1. Willie Gallo 8-1 vs 2. MetaSin 5-0 **The Main Event**

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    I wanna tell yall to do 30. but I wont, 20 line minimum tho.

    This is going to be ridiculous. Ill tell both of you now tho

    Keep this thread clean please, no free posting/swayin, keep

    that talk in the lounge. Ill only be accepting detailed votes

    Good breakdowns, no 1 liner votes. Holla
    test
  2. Willie Gallo

    Willie Gallo alias?

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    hey man, best of luck....whoever drops first sets the line limit


    pz
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  3. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    I can rock with that.... I'd say lets atleast do 20, since this is one of the better match ups in the league, and it's a champ match. I may do 24 or 30 tonight. Maybe not, lol...
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  4. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    I MAY need an extension... my schedule is packed for the next few days... we'll see tho.
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  5. Willie Gallo

    Willie Gallo alias?

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    son, you're average at best, take some notes and aim for a better score
    cuz on a scale of ten, i might as well ghostwrite, the way I give Met a four
    n you're a part of EVERY newbie crew, you the wack cat's next-of-kin
    fresh crews aint familiar with vets, but they ALL know meta's in
    why not stop with the played lines and dickriders? try earning a visible win...
    cuz i guess most voters hate jolie and banderas, none of them have seen original sin
    your dead concepts are 'meh' with the voters, what's wrong with this guy?!?
    course my punches went over your head...but so did the vultures and flies
    my math must be off, and though you'll still get a vote or two...
    but how the fuck you drop 126 lines in 5 weeks..and only make 6 of em quotable?
    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew
    that alone should prove he sucks, but ill take the challenge to show his writtens wack
    see, im using this metasin to make me sicker...you should go change your name to ipecac
    now hes claimin fame? i feel its my calling and duty yo
    to tell you what you're lacking. Example....a fan following and studio
    work out your lower body, this unproportioned dunn's a find....
    awkward frame like your crews name, the second half is undefined
    this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs

    gluck to metasin
    test
  6. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    sorry for the delay... I almost had to noshow BUT I had a few minutes...

    Dear Willie Gallo aka Demik aka Doc Richards aka loser...

    u talk like u ballin all season, but ya pockets are weakened....
    the road to Rich's... is just a dark alley next to the box that u sleep in
    he doin such a bad job that he should just call it quits
    he can open Word, but nothin can save .Doc... not even a floppy disk
    last weak u won with determination, not notable lines
    so where theres a Will... theres a way to make sure half the voters are blind.
    he gets no hoes and I'm not gay, but the match'll erupt
    since I'm facin a pussy, in the battle this Gal' is just fucked.
    fag, understand you are not gon be seen as a thug
    when u like ur coffee black, and still enjoy shots of cream in ya mug.
    against seph you fell off; luck helped u win the big title...
    ur so washed up...
    if you tried to turn your life around, you'd hit the spin cycle
    you as false as they come, just a fake when you test me
    he's a wolf in sheep's clothing, cuz he thinks wool makes him look sexy
    he's beggin for this beatin, and since u asked, u'll receive...
    so I'm not trying to be polite, when I answer your 'pleas'
    n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name
    i'm a big fish in a small pond... u harbor feelings and drop
    so ur hopes of winnin got the champion ship leavin the Doc...
    test
  7. ~*^Abaddon^*~

    ~*^Abaddon^*~ New Member

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    This was a cool battle, a very very close battle. Willie Gallo dropped the best verse i've seen him come with since hes been in the league, the first 5 lines were very strong plus the second half is undefined and the closer were a dope way to end the verse.

    Metasin did not disappoint either though, road to rich's, spin cycle and hip switch were all lmao. It really is too bad that Meta didnt have the time to drop the caliber of verses that hes been coming with all the way to the title, as this could have been a five star match.

    But, i can only vote on whats in front of me, so Vote = Willie Gallo
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  8. Munch

    Munch Hookstarz.com 4 FREE DLs

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    MetaSin

    u talk like u ballin all season, but ya pockets are weakened....
    the road to Rich's... is just a dark alley next to the box that u sleep in
    lol...haha

    he doin such a bad job that he should just call it quits
    he can open Word, but nothin can save .Doc... not even a floppy disk
    nice...

    last weak u won with determination, not notable lines
    so where theres a Will... theres a way to make sure half the voters are blind.
    hahaha...

    he gets no hoes and I'm not gay, but the match'll erupt
    since I'm facin a pussy, in the battle this Gal' is just fucked.
    ok

    fag, understand you are not gon be seen as a thug
    when u like ur coffee black, and still enjoy shots of cream in ya mug.
    ha!!!

    against seph you fell off; luck helped u win the big title...
    ur so washed up...
    if you tried to turn your life around, you'd hit the spin cycle
    ok

    you as false as they come, just a fake when you test me
    he's a wolf in sheep's clothing, cuz he thinks wool makes him look sexy
    lol..ok

    he's beggin for this beatin, and since u asked, u'll receive...
    so I'm not trying to be polite, when I answer your 'pleas'
    ok...

    n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name
    nice

    i'm a big fish in a small pond... u harbor feelings and drop
    so ur hopes of winnin got the champion ship leavin the Doc...
    lol koo closer

    Willie

    son, you're average at best, take some notes and aim for a better score
    cuz on a scale of ten, i might as well ghostwrite, the way I give Met a four
    ehhh ive seen this

    n you're a part of EVERY newbie crew, you the wack cat's next-of-kin
    fresh crews aint familiar with vets, but they ALL know meta's in
    ok

    why not stop with the played lines and dickriders? try earning a visible win...
    cuz i guess most voters hate jolie and banderas, none of them have seen original
    sin
    lol

    your dead concepts are 'meh' with the voters, what's wrong with this guy?!?
    course my punches went over your head...but so did the vultures and flies
    ok

    my math must be off, and though you'll still get a vote or two...
    but how the fuck you drop 126 lines in 5 weeks..and only make 6 of em quotable?
    lmao

    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew
    haha

    that alone should prove he sucks, but ill take the challenge to show his writtens wack
    see, im using this metasin to make me sicker...you should go change your name to ipecac
    ehhhhhh

    now hes claimin fame? i feel its my calling and duty yo
    to tell you what you're lacking. Example....a fan following and studio
    lol

    work out your lower body, this unproportioned dunn's a find....
    awkward frame like your crews name, the second half is undefined
    lol

    this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs
    lmao...

    overall in personal opinion i think meta edged it out...had more stuff i was feelin...

    Vote - MetaSin
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  9. xEPITOMEx

    xEPITOMEx The Golden Rule

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    Wow, ill ass battle.

    When I read Willie's verse I thought he would take it with a dope verse, but I don't remember not liking any of MetaSin's verse. Gonna have to do a line by line I think...

    WG:
    son, you're average at best, take some notes and aim for a better score
    cuz on a scale of ten, i might as well ghostwrite, the way I give Met a four
    ^^nice opener - 3

    n you're a part of EVERY newbie crew, you the wack cat's next-of-kin
    fresh crews aint familiar with vets, but they ALL know meta's in
    ^^okay - 2

    why not stop with the played lines and dickriders? try earning a visible win...
    cuz i guess most voters hate jolie and banderas, none of them have seen original sin
    ^^reread this a few times. I got it, and was trying to feel it, but failed... - 1

    your dead concepts are 'meh' with the voters, what's wrong with this guy?!?
    course my punches went over your head...but so did the vultures and flies
    ^^dope - 4

    my math must be off, and though you'll still get a vote or two...
    but how the fuck you drop 126 lines in 5 weeks..and only make 6 of em quotable?
    ^^okay - 2

    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew
    ^^pretty cool - 2.5

    that alone should prove he sucks, but ill take the challenge to show his writtens wack
    see, im using this metasin to make me sicker...you should go change your name to ipecac
    ^^nice - 2.5

    now hes claimin fame? i feel its my calling and duty yo
    to tell you what you're lacking. Example....a fan following and studio
    ^^dope - 4

    work out your lower body, this unproportioned dunn's a find....
    awkward frame like your crews name, the second half is undefined
    ^^nice - 4

    this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs
    ^^lol, dope - 4

    MS
    u talk like u ballin all season, but ya pockets are weakened....
    the road to Rich's... is just a dark alley next to the box that u sleep in
    ^^lol, nice opener - 3

    he doin such a bad job that he should just call it quits
    he can open Word, but nothin can save .Doc... not even a floppy disk
    ^^lol, nice - 3

    last weak u won with determination, not notable lines
    so where theres a Will... theres a way to make sure half the voters are blind.
    ^^lol, dope - 3.5

    he gets no hoes and I'm not gay, but the match'll erupt
    since I'm facin a pussy, in the battle this Gal' is just fucked.
    ^^not bad - 2.5

    fag, understand you are not gon be seen as a thug
    when u like ur coffee black, and still enjoy shots of cream in ya mug.
    ^^lol, liked this - 3

    against seph you fell off; luck helped u win the big title...
    ur so washed up...
    if you tried to turn your life around, you'd hit the spin cycle
    ^^okay - 2

    you as false as they come, just a fake when you test me
    he's a wolf in sheep's clothing, cuz he thinks wool makes him look sexy
    ^^lol, liked this - 3.5

    he's beggin for this beatin, and since u asked, u'll receive...
    so I'm not trying to be polite, when I answer your 'pleas'
    ^^cool wordplay - 3

    n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name
    ^^lol, nice - 3

    "i'm a big fish in a small pond... u harbor feelings and drop
    so ur hopes of winnin got the champion ship leavin the Doc..."
    ^^dope - 4

    Fuck me, this is close.

    Ok, I'm gonna rate punches 1-4 (4 being illest) and before I do this I'll give MetaSin 2 extra for a better flow/structre (WG had some long bars in there)...

    Okay I make that 29.5 vs 33. On a side note meta's verse made me laugh more.

    Dope ass battle, sorry my vote was gay but wanted to do this properly...

    Vote = MetaSin
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  10. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    one of the better battles i've seen in a while, actually. it was close for sure. i'll break it down and highlight what lines i was digging from each:

    Willie Gallo

    "somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew"

    "that alone should prove he sucks, but ill take the challenge to show his writtens wack
    see, im using this metasin to make me sicker...you should go change your name to ipecac"

    "this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs"

    "your dead concepts are 'meh' with the voters, what's wrong with this guy?!?
    course my punches went over your head...but so did the vultures and flies
    my math must be off, and though you'll still get a vote or two...
    but how the fuck you drop 126 lines in 5 weeks..and only make 6 of em quotable?"


    MetaSin

    "he gets no hoes and I'm not gay, but the match'll erupt
    since I'm facin a pussy, in the battle this Gal' is just fucked."

    "you as false as they come, just a fake when you test me
    he's a wolf in sheep's clothing, cuz he thinks wool makes him look sexy"

    "n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name"


    willie took this one. metasin did come nice, but a lot of his shit seemed really played out to me (sleeping in a box, floppy disk, voters blind). to his credit, it was worded nicely and flowed well. willie came though really sick, though - lots of personals, no filler - a dope verse.

    vote -- Willie Gallo
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  11. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Best match of the week.

    Fav lines from Will

    n you're a part of EVERY newbie crew, you the wack cat's next-of-kin
    fresh crews aint familiar with vets, but they ALL know meta's in

    why not stop with the played lines and dickriders? try earning a visible win...
    cuz i guess most voters hate jolie and banderas, none of them have seen original sin

    my math must be off, and though you'll still get a vote or two...
    but how the fuck you drop 126 lines in 5 weeks..and only make 6 of em quotable?

    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew

    work out your lower body, this unproportioned dunn's a find....
    awkward frame like your crews name, the second half is undefined

    this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs


    Fav lines from Sin

    u talk like u ballin all season, but ya pockets are weakened....
    the road to Rich's... is just a dark alley next to the box that u sleep in

    he doin such a bad job that he should just call it quits
    he can open Word, but nothin can save .Doc... not even a floppy disk

    last weak u won with determination, not notable lines
    so where theres a Will... theres a way to make sure half the voters are blind.

    he gets no hoes and I'm not gay, but the match'll erupt
    since I'm facin a pussy, in the battle this Gal' is just fucked.

    fag, understand you are not gon be seen as a thug
    when u like ur coffee black, and still enjoy shots of cream in ya mug.

    against seph you fell off; luck helped u win the big title...
    ur so washed up...
    if you tried to turn your life around, you'd hit the spin cycle

    n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name

    i'm a big fish in a small pond... u harbor feelings and drop
    so ur hopes of winnin got the champion ship leavin the Doc...


    Hard match to decide a win from...but I think Meta edged it by a couple bars

    v/Metasin
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  12. Chin Kwon

    Chin Kwon The Angkorian

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    Now this is what i'm sayin...

    Gallo

    Metaphor lines are kinda played, but this was an ill flip. cool.

    AAHHHH...points for personal.

    hmm....i've seen "original sin" line done better.

    i was expecting another played 'punch' concept but you switched it nice wit the imagery. cool.

    lol...aite. more points for personal.

    decent personal.

    meh...not quite.

    lmao! Aite, cool.

    haha, ill.

    BWAHAHAHA...dope!



    vs



    Metasin


    haha..coo

    dope!

    lmao...aite.

    hmm...aite.

    lol.

    nice!

    ok

    meh...

    lmao!

    sicc closer.



    Breakdown: Damn, this was very difficult to vote. Both came out swinging from the opening bell. Yall made this match lived up to it's title...this was definitely an ill Champ Match. Within those 40 bars, there were only two i didn't like. *One from each* Mos Def a battle of the week contender if not THE battle of the week. Unfortunately i could only choose one winner...and my vote will go to Gallo. I thought they both held their fort down in term of creativity, humor, and overall siccness, but Gallo had more lines aim DIRECTLY at Sin, while most of Sin's lines could've worked as any ordinary freetstyle verse. Whereas Sin was swinging haymakers, I thought Gallo was more precise and tactical in his approach. So...

    Vote = Gallo

    Again....great battles, my dudes.


    -Kwon
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  13. Name play.

    Name play. Abuser title.

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    this was such a close battle


    both are very good


    but i thought

    v-metasin

    i thought he came out better
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  14. Yung Troy

    Yung Troy The Lyrical King

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    Dope battle

    Gallo,

    I especially liked these lines

    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew

    Nice

    Metasin,

    he doin such a bad job that he should just call it quits
    he can open Word, but nothin can save .Doc... not even a floppy disk

    I was diggin

    but I'd have to give it to Gallo

    vote=Gallo
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  15. xX_NASTY_Xx

    xX_NASTY_Xx Guest

    I agree with what everyone else is saying....if meta had more time I think he would have taken it with ease both came strong but I think willie edge him out stayed more consistent and just had better lines

    Vote= willie
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  16. MetaSin

    MetaSin I Don't Believe In You...

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    I'll be considerate of Willie. Nvm.
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  17. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    ^ Lol, I battled you twice ?

    anyway...


    Willie Gallo

    n you're a part of EVERY newbie crew, you the wack cat's next-of-kin
    fresh crews aint familiar with vets, but they ALL know meta's in
    your dead concepts are 'meh' with the voters, what's wrong with this guy?!?
    course my punches went over your head...but so did the vultures and flies
    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew
    this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs


    MetaSin

    he doin such a bad job that he should just call it quits
    he can open Word, but nothin can save .Doc... not even a floppy disk
    last weak u won with determination, not notable lines
    so where theres a Will... theres a way to make sure half the voters are blind.
    against seph you fell off; luck helped u win the big title...
    ur so washed up...
    if you tried to turn your life around, you'd hit the spin cycle
    n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name



    Willie had some nice personals, most of his verse was average to me though, only 2 haymakers out of his whole verse and some of his shit i felt was too wordy at times. Meta had some played shit, but i prefer his style and execution more, and his lines had more humor. Overall, i'd say Meta edged it out for a more entertaining verse, Willie was decent but a little boring to me.

    V/MetaSin
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  18. Scene1

    Scene1 action!

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    fuckin' hate bein the tie breaker....

    especially since both of yall are hella cool dudes....


    son, you're average at best, take some notes and aim for a better score
    cuz on a scale of ten, i might as well ghostwrite, the way I give Met a four

    its been done before, but you flipped it nicely

    n you're a part of EVERY newbie crew, you the wack cat's next-of-kin
    fresh crews aint familiar with vets, but they ALL know meta's in

    dope

    why not stop with the played lines and dickriders? try earning a visible win...
    cuz i guess most voters hate jolie and banderas, none of them have seen original sin

    meh...decent i guess, not great

    your dead concepts are 'meh' with the voters, what's wrong with this guy?!?
    course my punches went over your head...but so did the vultures and flies

    this was cool i havent seen this done before

    my math must be off, and though you'll still get a vote or two...
    but how the fuck you drop 126 lines in 5 weeks..and only make 6 of em quotable?

    lmao...nice personal

    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew

    this was cool, but i agree with the voter above, much too wordy

    that alone should prove he sucks, but ill take the challenge to show his writtens wack
    see, im using this metasin to make me sicker...you should go change your name to ipecac

    been done on metasin before

    now hes claimin fame? i feel its my calling and duty yo
    to tell you what you're lacking. Example....a fan following and studio

    cool cool

    ork out your lower body, this unproportioned dunn's a find....
    awkward frame like your crews name, the second half is undefined

    nice flip

    this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs

    solid closer


    Meta

    u talk like u ballin all season, but ya pockets are weakened....
    the road to Rich's... is just a dark alley next to the box that u sleep in

    this was a cool flip on an old concept

    he doin such a bad job that he should just call it quits
    he can open Word, but nothin can save .Doc... not even a floppy disk

    been done....

    last weak u won with determination, not notable lines
    so where theres a Will... theres a way to make sure half the voters are blind.

    lmao, this was a dope flip on his name

    he gets no hoes and I'm not gay, but the match'll erupt
    since I'm facin a pussy, in the battle this Gal' is just fucked.

    kinda weak

    fag, understand you are not gon be seen as a thug
    when u like ur coffee black, and still enjoy shots of cream in ya mug.

    dope

    against seph you fell off; luck helped u win the big title...
    ur so washed up...
    if you tried to turn your life around, you'd hit the spin cycle

    another nice line

    you as false as they come, just a fake when you test me
    he's a wolf in sheep's clothing, cuz he thinks wool makes him look sexy

    not feelin'

    he's beggin for this beatin, and since u asked, u'll receive...
    so I'm not trying to be polite, when I answer your 'pleas'

    nah

    n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name

    lmao...nice man


    i'm a big fish in a small pond... u harbor feelings and drop
    so ur hopes of winnin got the champion ship leavin the Doc...

    this was an ok flip on an old concept


    i wanted to make sure i broke it down completely so there'd be no complainin' bout my vote n shit

    both of you guys came hella dope, and represented nice fopr the champ match...but i felt as though Willie Gallo had more dope lines, without having too many mediocre lines.

    I felt that MetaSin was very hit and miss, and that for every 1 dope line he had, he had a couple others that just werent up to par


    Vote Willie Gallo
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  19. 4Matt

    4Matt On the money

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    son, you're average at best, take some notes and aim for a better score
    cuz on a scale of ten, i might as well ghostwrite, the way I give Met a four
    ^cool
    n you're a part of EVERY newbie crew, you the wack cat's next-of-kin
    fresh crews aint familiar with vets, but they ALL know meta's in
    ^iite
    why not stop with the played lines and dickriders? try earning a visible win...
    cuz i guess most voters hate jolie and banderas, none of them have seen original sin
    ^eh
    your dead concepts are 'meh' with the voters, what's wrong with this guy?!?
    course my punches went over your head...but so did the vultures and flies
    ^i like this, lol
    my math must be off, and though you'll still get a vote or two...
    but how the fuck you drop 126 lines in 5 weeks..and only make 6 of em quotable?
    ^lol, iite personal line
    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew
    ^another good diss
    that alone should prove he sucks, but ill take the challenge to show his writtens wack
    see, im using this metasin to make me sicker...you should go change your name to ipecac
    ^eh
    now hes claimin fame? i feel its my calling and duty yo
    to tell you what you're lacking. Example....a fan following and studio
    ^ok
    work out your lower body, this unproportioned dunn's a find....
    awkward frame like your crews name, the second half is undefined
    ^lol iite
    this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs
    ^lol ill closer



    u talk like u ballin all season, but ya pockets are weakened....
    the road to Rich's... is just a dark alley next to the box that u sleep in
    ^lol funny
    he doin such a bad job that he should just call it quits
    he can open Word, but nothin can save .Doc... not even a floppy disk
    ^eh
    last weak u won with determination, not notable lines
    so where theres a Will... theres a way to make sure half the voters are blind.
    ^lol, nice
    he gets no hoes and I'm not gay, but the match'll erupt
    since I'm facin a pussy, in the battle this Gal' is just fucked.
    ^iite
    fag, understand you are not gon be seen as a thug
    when u like ur coffee black, and still enjoy shots of cream in ya mug.
    ^lol funny
    against seph you fell off; luck helped u win the big title...
    ur so washed up...
    if you tried to turn your life around, you'd hit the spin cycle
    ^lol damn
    you as false as they come, just a fake when you test me
    he's a wolf in sheep's clothing, cuz he thinks wool makes him look sexy
    ^wasn't feeling it
    he's beggin for this beatin, and since u asked, u'll receive...
    so I'm not trying to be polite, when I answer your 'pleas'
    ^iite
    n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name
    ^haha
    i'm a big fish in a small pond... u harbor feelings and drop
    so ur hopes of winnin got the champion ship leavin the Doc...
    ^good closer


    this was cool battle, wasn't really "dope" or "great" or whatever lol, it was decent but kind of a let down for a champ match tbh. i was feeling willie's "vultures and flies" line and the closer, those were his standout lines. meta had the "where theres a will theres a way", "spin cycle" and "hips switch" lines. willie came good but meta's punches made me laugh, and i feel his quotables hit harder.

    vote goes to meta
    test
  20. Johnny Weeks

    Johnny Weeks New Member

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    dope battle


    n you're a part of EVERY newbie crew, you the wack cat's next-of-kin
    fresh crews aint familiar with vets, but they ALL know meta's in

    why not stop with the played lines and dickriders? try earning a visible win...
    cuz i guess most voters hate jolie and banderas, none of them have seen original sin

    my math must be off, and though you'll still get a vote or two...
    but how the fuck you drop 126 lines in 5 weeks..and only make 6 of em quotable?

    somehow you're the favourite to win, give it a rest, dude
    i tried harder for seph.
    best rapper on the site? you aint even at the top of your own text crew

    work out your lower body, this unproportioned dunn's a find....
    awkward frame like your crews name, the second half is undefined

    this cross dresser tucks his junk, the gayest of bitch thugs
    i cock back to wind up...
    you cock back, grab your wig and skirt, then hit clubs

    those were mosdef the strong points in willie's verse


    last weak u won with determination, not notable lines
    so where theres a Will... theres a way to make sure half the voters are blind.

    fag, understand you are not gon be seen as a thug
    when u like ur coffee black, and still enjoy shots of cream in ya mug.

    against seph you fell off; luck helped u win the big title...
    ur so washed up...
    if you tried to turn your life around, you'd hit the spin cycle

    n of course ur a lame, you're just a horrible dame
    trying to walk the walk but ya hips switch more than ya name


    shit's close, but i feel Willie's personals and dope punches were better than the four lines i quoted from MetaSin. It's been said in the thread already, but i really get the feeling that had metasin put the time into this verse that he had the last 5 weeks, this shit coulda been classic

    V/Willie
    test
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