11. A.P.O.S. 2-0 vs. 12. Slay-Eddie 2-2

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Oneduh, Nov 6, 2006.

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  1. Oneduh

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    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
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    in your check in. if no agreement is reached
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  2. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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  3. Slay-Eddie..

    Slay-Eddie.. New Member

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  4. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    Im not lookin for a Top 10 punch, I just wanna shit in the thread
    You the fat kid in high school,You aint tryin to get physical, Edd.
    Im here to bend rappers over and bury the bone
    Shit, with your rep, Ill win this battle on merit alone
    This kids from Virginia..no wonder he buggin
    We'd be fucked right up too, if OUR parents were cousins
    You think you well scholared, you the head honcho?
    All you know is A-B-C like Chinese Food Take-Out Combos
    Dude Ill toss you out the forum, somebody smack this fuckin homo
    Sit and watch you and C-Fal scrappin it out for top bunk in the Dojo
    I aint even tryin, yet u tryin to steal my thunder
    This is just a cruel joke on you courtesy of eyedeal and oneduh
    Drunken Sted-Dad style, dont make me whip out the belt
    Never thought u could overdose on GAYNESS
    Till I realized how high Slay is on himself
    Still almost famous, friday night he in the cut like a scab
    He right up in MySpace thanking Lady Sovereign for the add
    Yeah that line was stupid, I dont know man..Im blown
    Im done playing with you..Im takin my toys and going home.
    But before I let you go, let truth the truth be my purpose
    Remember this..
    Its dudes like you, that get dudes like me into the Top 10...

    With 3 Freestyle Verses
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  5. Slay-Eddie..

    Slay-Eddie.. New Member

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    Huh? - you got the wrong state - dude you screwed up far..
    ..But fuck that..
    ..I wuz thinkin "The Top left" after the first two bars..
    EYEDEAL WTF??
    As far as winnin - how you likin this hoe?..
    Dudes the posterboy for lame - so i'm jus itchin to strike A. POS..
    Plus you think i'd get flawlessed?? please..
    ..I'm so far away from A'..
    ..But that ain't why he's hearin all dem Z's..
    Dis match-up's shaky - he's a bitch, and whenever he start..
    ..Gerald levert won't be the only nigga dyin wit weak heart..
    /\that's a sock below the waist - but you shoulda threw a couple at me..
    Shiit - I gotta do it to the top ten jus to MUFFLE YA SPEECH..
    yea - you stay on top of dicks - we all think THEY're hot, dog..
    So I bet you jus cravin to lay and relish that thought..
    He thinks he's better each week - I wonder how come??
    If you consider that Growth..
    ..Then i'll jus wait another year to peep Budden's new album..
    Ya younger than a thug..
    /\see, i gotcha style to a tee'..
    ..But ion even think i should hit OneDuh wit a club..
    I kno imma make ya record look bad..
    ..But 2? - 1?..
    ..Is jus our debate on how many concepts you have..
    So you can read this whole verse - get mad, and stand in my hate line..
    'N this dude'll have one foot in the grave - 'cuz that's all they'll find..
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  6. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    A.P.O.S.:
    Im not lookin for a Top 10 punch, I just wanna shit in the thread
    You the fat kid in high school,You aint tryin to get physical, Edd.

    Drunken Sted-Dad style, dont make me whip out the belt
    Never thought u could overdose on GAYNESS
    Till I realized how high Slay is on himself


    Slay-Eddie:
    EYEDEAL WTF??
    As far as winnin - how you likin this hoe?..
    Dudes the posterboy for lame - so i'm jus itchin to strike A. POS..

    Plus you think i'd get flawlessed?? please..
    ..I'm so far away from A'..
    ..But that ain't why he's hearin all dem Z's..

    /\that's a sock below the waist - but you shoulda threw a couple at me..
    Shiit - I gotta do it to the top ten jus to MUFFLE YA SPEECH..
    yea - you stay on top of dicks - we all think THEY're hot, dog..
    So I bet you jus cravin to lay and relish that thought..

    So you can read this whole verse - get mad, and stand in my hate line..
    'N this dude'll have one foot in the grave - 'cuz that's all they'll find..


    Ok...first off...you guys went way too many lines, you can't pull that off unless you're amoungst the best (I.E. this weeks champ match). So both of you had a lot of filler...and stuff i wasn't feelin. I quoted everything I was feelin pretty much...my fav from A.P.O.S. was the "high on himself" line. Slay-Eddie was more consistent in my opinion, had some more quotables. The Striking A.P.O.S. was tight and the 4 line segment with "muffle ya speech" and "relish the thought" was nice. Overall, he just came harder.

    But word of advice...next time both of you should post shorter verses, cuz unless you can keep comin with heat throughout the verse, it's gonna be real inconsistent and lead to lack of votes, as you can see. Nobody wants to read 20-30 line battles unless they know u can come hard.

    Vote = Slay-Eddie
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  7. Slay-Eddie..

    Slay-Eddie.. New Member

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    /\sometimes, ya WHOLE verse doesn't hafta be nice in order to get a win.. 1-0 me..
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  8. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    Youre tellin me youre feelin a line that refers to a penis as a hot dog?

    whatever. last time im in here. eddie dont be replying after every fuckin vote.
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  9. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    Im not lookin for a Top 10 punch, I just wanna shit in the thread
    You the fat kid in high school,You aint tryin to get physical, Edd.
    Dude Ill toss you out the forum, somebody smack this fuckin homo
    Sit and watch you and C-Fal scrappin it out for top bunk in the Dojo
    I aint even tryin, yet u tryin to steal my thunder
    This is just a cruel joke on you courtesy of eyedeal and oneduh

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    As far as winnin - how you likin this hoe?..
    Dudes the posterboy for lame - so i'm jus itchin to strike A. POS..
    Dis match-up's shaky - he's a bitch, and whenever he start..
    ..Gerald levert won't be the only nigga dyin wit weak heart..


    v/apos. ionno. i wasnt feeling eddie. he tried too hard with his concept. the hotdog, relish shit is just too played for my taste. apos had some generic disses, but was better than eddie with them.i guess it could go either way.

    decent battle, pz.
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  10. KempoMRK

    KempoMRK The Don Corleone

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    But before I let you go, let truth the truth be my purpose
    Remember this..
    Its dudes like you, that get dudes like me into the Top 10...

    With 3 Freestyle Verses


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    As far as winnin - how you likin this hoe?..
    Dudes the posterboy for lame - so i'm jus itchin to strike A. POS..

    Eddie had the better quotable and was more consistent. Not a great battle, but yeah Eddie just about took it.

    v/ Slay-Eddie
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  11. J-HeAt

    J-HeAt From the Cocaine capital.

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    it was a tight battle... was a bit long n i did find myself gettin bored in btween the verses... but at the end i felt apos shit more... i didnt see nothin really impressive as far as punches n wordplay... i just felt apos more... good match tho.

    v/apos
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  12. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    Man, Slay, ive peeped alot of ya verses, battled u twice, and u always come with the Dopest of concepts, But it seems you can never word them to there full potential, & i always see ppl tellin u that lol... If u could do it, youd be a force to be reckoned with.

    Anyways, APOS:

    Im not lookin for a Top 10 punch, I just wanna shit in the thread
    You the fat kid in high school,You aint tryin to get physical, Edd.

    ^cool

    But before I let you go, let truth the truth be my purpose
    Remember this..
    Its dudes like you, that get dudes like me into the Top 10...

    With 3 Freestyle Verses

    ^flowed terribly, but still cool.

    Slay:

    As far as winnin - how you likin this hoe?..
    Dudes the posterboy for lame - so i'm jus itchin to strike A. POS..

    ^this is what im talkin about... Dope concept... could have been worded better

    kno imma make ya record look bad..
    ..But 2? - 1?..
    ..Is jus our debate on how many concepts you have..

    ^aight.

    So you can read this whole verse - get mad, and stand in my hate line..
    'N this dude'll have one foot in the grave - 'cuz that's all they'll find..

    ^cool... Punch worded better, set-up needs work tho.

    Vote- Slay

    for the Strike A.POS and one foot in the grave line...

    Stay up
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  13. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    3-2 Slay-Eddie wins 2-2 (didn't post links so he gets no win)
    A.P.O.S. loses 2-1
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