11. Georgia 6-2 vs. 12. Mr. Chaves 2-0

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  1. David Lama

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  2. Mr. Chaves

    Mr. Chaves New Member

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    i'm doing 16
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  3. Georgia

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    for what?

    i dont even know who you are
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  4. Georgia

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    Mr. Chaves… who??

    shiiiiiiiiiiiiit, i dont even know what to write about







    But fuck it,

    Always thought he was lame, but just to spoil the rep
    He such a no name, I seen newborn’s collectin royalty checks!
    And everything I say is dope, so I purposely smash whores
    While Chaves so borderline wack to the point that his verse is a passport
    Plus a bitch is a female dog, and if this is true then just construe
    That if you toot ya own horn... it’d only bring out the bitch in you
    And none of the girls like him, say they’d hate if they touched it
    Cos a Dick that limp would only pass for a Private Investigator on crutches
    So how could he ever think he was progressin his flows fast
    When this chump’s change’ll only serve as a whole new level for low cash
    And don you a bitch, so take cover as im bombin ya shit
    Or be the biggest white line to hit the street since Abercrombie and Fitch
    But fuck the clichés and wordplay, im raw with raps cos yo…
    Chaves so wack, his verse’ll make last week’s champ match look dope!
    Cos see, I got flow, punches, and etcetera for merkin a scrub





    ^^And why that blank area? Cos now I even got some personals, duh!






    chyea nigga


    jus like that....
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  5. Mr. Chaves

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    i'm here to reign with bullets bitch, so as they spit on your parade
    you think it's rainin cats and dogs the way ya gettin hit with strays
    kid, ya shit is played, past weak, raps is ass cheek
    and i'd knock you out ya prime, but he did that last week!
    ya has been, gassed geek, rappin scripts like a scared child
    with so much excess baggage, ya verse earnin you air miles!
    from shit that was dope, we saw ya skill decompose
    this cat ain't livin in the present like a gift without holes!
    you whiny empty headed bitch, must be new to this stuff, since
    the only thing on Georgias mind is Ludicrous punches!
    ya losin this one quick, you try an grab shottie..?
    i'll put you in an heir bag like an inherited body!
    prepare to be bodied, a heart of gold won't spare you this hell
    cos when i tear open ya chest? i'll be spreadin the wealth
    the top 20? what a joke, why you droppin a verse bitch?


    when you shouldn't have made the cut like an incompetent surgeon.


    why don't you cry about this loss too?
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  6. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Damn this was closer than I expected.

    Q had some good shit.. passport was coo, limp dick ahahaha, biggest white line was gully.. Closer was straight comedy.

    Didn't give Chaves much of a chance after reading that, but I underestimated duke. Started off real strong, first 3 punches were dope.. Maybe a little played but fresh wording, closer was sick. Nice showing here.

    Overall I gotta give the edge to Q, both had about the same amount of dope lines.. Q was jus more consistent through the rest of his verse, present & heir bag lines cost Chaves the win.

    Good shit from both, Vote- Voltron
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  7. -Oz-

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    Quriosity/Georgia/Voltron/Demik


    Plus a bitch is a female dog, and if this is true then just construe
    That if you toot ya own horn... it’d only bring out the bitch in you

    lol Nice

    And none of the girls like him, say they’d hate if they touched it
    Cos a Dick that limp would only pass for a Private Investigator on crutches

    aight



    But fuck the clichés and wordplay, im raw with raps cos yo…
    Chaves so wack, his verse’ll make last week’s champ match look dope!

    ok

    Aight verse, kind of like I said, the best people can only write a few good lines. Honestly though, outside of Hensley, this is the first verse that wasnt my own, where someone strived for some creativity and originality. What I like to see, I feel ya though, how you get motivated to write for someone named Mr Chaves whom ya never heard of. Still decent shit.


    Mr Chaves

    i'm here to reign with bullets bitch, so as they spit on your parade
    you think it's rainin cats and dogs the way ya gettin hit with strays

    ight


    from shit that was dope, we saw ya skill decompose
    this cat ain't livin in the present like a gift without holes!

    blah, nice try tho


    prepare to be bodied, a heart of gold won't spare you this hell
    cos when i tear open ya chest? i'll be spreadin the wealth

    nice

    the top 20? what a joke, why you droppin a verse bitch?


    when you shouldn't have made the cut like an incompetent surgeon.

    blah, this shit done to death, clubsy janitor, handicapped dentist, anything like that is bad. Your verse is still impressive to me, considering I dont know who you are. Most new people flat out suck, you dont, you at least have potential, just need to find better ideas to be creative with. Good battle, closish kind of shit too.

    Vote Voltron
    Yall had about the same amount of lines I liked, and neither had any really bad lines, just average shits, but the lines I liked from Voltron happened to be much better.
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  8. Georgia

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    im not demik


    and i personally happen to think my opener was sick

    but good look on the vote oz



    ...and oneduh
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  9. Exon

    Exon That brand new shit

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    Decent battle here.

    Q.
    Always thought he was lame, but just to spoil the rep
    He such a no name, I seen newborn’s collectin royalty checks!
    [2]
    And everything I say is dope, so I purposely smash whores
    While Chaves so borderline wack to the point that his verse is a passport
    [3]
    Plus a bitch is a female dog, and if this is true then just construe
    That if you toot ya own horn... it’d only bring out the bitch in you
    [4.2]
    And none of the girls like him, say they’d hate if they touched it
    Cos a Dick that limp would only pass for a Private Investigator on crutches
    [3.4]
    So how could he ever think he was progressin his flows fast
    When this chump’s change’ll only serve as a whole new level for low cash
    [2.5]
    And don you a bitch, so take cover as im bombin ya shit
    Or be the biggest white line to hit the street since Abercrombie and Fitch
    [4.5]
    But fuck the clichés and wordplay, im raw with raps cos yo…
    Chaves so wack, his verse’ll make last week’s champ match look dope!
    [3.2]
    Cos see, I got flow, punches, and etcetera for merkin a scrub





    ^^And why that blank area? Cos now I even got some personals, duh!
    [2.5]
    6.9/10

    i like the majority of the lines here, pretty good verse.
    Alot of humor, hard to battle people you dont know ANYTHING about.

    Mr. C
    i'm here to reign with bullets bitch, so as they spit on your parade
    you think it's rainin cats and dogs the way ya gettin hit with strays
    [3.5]
    kid, ya shit is played, past weak, raps is ass cheek
    and i'd knock you out ya prime, but he did that last week!
    [2.5]
    ya has been, gassed geek, rappin scripts like a scared child
    with so much excess baggage, ya verse earnin you air miles!
    [2.1]
    from shit that was dope, we saw ya skill decompose
    this cat ain't livin in the present like a gift without holes!
    [3.6]
    you whiny empty headed bitch, must be new to this stuff, since
    the only thing on Georgias mind is Ludicrous punches!
    [3.2]
    ya losin this one quick, you try an grab shottie..?
    i'll put you in an heir bag like an inherited body!
    [2.6]
    prepare to be bodied, a heart of gold won't spare you this hell
    cos when i tear open ya chest? i'll be spreadin the wealth
    [4.2]
    the top 20? what a joke, why you droppin a verse bitch?


    when you shouldn't have made the cut like an incompetent surgeon
    [2.1]

    6.7/10


    Yeah, the last line was the worst. But overall a pretty impressive verse, i dont think you got the win, but you sure did win some points here, ima have to go with Q for more consistancy.

    v/Q.
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  10. ReX™

    ReX™ dyno mite!

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    Dang wasn't a bad verse from chaves dude... i figured he'd just come wit some regular everyday newb stuff.. it wasn't notin special but it wasn't bad either... keep comin yo... dat wealth line was the best one in your verse though...

    Q had a nice verse though... more consistent den chaves.. had some witty lines... toot ya horn line was nice.. and da closer was funny.. good stuff..

    vote - Q (Voltron)
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  11. Georgia

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    4-0


    and another battle of the week
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  12. Cant Fool Me

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    Quriosity/Georgia/Voltron needs to stop bitting and flipping. I seen all those lines before, cant remember from where. But this kid is one of the biggest flippers/biters I ever seen.
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  13. -Oz-

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    I just said Demik cause it seems like you have that many aliases anymore lol.
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  14. Georgia

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    good try nigga
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  15. Mr. Chaves

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    nah dudes, that ain't me, i'm not a bitch, good battle.
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  16. Hardkore

    Hardkore Blunts@TheBeach

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    voltron:

    mr. chaves:

    wow...this is too close. this match was pretty entertaining. not many played punchlines or metaphors at all. both textcees came pretty nice. um. i'mma give this to mr. chaves because he had slightly nicer wordplay and a decent personal or two that slightly out-edged voltron's verse.

    vote: mr. chaves.
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  17. Willie Dickgood

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    Vote- Georgia



    Chaves was cool...but yea alot of shit jus seemed old school, like the incompetent surgeon shit...GA shit made me laugh a little bit more...some lines were ok and some lines were kinda hot from both...but i think georgia had fresher and more up to date text battlin type punches..not by a landslide tho
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  18. Georgia

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  19. 5-0.cal

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    Georgia.... ive seen 10X the effort son, shouldnt have slept on this kid cuz you didnt know him.

    While Chaves so borderline wack to the point that his verse is a passport
    ^^kinda smart, a lil off

    Or be the biggest white line to hit the street since Abercrombie and Fitch
    ^^aite


    ^^And why that blank area? Cos now I even got some personals, duh!
    ^^this was ya best line in my oppinion, lil bit of comedy

    Chaves.... opener was played as fuck. aside from your weak beggining, i liked ya verse. some good punches, consistent wit flow n all that.

    with so much excess baggage, ya verse earnin you air miles!
    ^funny, good line

    from shit that was dope, we saw ya skill decompose
    this cat ain't livin in the present like a gift without holes!
    ^^wasnt expecting a line like that after the opener, hot shit

    when you shouldn't have made the cut like an incompetent surgeon.
    ^^killed it

    close battle, by Georgia not hitting as hard as usual and Chaves using that played ass cat n dog line. Chaves you came better wit it after that opening, Georgia you had some on point lines. Overall Chaves stayed more consistent and had wittier punches.

    Vote- Chaves
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  20. Georgia

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    ^you can no longer vote in my battles

    incompetence is contagious on RM these days
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