11 Joseph Q Castro 11-1 vs Tony Elbow 6-1

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  1. Solar~Eclipse

    Solar~Eclipse New Member

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    Tony Elbow,

    Flow was good, had some nice Solid Punches/Personals In There, Also Had Some Week Filler Stuff, Could Have Used a Little More attack


    Joseph Q Castro,

    Flow was good, had some nice punches/personals, had a couple week moments, but other then that just had a little more attack

    Vote=Joseph Q Castro
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  2. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    Peeped ya prom pics-> your big head squashed in that small hat
    ‘n I’m sure your bitch’s all that..once you get her off crack
    fall back or knives’ll split your face ‘n eyes man
    ‘n I’ll blaze you and the rest of your interracial boy band
    haha dis ain’t foolin nobody, you made a slip up mistake
    now stop lying,
    we all know the bitch ‘n the last pic was ya date

    hahaha


    run bitch run or the gun clip come ‘n I’ll be takin your breath
    when I try’d to snatch his chain I ended up breakin his neck
    scrawny bitch, you can’t harm me, shit I’ll smash teeth
    ‘n increase ya sex life by shootin another whole in ya ass cheeks
    last week I made stoopid look stupid, I came ill dude
    this week your prom pics did the same to you

    ouch... i don't see many flaws in tony's verse, very consistant, nice mutlis.. flowed welll


    im top 5 audio or text, your shook....be honest
    your just the guy that make the fucking lists and puts me on it

    that was my favorite line of the battle

    this aint just a verse, c'mon son........my shits a movement
    so if by chance you win, know it took...
    - 18 Lines
    - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=757188
    - The Royal Penis
    - AlphaOmni
    .................................and Jay Reez to do it

    tight closer, rest was lackluster.. opener was decent, but basically you just said your gonna beat him, and yea... you didn't really do all that great a job of beating him...

    I was gon' go Komplexx on your ass, but this I wouldnt dream..
    cus when I beat everyone as Komp, there was competition in the league

    i thought this was dumb, first it's a concept that been used many times, second... theres probably more competition now then there was then... especially if that was the time you battled demik for the title........


    anyway... DH tried, but Tony was better.... more lines, more punches... more everything...

    vote-Elbow
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  3. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    I was Komplexx when the RBL first started back up, nebs serge, etc..

    so you know
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  4. TRiPHeKTa

    TRiPHeKTa Philadelphia Eagles Fan

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    Bar for Bar Comparison Key
    Aweful =*
    Sub Par =**
    Great =***
    Superb =****
    Quotable =*****

    Final Tally...
    1)Joseph Q Castro...17*'s
    2)Tony Elbow...15*'s

    Vote =Joseph Q Castro



    Bar I...
    1)Joseph Q Castro...**
    2)Tony Elbow...***

    Bar II...
    1)Joseph Q Castro...***
    2)Tony Elbow...****

    Bar III...
    1)Joseph Q Castro...***
    2)Tony Elbow...*

    Bar IV...
    1)Joseph Q Castro...***
    2)Tony Elbow...**

    Bar V...
    1)Joseph Q Castro...**
    2)Tony Elbow...***

    Bar VI...Closing lines...
    1)Joseph Q Castro...****
    2)Tony Elbow...**
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  5. Grandiose

    Grandiose five large

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    Dishnour took it with an all round better verse. The closer was original as well.
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  6. Rygar's Penis

    Rygar's Penis New Member

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    lines i liked:

    fall back or knives’ll split your face ‘n eyes man
    ‘n I’ll blaze you and the rest of your interracial boy band

    Joseph ain’t mean, he’s just an average Joe


    but:
    run bitch run or the gun clip come ‘n I’ll be takin your breath
    when I try’d to snatch his chain I ended up breakin his neck
    scrawny bitch, you can’t harm me, shit I’ll smash teeth

    wtf he aint scrawny lol

    we all know your a homo whos played...so face it
    first dude to change his own custom text to say some gay shit
    im top 5 audio or text, your shook....be honest
    your just the guy that make the fucking lists and puts me on it
    your shits not hot, im bout' to match this gay queen
    why the fuck you think I just dropped twelve to match your eighteen?


    seen Tony come better...

    vote = Dissy
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  7. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    Tony
    was stuck on the picture for too many punches... it was an nice verse, flow was cool and punches were felt, but it needed something else outside of the picture shit

    Castro
    was tripping for a minute, but still came out wit some nice flows, solid punches and overall a better verse... that shit on ya head did look rediculous tho... lol

    Vote Castro
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  8. Fynal Draff

    Fynal Draff New Member

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    Tony

    fall back or knives’ll split your face ‘n eyes man
    ‘n I’ll blaze you and the rest of your interracial boy band
    rip up the place, smack this hoe..Tony’s got savage pros
    and Joseph ain’t mean, he’s just an average Joe

    ‘n increase ya sex life by shootin another whole in ya ass cheeks

    That right there is really all that I was feelin. the rest was alright but nothing spectacular... the fire place line and the money / company couplet were just blah. The rest was alright like I said other then the lines I quoted. Those were nice.

    Jospeh

    im top 5 audio or text, your shook....be honest
    your just the guy that make the fucking lists and puts me on it
    your shits not hot, im bout' to match this gay queen
    why the fuck you think I just dropped twelve to match your eighteen?
    this aint just a verse, c'mon son........my shits a movement
    so if by chance you win, know it took...
    - 18 Lines
    - http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=757188
    - The Royal Penis
    - AlphaOmni
    .................................and Jay Reez to do it


    Enjoyed those lines. Closer was pretty original. The rest was alright some cool lines. I think your strong poin there was conistency.. I wasn't feelin the no ego line to much.. but I think you came nice with some personals

    Vote - Joe
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  9. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Good verse dissy, I wish you just did that from the get-go without all this extra clogging tho :)
    I'd vote for ya, but your way up anyway. I loved the opener, simple yet effective, couldnt believe no one else used it. Lots of good lines just shittin on duke in there. Good drop.

    For the record....Tony Elbow didnt break any rules. People arent allowed to post pics, but they can post urls <-- was the old rule, I dont even think there is a rule anymore. Its more a bitchmove to use someones pic without having one of their own, but not against rules. Also he never did agree to the line limit, so he didnt break a rule there either.
    Good battle tho :)
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  10. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    to the top
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  11. Torch1

    Torch1 Speak Pimp Fluently

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    Tony Elbow,

    Flow was good, had some nice Solid Punches/Personals In There, Also Had Some Week Filler Stuff, Could Have Used a Little More attack


    Joseph Q Castro,

    Flow was good, had some nice punches/personals, had a couple week moments, but other then that just had a little more attack

    Vote=Joseph Q Castro
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  12. Super.

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    vote dissy
    he shit on this kid, and did less lines and didnt use a pic.
    tony if your gonna do that, you gotta be really creative with it, your shit was just boring and unenjoyable.
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  13. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    dissy wins
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