13. E Tha Real 7-3 vs 14. Criteria 7-3

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    innnnnnnnnnnnnn
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  3. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    PR, blunts, RBL, ez boards..? geek, U suck at doin' rap
    20,000 leagues aint a book, its how many sites ya fuckin losin at.
    oz made a dope rule; U can lose a loss by voting, see?
    but u'll watch everyone follow voting-criteria...without postin' links.
    cri's the doper steeze. your not likely to drop me,
    ur a brand of loser; that could start a clothing line n rival versace.
    i was created by intelligent design..not to bash ya feelings
    i even unzipped my pants to ya mom & gave her a flash of brilliance.
    you NEVER had a woman, its a good fuckin' ya need, g.
    only time i see bitches wild on E... is spring break coverage on tv.
    ya been suckin dick for years faggot; ur the way sickest
    til u started putting the past behind u harder than rape victims.
    everythings changing ...the mods, rules & mags written
    but how can U be here since forever & traditionally be wack in it?
    see, i flow in a perfect state n rap with the purest hate
    marked my territory & ur proof i left ya family tree with urine stains.
    im sure to reign..honestly, ur the worst cat i ever faced
    i mean, last week i had user; but ur ass STILL takes the cake.
    god cant save ya fate, dont expect to go n advance
    i killed the possible outcomes.. n exorcized any ghost of a chance.
    its like a fib to ur eyes, my votes grow bigger in size
    im 'on the whey to the top' like a bodybuilders nutritional guide.
    but its been a great april fools.. now i got an itchin' ...
    ok.. oz ..haha, nice fucking joke; now wheres my real competition?
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  4. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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    she'd think its brilliant how your sperm could reached the egg
    or past the clitoris for that matter... but let's not preach ahead
    produced from smirnoff at motel6, so no issues of intimidation
    what he calls "flash of brilliance",created artificial insemination
    seen ya pic a diehard seasame street fanatic that's weak slut
    bastards scrawny too an asian version of gumby or mr.peanut
    Played fat jokes get giggles but no votes,I dont think its bullshit
    especially when you resemble Jet Li with hints of a mullet
    kid I could pimp-out your bitch in a second & not sell her ass
    I'd be seeing more bush before the Texans in the NFL draft
    been in the league 11 weeks coming played & with weak shit
    but if he had one concrete concept, I'd bury him underneath it
    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed
    can't be 100% asian, heard it before? well don't cry again
    if you were youd score 1600 on your SAT's & play the violen
    e! line i did months ago, flips lines & queer puts no devotion in
    bitches don't want to meet Criteria it's like the rbl voting trend
    major feminem features with thick eyebrows that amaze me
    & carrying long enough lashes in his eye to bring back Slavery
    fat jokes after that verse for User? prewriting it's clear as crap
    Really I didnt know WilliamHung was pursuing a career in rap?
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  5. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  6. Junya

    Junya New Member

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    vote - criteria

    Criteria's verse started off good, not crazy hard, but good...and maintained the level consistancy til the end...shit flowed fluid from set up to punch and into the next line...

    E the real started off disappointing with his first two punches feediin from Crit's verse...the rest of the verse was solid...without a shit ass line anywhere

    Id have to think more about my vote if E didnt feed...but IMO thats what lost it for him
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  7. E Tha Real

    E Tha Real Real Life

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  8. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    criteria

    PR, blunts, RBL, ez boards..? geek, U suck at doin' rap
    20,000 leagues aint a book, its how many sites ya fuckin losin at.
    oz made a dope rule; U can lose a loss by voting, see?
    but u'll watch everyone follow voting-criteria...without postin' links.

    E

    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed
    e! line i did months ago, flips lines & queer puts no devotion in
    bitches don't want to meet Criteria it's like the rbl voting trend

    idk, this is a close one. lol. criteria and e both had voting criteria type of lines, i only quoted them both because i though it was funny and both were used kinda good. lol. carpenters shit from e might of been played. ive never seen it so its funny to me. 20, 000 leagues was ok from cri. im stuck on this battle cause you both have came wayyy better. cri had some crazy shit last week, e's always a consistent dude. e had sorta of a pic battle verse withought the pic, lol. cri had some standard shit. ima give it to e just because cru fell off so hard after his first two lines. e had his shit scattered and had some nice conceots inbetween his good lines.

    v/ e tha real

    tough battle to vote on, could lean either way,
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  9. wilmer deryou

    wilmer deryou New Member

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    i was created by intelligent design..not to bash ya feelings
    i even unzipped my pants to ya mom & gave her a flash of brilliance.

    ya been suckin dick for years faggot; ur the way sickest
    til u started putting the past behind u harder than rape victims.

    god cant save ya fate, dont expect to go n advance
    i killed the possible outcomes.. n exorcized any ghost of a chance.


    cool verse...some parts weren't feeling

    e tha real

    started out realllyyy sloww...didn't feel the beginning and expected you to lose until

    been in the league 11 weeks coming played & with weak shit
    but if he had one concrete concept, I'd bury him underneath it
    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed

    e! line i did months ago, flips lines & queer puts no devotion in
    bitches don't want to meet Criteria it's like the rbl voting trend
    major feminem features with thick eyebrows that amaze me
    & carrying long enough lashes in his eye to bring back Slavery



    ^^ thought all thise shit was nice!! close battle but

    vote-e tha real
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  10. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    PR, blunts, RBL, ez boards..? geek, U suck at doin' rap
    20,000 leagues aint a book, its how many sites ya fuckin losin at.
    you NEVER had a woman, its a good fuckin' ya need, g.
    only time i see bitches wild on E... is spring break coverage on tv.
    ya been suckin dick for years faggot; ur the way sickest
    til u started putting the past behind u harder than rape victims.
    god cant save ya fate, dont expect to go n advance
    i killed the possible outcomes.. n exorcized any ghost of a chance.

    vs

    produced from smirnoff at motel6, so no issues of intimidation
    what he calls "flash of brilliance",created artificial insemination
    been in the league 11 weeks coming played & with weak shit
    but if he had one concrete concept, I'd bury him underneath it
    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed
    major feminem features with thick eyebrows that amaze me
    & carrying long enough lashes in his eye to bring back Slavery


    v/e tha real. niiiiiiiice battle. one of the better battles this week i've voted on. both came nice with the concepts and dissing eachother, personals and punchlines. crit had the nice wordplay and punches while E had the personals and comedy. but the personals E brought were too much in the long run, they had good combinations and helped him get the win.

    it was a realll close battle, could go either way dukes. stay up regardlessss, pz.
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  11. Philly The Kid

    Philly The Kid New Member

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    you NEVER had a woman, its a good fuckin' ya need, g.
    only time i see bitches wild on E... is spring break coverage on tv.
    see, i flow in a perfect state n rap with the purest hate
    marked my territory & ur proof i left ya family tree with urine stains.
    im sure to reign..honestly, ur the worst cat i ever faced
    i mean, last week i had user; but ur ass STILL takes the cake.

    vs

    been in the league 11 weeks coming played & with weak shit
    but if he had one concrete concept, I'd bury him underneath it
    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed
    e! line i did months ago, flips lines & queer puts no devotion in
    bitches don't want to meet Criteria it's like the rbl voting trend
    major feminem features with thick eyebrows that amaze me
    & carrying long enough lashes in his eye to bring back Slavery


    That was a close one...
    Criteria had too many played concepts and E had terrible wording on the first half of his verse. It came down to consistency, and E had that. 4 lines that i thought were pretty good, and a lot of fresh concepts. Cri, not bad dude, but you gotta kick the played shit. I'd rather see a wack concept that's never been used before than one that's been used a million times and now seems even wacker. Still decent verses from both. I just liked E more.

    V/E Tha Real
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  12. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    PR, blunts, RBL, ez boards..? geek, U suck at doin' rap
    20,000 leagues aint a book, its how many sites ya fuckin losin at.
    oz made a dope rule; U can lose a loss by voting, see?
    but u'll watch everyone follow voting-criteria...without postin' links.
    you NEVER had a woman, its a good fuckin' ya need, g.
    only time i see bitches wild on E... is spring break coverage on tv.
    ehhh


    v



    been in the league 11 weeks coming played & with weak shit
    but if he had one concrete concept, I'd bury him underneath it
    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed
    can't be 100% asian, heard it before? well don't cry again
    if you were youd score 1600 on your SAT's & play the violen
    e! line i did months ago, flips lines & queer puts no devotion in
    bitches don't want to meet Criteria it's like the rbl voting trend
    major feminem features with thick eyebrows that amaze me
    & carrying long enough lashes in his eye to bring back Slavery
    fat jokes after that verse for User? prewriting it's clear as crap
    Really I didnt know WilliamHung was pursuing a career in rap?

    some of that was ehhhh..but pretty nice section.

    v - REAL
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  13. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    PR, blunts, RBL, ez boards..? geek, U suck at doin' rap
    20,000 leagues aint a book, its how many sites ya fuckin losin at.
    nice
    oz made a dope rule; U can lose a loss by voting, see?
    but u'll watch everyone follow voting-criteria...without postin' links.
    ok
    cri's the doper steeze. your not likely to drop me,
    ur a brand of loser; that could start a clothing line n rival versace.
    eh
    i was created by intelligent design..not to bash ya feelings
    i even unzipped my pants to ya mom & gave her a flash of brilliance.
    nope
    you NEVER had a woman, its a good fuckin' ya need, g.
    only time i see bitches wild on E... is spring break coverage on tv.
    eh, could have been decent though
    ya been suckin dick for years faggot; ur the way sickest
    til u started putting the past behind u harder than rape victims.
    eh
    everythings changing ...the mods, rules & mags written
    but how can U be here since forever & traditionally be wack in it?
    too generic
    see, i flow in a perfect state n rap with the purest hate
    marked my territory & ur proof i left ya family tree with urine stains.
    eh
    im sure to reign..honestly, ur the worst cat i ever faced
    i mean, last week i had user; but ur ass STILL takes the cake.
    hahaha
    god cant save ya fate, dont expect to go n advance
    i killed the possible outcomes.. n exorcized any ghost of a chance.
    eh
    its like a fib to ur eyes, my votes grow bigger in size
    im 'on the whey to the top' like a bodybuilders nutritional guide.
    played
    but its been a great april fools.. now i got an itchin' ...
    ok.. oz ..haha, nice fucking joke; now wheres my real competition?
    eh hensley's april fools joke on me last week was better

    had a few funny lines..... solid flow and nice use of multi's...
    but nothing real too comedic to me

    E Tha Real:
    she'd think its brilliant how your sperm could reached the egg
    or past the clitoris for that matter... but let's not preach ahead
    hahaha
    produced from smirnoff at motel6, so no issues of intimidation
    what he calls "flash of brilliance",created artificial insemination
    nice again
    seen ya pic a diehard seasame street fanatic that's weak slut
    bastards scrawny too an asian version of gumby or mr.peanut
    ok
    Played fat jokes get giggles but no votes,I dont think its bullshit
    especially when you resemble Jet Li with hints of a mullet
    cool
    kid I could pimp-out your bitch in a second & not sell her ass
    I'd be seeing more bush before the Texans in the NFL draft
    bush lines are played
    been in the league 11 weeks coming played & with weak shit
    but if he had one concrete concept, I'd bury him underneath it
    cool
    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed
    hahaha
    can't be 100% asian, heard it before? well don't cry again
    if you were youd score 1600 on your SAT's & play the violen
    ROFLZ
    e! line i did months ago, flips lines & queer puts no devotion in
    bitches don't want to meet Criteria it's like the rbl voting trend
    ok
    major feminem features with thick eyebrows that amaze me
    & carrying long enough lashes in his eye to bring back Slavery
    haha
    fat jokes after that verse for User? prewriting it's clear as crap
    Really I didnt know WilliamHung was pursuing a career in rap?
    eh

    nice flow as well... better funnies

    v- E Tha Real
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  14. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    PR, blunts, RBL, ez boards..? geek, U suck at doin' rap
    20,000 leagues aint a book, its how many sites ya fuckin losin at.

    lmao nice opener

    oz made a dope rule; U can lose a loss by voting, see?
    but u'll watch everyone follow voting-criteria...without postin' links.

    decent

    cri's the doper steeze. your not likely to drop me,
    ur a brand of loser; that could start a clothing line n rival versace.

    ok

    i was created by intelligent design..not to bash ya feelings
    i even unzipped my pants to ya mom & gave her a flash of brilliance.

    nah

    you NEVER had a woman, its a good fuckin' ya need, g.
    only time i see bitches wild on E... is spring break coverage on tv.

    lol

    ya been suckin dick for years faggot; ur the way sickest
    til u started putting the past behind u harder than rape victims.

    lmao

    everythings changing ...the mods, rules & mags written
    but how can U be here since forever & traditionally be wack in it?

    nah

    see, i flow in a perfect state n rap with the purest hate
    marked my territory & ur proof i left ya family tree with urine stains.

    lol

    im sure to reign..honestly, ur the worst cat i ever faced
    i mean, last week i had user; but ur ass STILL takes the cake.

    nah

    god cant save ya fate, dont expect to go n advance
    i killed the possible outcomes.. n exorcized any ghost of a chance.

    lol

    its like a fib to ur eyes, my votes grow bigger in size
    im 'on the whey to the top' like a bodybuilders nutritional guide.

    ok

    but its been a great april fools.. now i got an itchin' ...
    ok.. oz ..haha, nice fucking joke; now wheres my real competition?

    nah


    overall: nice verse...more good lines than bad




    E:


    she'd think its brilliant how your sperm could reached the egg
    or past the clitoris for that matter... but let's not preach ahead

    nah

    produced from smirnoff at motel6, so no issues of intimidation
    what he calls "flash of brilliance",created artificial insemination

    lol

    seen ya pic a diehard seasame street fanatic that's weak slut
    bastards scrawny too an asian version of gumby or mr.peanut

    nah

    Played fat jokes get giggles but no votes,I dont think its bullshit
    especially when you resemble Jet Li with hints of a mullet

    nah

    kid I could pimp-out your bitch in a second & not sell her ass
    I'd be seeing more bush before the Texans in the NFL draft

    ok

    been in the league 11 weeks coming played & with weak shit
    but if he had one concrete concept, I'd bury him underneath it

    lol

    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed

    nah

    can't be 100% asian, heard it before? well don't cry again
    if you were youd score 1600 on your SAT's & play the violen

    egh

    e! line i did months ago, flips lines & queer puts no devotion in
    bitches don't want to meet Criteria it's like the rbl voting trend

    lol

    major feminem features with thick eyebrows that amaze me
    & carrying long enough lashes in his eye to bring back Slavery

    nah

    fat jokes after that verse for User? prewriting it's clear as crap
    Really I didnt know WilliamHung was pursuing a career in rap?

    decent

    overall: decent verse..i couldn't get into the playing off his verse and pic disses..especially after the User match and the fact that this isn't a pic match


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  15. The_Nebulotic

    The_Nebulotic Way Over your Heads.

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    Hmmm...interesting battle.

    Criteria

    PR, blunts, RBL, ez boards..? geek, U suck at doin' rap
    20,000 leagues aint a book, its how many sites ya fuckin losin at.
    oz made a dope rule; U can lose a loss by voting, see?
    but u'll watch everyone follow voting-criteria...without postin' links.
    cri's the doper steeze. your not likely to drop me,
    ur a brand of loser; that could start a clothing line n rival versace.

    god cant save ya fate, dont expect to go n advance
    i killed the possible outcomes.. n exorcized any ghost of a chance.
    its like a fib to ur eyes, my votes grow bigger in size
    im 'on the whey to the top' like a bodybuilders nutritional guide.


    Your set-ups were MUCH better than what I read last week. Anyway, that opener was :eek:...the following couplet was nice, especially since it was better executed that E's line that used the same concept. LOL @ the versace line as well. Unfortunately, you lost me till the "ghost of a chance" line, which I thought was dope. "Whey" line was cool. All in all, your middle section was weak, but everything else was cool (even though I didn't like your closer).

    E Tha Real

    produced from smirnoff at motel6, so no issues of intimidation
    what he calls "flash of brilliance",created artificial insemination

    kid I could pimp-out your bitch in a second & not sell her ass
    I'd be seeing more bush before the Texans in the NFL draft

    not into asian beauty-if such exists but I'll give a veterans tale
    there simply a carpenters dream.... Flat & never been nailed
    can't be 100% asian, heard it before? well don't cry again
    if you were youd score 1600 on your SAT's & play the violen


    1) Man, you did some HEAVY feeding...2) You dissed his pic, even though he wasn't able to do the same to you. Little handi-capped, IMO. But whatever. LOL @ artificial insem line, that's fucked up...asian disses i quoted were funny ("flat & never nailed" doesn't get old no matter how many times I hear it), and Bush line was good.

    All in all, enjoyable read. E took a couple of advantages with his verse-feeding and Pic disses, but I really think Cri just had more solid quotables.

    Vote = Criteria

    Good battle.
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