Break down ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Mr nice guy-- Ya chances in this are your initials out of 1000 Imma treat u like a *private club's doorman* so u get to 'bouncin'// (*bouncer) Nice wordplay but as far as a punch its a lil shaky U always were a pig, only now you're all bacon But ya c.d. does have a case...an it's a case of retardation// Lol, like the first one, it set up nice for a powerfully fealt punch only u didn't deliver on the second line. Big letdown I'm better than u bitch, but enuf of me I'll hit u across tha head wit my car's 'rims' as to 'dub' u king// I don't know what yall was feelin but i actually like this punch This is no longer a 3-way, i'm countin u out Imma vegetablize this cat an turn em into a potato on a couch//.... Decent No gimics, but if there's a gay parade V's sure to join An i'll jam a 'stake' thru ya chest 2 turn ya whole body into sirloin// Again nice wordplay but shaky punch Talkin about ya punches, well, they seldom hit An ill giv u an 'L' so u can add it to ya name makin u 'Venomluss'// Good punch, was set up excellent. Nice flow to it. U like a wash bucket tha way ya hittin tha deck Cuz a picture usually paints a 1000 words...yours was just an image of death// Nice, good punch but the flow was off and it shoulda been worded better You may spit sick.....but noone catches ya disease or drift My punches'll land u in a time continuom til u fuckin cease to exist// Nice closer as u sarcastically said. :] Overall a nice verse, flow was off a lil, But your style more than made up for it Venomus-- i'll criple that^... along with your diminished past do you never fucking wonder why nice guy's finish last Good opener, started off nice an L - i'll hand you fool!! it's obvious the fag you are when mr nice posted his verse next to an instruction manual ???Wasn't feelin it. Flowed well but not a good punch fucking homo, do u hafta exist? die-ing is part of the list when venomus pull's the string's, that are attached to ya wrists I dunno about every1 else but this shit is outplayed to me. I've hurd similair lines like this about a year ago. Wack I'm halfbaked, and I can see the sissy's mic shy but like I said, I'm halfbaked, and taking out the Mr. Nice Guy Uhhh...big no. Filler i guess this is twice mine, EliteNewbie? dats weak and slim and instead of using punchlines, I'll just let his name speak for him Gee gollly gosh, will u really? it seamed to me u just wanted to take the easy way out an diss Mr nice guy's name the whole time and not T.E.N. Weak line my technique is win, there's a reason this is a 3-way it's so idiots like you fall back and give us bigger names the leadway!! Filler...wackness Overall i thot u did 1 or 2 nice punches at the beginnin But your last 6 lines all seemed like fillers to me. Flow was nice but thz about it. T.E.N... My sex technique's advanced, this dudes attractin hoes While Nice only uses condoms to make balloon animals LOL!!! Nice line The truth is his name isnt referring to his verse actually Mr Nice Guy is a nick referring to this nerd's personality oh shit.. an i thot u were gonna keep the momentum going... WACK!! Ur far from a thug, ur not a gangsta or known to sell dro Plus you aint hip to the streets, youre more of an elbow Naw, hurd it too many times before. Outplayed Ur bad at grammar & ud only complete a sentence thru jail Its Venomous hell, u dont have oh shit material.... Wack... seemed once again like your 3rd aan 4th lines. Fillers So people only say O before U when helping u spell ....ok.....moving on. U fucked up the flow by adding this At your concert people might run and then vomit Cuz u can tell that Venom's bad without a spiderman comic Not real creative but still an ight punch I could beat him with my eyes closed, stupid its easy Cuz the only hip hop quotables he has is on his ludacris cd ??? WTF??? Stupid attempt at a punch. (overall you had good punches but to me most of em were outplayed. Other people might not have hurd them before but i sure have. Solid. A 4/10 maybe.) Mr.Nice Guy's verse: I give this a 5.5/10 due to wordplay and i liked his battle style. Also had the nicest punch of the battle with that Venom-luss line in my opinion. Venomus's verse: Easily givin a 3.5/10 with no hesitation due to his last 6 lines being fillers and wack on top of it!!! He did have the best Flow tho which gained him an extra point. T.E.N.'s verse: I fealt he came kinda equally beside MRNiceguy but lacked the originality. Basically i fealt he had more outplayed lines than any1. 4.5-5.3 out of 10 as i said before. It seems everyone disslike Mrnice guy's verse yet i thot it was better than any one elses. Different people jus like different style's i guess, what can i say. No beef. pz.