13. R.A.M. 2-1 vs. 14. A.P.O.S. 2-1

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    This pedofiles fuckin Any Pussy Over Six, I’ll start out with closer shit,
    wen this poser spits I see ovary lips where theres supposed to be dick!
    you sweet like hagen daz, ya bitch sucked my dick, buy her throat lozenges,
    If he thinks he’s winning then I’m not the mind reader I thought I was.
    The mag says it’s a toss up, but you don’t have a chance
    My flow Snow, and we all kno you cant stop an avalanche
    This geeks challenged cuz he suck so Im splittin his cabbage
    Headless ranked the league’s talent a C+, Apos B bringin down the average
    He’s Ichabod Crain, aint never getting ahead wen he raps
    Ya shits lame like that Federline cat AND the Celebrity Bash
    You Sopranos gayer, I kno you shook wen u see this
    Are u a piano player? Nope, you just look like a penist.
    4 the 1st 5days he rhimed, n on the 6th lost his hands wen he took the mic, then
    He was silenced on the 7th day...I rested…and all was right again.
    Fuck you im fresh cuz I try something different
    u spit it for girls who say they ‘dig it’, but he still aint gettin one digit, git it?
    So don’t try buyin em jewelry, this fool he be thinking hes a cool pimp
    But hes dick limp, ya shits shriveled and curled up like cold shrimp.


    there it is. 18*/edit
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  3. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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  4. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    You should give up now, just really abandon all hope
    See, what good is being R.A.M. when youre battlin' the G.O.A.T. ?
    Big bank take little bank, just put the cash in the bag
    Because money talks kiddo..and a thousand dollars says" RAM is a Fag"
    Your hall of fame is more like a stair landing, peep your jets gliding through
    So when you talk about a "take-off", thats really just my advice to you
    So quit stepping around RM, walkin like you all good with it
    Because Im slamming this door... the moment you put your foot in it
    Im 19, My only problem is fuckin with concepts that havent been played yet
    Your 32, Your only problem is your fuckin with a concept of an album..that hasnt been made yet
    Any pussy over six? Ya god damn right
    Chewed through ya sisters diaper last night...bitch, u cant even flip my name right
    Quite simply, if I was you, Id just kill myself
    Come back post-mordem, funeral costs,arrangement, and bill myself
    I never wear out my welcome, never see me go and whine about
    Basically if I lose to someone like you, Ill sign MYSELF out
    No self doubt, fuck with the God and theres no options
    'Cuz Ill kick RAM in the head until I have more red in my sox than Boston
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  5. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    im 20yrs old you fuckin pedofile.
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  6. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    RAM:

    Wasnt really feelin nothin... u shit was kind of forced... Penist? Thats a hell nah.. its pianist first of all.......... ya best line was the Apos B line, and even that was pretty simplistic...


    APOS:

    Big bank take little bank, just put the cash in the bag
    Because money talks kiddo..and a thousand dollars says" RAM is a Fag"
    ^cool

    No self doubt, fuck with the God and theres no options
    'Cuz Ill kick RAM in the head until I have more red in my sox than Boston
    ^aiight finish

    U had a decent verse... A few good punches... Enough to take the win

    vote- APOS
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  7. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    that penist line is gold, and there are too many dumbasses out there to spell it correctly.
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  8. noluv

    noluv New Member

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    This pedofiles fuckin Any Pussy Over Six, I’ll start out with closer shit,
    wen this poser spits I see ovary lips where theres supposed to be dick!
    lmao dope multis.

    you sweet like hagen daz, ya bitch sucked my dick, buy her throat lozenges,
    If he thinks he’s winning then I’m not the mind reader I thought I was.
    very clever, not as hard hitting tho, again multis is nice

    The mag says it’s a toss up, but you don’t have a chance
    My flow Snow, and we all kno you cant stop an avalanche
    this is dope

    This geeks challenged cuz he suck so Im splittin his cabbage
    Headless ranked the league’s talent a C+, Apos B bringin down the average
    gay, i see the concept but poor wording

    He’s Ichabod Crain, aint never getting ahead wen he raps
    Ya shits lame like that Federline cat AND the Celebrity Bash
    aha that celeb shit is lame

    You Sopranos gayer, I kno you shook wen u see this
    Are u a piano player? Nope, you just look like a penist.
    lol...corny but shits still funny

    4 the 1st 5days he rhimed, n on the 6th lost his hands wen he took the mic, then
    He was silenced on the 7th day...I rested…and all was right again.
    no. streeeeeeeeeeetched, streeeeeeeeeeetched

    Fuck you im fresh cuz I try something different
    u spit it for girls who say they ‘dig it’, but he still aint gettin one digit, git it?
    lol, harsh dude aint mackin nothin

    So don’t try buyin em jewelry, this fool he be thinking hes a cool pimp
    But hes dick limp, ya shits shriveled and curled up like cold shrimp.
    lmao!

    shit was nice, stretched in part but your flow and mutlis were sick, plus some pretty funny shit, nice verse.

    You should give up now, just really abandon all hope
    See, what good is being R.A.M. when youre battlin' the G.O.A.T. ?
    lol RAM i been around and i kno i seen shit like this before

    Big bank take little bank, just put the cash in the bag
    Because money talks kiddo..and a thousand dollars says" RAM is a Fag"
    sames here, storm g had a line like this, only it was like "and a thousand dollars says u cant beat me"

    Your hall of fame is more like a stair landing, peep your jets gliding through
    So when you talk about a "take-off", thats really just my advice to you
    wack, peep ur jets gliding thru?

    So quit stepping around RM, walkin like you all good with it
    Because Im slamming this door... the moment you put your foot in it
    played boi

    Im 19, My only problem is fuckin with concepts that havent been played yet
    Your 32, Your only problem is your fuckin with a concept of an album..that hasnt
    been made yet
    bleh

    Any pussy over six? Ya god damn right
    Chewed through ya sisters diaper last night...bitch, u cant even flip my name right
    lmao, aha nice comeback

    Quite simply, if I was you, Id just kill myself
    Come back post-mordem, funeral costs,arrangement, and bill myself
    erryone doin this shit since MATH did it against Nems in Fightklub

    I never wear out my welcome, never see me go and whine about
    Basically if I lose to someone like you, Ill sign MYSELF out
    who else would sign u out? blah

    No self doubt, fuck with the God and theres no options
    'Cuz Ill kick RAM in the head until I have more red in my sox than Boston
    aha this is like the penist line, corny and simple, still pretty funny tho.

    aight APOS had dece shit, juss a lot of played out stuff, couple forced lines, nothing really hard hitting. his best line was a flip on RAMs verse..


    i vote RAM, he had better shit, dope flow and some funny lines, and some fresh stuff, didnt see to many recycled concepts.


    now i'll sign in the league and beat you both.
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  9. Logix

    Logix New Member

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    both dudes were allrite, rams opener is fuckin deadly tho...ima steal that shit lol just playin...APOS red sox line was dope but that was about it to me...ram had that dig it, digit wordplay that was dope, ram won this shit.



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  10. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    wtf? these 2 kids arent even in the RBL. and all of a sudden they just happen to want to vote on this battle? Ram youre a fuckin homo.
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  11. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    why dont u kiss my left nut. and where does it say u have to be in the league to vote?

    NOWHERE. so quit bitchin and let the votes come, your lucky anyone is even peepin this battle with your name in the fuckin title.

    2-1. juss like my record.
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  12. Concise.

    Concise. New Member

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    Straight battle here..

    Ram came ok.. nothin stood out.. some ok concepts like the league talent and digit line.. but just need to word em better.. the penist and cold shrimp lines were just horrible. Take an extra day or two to collect all your thoughts and organize your verses..you have until friday so take ya time.. one more thing work on your set-ups cuz you were goin from one thought to another and the lines didnt go with each other.. stay up kid u have potential..

    Apos also came decent but better than ram.. His thoughts seemed more complete and better orgainized.. the diaper line was funny but gross.. i thought both your verese were about even until the red sox line.. lol.. i felt you saved you best for last and thats what won it for you .. good shit..



    v/ Apos
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  13. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    R A M

    4 the 1st 5days he rhimed, n on the 6th lost his hands wen he took the mic, then
    He was silenced on the 7th day...I rested…and all was right again.
    Fuck you im fresh cuz I try something different
    u spit it for girls who say they ‘dig it’, but he still aint gettin one digit, git it?
    So don’t try buyin em jewelry, this fool he be thinking hes a cool pimp
    But hes dick limp, ya shits shriveled and curled up like cold shrimp

    this was the best of your verse IMO....

    but nothign really stood out...,.don't say get it at the end of a line...if we don't get it that won't help..just to let you know...that dig it line could of been better though....but i got your concept...4th 5th day line on the 7th you rest...you think you GOD? naw dunny..not even...not a great verse....your almost top ten so you have to come better

    APOS

    You should give up now, just really abandon all hope
    See, what good is being R.A.M. when youre battlin' the G.O.A.T. ?
    Big bank take little bank, just put the cash in the bag
    Because money talks kiddo..and a thousand dollars says" RAM is a Fag"

    your opener and next line was cool..but after that you went down hill especially after the take off line...as if you was writing then you started freestyling.. cuz it got basic and simple

    My vote APOS why his concepts were better...neither did great but thats my vote..
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  14. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    im gona go out on a limb and say my style is more suited to audio, i need a mic.

    I am God bitch and you were a mistake.
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  15. SpeedyCalhoun

    SpeedyCalhoun Obviously...

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    I really wasn't feeling this battle, but I gotta give it to my man APOS.

    It was pretty much this:
    Against This:
    This geeks challenged cuz he suck so Im splittin his cabbage
    Headless ranked the league’s talent a C+, Apos B bringin down the average

    v~A.P.O.S.
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  16. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    this was an aiight battle, some stretched lines really sucked cuz it messed up some decent concepts.. overall i think APOS hit harder, it was a close battle... i just read through and he had the lines..

    I never wear out my welcome, never see me go and whine about
    Basically if I lose to someone like you, Ill sign MYSELF out
    No self doubt, fuck with the God and theres no options
    'Cuz Ill kick RAM in the head until I have more red in my sox than Boston
    this put you over the top

    vote-APOS
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  17. DustrO

    DustrO Who Is I

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    R.A.M.=good flow, some good punches, good verse overall=81

    You Sopranos gayer, I kno you shook wen u see this
    Are u a piano player? Nope, you just look like a penist.
    Good lines

    A.P.O.S=good verse, good punches, nice verse overall=83


    Big bank take little bank, just put the cash in the bag
    Because money talks kiddo..and a thousand dollars says" RAM is a Fag"
    I love those lines lol

    Winner=A.P.O.S
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  18. Egotistical.

    Egotistical. You have no Idea

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    v/ A.P.O.S

    Decent battle honestly, R.A.M I thought you could have won this if your punches were worded better. Alot of fresh Ideas, but APOS dropped consistant.

    Big bank take little bank, just put the cash in the bag
    Because money talks kiddo..and a thousand dollars says" RAM is a Fag"

    Nice punch here.

    This geeks challenged cuz he suck so Im splittin his cabbage
    Headless ranked the league’s talent a C+, Apos B bringin down the average

    decent too

    good battle in the end..
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  19. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    RAM, good flow but lacking the hits, looks like u sacrificed it here, on the other hand, APOS lines are long as hell but punches connected better, tighten up the flow a bit & u should be fine

    vote Apos
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  20. Are aye wy

    Are aye wy See what happens?

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    Vote-a.p.o.s.
    Better verse, liked more of his lines.
    Also felt that r.a.m. came a little too forced but still had some good lines in there.
    Really a toss up nothing too great by both but still a good battle. Nice shit.
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