127. Lares Viales vs 128. Write Coast

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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  3. Shakes Fear

    Shakes Fear New Member

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    12 sounds good, got a lot of shit to do this week.

    cool with you?
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  4. Shakes Fear

    Shakes Fear New Member

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    ok, here..


    1st rd to Lares? please, i'll walk down this kid like aisles
    with a frame made of glass, it makes it easy to crush Vial'es
    after this loss, youll no show, then your alias'll show up
    nevermind throwin a punch, ill just blow your fuckin ass up
    dont bother to reply.. its not worth it, try to save face Lares..
    cause ill string your fuckin frame, like a god damn bass guitar
    are you confused? i think you must, Lares needs to get the routine
    only kid who wears a mask all year then takes it off on halloween
    yeah you checked in, but thats as far ass youll go in the league
    my powers like that of the Craft the way it comes back times 3
    ill probably loose anyhow, but seriously, i know i havent seen it
    but how you fit all these kids on your dick, when you got a 3 inch penis?
    gluck

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  5. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    You said my name wrong. Decent verse, but uhhhh die.


    Craft
    It's a frail fact kid you don't deserve tips, cuz ya crew are stale cats
    .. Cuz if you ever 'amount' to anything you'll be charged the sales tax
    You failed brat and ya verses aren't really masterpieces you see
    .. But I didn't picture you wack.. I imagined the whole fucking gallery
    Coast when I drop, He'll get scared. He's just a righteous fluke
    .. Shit my verse'll make his heart race with a fucking nitrious boost
    Fight this duke, You'll end up 'broke' & then ya more than wack
    Because this kid 'scrambles in the pocket' like bad a quarterback
    Take the line above, cuz money has been a problem for this fake slut
    Yet if Coast tries to take everything in 'account' he'd prolly go bankrupt
    And FUCK a closer you just have everything to fear
    And I'll make 'write coast blackout', like earlier this year

    ...LV



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  6. Vadik

    Vadik New Member

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    Lines I was feeling:

    1st rd to Lares? please, i'll walk down this kid like aisles
    with a frame made of glass, it makes it easy to crush Vial'es
    are you confused? i think you must, Lares needs to get the routine
    only kid who wears a mask all year then takes it off on halloween


    Some of Ur lines were Eeeh to the Nth degree though.

    Coast when I drop, He'll get scared. He's just a righteous fluke
    .. Shit my verse'll make his heart race with a fucking nitrious boost
    Fight this duke, You'll end up 'broke' & then ya more than wack
    Because this kid 'scrambles in the pocket' like bad a quarterback
    And FUCK a closer you just have everything to fear
    And I'll make 'write coast blackout', like earlier this year


    Lares wins, but not by much. Decent battle U guys.

    Vote = Lares Viales
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  7. Shakes Fear

    Shakes Fear New Member

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    nice,... liked the last line..

    but..

    "It's a frail fact kid you don't deserve tips, cuz ya crew are stale cats"

    left me confused cuz..... im not in a crew..

    [dunno]

    nice overall tho
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  8. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    Write's best
    are you confused? i think you must, Lares needs to get the routine
    only kid who wears a mask all year then takes it off on halloween

    ill probably loose anyhow, but seriously, i know i havent seen it
    but how you fit all these kids on your dick, when you got a 3 inch penis?

    Lares best
    You failed brat and ya verses aren't really masterpieces you see
    .. But I didn't picture you wack.. I imagined the whole fucking gallery

    Fight this duke, You'll end up 'broke' & then ya more than wack
    Because this kid 'scrambles in the pocket' like bad a quarterback


    I got Lares taking this. Write had a hot line with the halloween punch, but the whole verse needed to be that good. Lares edged in the punches category.
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  9. Shakes Fear

    Shakes Fear New Member

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    I can see this going downhill from those 2 votes.. nice battle.. maybe i'll see you up in the rankings sometime... pzzz
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  10. Imperial

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    Write had some decent lines, nothin special. Lares jus came more witty, he had all the stand out lines. His flow was better too, write didnt have any multis or anythin. Lares takes this for comin more clever.

    Vote: Lares Viales
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  11. Jay Slimm

    Jay Slimm 6-1-6ko's

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    yo nice battle lares is gonna take this overall....better punches...better metahs...nice shit kid

    vote - Lares Viales
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  12. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    Both came decently, but I wasn't feeling anything from either site excpet frot eh picture galler line from Laires

    v- L
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  13. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    you can't really scramble in the pocket
    but the picture gallery line was good enough to get lares the win

    Write had better flow, but Lares had more solid lines, the only dope line, and better wording.
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  14. BMM

    BMM Active Member

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    I liked how COAST started out, but then it seemed to go down hill with a number of played concepts.

    LARES (however you pronounce it) was consistent from start to finish. not sure what the whole crew line was about, so i'll discount that from my overall vote. i'm sure it makes sense to some.

    VOTE = LARES by a big margin

    GALLERY & HEART RACE lines were probably what did it for me

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  15. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    lares flow was nice.. i think his punches hit a lot harder... good metaphors i was liking.

    Vote-lares
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  16. Tha Mic Rippa

    Tha Mic Rippa New Member

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    V/Lares

    just felt more of his hits...n he came a lil harder wit betta punches metas and so forth

    Write was koo sum ok stuff jus not on the same level

    pz
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  17. Awtasee

    Awtasee Your Favourite Celeb'

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    pretty solid battle here....
    v/ lares v

    he did take this though.. overall harder hitting punches.... more original concepts, better use of flow, multis and the style/structure was coo

    other guy had a solid verse.. 1 or 2 qoutables, not up to par with the consistantcy of lares
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  18. .Perpetual.

    .Perpetual. New Member

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    vote-Lares

    nice setups and punches....i remember dude from last year i think...
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  19. The Grimm One

    The Grimm One No place like the ghetto.

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    VOTE=LV

    Reason:
    This kid's punches came MUCH harder....much.
    "imagined the whole fuckin gallery"
    Yeah, definitely Raw.

    Good battle y'all

    >>Grimm<<
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  20. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    lares take this one. coast had a few punches

    1st rd to Lares? please, i'll walk down this kid like aisles
    with a frame made of glass, it makes it easy to crush Vial'es
    after this loss, youll no show, then your alias'll show up
    nevermind throwin a punch, ill just blow your fuckin ass up
    that was dope but you lost heat from there. gotta keep it going


    lares had some nasty shit he dropped. 1st line was comedy. closer was a nice play off his name. good shit man.

    vote- lares. more consistent and doper rhymes man.
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