Discussion in 'Beats/Producers' started by macmilimeterhyms, Jul 23, 2007.
decent joint.. cant hear the bass on this laptop right now, but melody doesnt really move me.. drums are also kinda weak.. ill relisten later cuz i can tell theres some kinda bass line that might carry the track
Melody is too simple for my taste. It's lacking a bassline, like dah said. Definitely needs a harder kick/snare and some change ups. Its a good start, just seems too open and spacey. So fill the biatch up with some more instruments and let me hear it again. Thanks for the feedback, mac.
Aight, liking the strings in back but def needs a more discernible kick since the one you have is hidden by the stab. Needs a baseline and some switchups, but I am feeling the vibe of the beat. Needs work so keep on it.
thanks dog, I will work on it, the base is kind of drowned now that I listen to it... any advice on the switchups??
try to elevate the bass thats all I like everything else mayne, keep it up.
going on what someone else said, the melody is a lil too plain at the moment..
you could have is strings build up to the chorus and what not
these also sound like stock kicks and snares so that would help it sound more complex if you had something better working for you there in those departments.
i do like the star wars type string in the backround.
if you build on this, you could have something
where did this site go wrong
yeah, pretty much like everybody else said... needs a little more instruments/elements to make the beat sound fuller, and some bass would help too... I liked the sound of the drums tho, but they would have to be a little more powerfull... the basics of the beat is good, just need a little more work.. keep it up man
you sounded like a real live faggot right there
get ya bow legged ass the fuck outta here
This beat is crazy, doesn't need a damn changeup just someone with some ill lyrics. Would change the kick and the hat maybe or just beef them up. Damn, I wish I had made this. That bass sound that pans is something else. Oh at the end if you wanted to change it what does the rest of that loop sound like? Also you should drop that vocal sample at the beginning in some more. That's enough dynamics right there.
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If the title would've been *my first few beats*.. you'd get the constructive criticism from me.. but to come in with a title like that, almost implying that you've created some crazy new shit.. and dissapoint.. then you'll get bashed... and i'm not one to bash, but for that, you will.. keep elevating and next time, humble the titles to your thread....
feel free to check out my music and see i'm not just taking out my ass, i've been where you've been..
I really couldn't think of what to call it, and the thread name was somewhat of a joke, obviously I'm not a known producer so you can't take it word for word
I feel you though
thanks for uppin my thread [dunno]
i see your link ill hit you back when i have sound man..thanks for the up.. fav returned
man i got one thats 108.... lightweight shit. pffffff. haha
i like the samples (if theyre samples, i cant even tell anymore) but i hate the drums. i just like my drums a little more organic and rude. i just think some dirty, live drums would work better with your melody. you could easily make this more attracting if you did that... i think.
check my new one out... and then the 108 bpm (bedlam bullshit)
seems very thin to me.. needs another element to the beat
its not bad a all just dry to me
almost like its the skeleton of a beat...
i like the tempo to it... not feeling the drums though
not bad, not amazing... if the right artist was on it.. it'd prolly turn out hot.. a dukie artist on it, the beat wouldn't save him, lol
its gotta solid foundation, don't let people deter you from doing the kinda music you want... if this is your sound, stick with it.. don't change it up to make other producers think its hot... other producers don't pay you... just a lil advice there, lol
anyway, the beat is ok in my opinion.. not really my steez, but the work put into it shows up... keep building.. keep learnin ya craft, and materializing YOUR sound... if you want to sound like everybody else, by all means have at it, but if you want to be original and stand out ((even if some people hate it)) digg in, grind it out, open the umbrella and keep doin you
i'm deleriously tired so maybe i'm just typin' random madness, lol
big ups to everybody! lmao
stay up kid...
^^thanks for your input
whatever the tsk tsk tsk tks tsk tsk tsk noise is..
and your set.. medley is cool, that noise is juyst a bit too fruity loopsy
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