#11. Reterik 7-2 vs. #12. Pencill 7-2

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  1. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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  3. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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  4. QuicK SyllaBle

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    QuicK SyllaBle, Apr 5, 2004
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  5. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    Bitch.

    I slam ho’s while im known to be rippin weaks
    You were EA Sports, but im the whole reason for a winnin streak
    EA was just a front i leave skull's bakin G
    Plus Sports was in the champ match coz half the votes came from me!!
    No one will ever know this cat starving Jerome bettis fame
    When this battle is more over matched then a long tennis game
    Im doubtin geeks but Ahem'll feel my damp wrath
    Coz im a fuckin General, and u belong in the boot camp match
    Its funny when oz and I ghost wrote, you fuckin bitch
    Coz after we said we’d stop writin for u, u up’n quit
    Im sick of ur wack ass, but watch him deny it all
    Yet next week he’ll be aim’n me sayin “I need 8 lines dog”
    Forever u’ll be all text watch as my jaws flex
    How you even gonna claim to be original
    When u prolly asked 10 other peeps for a concept
    You still remain a no name like reterik who
    It seemed everyone was writin for EA….EXCEPT FOR YOU



    gluck..peace
    QuicK SyllaBle, Apr 5, 2004
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  6. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    fucking faggot...chea..

    This herbs a daredevil facing me wastes bars and always stalls…
    This bitch will be fallin’ off quicker then Annie Taylor at Niagara Falls…
    Opshins is either nice or wack wholly sums up you…
    Cause like a scantron pencil, you gotta be number two…
    I go off the top...like when Oneduh was last in the league…
    You've been on a roll, but bound to fall off….like sesame seeds…
    Kids with fake links….this league is a fucking sin….
    What's worse? that or in predictions for yourself to win…
    I single handedly Snuff you like a bindle stiffer hitchhiken…
    You have 1 hand on a guys balls like you was winnin' the hesiman…
    Kids so fuckin stupid..ALL his punches begging "Flip me, Flip me"…
    Fuck Seasame Street, Opshins learned how to count from J-Kwon's tipsy…
    Ya told your boys you got ya mind right, hoping its true…
    Yeah, you got some good open mics, now you gotta learn to use em’…
    I skate circles around fools what u think im gonna do to you, bet?
    Your like Goldberg from Mighty Ducks...only good in front of the net...

    goodluck.
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  7. Dark-Vybe

    Dark-Vybe VYBE

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    I slam ho’s while im known to be rippin weaks
    You were EA Sports, but im the whole reason for a winnin streak
    EA was just a front i leave skull's bakin G
    Plus Sports was in the champ match coz half the votes came from me!!
    heh, direct, on point, nothin special, still straight
    No one will ever know this cat starving Jerome bettis fame
    When this battle is more over matched then a long tennis game
    Im doubtin geeks but Ahem'll feel my damp wrath
    Coz im a fuckin General, and u belong in the boot camp match
    the fuck was that? nothin good, boot camp line was ok play, eh
    Its funny when oz and I ghost wrote, you fuckin bitch
    Coz after we said we’d stop writin for u, u up’n quit
    lol, ouch
    Im sick of ur wack ass, but watch him deny it all
    Yet next week he’ll be aim’n me sayin “I need 8 lines dog”
    lool, oouch
    Forever u’ll be all text watch as my jaws flex
    How you even gonna claim to be original
    When u prolly asked 10 other peeps for a concept
    You still remain a no name like reterik who
    It seemed everyone was writin for EA….EXCEPT FOR YOU
    lmao, ooouch!!

    dude got personal, i guess its true?
    i think it is, shit got funny at the end, you coulda did without the 1st 6 linmes or so
    used the same concept tomany times tho, got repetative, still worded well & witty i like'em



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    This herbs a daredevil facing me wastes bars and always stalls…
    This bitch will be fallin’ off quicker then Annie Taylor at Niagara Falls…
    nah ehh
    Opshins is either nice or wack wholly sums up you…
    Cause like a scantron pencil, you gotta be number two…
    lol, cool name play
    I go off the top...like when Oneduh was last in the league…
    You've been on a roll, but bound to fall off….like sesame seeds…
    lmao
    Kids with fake links….this league is a fucking sin….
    What's worse? that or in predictions for yourself to win…
    I single handedly Snuff you like a bindle stiffer hitchhiken…
    You have 1 hand on a guys balls like you was winnin' the hesiman…
    ehhh, coulda did without those4
    Kids so fuckin stupid..ALL his punches begging "Flip me, Flip me"…
    Fuck Seasame Street, Opshins learned how to count from J-Kwon's tipsy…
    rotfffffff.....
    Ya told your boys you got ya mind right, hoping its true…
    Yeah, you got some good open mics, now you gotta learn to use em’…
    I skate circles around fools what u think im gonna do to you, bet?
    Your like Goldberg from Mighty Ducks...only good in front of the net...
    ehh, nah, didnt like the way you finished, you woulda had this would you had a better finish then this, you just ehhh

    you had the battles 2 best/funniest lines, but i felt your verse held more bland content, plus he had the EA shit on ya, you didnt do much to be direct, cept the vote foe self line an it was only ok, wasnt funny at all
    #2 line was cool, but yea, pen edged this 1 out, kept my intrest alil more, kept direct even tho he almost over did it with the same concept...


    sooo vote = Pencill
    Dark-Vybe, Apr 6, 2004
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  8. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    LETS



    SWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
    QuicK SyllaBle, Apr 6, 2004
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  9. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    It wasnt recycled, but I cant find a link, so fair is fair

    edit: LMFAO @ AHEM SAYING ALL THESE VOTES DONT COUNT
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  10. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    oz, it was recycled or somethin, i got to the bottom of it, edit it out, or i will....ps, please dont clog the thread or you'll have -3 on your battle to start...:)

    pps, clogging means 1 more post, so dont respond to this....jus keepin it clean
    headless verseman, Apr 6, 2004
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  11. JABBER JAW

    JABBER JAW New Member

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    not a great battle for top dogs but i fucks with ahem on this one i just think each bar had more impact to the punch so therefore vote ahem. aight shit to the both though.
    JABBER JAW, Apr 7, 2004
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    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    SWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
    QuicK SyllaBle, Apr 7, 2004
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  13. oatmeal lungs

    oatmeal lungs I have the drip

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    vote Reterik, more creative punches and some shit that made me luagh. Overall a cool battle some personals I didnt get, but thats not my fault. Opshins best lines were to me his opener and some lines were just blah ok your dissing him. Reterik had some funnier lines in there and some better punches with a bit more consistancy.
    oatmeal lungs, Apr 8, 2004
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  14. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    just for the record...i dont even do open mics...so i dunno where he got that line
    QuicK SyllaBle, Apr 8, 2004
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  15. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    enough opsins, 1 more and its vote deduction time....not a threat, just sayin

    lets keep it a lil clean
    headless verseman, Apr 8, 2004
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  16. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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    i would'a taken vote from him already.. i read more of his bitchin than the battle.

    vote = opshins.

    better verse, ahem didnt impress me at all, i thought it was boring to my taste. opshins had some real nice personals.
    S-M-O-K-E, Apr 9, 2004
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  17. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote = Opshinz

    in a close one, will breakdown later
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  18. Terry

    Terry Lost Cause

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    v - Opshins

    He killed it with the personals.
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  19. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    "Its funny when oz and I ghost wrote, you fuckin bitch
    Coz after we said we’d stop writin for u, u up’n quit
    You still remain a no name like reterik who
    It seemed everyone was writin for EA….EXCEPT FOR YOU"

    ^those were some good personals, but thas all i was really feelin from Opshins. The rest was kinda bland, not too clever. Some personals got repetitive. Decent verse though.

    "I go off the top...like when Oneduh was last in the league…
    You've been on a roll, but bound to fall off….like sesame seeds…
    Kids so fuckin stupid..ALL his punches begging "Flip me, Flip me"…
    Fuck Seasame Street, Opshins learned how to count from J-Kwon's tipsy…"

    I liked ^those a lot from Ahem. His verse was pretty funny. The #2 pencil line was played, but the rest were decent. He was more clever than Op. He got this wit consistency, and havin my fav line of the battle (sesame seeds one).

    Vote: Ahem
    Imperial, Apr 9, 2004
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  20. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    2-1...literature, vect, and terry don't count. Sherlock will count when he edit's his break down in.
    Let's get some detailed votes like FYIFB and Oatmeal​
    iLL Script., Apr 9, 2004
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  21. Terry

    Terry Lost Cause

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    How mine don't count.
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