11. Joey Donuts 10-2 vs. 12. Headless Verseman 18-5

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    The RBL Rules and Regulations


    Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
    No Questions Asked Policy. You Break A Rule. You Pay The Price Period. NO EXCEPTIONS. Dont Care If Your Janitor/Jeff.
    Now On To The Complete Rules And Regulations.

    -BATTLES ARE DUE FRIDAY, MIDNIGHT WESTERN!
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    -You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links
    in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
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    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
    line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines. If YOU DO go over the maximum line limit set. YOU LOSE -1 Vote For Each Couplet Over
    ** In a 3-Way Battle The Maximum Line Limit Is 20 Lines/10 Couplets



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  2. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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  3. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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  4. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    eh, decided not to no show, so here's a shitty verse


    im smackin his people's/
    think Joey's a gonna be a good show
    then u dont know what happens to sequels/
    this actor is feeble, and his shits really flat/
    everybody can master donuts look at nascar victory laps/
    he's not willin to scrap, leave u mauled from triggers/
    cuz takin shots of JD aint involvin the liquor/
    upset huh queen, i bet my cream/
    that i can take away J with my pressure D/
    his shits lame, plus he's flirtin....kid spits quick game/
    battin his lashes callin me Pappi like Hemingway's nickname/


    match it


    u win, but i dont like no showing

    and no, for the people who will say this is wack as fuck


    IT IS.....
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  5. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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    Gangsta?who you? Please your states a frantic pitty…
    …only high stakes you were ever involved in was at atlantic city
    Muscle head ass, you’re the type to say “I protect mine!
    Steroids? I don’t pop pills stupid!…I inject mines”
    And in the club, he never dances, just another dead punk that’s relaxin
    When ll cool j’s song came on is the only time head sprung into action
    Everyone knows your ugly, so don’t try to explore, nah kid run
    He’s been in a beautiful struggle, years before talib was
    And I’ll hurt him until the point of vegetables, stupid
    Only reason he’s ‘soaring’ to new heights is incredible brusing
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  6. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    poor multi's, but we got ourself a match
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    Aven Brooks .. bladerunner ..

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    .. Joey Donuts.. :
    Everyone knows your ugly, so don’t try to explore, nah kid run
    He’s been in a beautiful struggle, years before talib was

    .. Headless .. :
    this actor is feeble, and his shits really flat/
    everybody can master donuts look at nascar victory laps/


    .. too tough to call for me .. so i'ma just give ya fellas props for these lines ..
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  8. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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  9. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Headless aint try & its obvious though victory line was good & i felt joey's last 3 bars were ok, not great but consistent enuff to take it IMO

    vote-JD
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  10. Aces Full

    Aces Full I'm Sick...

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    shouldve pretty obvious who won here, headless put in no effort and didnt expect anything from it, but joeys verse didnt impress me much. in the end i gotta give it to JD for a few better concepts. bleh battle...

    v/ JD

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=806180
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  11. Pav_

    Pav_ New Member

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    Vote donuts
    His last 4 lines took it
    Only line i was feelin from headless was that donuts one and it wasnt that good
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  12. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    and no, for the people who will say this is wack as fuck


    IT IS.....
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  13. Stalis Orion

    Stalis Orion DiViNeHaTrEd aka ResiduaL

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    word headless, you can drop the hizzeat when you want to.

    Head had the sequel line I liked, donuts was aight, I liked the liquor line and the closer was decent.
    Dude said he was gone no show, what you kids expect?
    whewwwwwww.

    Donuts,
    opener was decent, I like that impression line, but steroid stuff gettin' old on Headless pretty quickly, I still chuckled though..the LL Cool J and Beautiful STruggle lines were good for what they were...some kids aint' like them pop/current event punches but I think they keep shit fresh so you get points for that.
    I did however, enjoy the closing line. Some might think it was forcedddddd but I thought it was pretty good.
    Ya verse was enough to take down Headless this week.

    Who's Joey Donuts again? I dunno dude's alias.

    Vote=JD in this one, though I think Headless has more text skill than you from what I've read.

    JD=2 dope lines
    Head=2 good lines
    Decently close for what Head dropped but Joey had enough power to take this.

    Word.
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  14. penacILLin

    penacILLin konichiwa

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    joey took dis 1 since headless underestimated him n thought he was gun no show. i wasnt feelin ur style headless it seems like da aim one where u use the // brakets. both came kinda mediocre, joey jus came w/ more consistency, punches, multies were blah on both parts...blah @ top 30 battle...

    vote -- joey
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  15. stick's ghost

    stick's ghost Tommy Johnson

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    vote - Joey
    by a little
    close though
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  16. God.

    God. New Member

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    ok..

    JD got this easy.

    bleh
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  17. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    vote-Joey Donuts

    it was actually pretty close to me, but Joeys lines were more dope...
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  18. Lethal Serenity

    Lethal Serenity New Member

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    I'm going with joey on this one...he came more consisten with his flow, punches, multies, his vocab was bleh... good shit on both parts actually I just think joey took this one...

    Vote: joey
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  19. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Joey Donuts Wins ^^^

    Headless Verseman Loses vvv
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