11. Charles (7-3) vs 12. Cryogen (7-3)

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  1. U S E R

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  3. Charles

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    throwing 14 down, I'm out for the weekend.

    I'm sicker than Manson 'n Gracy, slashin' ya pride now..
    ..Cause Charles hasn't ran shit since the Hippies died out..
    When I put my top down,..It makes my Whip look tough
    ..When charles puts his top down..
    He's bout ta get tittie fucked..
    The guys weak as hell, 'n prolly'd be better rebuilt..
    Cause Charles is bitch-made, like ya family sweaters 'n quilts..
    I got C stumblin', and see, my point is cunt..
    ..I'm weedin' the wacks out..
    Handin' Charles Joints and blunts..
    You got no reputation, Cause all ya flows the same..
    ..Charles could walk in Cheers, and no one would know his name..
    Cry's side is feast worthy..If he don't know..the fucks stupid..
    Now the tables have turned..
    ..And I can see C didn't bring much to it..
    Got that tan skin heritage, A mexican foreigner too..
    ..Sportin' a bigger bust-line than the Mexican borders do..
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  5. Charles

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    Coming with that gutter style..

    yo..

    bitten with each alias on b-boys,i have to crush these bitches..
    when my punches are bananas..cry on some monkey business..
    come out swinging?you wont come out that wood closet..
    i make no margin for error..where you've got fuckin books on it..
    im deadly with blades,i'll readily slay when these jerks bust out..
    use ya throat for a blowjob..im the reason gotcha ya work cut out..
    you'll get slapped with a mack n left filled up wit wide holes..
    got many happy memories in ya head..so ima let the good times roll..
    stick to other homo's man..your always tryna putcha dough on me..
    when heads all gassed up..crys the first to try an blow off steam..
    we found out you from texas,so ya cant say anyone blows now..
    so ima leave this hoe-down,like its closing time in his home town..
    youve been a no-body for decades..believe no-one fears ya hoe..
    RM must have 'zero-tolerance'..otherwise youda bin bannd years ago..
    you gotta man to beat..i'll make you utter out random speech..
    see i put a knot in ya stomach....
    ...when usually men got em round ya hands n feet..
    quit blowin you hoe,nobody thinks that ya flowing is dope..
    put monster trucks about..n we'll all wanna getcha show on the road..
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  7. U S E R

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    uppin over no shows
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    uppin over closed
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  9. Noggah

    Noggah Politically Incorrect

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    i think charles got this, he came a little more consistent, punches were a little better, monkey business, good times roll, blow off steam.... Cry had some good lines, a few coulda hit harder i felt.... so i gotta give this to charles

    vote = Charles...

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  10. Caps lock

    Caps lock Iller Than you.

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    vote Charles

    He came more consistent, and better concepts...Cryogen has a nice style, he had a few dope lines but the table turned line is played. Charles hit harder on some lines..he just brought more heat. But Cryo had a dope flow but when it came down to it...Charles took the match..pz,,good battle
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  11. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    I'm sicker than Manson 'n Gracy, slashin' ya pride now..
    ..Cause Charles hasn't ran shit since the Hippies died out..

    nice...

    When I put my top down,..It makes my Whip look tough
    ..When charles puts his top down..
    He's bout ta get tittie fucked..

    looool even tho this was blazay as hell I liked it..


    The guys weak as hell, 'n prolly'd be better rebuilt..
    Cause Charles is bitch-made, like ya family sweaters 'n quilts..

    lmao!! this is nice.. this should make the pp

    I got C stumblin', and see, my point is cunt..
    ..I'm weedin' the wacks out..
    Handin' Charles Joints and blunts..

    this was ok pretty nice..

    You got no reputation, Cause all ya flows the same..
    ..Charles could walk in Cheers, and no one would know his name..

    lol coo

    Cry's side is feast worthy..If he don't know..the fucks stupid..
    Now the tables have turned..
    ..And I can see C didn't bring much to it..

    this is kinda a played concept but ok

    Got that tan skin heritage, A mexican foreigner too..
    ..Sportin' a bigger bust-line than the Mexican borders do..

    coo line..



    as for charles


    bitten with each alias on b-boys,i have to crush these bitches..
    when my punches are bananas..cry on some monkey business..

    man shorten yer lines it will seriously help yer flow...and the readebility

    come out swinging?you wont come out that wood closet..
    i make no margin for error..where you've got fuckin books on it..

    hmm didnt like this much..

    im deadly with blades,i'll readily slay when these jerks bust out..
    use ya throat for a blowjob..im the reason gotcha ya work cut out..

    I dont like these typa lines at all man...sorry

    you'll get slapped with a mack n left filled up wit wide holes..
    got many happy memories in ya head..so ima let the good times roll..

    well the concept is nice.. I liked it..maybe the wordin and the length

    stick to other homo's man..your always tryna putcha dough on me..
    when heads all gassed up..crys the first to try an blow off steam..

    same as the blowjob line..

    we found out you from texas,so ya cant say anyone blows now..
    so ima leave this hoe-down,like its closing time in his home town..

    the set up kinda did it in..when the second lines decent..does nothin for me..but its not weak...

    youve been a no-body for decades..believe no-one fears ya hoe..
    RM must have 'zero-tolerance'..otherwise youda bin bannd years ago..

    again a better setup would have made this a lot nice..otherwise a nice line..

    you gotta man to beat..i'll make you utter out random speech..
    see i put a knot in ya stomach....
    ...when usually men got em round ya hands n feet..

    eehm these type a sex lines need to be either hillarious or not used at all...cause there have been so many plays on em it jus aint funny no more..

    quit blowin you hoe,nobody thinks that ya flowing is dope..
    put monster trucks about..n we'll all wanna getcha show on the road..

    mwah not great...but ok..

    overall

    I am sorry charles ma man..but cryo took you...better readability due to the structure..the choice of words..the set up..the way he put it down...I have to say tho charles had some nice lines and concepts in there...jus some rough spots

    vote cryo
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  12. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    charles niceness:
    come out swinging?you wont come out that wood closet..
    i make no margin for error..where you've got fuckin books on it..
    stick to other homo's man..your always tryna putcha dough on me..
    when heads all gassed up..crys the first to try an blow off steam..
    you gotta man to beat..i'll make you utter out random speech..
    see i put a knot in ya stomach....
    ...when usually men got em round ya hands n feet..

    decent, but nothing but spectacular....

    cry niceness:
    I'm sicker than Manson 'n Gracy, slashin' ya pride now..
    ..Cause Charles hasn't ran shit since the Hippies died out..
    When I put my top down,..It makes my Whip look tough
    ..When charles puts his top down..
    He's bout ta get tittie fucked..
    The guys weak as hell, 'n prolly'd be better rebuilt..
    Cause Charles is bitch-made, like ya family sweaters 'n quilts..
    Got that tan skin heritage, A mexican foreigner too..
    ..Sportin' a bigger bust-line than the Mexican borders do..

    nice flow here.. tittie fucked line was comedy....

    vote- cry

    return the favor vote on theFRANCHISE v. merc
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  13. Are aye wy

    Are aye wy See what happens?

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    Vote cryo

    Better verse
    Liked alot of the punches
    Sweater line was dope
    Charles came decent, but nothin hard hitting
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  14. Awtasee

    Awtasee Your Favourite Celeb'

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    v/cryo

    came a little better.. harder-hitting punches in my eyes
    charles had some REALLY played shit, like margain of error... not the dopest verse

    cryo came pretty nice
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  15. Vember

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    v/charles

    Cryo just didnt have anything, and most the lines were just decent
    charle's margain for error was nice, cryo did that "bust-line" one which has been used be4, then the quilt one wasnt too good, i jus wasnt feelin it at all, charles got this with flow, harder punches, fresher concepts
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  16. Charles

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    4-3.....
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  17. aura

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    cryogen

    "The guys weak as hell, 'n prolly'd be better rebuilt..
    Cause Charles is bitch-made, like ya family sweaters 'n quilts..
    I got C stumblin', and see, my point is cunt..
    ..I'm weedin' the wacks out..
    Handin' Charles Joints and blunts.."

    "Got that tan skin heritage, A mexican foreigner too..
    ..Sportin' a bigger bust-line than the Mexican borders do.."

    charles

    "bitten with each alias on b-boys,i have to crush these bitches..
    when my punches are bananas..cry on some monkey business.."

    "stick to other homo's man..your always tryna putcha dough on me..
    when heads all gassed up..crys the first to try an blow off steam.."

    "youve been a no-body for decades..believe no-one fears ya hoe..
    RM must have 'zero-tolerance'..otherwise youda bin bannd years ago.."

    "you gotta man to beat..i'll make you utter out random speech..
    see i put a knot in ya stomach....
    ...when usually men got em round ya hands n feet.."

    felt a bit more, so

    vote - charles
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  18. MiC TypsOn

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    cryogen




    You got no reputation, Cause all ya flows the same..
    ..Charles could walk in Cheers, and no one would know his name..
    Cry's side is feast worthy..If he don't know..the fucks stupid..
    Now the tables have turned..
    ..And I can see C didn't bring much to it..
    Got that tan skin heritage, A mexican foreigner too..
    ..Sportin' a bigger bust-line than the Mexican borders do..



    charles



    come out swinging?you wont come out that wood closet..
    i make no margin for error..where you've got fuckin books on it..
    im deadly with blades,i'll readily slay when these jerks bust out..
    use ya throat for a blowjob..im the reason gotcha ya work cut out..
    you'll get slapped with a mack n left filled up wit wide holes..
    got many happy memories in ya head..so ima let the good times roll..



    you gotta man to beat..i'll make you utter out random speech..
    see i put a knot in ya stomach....
    ...when usually men got em round ya hands n feet..



    this was what i enjoyed the most from both, im not saying the rest was horrible, it was all decent.. pretty nice battle here....... enjoyed both, but ffrom what i liked the best, my vote goes to:


    charles....... nice tho
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  19. Jason123

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    5-4......common.
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  20. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    v/ cryogen

    I dunno man, charles came decent but he was just lacking something, didnt really seem to hit hard. I been feeling cryo's style though for real, its easy to follow, I really get into his shit, and he seemed to hit a little harder than charles. Pretty nice battle here for real, but at the end of it, I see cryogen taking this home, stay up fellas
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