11. Scene1 (3-0) vs. 12. Porno_Lady (3-1) (Scene wins)

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    11. Scene1 (3-0) vs. 12. Porno_Lady (3-1)
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  2. Scene1

    Scene1 action!

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    yah im here

    lets make it happen

    12 lines,post early
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  3. Porno_Lady

    Porno_Lady Educated and Beautiful

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    12? that's awfully short, but fine

    checking in
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  4. Scene1

    Scene1 action!

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    watch me post insults, n she'll write a story with her verse
    the only porno where the second halfs more boring than the first...
    fat broad, when it comes to cap's, ill ensure this dame's peeled...
    hips dont lie, n yours say porno and user order the same meals
    even beer goggles couldnt make your sex a decent routine
    call her a mountainside...
    when those curves are approaching, rethink your speed
    n you cant even rap good, watch me relaying the truth..
    PL sleeps alone...even your concepts and punches are more dated than you
    heard couples could manage change...and i did question
    i wanted to see how love handles
    and looked no further than her mid section
    stop using your dumb lines and apply smarts...
    the first porno where straight dudes are more apt to appreciate the guy's part
    your name make sense - but not because you're hot with the scribbles
    with track listenin...
    most guys finish porno early and shut it off in the middle
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  5. Porno_Lady

    Porno_Lady Educated and Beautiful

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    didn't forget, .... posting now


    Lights, camera, action! I'm directing this brief RBL screen viewing
    And since the writer's strike is over, you should get used to losing
    Cuz your record is confusing, 2 no shows, 1 wack butterball
    And you're soon to join them, cuz once you Scene1 you've seen em all
    Your custom text says you a man of action, so make no hesitation
    On what you read after you wave your cursor over your reputation
    In the last few weeks, it's been easy for us to overlook you
    Ordering movie snacks has lasted through Scene1 and the previews
    Last RBL review, Grimet said you was turning some heads
    Not on shoulder's though, but between gentlemen's legs
    What a coincidence, I star in porno's, you just in the first scene
    Which means, you lack the stamina to star in the whole thing
    So fuck with me, or better yet, to better your chances
    You'll make a better scene with some penile enhancements
    I'll drive you insane, until you run out of gas
    Til the director pop's out, and says cut! it's a wrap
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  6. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    "...until you run out of gas", ironic cause this pretty was summed up your verse Porno, came in heated with a couple bars that had me thinking "murder", but then you fizzled out. Scene had a few clever lines I liked and maybe two I wasn't, but overall had a enough to defeat the "token-rap-chick", so Vote - Scene1.
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  7. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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    ^ yea Schadenfreude pretty much summed it up.

    Last RBL review, Grimet said you was turning some heads
    Not on shoulder's though, but between gentlemen's legs
    What a coincidence, I star in porno's, you just in the first scene
    Which means, you lack the stamina to star in the whole thing

    those were pretty nice from Porno Lady, and the rest were ok.

    but Scene takes it based on consistency and better execution on his concepts, it wasn't one-sided though. vote - Scene1.
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  8. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    watch me post insults, n she'll write a story with her verse
    the only porno where the second halfs more boring than the first...

    n you cant even rap good, watch me relaying the truth..
    PL sleeps alone...even your concepts and punches are more dated than you
    ^this line .. & every line that followed also.


    Your custom text says you a man of action, so make no hesitation
    On what you read after you wave your cursor over your reputation

    Last RBL review, Grimet said you was turning some heads
    Not on shoulder's though, but between gentlemen's legs
    ^this was alli was feeling from porno .. some just didnt connect for me.

    vote - scene.
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  9. Taylormade`

    Taylormade` New Member

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    Scene:

    fat broad, when it comes to cap's, ill ensure this dame's peeled...
    hips dont lie, n yours say porno and user order the same meals
    heard couples could manage change...and i did question
    i wanted to see how love handles
    and looked no further than her mid section
    your name make sense - but not because you're hot with the scribbles
    with track listenin...
    most guys finish porno early and shut it off in the middle

    verse was average

    whatever I didn't quote was weak girl-based punchlines that didn't have enough impact to for me to quote

    but what I did quote was dope

    Porno:


    Cuz your record is confusing, 2 no shows, 1 wack butterball
    And you're soon to join them, cuz once you Scene1 you've seen em all
    In the last few weeks, it's been easy for us to overlook you
    Ordering movie snacks has lasted through Scene1 and the previews
    Last RBL review, Grimet said you was turning some heads
    Not on shoulder's though, but between gentlemen's legs

    verse was ight, but you continue to write real simple stuff, try some more complex

    it might be hard if you were writing with this style forever but try


    v/ Scene1
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  10. Rezor_X

    Rezor_X New Member

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    Vote = Scene1


    I was considering voting for PL, and I almost did. Then... I broke the verses down. I read both verses twice... and after reviewing them I really think Scene took it. His closer, "Mid Section", and "Hips dont lie" were all dope. Also his verse was very consistent. PL had some nice lines, no doubt, but Scene got it.

    Good battle
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