He Used An Off The Chain Like A Slave Line
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  10. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    good battle,
    I can't vote tho cuz tri's in my crew

    and shut up perma
    stop swayin
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  11. -Kolli$ion-

    -Kolli$ion- 3-1-5

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    Vote = Tri Optix

    Came with more raw punches, where J-Nyce just came with predictable, plain punches to me (i.e. chess set, community chest)

    Oh--Tri--i see you liked how i broke my bars down last week vs. you...you took it from me this week!!! LoL it's aiight tho..

    Nice Battle

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  12. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    Vote-Tri-Optix

    Tri has been coming iller in the last few weeks...had a few lines i liked in this verse too...J-Nyce was decent but ya punches were too basic...the trina punch was funny as hell tho...props for that joint...but i dont think u did enough to edge out tri in this battle
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  13. basic?

    since when is text supposed to be superbly complex and shit..

    and rofl.. plain punches.. yes, chess set is extremely plain considering i could've used a variety of things from checkers, monopoloy, etc.

    the fuck outta here..

    oh yea, this is my first up.
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  14. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    J-Nyce:


    tri's a fluke to contest.. so why try 'n shoot with the best..
    ..and tri just aint got a chance.. or community chest..
    ---"you have no chance, like monopoly without the orange deck"
    ~SuperNova vs. T~R~E -rapworld championship '02
    (just explaining why i wasnt feeling this one, cuz it woulda obviously been a tight line)..

    get blown in the haze.. ya been wack, so plz stop it..
    ..cuz even blind kids dont wanna tri-optix..
    ---lol, i feel it, i'd be surprised if it hasnt been used before on him, but to be honest since i havent seen it i cant hold it against you lol.. but pretty coo shit..

    overall: you had a pretty cool verse on average, nothing really jumped out at me just because alot of your concepts, while cool, have been flipped in one way or the other before.. also, is this Kosh? just wondering.. anyway i thought u had a pretty nice showing nonetheless..


    Tri Optix

    Once again against a noobie..and that shits not-right.
    Your style doesnt just need work..
    Its 80 lbs. and starving..standin with a squeegee at stoplights
    ---lol, i have seen 'need work' alot to be honest man - but you had a pretty funny twist to it, this made me laugh for sure.. good stuff.. i'd say careful on your flow cuz your lines are getting a little long here, but i do the same thing.. so good stuff lol

    And you can type lies..like you gettin hurt..when its actually murder
    J-Nyce "stacks more punches" then a Snapple Factory Worker
    -----pretty cool flip here, very specific comparison, i liked it.. while i dont like 'punch' wordplay much, you had a cool flip..

    This noob got his emotions on his sleeve...and hes STILL wearin it wrong
    ---this is ok, the link concept was pretty funny, but i think you coulda made ti sound more punch-like.... i dont know about saying 'optix doesnt need to tri against you'.. having nameplay on yourself sometimes seems desperate to me.. but just being real playa


    vote: Tri optix

    why? Well, i did think this one was close.. jnyce had the dopest line of the battle, but i had seen the concept before so it didnt really hold much weight for him in that case.. i did think that tri came a little more original than jnyce did though.. but i also thought jnyce had better wording.. This was a close one in my opinion like i said, but good stuff, im giving it to tri because his concepts were more original to me.

    and dont bitch about my vote jnyce, cuz if ur kosh u kno of all people im always real with you on bboys while most are just haters lol.. peace fellas...
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  15. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    vote-tri optix

    tri had a nice verse, better than ive usually seen from him...

    j-nyce, nothin in ur verse really appelled to me..sorry

    so tri gets the vote
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  16. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    pretty good battle..

    Tri - off the chains line was grimey, style needs work was raw too and the stack punches line was pretty nice as well, good flow, pretty consistant, didn't fall off reall

    J - I wasn't feelin much .. and yeah your shit was REEEEEEEAL basic, some playe shit as well, flow was pretty good tho, do audio

    vote = Tri
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  17. wordddddd dizzle

    good battle & verse tri.. i'm still in the top 30 so its all gravey.

    but yea.. i'm dope as fizzuck in audio, calefaction.. so that comment meant alot.

    -takes a bow-
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  18. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    Tri Optix def. J-Nyce
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