107. Rusty Knife vs 108. Ramble

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  1. Serge dot T

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    ..The RBL Rules & Regulations..

    RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time
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  2. Rusty Knife

    Rusty Knife New Member

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    ...in....14 good??.....
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    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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  4. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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    Technique.
    Its clear to me U don’t get bitches, that shits prudent.
    Your advances meet Resistance like high school chemistry students….
    Knuckles are love so my fists giving U a warm embrace.
    My punches getting personal and emotionally attached your face…..
    Nobody knows U, your budding career will never be born.
    Its official, your staying nameless like the Boston Red Sox uniform….
    Disappointed with U, U keep falling so get back in the saddle.
    Attempts at punches so ‘poor’ all I need is an entre fee to win this battle…..
    Got beef with me then end it, forget it then get bent bitch.
    Its obvious your gay cuz men be in your ‘fill in’s’ like Dentists……
    Always an entertainer, U put effort in text battles for a reason.
    Cuz.. U put on the kind of shows that get cancelled after their first season….
    Fulfill the voters needs, shit stay original so follow my lead.
    Its true indeed, that I’m made from a different breed, while your be lucky to breed…..
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  5. Rusty Knife

    Rusty Knife New Member

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    could only think a 12...lol..

    Damn…when it comes to your own ass you got your head up far..
    Ya wack…it sucks when your punches are weaker than my set up bars..
    Getting fed up, hard for someone to be haten tha hero…
    When tha only..
    9 you touch is on ya keyboard between an eight an a zero…
    yeah I know this guys type...losen’s a sport to these fellaz..
    an Ram’s..
    gettin so many letters that his custom text’s jealous
    this fag a lurk near mens bathrooms an wait, poor jerk
    only time Ram’s a hustler is when hes late for work..
    but straight to tha point kid…your technique is wack..
    an Ramble doesn’t suck…his verse takes care a that..
    come to me an want a loss…yeah you’ll get plenty in full..
    Ram only watches tha man show…to see Jimmy Kimmel
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  6. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    This was close...

    Rusty... you started off hot.. then the rest of the verse fell apart.. expecially the closer..

    Ramble.. resistence line was hot.. some good concepts and wording throught the verse.. all in all.. Rusty looked like he might be taking it from the beginning of his verse.. but you shone through with more consistencey..

    Vote-Ramble
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  7. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    up over no shows
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    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

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  9. VerbalWeaponz

    VerbalWeaponz Unholy-Syndicate

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    both had nice verses......

    rusty..
    Damn…when it comes to your own ass you got your head up far..
    Ya wack…it sucks when your punches are weaker than my set up bars..
    Getting fed up, hard for someone to be haten tha hero…
    When tha only..
    9 you touch is on ya keyboard between an eight an a zero…
    (nice...hott lines)

    ramble..
    Technique.
    Its clear to me U don’t get bitches, that shits prudent.
    Your advances meet Resistance like high school chemistry students….
    (tight tight opener......this was ma fav line from both verses)

    but ramble gets ma vote for havein better consistacy as said above

    V-ramble

    Verbal
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  10. Monolith

    Monolith *slowly claps*

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    I dont know...

    I got to give it to Rusty Knife..

    Thats just how I see at the moment

    Maybe Im wrong

    vote=Rusty Knife
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  11. Sidneh Bihar

    Sidneh Bihar New Member

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    Ill lines underlined

    Technique.
    Its clear to me U don’t get bitches, that shits prudent.
    Your advances meet Resistance like high school chemistry students….
    Knuckles are love so my fists giving U a warm embrace.
    My punches getting personal and emotionally attached your face…..
    Nobody knows U, your budding career will never be born.
    Its official, your staying nameless like the Boston Red Sox uniform….
    Disappointed with U, U keep falling so get back in the saddle.
    Attempts at punches so ‘poor’ all I need is an entre fee to win this battle…..
    Got beef with me then end it, forget it then get bent bitch.
    Its obvious your gay cuz men be in your ‘fill in’s’ like Dentists……
    Always an entertainer, U put effort in text battles for a reason.
    Cuz.. U put on the kind of shows that get cancelled after their first season….
    Fulfill the voters needs, shit stay original so follow my lead.
    Its true indeed, that I’m made from a different breed, while your be lucky to breed…..

    could only think a 12...lol..

    Damn…when it comes to your own ass you got your head up far..
    Ya wack…it sucks when your punches are weaker than my set up bars..
    Getting fed up, hard for someone to be haten tha hero…
    When tha only..
    9 you touch is on ya keyboard between an eight an a zero…
    yeah I know this guys type...losen’s a sport to these fellaz..
    an Ram’s..
    gettin so many letters that his custom text’s jealous
    this fag a lurk near mens bathrooms an wait, poor jerk
    only time Ram’s a hustler is when hes late for work..
    but straight to tha point kid…your technique is wack..
    an Ramble doesn’t suck…his verse takes care a that..
    come to me an want a loss…yeah you’ll get plenty in full..
    Ram only watches tha man show…to see Jimmy Kimmel



    VOTE=rusty
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  12. Mr. Nice Guy

    Mr. Nice Guy New Member

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    v/ Rusty

    Thot he came with better punches strait up an thaz what i voted on
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  13. Scribblez

    Scribblez Artistically Inclined

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    this was a close , and a pretty good battle ... both had good punches , both started hot and ended iight.."
    but im voting for rusty on this cuz he took it with slight beter ounches structure and wordplay...

    good battle vote-rusty
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  14. TheEliteNewbie

    TheEliteNewbie New Member

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    This was a good battle.
    Ramble your verse wouldve have been perfect if it didnt have the fillin line and if the closer was reworded.
    but he other lines in your verse were good.
    The boston red sox line and the tv show line were really good.
    Rusty's verse was just like Rambles verse.
    if u didnt have that horrible closer it would have been near perfect.
    Your verse was good but it was anything new.
    most of it were nice flips of stuff done b4 (the opener, nine line and u suck line).
    But they were nice flips and the late for work line was sick.
    This was a very close battle but Ima have to give it to Ramble beacuse he had more orginal and creative punches.
    vote ramble.
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  15. Allanon

    Allanon New Member

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    vote = rusty.

    better flow & better punches. set line was nice.

    ramble ya choppy flow lost it for me even though u had some nice lines. just didnt have as many as rusty.

    *does the shogun*
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  16. M-theory

    M-theory Saint Esprit

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    vote: Ramble

    Ramble was definitely more consistent I think. There were a couple of lines that didn't work out to well, like the 'fill in' one and the closer. But the overall verse was steady.

    Rusty had a few lines that were useful, but only a couple worked out well as I read. You had too much stuff in there that couldn't combat well.
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  17. Rusty Knife

    Rusty Knife New Member

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    voted on...

    LM vs Bronze
    X-Sample vs Scientz
    Aunt Titna vs Retulen Reactus...
    Iglos vs Vizzblade
    Franchise vs The Post Office
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  18. Idi who?

    Idi who? New Member

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    vote - ramble.


    the emotionally attached line was nice n the entree fee was hot 2.....ya flow is very shaky tho...other than that the majority of ur punches were solid...

    rusty...the hustler line was coo...it was creative... see u have creativity...ur concepts were fresh.... they jus werent that hard hittin.....the set up line made me chuckle bbut jus wasnt connectin like it should.... work on harder punches...
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  19. MiC TypsOn

    MiC TypsOn informer

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    rusty 5 votes
    ramble 5 votes

    rusty 5 links
    ramble 5 links

    tie.
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  20. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    To Me: Ramble got it. Both verses were ass, but Ramble was a bit better with his creativity, even though all there lines have been done, but Rusty just came blahzay in the battle. Flow was even, but Ramble edged it out in content...not a good match.

    Ramble wins

    -m.CRUMB
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