11. slay-eddie.. 2-0 vs. 12. Criteria 1-0

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  1. Oneduh

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    Word of the Week


    Full Circle

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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1012543
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  2. Slay-Eddie..

    Slay-Eddie.. New Member

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  3. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    I'll match it. I don't write til about 15 minutes before I drop anyway.
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  4. Slay-Eddie..

    Slay-Eddie.. New Member

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    /\ok..
    Everybody's claimin to key - NEWSFLASH! theres a delete button dude..
    ..But you the Jordan of rap - 'cuz in the end, you'll fuckin fumble and lose too..
    Ya complexion's funny - anything hot you produced gets smothered..
    Cri' is beyond the pale - white, and most translucent colors..
    You call that weak tribe an army? - dude, ya soldiers are bitches..
    Nigga swears he got a good Full Circle - uh-huh, yea - so does Xzibit..
    But you can tell em i'm talkin tuff or that i'm illin'..
    ..N be the reason why America goes back under 3 hundred million..
    You lose, problem solved. got a prediction?..ya need to hault it dog
    but when i swing hard to make dude Cri' Now..Obie is not involved
    /\Yea i swagger jacked you - raise ya hands if its true..
    ..'Cuz fuck the net..
    ..If i saw you in person - i'd STILL take ya shit away from you..
    Yo ya girl doesn't mind babysittin - but fuck makin children in the bed..
    I treat my kids like Head-On - and apply it directly to her forehead.. ;)
    Dis dude is bouncin off the walls? - ha, I'd uppercut him as i'm idle..
    ..N help him turn that/\ into fact when he ends up like Corey Lidle..
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  5. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    Go join braggin writes, lil' homo


    And Lama would vouch for you too, so give it a shot
    Cuz unlike THIS league... He gives a fuck if your in his or not.
    Lets do this shit. See, you'll get hurt & lose your bitch
    your balls to the wall..
    when last night I was balls to the wall...of ya girls uterus.
    You can get votes from ya wack crew, I dun' fuckin care
    ..Its just ironic you run in a full circle with a bunch' a squares.
    & I heard RM went to shit, jus figured it was rumors tho
    Know how hard it is to crack top 20?
    .. well YOUR ranked 11, and your record is 2 & 0.
    Ha..guess things change, like the mods & mags written
    But atleast you keep it traditional.. cuz you always wack in it.
    Its been easy. I wont lie geek, know MY shit is flawless
    My entire runs been a bi streak.. bet you love to sit & watch it.
    This beating seems early... your a shallow weak threat
    Im handin' you your candy ass and it aint even halloween yet.
    Honestly where'd you learn to write? ya hopes in jest..
    The idea of ya verse & beating me is alike... cuz both is stretched.
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  6. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    votes up.
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  7. Axe Sent

    Axe Sent S T F UPPERCUT!

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    vote: cri

    cri came prety decent... slay you gotta work on ya punches and concepts some.. didn't get a couple lines... cri nice full circle line lol...

    Cri- Decent verse overall.. def gonna peep some more ah ya shit..

    slay- work on some shit and you gotta future here dunny...

    vote criteria
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  8. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    vote= criteria

    slay didn't seem to take cri serious, most of his verse lacked creativity, an lacked personality, his lines just didn't hit hard

    cri had some coo lines, did a better job of personals an more well thought of lines

    & I heard RM went to shit, jus figured it was rumors tho
    Know how hard it is to crack top 20?
    .. well YOUR ranked 11, and your record is 2 & 0.
    Ha..guess things change, like the mods & mags written
    But atleast you keep it traditional.. cuz you always wack in it

    thse lines and the closer took it in my opinion
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  9. youngflow

    youngflow New Member

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    I too think slay played cri sweet..his verse lacked creativity...cri had a nice verse


    You can get votes from ya wack crew, I dun' fuckin care
    ..Its just ironic you run in a full circle with a bunch' a squares.
    Ha..guess things change, like the mods & mags written
    But atleast you keep it traditional.. cuz you always wack in it.

    these were two solid lines that one it for cri


    vote-cri
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  10. IronMic

    IronMic New Member

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    this was an ok battle. Their was alot of extra shit said that didnt connect to anything on both parts.


    Slay Eddie-best line

    You call that weak tribe an army? - dude, ya soldiers are bitches..
    Nigga swears he got a good Full Circle - uh-huh, yea - so does Xzibit..


    Criteria-best line

    & I heard RM went to shit, jus figured it was rumors tho
    Know how hard it is to crack top 20?
    .. well YOUR ranked 11, and your record is 2 & 0.
    Ha..guess things change, like the mods & mags written
    But atleast you keep it traditional.. cuz you always wack in it.



    Slay your verse wasnt that bad actually you jus need to set your punchez up better so they connect different and hit harder and you'll be straight.

    Criteria you verse was decent i think u got off to a slow start but heated up a little. jus work on your consistancy and youll be strait.


    vote-Criteria
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  11. EnvYY

    EnvYY IM FROM THE GR8 718!

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    Criteria won this battle easy. Better personals flow and multis. Slay did a okay job but majority of the things said aint make no sense.

    Honestly where'd you learn to write? ya hopes in jest..
    The idea of ya verse & beating me is alike... cuz both is stretched.
    Nice closing

    Good battle Cri keep it up.
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  12. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    vote- cri

    Slay eddie put in effort, and came alright... But criteria was more personal, and his writin' style was smoother... liked this part.

    Ha..guess things change, like the mods & mags written
    But atleast you keep it traditional.. cuz you always wack in it.
    Its been easy. I wont lie geek, know MY shit is flawless
    My entire runs been a bi streak.. bet you love to sit & watch it.
    This beating seems early... your a shallow weak threat
    Im handin' you your candy ass and it aint even halloween yet.

    nice..... peace
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  13. Achilles™

    Achilles™ Without The Heel

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    Slay

    You call that weak tribe an army? - dude, ya soldiers are bitches..
    Nigga swears he got a good Full Circle - uh-huh, yea - so does Xzibit..

    Yo ya girl doesn't mind babysittin - but fuck makin children in the bed..
    I treat my kids like Head-On - and apply it directly to her forehead..


    vs

    Cri

    Lets do this shit. See, you'll get hurt & lose your bitch
    your balls to the wall..
    when last night I was balls to the wall...of ya girls uterus.

    This beating seems early... your a shallow weak threat
    Im handin' you your candy ass and it aint even halloween yet.
    Honestly where'd you learn to write? ya hopes in jest..
    The idea of ya verse & beating me is alike... cuz both is stretched.

    Vote = Cri, more direct with lines and hit harder.
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  14. J-HeAt

    J-HeAt From the Cocaine capital.

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    not a bad battle... nice verses from both of ya... i felt that cri did edge it out how ever. But u both came pretty good wit punches n everythin...

    Vote-cri
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  15. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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  16. wilmer deryou

    wilmer deryou New Member

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    slay eddie



    You call that weak tribe an army? - dude, ya soldiers are bitches..
    Nigga swears he got a good Full Circle - uh-huh, yea - so does Xzibit..

    You lose, problem solved. got a prediction?..ya need to hault it dog
    but when i swing hard to make dude Cri' Now..Obie is not involved

    Dis dude is bouncin off the walls? - ha, I'd uppercut him as i'm idle..
    ..N help him turn that/\ into fact when he ends up like Corey Lidle..

    criteria

    Lets do this shit. See, you'll get hurt & lose your bitch
    your balls to the wall..
    when last night I was balls to the wall...of ya girls uterus.


    Its been easy. I wont lie geek, know MY shit is flawless
    My entire runs been a bi streak.. bet you love to sit & watch it.
    This beating seems early... your a shallow weak threat
    Im handin' you your candy ass and it aint even halloween yet.


    i like that cri line by Slay Eddie...criteria had the better verse tho...just more quotables

    vote-criteria
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  17. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    Slay-Eddie..
    /\ok..
    Everybody's claimin to key - NEWSFLASH! theres a delete button dude..
    ..But you the Jordan of rap - 'cuz in the end, you'll fuckin fumble and lose too..

    But you can tell em i'm talkin tuff or that i'm illin'..
    ..N be the reason why America goes back under 3 hundred million..

    Yo ya girl doesn't mind babysittin - but fuck makin children in the bed..
    I treat my kids like Head-On - and apply it directly to her forehead.. ;)

    Criteria
    Lets do this shit. See, you'll get hurt & lose your bitch
    your balls to the wall..
    when last night I was balls to the wall...of ya girls uterus.
    You can get votes from ya wack crew, I dun' fuckin care
    ..Its just ironic you run in a full circle with a bunch' a squares.

    Its been easy. I wont lie geek, know MY shit is flawless
    My entire runs been a bi streak.. bet you love to sit & watch it.

    overal:
    Both had an equal amount of lines I liked, but Cri was a little more direct and focused on the actual skills of his oponent. Although I don't mind a good girl/wife/momma diss now and then, a verse based on your opponents skill will always win me over more.

    vote:
    Cri
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  18. Slay-Eddie..

    Slay-Eddie.. New Member

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    /\its good to see that ppl are ATLEAST comprehendin my lines.. good battle cri' <- no pun intended..
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  19. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Crit wins.
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