11. Charles 10-5 vs. 12. Retulen Reactus 7-3

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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  3. Charles

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  4. Charles

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    Sup...

    Saw ya last match..we cud disperse the news..
    Cuz i'll put a Bulletin..
    ...while you make the fake personals..
    Your lines arnt witty..dukes needin a hed scan
    Cuz only React i know thats dope..
    ...is the one thats featuring Redman..
    Saw ya last week..the irony made me crack up twice
    How u say Namix bit Resin..
    ...and then close flippin a Fracture line?
    All have 'Tore-Ret'..Fuck,shit,bitch..im blazin you
    ^^See im usin Paper's wordplay..
    Since last week u showd you think thats okay to do
    Your pussy..cuz if u dnt want me to abuse you..
    you'll let ya sis-go do it all.
    ..just like the way that Dru Hill used to..
    You cant front on skill..so believe that im dope
    Cuz im a Livin Legend..
    .....and after this u'll be neither of those..
    Messin wit me is gd for u..helpd ya shit rappin..
    Cuz I brought out the best in you..
    ...and then i slapped that bitch back in..
    Stop maskin ya badness..dont pout n bitch..
    Cuz if RM Seize-ure wackness..
    ...you'd start ta froth at the mouth n twitch..

    Bye.Bye.

    G'luck.
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  5. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    i need an ext. thought verses was due friday
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  6. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    Granted. You Have Til' Friday Midnight!

    Up' Over No Shows
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  7. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    I wiiiiiiiiiiiiiin


    give u props cuz you tried- but I peeped and it was nothin
    so grab some tannin lotion- cuz you'll need it for this sonnin
    My rhymes divine,- why you can barley right a punchline
    You beat scientz? -Well consider me albert Einstein
    Fuckin, with ret’ll leave ya maimed, our skills the same?
    Charles known to- ‘steal’ more lines the titanic’s frame
    My text, is untouchable, and i insist your feeble at best
    The only swings you throwing,- are the one’s at recess
    Kid you blew your chance.. and yet, you still flippin phant
    all your shits ‘offal’,like butchered entrails in sewage plants
    Ret’s smashing this whore, first to get knocked to the floor
    Then I’ll slam your dome into the wall..like an electrical chord
    who cares where your from, u ride the champ to the rally
    u're stuck up his ass which proves why I left u dead in ‘cali’
    My shit gets huggs and arm-fulls, all you get is snarls
    Even Queen Elizabeth, held the crown longer then charles
    Bash in ya chest, slice ya by the dome, n hitchu with a left
    Tried to take retulen", but you couldn’t swallow without a neck
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  8. One's Abyss

    One's Abyss New Member

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    good battle

    vote- retulen

    i think he came harder in all aspects..charles had some nice punches, but ret had some firah punches



    Kid you blew your chance.. and yet, you still flippin phant
    all your shits ‘offal’,like butchered entrails in sewage plants
    ^ fira!
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  9. -Kolli$ion-

    -Kolli$ion- 3-1-5

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    Vote=Charles
    I'm definitely feelin that ''tore-ret'' / wordplay line...
    Actually i'm feeling this entire battle...and curious why nobody else voted yet.
    Nonetheless, Charles came with better form...i was able to break down his bars into a better flow..
    Punches were a tad bit harder.
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  10. ~sincere~

    ~sincere~ New Member

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    Vote-Charles
    His punches were much more witty and humerous. Ret your punches were decent but just didn't carry any structure with them.
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  11. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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  12. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    i gotta say vote charles as well...

    came with a witty steeze, nice flow, cool delivery, and just some nice lines

    retulen came pretty off kilter...i mean the concepts were ok at best, and the delivery didnt help....by delivery i mean wording


    v. charles

    gluck fella's
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  13. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    Charles:
    Saw ya last match..we cud disperse the news..
    Cuz i'll put a Bulletin..
    ...while you make the fake personals..
    decent open
    Your lines arnt witty..dukes needin a hed scan
    Cuz only React i know thats dope..
    ...is the one thats featuring Redman..
    haha, pretty str8
    Saw ya last week..the irony made me crack up twice
    How u say Namix bit Resin..
    ...and then close flippin a Fracture line?
    bad wording
    All have 'Tore-Ret'..Fuck,shit,bitch..im blazin you
    ^^See im usin Paper's wordplay..
    Since last week u showd you think thats okay to do
    haha, nice
    Your pussy..cuz if u dnt want me to abuse you..
    you'll let ya sis-go do it all.
    ..just like the way that Dru Hill used to..
    ehhhh
    You cant front on skill..so believe that im dope
    Cuz im a Livin Legend..
    .....and after this u'll be neither of those..
    haha nice concept
    Messin wit me is gd for u..helpd ya shit rappin..
    Cuz I brought out the best in you..
    ...and then i slapped that bitch back in..
    ehhh, decent
    Stop maskin ya badness..dont pout n bitch..
    Cuz if RM Seize-ure wackness..
    ...you'd start ta froth at the mouth n twitch..
    played, not a good ending

    this was an ok verse
    nothing really special
    I've still seen better from u in the past
    it was a decent tho


    Retulen Reactus:
    give u props cuz you tried- but I peeped and it was nothin
    so grab some tannin lotion- cuz you'll need it for this sonnin
    haha, nice little opener
    My rhymes divine,- why you can barley right a punchline
    You beat scientz? -Well consider me albert Einstein
    haha, an ok concept, could've been worded better
    Fuckin, with ret’ll leave ya maimed, our skills the same?
    Charles known to- ‘steal’ more lines the titanic’s frame
    ehhh
    My text, is untouchable, and i insist your feeble at best
    The only swings you throwing,- are the one’s at recess
    haha, nice concept
    Kid you blew your chance.. and yet, you still flippin phant
    all your shits ‘offal’,like butchered entrails in sewage plants
    decent
    Ret’s smashing this whore, first to get knocked to the floor
    Then I’ll slam your dome into the wall..like an electrical chord
    haha, str8 punch
    who cares where your from, u ride the champ to the rally
    u're stuck up his ass which proves why I left u dead in ‘cali’
    ahahahaha, i liked that one ;=)
    My shit gets huggs and arm-fulls, all you get is snarls
    Even Queen Elizabeth, held the crown longer then charles
    haha
    Bash in ya chest, slice ya by the dome, n hitchu with a left
    Tried to take retulen", but you couldn’t swallow without a neck
    lol, pretty good ending

    this wasn't that bad of a verse
    some could've been worded better
    u need to work on ur flow a little more
    but that's not really a big factor in text
    the punches were there
    prett good verse homie


    vote = Retulen Reactus

    I felt like he came more consistent
    charles had some good punches but also had some bad ones
    his verse was off and on
    Retulen had his share of bad punches too but I thought charles had more bad ones
    this was a pretty close battle
    I saw Retulen edging this out tho

    holler!!
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  14. Tri Optix

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    fuuuuuuuck...I had everything broken down and then I got this when I replied..

    The server is too busy at the moment. Please try again later.


    agghh

    anyways

    Charles started poorly, then came back with the Tore-Ret line..then fell again..but ended okay.

    Ret started poorly, but came more consistent so I have to give my vote to Retulen with a more solid verse.

    vote-=Retulen Reactus
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  15. Alien!

    Alien! New Member

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    one of the better battles

    retulen had some bad punches, had some very nice ones also, solid verse

    charles- wasnt feeling your verse... had a nice opener but thats about it

    vote- ret
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  16. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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    who cares where your from, u ride the champ to the rally
    u're stuck up his ass which proves why I left u dead in ‘cali’


    Tight line...

    Vote Ret
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  17. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    nice battle..

    Charles - I liked your verse, I just think you fell off on a couple parts, but the tore-ret line was nice .. made me chuckle but you didn't stand up to that line again..

    Ret - you didn't have ONE line that stood out as much as his one.. BUT your verse on an avg was better chan charles by a little, your wording, concepts.. slightly edged him

    vote = Ret
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  18. Dust-1

    Dust-1 seeeleyetee

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    i'm going with Charles on this


    he had better concepts and punches in my opinion


    Ret didn't really have the flow and his punches were average



    that living legend line was nice

    ecp.
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  19. Mr. Inkwell

    Mr. Inkwell the real.

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    V - Charles

    I wouldn't call his style witty, like Headless did, since it's been used a lot. But he made it flow good, some nice lines throughout his shit

    Ret, most of the time your stuff is nice, you usually have some nice direct stuff.

    But Charles had nicer punches.

    You cant front on skill..so believe that im dope
    Cuz im a Livin Legend..
    .....and after this u'll be neither of those..

    Heh .. Nice.

    Dope battle.
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  20. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    6-4 me

    i'm out. peace.
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