E the Real South Champion... wait who'd you beat? just stop man a grain of talent? that would make me a whole crop land third rock from the sun about all he remembers in science explains his shots & punches like bartenders to clients Not bad opener you have here... only thing is i saw some concepts like this before.. nothing fresh.. nah mean jay leno chin, pinnochio nose, beauty sleep? a message to rest seen better faces done by retarded kids with etch a sketch Reject still conceded & the truth you’ll recollect as defeated Offered himself to women, but she didn’t accept cheap gifts first one seemed an attempt at a personal... but holds no weight... second line seemed like filler... 5th degree? Here's the 3rd, Nasif is better then him- at worst last week he barely got to the Orange's as Mexicans at work entrepreneur in rap? enjoy claiming a dead or empty stock? On a roll... only if his girlfriend begged em to be on top lol not bad... the first 2 lines i dont get at fuckin all... the second lines of punches had me chucklin tho Can Mars sell us? were still on earth... so no is about clear guess your living proof there's no intellegent life out there punch your scrawny head down so fast, I'll erase your neck your girl needs liquor & a reason, mine a place for sex ^ wtf does the first line have to do with anything... can mars sell us? were still on earth... wtf does that mean.. lol.. the last 2 lines seem like good setups for a punch... or half a punch.. but your wording is all wrong.. lace anthrax to a scratch & sniff stickers, no terrorist heart voters never had a telescope, so who cares for this Mars Dr.Omen critique's for weeks, yet nothing made him skilled face looks like a pitchers mound? then I'll level the playing field the first 2 lines were filler... last two lines was cool... played concept tho Deserves a padded room, white vest with a pleed for freedom Real artists need a place to show talent, you need a reason hmm.. iight closer alot of your punches didnt make no sense and was irrelevant to the setup... had 1 nice one i liked in your entire verse which i laughed at... not bad tho.... Marsellus E Tha Real? guard ya shit, cause ur far from sick and your record is only two wins, like RAR & ZIP nice opener... come on RapMusic, after this battle this hoe goes cuz outta 4 battles his only 2 wins were no shows so do us all a great favor and up ya skill level dude cuz im new to da north but check tha ranks, IM STILL AHEAD OF YOU personals were sort of weak... but at least was applicable to the situation... unlike the conjured up ones E spoke on... im not interested in all dat bullshit u got in ya mouth im creepin on a come up, u can take my spot in da south u pussy, slangin muffins, im tellin yall, hes bangin nothin u fuckin fag, im top of the line, your just danglin from it first 2 lines are filler... last 2 was iight tho.. nothing spit fuckin tacular.. laughin at me, but you'd never ride, you half of a G u only rollin out when i push u from da passenger seat sellus can be ur mentor since u have no skill to measure dog and u can tag along with a real emcee, i'll call u cheddar bob lol.. first 2 bars had me laughing.... shit was a nice setup and follow up... last 2 lines was blah tho... i dont even know why you used it.. serious i know you had your little moment of fame, its gone though cause u were only tight for a couple of days like cornrows ^ eh.... ur whack dude, but theres a long list of peeps thats feelin me i'd put this win on my record, but dont wanna dirty my sig like nicotine (cig) j o o k, this emcee looks like suttin i found, boy im gunnin this clown i dont believe he advanced to the north, i think he snuck in some how first 2 bars were eh... last 2 was a iight personal attack at him... not bad... not fuckin great this whole battle is full of typical rapmusic b.s. bitching and whatevers.... so yall can bitch even more at me for whom i vote for cuz i know someone will.. overall marsellus took this battle... e didnt have much for what i liked.. a lot didnt make sense to me.. maybe im just an idiot..but i doubt that... mars had a couple good lines... but shit was more prevalent to the battle when it came to personals also... unlike E's conjured shit... vote- Mars. take it or leave it i dont care.