11. Retulen Reactus (5-1) vs 12. Zeitgeist (5-1)

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  1. U S E R

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  3. Retulen Reactus

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    ................................trying to post in...with probs

    the reply thing aint working right for me

    ignore this post!!
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  6. Retulen Reactus

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    The truth:

    When my fingers touch the key’s my words’ll hurt your rhymes
    Cause ya skills no where to be found..like Cale at supper time
    Think your nice?.. realize that you lost from the start
    I’ll Hit you in the shoulder ‘blade’ so hard it’ll pierce ya heart
    This win's a piece of cake, you can't hang with me Zeit
    And I’d say you suck..but it’s in the mag every week
    Blasting this geek with my heat…I roll with tech’s g
    You’re a fake see, the only thing you known to roll with is tek’neek
    Like ya name ya punches are shit, my name? remember it
    Cause the only time your spit is hot..is when chewin peperment
    You have no skill…you have no life… n like ya girls sex drive…
    The only time you causing sparks, is on the 4th of July
    Beat me? ya skills unseen.. like usernames muscle, man
    Thrustin jabs.. have the voters goin "pow n bam" like batman
    Retulen's destroying this whore… chasing ya back n forth.
    Then slam your face into the wall...like an electrical chord.
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  7. SAYONCE

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    I got this foolish faggot Reactus begging and pleading for his life
    And going down on one knee..like when Mcartney licks his wife
    But it aint all strife...theres Cash and Hope in ya future
    Cause ima send you to see Bob and Johnny,you fucking loser
    Your verse meets all expectations...bitten puns and word flips
    Cause Ret cheats on netcee's ..worse than Trap's girl did
    Ima leave this herb ripped..ashamed and whining till he leaves
    And expose the bitch in Double R.....an i aint talkin 'bout Eve
    Now,i aint saying he's stupid..and i aint saying he's queer..
    ..but on his I.Q test..Ret got make up and tears
    Now ima raise up ya fears...ya av say's "no to cyber sex"
    .......But you had no choice to this rape over the net
    Im asking questions of your style..but you too weak willed to win
    While Zeit drops millionaire spits..Ret's writ's can only Phill-Bins
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  8. Retulen Reactus

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  9. Ring

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    this battle was aight, i've seen you both come better..but i feel that zeit took this one. damn RR, another username line? that shit is really starting to get old. zeit just had newer concepts and was more creative..

    vote - zeit
    return the favor?
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=664155
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  10. Forculus

    Forculus Registered Winner

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    Retulen`s good was....

    When my fingers touch the key’s my words’ll hurt your rhymes
    Cause ya skills no where to be found..like Cale at supper time
    Think your nice?.. realize that you lost from the start
    I’ll Hit you in the shoulder ‘blade’ so hard it’ll pierce ya heart
    This win's a piece of cake, you can't hang with me Zeit
    And I’d say you suck..but it’s in the mag every week

    rest were kinda blah, and ehhh.


    Zeitgeist`s good was....

    Your verse meets all expectations...bitten puns and word flips
    Cause Ret cheats on netcee's ..worse than Trap's girl did
    Ima leave this herb ripped..ashamed and whining till he leaves
    And expose the bitch in Double R.....an i aint talkin 'bout Eve
    Now,i aint saying he's stupid..and i aint saying he's queer..
    ..but on his I.Q test..Ret got make up and tears

    those were nice. lol @ us both using a line about traps girl.


    I`ma give this one to Zeitgeist. Just felt his verse a little more. Retulen was decent, but just didn`t have enough to take the win this week. Decent battle. Holla.

    v/ Zeitgeist
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  11. Tri Optix

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    hmm..

    Retulen has a nice style..for some reason he reminds me of canibus...i dont know why, just does...came solid and consistent..nothing too hard, nothing too soft..

    best line:
    This win's a piece of cake, you can't hang with me Zeit
    And I’d say you suck..but it’s in the mag every week


    Zeits pretty nice with it...i didnt get some of your lines..i dont know if they were personals or what..a lot of name dropping..

    best line:
    Ima leave this herb ripped..ashamed and whining till he leaves
    And expose the bitch in Double R.....an i aint talkin 'bout Eve

    overall, i think i gotta go with Retulen for a more consistent verse..more solid..

    vote=Retulen Reactus
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  12. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    good battle, both had nice verses

    Think your nice?.. realize that you lost from the start
    I’ll Hit you in the shoulder ‘blade’ so hard it’ll pierce ya heart
    This win's a piece of cake, you can't hang with me Zeit
    And I’d say you suck..but it’s in the mag every week

    ^nice

    zeit had some nice lines too

    Now,i aint saying he's stupid..and i aint saying he's queer..
    ..but on his I.Q test..Ret got make up and tears
    Now ima raise up ya fears...ya av say's "no to cyber sex"
    .......But you had no choice to this rape over the net

    vote- retulen he had better punches
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  13. Retulen Reactus

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  14. JACKET

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    vote=tie


    you guys were equally wack...I wasn't feelin much of any aspect of these verses at all...

    I got this foolish faggot Reactus begging and pleading for his life
    And going down on one knee..like when Mcartney licks his wife

    could you be more blatant and uncreative???...why not just say "going down on one knee like a guy giving head"...just as bad...lol
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  15. Donis

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    not feelin either verse all that much


    zeit be callin poor lil trap out (heartless bastard)


    ha


    but naw - i got the first cat takin this slightly


    a couple more amusing lines than his counterpart


    v - retulen
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  16. SAYONCE

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    up one..

    To answer "rawdogg" about my lack of creativity...

    The "going down on one knee/mcartrneys wife" line was clearly over your head....
    Paul Mcartneys wife has one leg..hence.."going down on ONE KNEE"....

    The problem here wasnt my lack of creativness..it was YOUR lack of knowledge..

    Please dont come into my battles again...
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  17. Lares Viales

    Lares Viales EWG Martyr

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    Naw Zeit killed.

    The bob/ cash line really did it for me. Fuckin he had powerful and better punches. RR seemed played to me in ways and didn't execute the lines right.

    zp.
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  18. Papermate

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    When my fingers touch the key’s my words’ll hurt your rhymes
    Cause ya skills no where to be found..like Cale at supper time
    Think your nice?.. realize that you lost from the start
    I’ll Hit you in the shoulder ‘blade’ so hard it’ll pierce ya heart
    This win's a piece of cake, you can't hang with me Zeit
    And I’d say you suck..but it’s in the mag every week

    nice section by retulen right there

    ma leave this herb ripped..ashamed and whining till he leaves
    And expose the bitch in Double R.....an i aint talkin 'bout Eve
    Now,i aint saying he's stupid..and i aint saying he's queer..
    ..but on his I.Q test..Ret got make up and tears

    Nice section there by Zeit

    Im asking questions of your style..but you too weak willed to win
    While Zeit drops millionaire spits..Ret's writ's can only Phill-Bins

    That could have been real ill but sounds a little forced

    so, based on consistency

    vote - retulen reactus
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  19. SAYONCE

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    second up...

    oh,just to clear it up..the "name drops" Tri-Op didnt get are Bob HOPE and Johnny CASH...

    pz...
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  20. eye of the tiger

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    NOT A VOTE

    But it aint all strife...theres Cash and Hope in ya future
    Cause ima send you to see Bob and Johnny,you fucking loser

    ill

    I`d vote but I`m not in the RBL this week

    Zeit get at my aim - therisensoul
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