111. theFRANCHISE vs 112. Post Office

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Hells Angel

    Hells Angel New Member

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  3. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    wear your apron............

    you're getting served this week...

    16 it is...............


    i've voted on 8 battles so far but forgot to link them... my bad, first week back...

    don't worry though- i'm still voting on at least 5 more so i'm all good...

    and what's with the word technique everyone is using?
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  4. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    first week back in the RBL i'm just gettin' in the swing of things
    look at your verse and CBS this queer must be the King of Queens
    what kind of name is post office and who said this wig.gers sick
    mutombo just signed with ny but i'll leave you with a bigger knick
    for sparring against theFRANCHISE... punches i fired a few
    am i suffering illness and fatigue no i'm just sick and tired of you
    might as well just cast a spell and try to voodoo the champ
    before i leave you with more licks than what you do to a stamp
    skinny punk i bet this board will watch this twig bleed in joy
    as i tear his frickin' neck off just like siegfried 'n roy
    by white tigers in vegas you were done when the bell sounded
    skills similar to David Wells stomach you see they're well rounded
    stoopid kid's reading my verse as he quivers afar
    how you go by post office and can't deliver a bar

    now take off your apron, you have now been served sucka.....
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  5. Hells Angel

    Hells Angel New Member

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    (read the 2 quotes in his sig)

    Know the technique/
    Yo this vets week/

    your even more washed up than i thought u would be....

    just an old man wheelin his wheelchair, come on dawg, retire
    had to stop chasin his dreams...cuz his arms were tired
    i dont mean to feed, but it seems I need to make the facts louder
    fake personals...
    i'm not skinny, that’s a 3 year old line u prewrote for frac at prowlers
    29 fran? old fuck ran the rbl, but now he's needin rehearsin
    cuz i woulda been dope too...if i had jesus proofreadin my verses
    whats old,fat, and gambles? dont answer, that question's somethin rhetorical
    and that ben wallace line u always quote is just fuckin horrible
    ‘the most electrifying man in blah blah’, I hope this aged haters knowin…
    that electric he speaks of is just whats keepin his pace maker goin
    talkin bout ur greatness, but no one from 99's left to hear it
    biggest ‘Lifetime’ accomplishment?...when u shined in a Golden Girls guest appearance
    always a step behind aloe, its somethin tha shouldntve stuck
    thought ur alias was 'Downed Shadow'...but u'd just fallen and couldnt get up
    and no one will feel ur bars, fran, you'll out perform me to none
    and the final 4 were just TERRIBLE....like the last tourney u won


    you lose....bad
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  6. Punchinstein

    Punchinstein Untouchable

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    if your not in RBL dont post in the threads
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  7. squarelicious

    squarelicious together we rice

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    Vote: 100proof

    His stamp line and deliver line got it. Post Office must be an alias, but his punches just weren't hitting.
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  8. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    post office verse was iffy.......yea......definitely stretched punches etc etc etc



    franchise wins



    read the battle, but neither really had stand out lines......just franchise came consistently above average, below dope

    post came below average, waaaaay below dope
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  9. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    Wow.. I guess different strokes for different folks..

    Fran.. nice return verse.. but a bit simplistic in the punch departmen.. so I wasn't feeling it much.. the knicks like was cool.. king of queens see BS line was dope.. but the rest came across as mediocre..


    Post.. nice verse.. chock full of personals. definitely an alias.. hrmmm.. I can guess who though.. just over all better quality of punches and flips in my eyes.. loved the jesus line.. and the rest was pretty hot too.. but about on equal footing..

    Vote- Post
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  10. Pretty Missez

    Pretty Missez way better than ROC-C

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    franchise had an ok verse but nothing too ill. Post had some nice punches and just came better overall with it.

    vote- post
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  11. euphemism

    euphemism .

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    damn,

    Proof - the 'deliver bars' and 'licks' lines were lookin nice enough to take this..

    but Post Office, nice job.. packed it with personals. Prowlers, Golden Girls, 'Last Tourney' lines were all good.. funny shit

    dam, vote = alias Post Office

    zpeuph
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  12. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    up over no shows
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  13. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    theFRANCHISE had a good, not great, flow and some nice punchlines
    i liked the mutombo line, the stamp line, the deliver a bar line..

    Post office started off well, but his flow was shit the rest of the way.
    he did have some nice lines, and some concepts that could have been worded better.
    i liked the closer too
    tough to vote on.
    Franchise had better wording, Post office had more creativity
    its going to be a close one
    but i think theFRANCHISE got it
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  14. G Status

    G Status New Member

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    This was a good battle for 111 vs. 112 but I think PO took this. His verse was more well thought out and had punches that were more on point than TF that hit harder.

    Vote - PO
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  15. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    I agree with that, but I think that Post Office had a better overall verse. Some could have been worded better, but it was still better than TF's verse.

    vote - Post Office
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  16. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    fran: Bigger knick nice, deliver bar ok.. had a decent verse

    Post: past maker funny, down shadow ok.. had a more enterntaining verse

    v- Fran
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  17. Sidneh Bihar

    Sidneh Bihar New Member

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    Ill lines underlined

    first week back in the RBL i'm just gettin' in the swing of things
    look at your verse and CBS this queer must be the King of Queens
    what kind of name is post office and who said this wig.gers sick
    mutombo just signed with ny but i'll leave you with a bigger knick
    for sparring against theFRANCHISE... punches i fired a few
    am i suffering illness and fatigue no i'm just sick and tired of you
    might as well just cast a spell and try to voodoo the champ
    before i leave you with more licks than what you do to a stamp
    skinny punk i bet this board will watch this twig bleed in joy
    as i tear his frickin' neck off just like siegfried 'n roy
    by white tigers in vegas you were done when the bell sounded
    skills similar to David Wells stomach you see they're well rounded
    stoopid kid's reading my verse as he quivers afar
    how you go by post office and can't deliver a bar

    now take off your apron, you have now been served sucka.....

    Regardless of the ill lines I underlined this was a hot verse!
    (read the 2 quotes in his sig)

    Know the technique/
    Yo this vets week/

    your even more washed up than i thought u would be....

    just an old man wheelin his wheelchair, come on dawg, retire
    had to stop chasin his dreams...cuz his arms were tired
    i dont mean to feed, but it seems I need to make the facts louder
    fake personals...
    i'm not skinny, that’s a 3 year old line u prewrote for frac at prowlers
    29 fran? old fuck ran the rbl, but now he's needin rehearsin
    cuz i woulda been dope too...if i had jesus proofreadin my verses
    whats old,fat, and gambles? dont answer, that question's somethin rhetorical
    and that ben wallace line u always quote is just fuckin horrible
    ‘the most electrifying man in blah blah’, I hope this aged haters knowin…
    that electric he speaks of is just whats keepin his pace maker goin
    talkin bout ur greatness, but no one from 99's left to hear it
    biggest ‘Lifetime’ accomplishment?...when u shined in a Golden Girls guest appearance
    always a step behind aloe, its somethin tha shouldntve stuck
    thought ur alias was 'Downed Shadow'...but u'd just fallen and couldnt get up
    and no one will feel ur bars, fran, you'll out perform me to none
    and the final 4 were just TERRIBLE....like the last tourney u won


    you lose....bad

    VOTE=Franchise
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  18. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    hmmm


    fran seemed a bit overeager to drop - didnt think out his concepts too much


    some of that stuff was just way too simple


    it flowed great, off the tip of my tongue the whole way, but that was the only thing that fran had in this one


    post office played the age card predictably, but with a bit more panache


    thus he takes it


    v - post office.
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  19. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    29 fran? old fuck ran the rbl, but now he's needin rehearsin
    cuz i woulda been dope too...if i had jesus proofreadin my verses

    lmao

    i gotta give it to post

    just hit harder to me...fran had the cbs line but i dont think he did enough to win this joint...post just came harder overall

    vote-PO
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  20. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    Vote-Franchise..

    posts's verse didnt even flow half the time, most of his punches were forced. fran had a all around nice hard hitting verse even though i've seen him come doper. Fran takes this with better wordplay,flow, and punches. nice battle fella's.
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