"105bpm" words can't describe this beat...

Discussion in 'Beats/Producers' started by macmilimeterhyms, Jul 23, 2007.

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  1. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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  2. Dahnamics

    Dahnamics Bitch, Don't Kill My Vibe

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    decent joint.. cant hear the bass on this laptop right now, but melody doesnt really move me.. drums are also kinda weak.. ill relisten later cuz i can tell theres some kinda bass line that might carry the track

    pz
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  3. dhymond

    dhymond The Freshest

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    Melody is too simple for my taste. It's lacking a bassline, like dah said. Definitely needs a harder kick/snare and some change ups. Its a good start, just seems too open and spacey. So fill the biatch up with some more instruments and let me hear it again. Thanks for the feedback, mac.
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  4. Verz

    Verz Dubb Duece

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    Aight, liking the strings in back but def needs a more discernible kick since the one you have is hidden by the stab. Needs a baseline and some switchups, but I am feeling the vibe of the beat. Needs work so keep on it.
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  5. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    thanks dog, I will work on it, the base is kind of drowned now that I listen to it... any advice on the switchups??
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  6. Tomy Gunzzz

    Tomy Gunzzz Twin Caliber

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    try to elevate the bass thats all I like everything else mayne, keep it up.
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  7. P!zZLe

    P!zZLe New Member

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    going on what someone else said, the melody is a lil too plain at the moment..

    you could have is strings build up to the chorus and what not

    these also sound like stock kicks and snares so that would help it sound more complex if you had something better working for you there in those departments.

    i do like the star wars type string in the backround.

    if you build on this, you could have something

    not bad
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  8. MAD SKREWS

    MAD SKREWS Dear Mr.Toilet, Im Da Shi

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    where did this site go wrong
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  9. mart85

    mart85 New Member

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    yeah, pretty much like everybody else said... needs a little more instruments/elements to make the beat sound fuller, and some bass would help too... I liked the sound of the drums tho, but they would have to be a little more powerfull... the basics of the beat is good, just need a little more work.. keep it up man
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  10. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    you sounded like a real live faggot right there

    get ya bow legged ass the fuck outta here
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  11. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    This beat is crazy, doesn't need a damn changeup just someone with some ill lyrics. Would change the kick and the hat maybe or just beef them up. Damn, I wish I had made this. That bass sound that pans is something else. Oh at the end if you wanted to change it what does the rest of that loop sound like? Also you should drop that vocal sample at the beginning in some more. That's enough dynamics right there.

    Check my joints
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1051250
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  12. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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  13. MAD SKREWS

    MAD SKREWS Dear Mr.Toilet, Im Da Shi

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    If the title would've been *my first few beats*.. you'd get the constructive criticism from me.. but to come in with a title like that, almost implying that you've created some crazy new shit.. and dissapoint.. then you'll get bashed... and i'm not one to bash, but for that, you will.. keep elevating and next time, humble the titles to your thread....

    feel free to check out my music and see i'm not just taking out my ass, i've been where you've been..

    Skrews
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  14. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    I really couldn't think of what to call it, and the thread name was somewhat of a joke, obviously I'm not a known producer so you can't take it word for word

    I feel you though

    thanks for uppin my thread [dunno]
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  15. homicidal thoughts

    homicidal thoughts New Member

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    i see your link ill hit you back when i have sound man..thanks for the up.. fav returned
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  16. Diggy Dolemite

    Diggy Dolemite New Member

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    man i got one thats 108.... lightweight shit. pffffff. haha

    i like the samples (if theyre samples, i cant even tell anymore) but i hate the drums. i just like my drums a little more organic and rude. i just think some dirty, live drums would work better with your melody. you could easily make this more attracting if you did that... i think.

    check my new one out... and then the 108 bpm (bedlam bullshit)
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  17. homicidal thoughts

    homicidal thoughts New Member

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    seems very thin to me.. needs another element to the beat

    its not bad a all just dry to me

    almost like its the skeleton of a beat...

    i like the tempo to it... not feeling the drums though
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  18. A.D. aka Alpine Demencia

    A.D. aka Alpine Demencia AlpyneProductions.com

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    not bad, not amazing... if the right artist was on it.. it'd prolly turn out hot.. a dukie artist on it, the beat wouldn't save him, lol

    its gotta solid foundation, don't let people deter you from doing the kinda music you want... if this is your sound, stick with it.. don't change it up to make other producers think its hot... other producers don't pay you... just a lil advice there, lol

    anyway, the beat is ok in my opinion.. not really my steez, but the work put into it shows up... keep building.. keep learnin ya craft, and materializing YOUR sound... if you want to sound like everybody else, by all means have at it, but if you want to be original and stand out ((even if some people hate it)) digg in, grind it out, open the umbrella and keep doin you

    i'm deleriously tired so maybe i'm just typin' random madness, lol

    big ups to everybody! lmao

    stay up kid...

    ..1..

    Alpyne


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1053929

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1053929
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  19. Macmili

    Macmili Thorough

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    ^^thanks for your input
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  20. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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    whatever the tsk tsk tsk tks tsk tsk tsk noise is..

    change it..

    and your set.. medley is cool, that noise is juyst a bit too fruity loopsy
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