1. Sonny Daze 2-0 vs 2. Liquidity 1-1

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Friday @ 11:59pm PST.
    [02] - There are absolutely NO extensions under any circumstances. For this reason, It is unnecessary to request extensions. I apologize in advance.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am PST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match. If there are less than 5 battles available to vote on, you must vote on all available battles.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly. Failure to post your links will result in a DQ. It is not our responsibility to make sure you voted.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY. Specifically, vote under the name that you signed in under, please.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​
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  2. Liquidity

    Liquidity New Member

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    check

    How many you thinkin'?
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  3. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    16 would be cool.

    I'm aiming to drop Thursday but most likely Friday.
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  4. Liquidity

    Liquidity New Member

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    I'll be posting some time tonight most likely.
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  5. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Fuck this league's low standards, I'll ascend each peak
    Champed 2 months giving minimum effort to win each week
    This cat was living the dream a week later his career plummeted
    Cuz this newbie admired my work then battled me cuz he wanted some of it
    Fuck your punches that won't touch, I'm yawning like so what
    You pray to god that I don't show. I pray to god you don't suck
    You got British Mr. Bean swag. It's simple and it's plain
    So after I give him the 'pound' he won't be worth the 'quid' that's in the middle of his name
    Product of chronic failure. I'll leave you in a state of odd behavior
    Liquidity? You gassed yourself up so no chance of being solid later
    Only in Boston is spittin Harbaughs (hard bars) equivalent to shootin a full clip
    They been Raven about you? That's some Super Bull shit
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  6. Liquidity

    Liquidity New Member

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    You reek of faggotry

    It's hook line and sinker for me, ur easy to spill fool
    when you hook line and sinker you sing a chorus and people try to kill you
    You seem dislexic with the way you type, and im saying it fast
    i told you to try and break the habit and you take a sci fi DVD and break it in half
    I'll tear skin off your body until none of my limbs'll reach
    because any time a bitch takes SD Card, they prayin' to lose their memory
    not a single chick will every pound your dick kid
    so fucking cry me a river after you lose so i can just drown you in it
    your senses must be off if u think you'll win son
    I guess your blind as a bat, and it AINT because i hit you with one
    ima kill this faggot tie him up and then start fleein and run
    some people wanna soak up the sun...
    so that's what the police will do win they clean up his blood

    lol
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  7. breathlesss

    breathlesss Registered Sex Offender

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    I don't wanna do a whole breakdown, sonny killed it with personals, word/name play/flips, excellent multis and flow and a fluent delivery system. The liquid/gas/solid and British quid lines were enough to win it alone.
    Liquid had a few good spots but overall it was choppy and in every way inferior in everyway. Maybe I just didn't get some connections, but it just wasn't working flow/rhyme wise even if they were there.

    Vote:sonnydaze
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  8. Brown Recluse

    Brown Recluse Hermit, no crabs

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    Sonny Daze = 2 point(s)

    Good:

    - Fuck this league's low standards, I'll ascend each peak
    - Champed 2 months giving minimum effort to win each week
    - Fuck your punches that won't touch, I'm yawning like so what
    - You pray to god that I don't show. I pray to god you don't suck
    - Liquidity? You gassed yourself up so no chance of being solid later

    Bad:

    - So after I give him the 'pound' he won't be worth the 'quid' that's in the middle of his name (this seemed a bit too long-winded)
    - Only in Boston is spittin Harbaughs (hard bars) equivalent to shootin a full clip (forced and doesn't really connect even though I see what you were trying to do)
    - They been Raven about you? That's some Super Bull shit (I like the concept but this is forced and not witty enough)

    Liquidity = -1 point(s)

    Good:

    - so fucking cry me a river after you lose so i can just drown you in it
    - your senses must be off if u think you'll win son
    - so that's what the police will do win they clean up his blood

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    Bad:

    - when you hook line and sinker you sing a chorus and people try to kill you
    - because any time a bitch takes SD Card, they prayin' to lose their memory
    - not a single chick will every pound your dick kid (aside from the typo, as far as I know, men don't get pounded by women, men do the pounding...sorry just saying)
    - i told you to try and break the habit and you take a sci fi DVD and break it in half

    Vote - Sonny Daze

    Notes:

    Sonny Daze - keep developing the pen-game

    Liquidity - focus on making your bars stay on the subject more often and make sure everything makes sense, because your bars in this battle weren't connecting.

    Take care y'all!!!
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  9. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Sonny Daze - dope lyrics, really funny punches for some, the Quid line was my favorite nameplay and lyric in the verse, good flow throughout most of the verse as well, and I liked the aggressive approach you took here.

    Liquidity- man you had a fire start, some nice lyrics here and there and I liked the SD nameplay, some of this was creative but at times also fell flat, the last line also didn't work for me as well as some of Sonny's stuff.

    Vote - Sonny Daze
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  10. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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