1. Servical 6-1 -vs- 2. Willie Gallo 5-0 (Verses UP!)

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    1. Servical 6-1 -vs- 2. Willie Gallo 5-0
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  2. Willie Gallo

    Willie Gallo alias?

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    we're goin 16 and you're losing that title
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  3. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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  4. Willie Gallo

    Willie Gallo alias?

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    ya shits choppy, i wont impeach this cats flow though...
    cause 6-1's a great record
    but what would you do if the league didnt have no shows?
    hes a KNOWN faggot, no doubt this loser loves gettin men yo
    crouched down, blowin for a load, like you broke your super nintendo
    should apologize for your style..n still you chose to boast instead
    we all know nice guys finish last...so i cant figure out why you havent posted yet
    doc got cheated out of a draw n im just talkin honest...
    but with me? you best HOPE you can open the door to a tie like a walk in closet
    you think you're great now? "scribbled in your notepad and created your life"?
    naw guys, this little bitch scribbled in his livejournal and BERATED his life
    he should be fixin his health, hygiene's taken a real dip to the south...
    his smile looks like springfield elementary took a field trip to his mouth
    again he posts trash...RM loses cred erytime you do this routine...
    this faggot has talent for NOTHING aside from flipping concepts and ruining leagues
    whats in it for me? i get no rep for how im bombin shit...
    cause beatin Servical..is not and never will be...an accomplishment


    you are the ultimate paper champion
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  5. Servical

    Servical S on my chest.

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    wow, that shit was ass cheeks, and lol@ all those fake personals...


    difference between you and me is...

    i do this for fun, you do this for sport, but you'd still fall out the race
    just look at your verse... even your body of work is outta shape
    so no wonder them lines is stretched so badly and oddly
    instead of batteling, he wrote the instruction manual for pilates
    swagger jacking fraud, your mentality's a loser
    he so fake and frail... a smack from reality would bruise him
    you don't party, but its hard to tell if you remained sober
    Willie can stay shit face'd... without the headaches and the hang overs
    has he ever had any opposition in his career ? never...
    his resume so little, he would'nt get hired at a volunteer center
    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me
    and i know the problems you have, you see them when you wake
    cause your bitch looks like hell, and you face your demons everyday
    but truth is this pussy's a fag, keep sleeping, your likely to fail
    'men'did your broken dreams'... and they broke your hymen as well

    bye.
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  6. Half Dead

    Half Dead PLAYED NAMEFLIPS

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    WG had the springfield line, the ruining leagues line, the closer, the livejournal and nice guys finish last...all of those lines were nice as hell
    Serv kinda fell off this week, most definetely wasnt coming with the caliber he has been in recent weeks... his opener and his face your demons lines were ok...but that was about it

    Vote Willie Gallo
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  7. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    willie:

    'hes a KNOWN faggot, no doubt this loser loves gettin men yo
    crouched down, blowin for a load, like you broke your super nintendo
    should apologize for your style..n still you chose to boast instead
    we all know nice guys finish last...so i cant figure out why you havent posted yet
    he should be fixin his health, hygiene's taken a real dip to the south...
    his smile looks like springfield elementary'

    'took a field trip to his mouth
    again he posts trash...RM loses cred erytime you do this routine...
    this faggot has talent for NOTHING aside from flipping concepts and ruining leagues'

    all those were nice

    servical:

    'i do this for fun, you do this for sport, but you'd still fall out the race
    just look at your verse... even your body of work is outta shape'

    'so no wonder them lines is stretched so badly and oddly
    instead of batteling, he wrote the instruction manual for pilates'

    first two lines were good, started off strong and then fell off real hard....

    Vote..Willie
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  8. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    I gotta say… this was a garbage champ match…. Neither of you guys dropped a hot line… a few good lines but nothing worthy of a title…



    Willie

    ya shits choppy, i wont impeach this cats flow though...
    cause 6-1's a great record
    but what would you do if the league didnt have no shows?


    No show lines are a dime a dozen… you’ve seen one you’ve seen em all… and we’ve pretty much seen it all already… poor opener

    hes a KNOWN faggot, no doubt this loser loves gettin men yo
    crouched down, blowin for a load, like you broke your super Nintendo


    these lines have been around before super Nintendo… NES was the origonal system you had to blow the cartridges out… good wording but played concept

    should apologize for your style..n still you chose to boast instead
    we all know nice guys finish last...so i cant figure out why you havent posted yet


    this one’s been used mad times before too


    doc got cheated out of a draw n im just talkin honest...
    but with me? you best HOPE you can open the door to a tie like a walk in closet


    cool

    you think you're great now? "scribbled in your notepad and created your life"?
    naw guys, this little bitch scribbled in his livejournal and BERATED his life


    cool… but not really sayin nothin

    he should be fixin his health, hygiene's taken a real dip to the south...
    his smile looks like springfield elementary took a field trip to his mouth


    best line in your verse so far

    again he posts trash...RM loses cred erytime you do this routine...
    this faggot has talent for NOTHING aside from flipping concepts and ruining leagues


    straight diss, nothing creative but decent


    whats in it for me? i get no rep for how im bombin shit...
    cause beatin Servical..is not and never will be...an accomplishment


    another straight diss, no creativity… pretty much a filler line to end the verse



    a few played lines, a couple jabs… apart from the Springfield line I didn’t see anything that I haven’t already seen



    Servical

    i do this for fun, you do this for sport, but you'd still fall out the race
    just look at your verse... even your body of work is outta shape


    aight… nothing hard hitting


    so no wonder them lines is stretched so badly and oddly
    instead of batteling, he wrote the instruction manual for pilates


    you were really reaching with this one… seem mad forced, but at least the concept was there

    swagger jacking fraud, your mentality's a loser
    he so fake and frail... a smack from reality would bruise him


    poor wording, forced wordplay here

    you don't party, but its hard to tell if you remained sober
    Willie can stay shit face'd... without the headaches and the hang overs


    Aight…


    has he ever had any opposition in his career ? never...
    his resume so little, he would'nt get hired at a volunteer center


    poor wording’s letting you down… you’ve got concepts, but the wording’s making them come across weak

    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me


    nah

    and i know the problems you have, you see them when you wake
    cause your bitch looks like hell, and you face your demons everyday


    this was cool… once again the wording could’ve been better

    but truth is this pussy's a fag, keep sleeping, your likely to fail
    'men'did your broken dreams'... and they broke your hymen as well


    once again… had the concept but didn’t execute with the wording


    Servical’s verse was plagued by poor wording… the last couple of weeks you’ve been crafting your verses well… I don’t know what happened this week, whether you were rushed or just lacked motivation… the concepts were there but the finished product wasn’t up to scratch…

    All in all I’d give this to Serv for creativity and originality… Willie had a few played lines and other filler lines that you’ll see popping up every couple of weeks… Serv at least tried out some new shit… they didn’t always work for him but it was still enough to take this imo

    you guys are BOTH better than the verses i've seen here... i expected alot more out of this battle... guess it was an off week for the both of you

    Vote=Servical
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  9. Accoustics

    Accoustics New Member

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    i didnt think willie brought much to the table, especially for a champ match. there were alot fo played concepts, no show line, nintendo one, nice guys line. all been done to death and the way you flipped them didnt do much for me either. in honest i liked the field trip line. the walk in closet was ok, and the rest didnt do anything for me. servical really didnt do much for me either, wording was way off, and he also brought a some played concepts to the table. but he was alot more original than willie, even if the lines didnt hit hard which is due to his wording he had more originality, and i liked the facing ur demons line, thought that was pretty good. and the volunteer line was cool, worded poorly but cool line. in honesty, this is a pretty tight battle. both had there share of bad lines, and both had a couple fo lines i liked, but for better originality in concepts i have to pick serv.

    vote servical
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  10. ExodusIII

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    god damn ^^ that's pretty much exactly what i said about the verse... except i thought it was a poor battle overall
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  11. willie...no show line was like..eh, everybody has used them...and nintendo line was heard before....besides that u had a decent verse


    he should be fixin his health, hygiene's taken a real dip to the south...
    his smile looks like springfield elementary took a field trip to his mouth

    Servical

    i do this for fun, you do this for sport, but you'd still fall out the race
    just look at your verse... even your body of work is outta shape
    so no wonder them lines is stretched so badly and oddly
    instead of batteling, he wrote the instruction manual for pilates
    ^^lol he opened up strong and set the bar real high

    vote-servical
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  12. Accoustics

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    strange isnt it, i just click reply and remember what i can. dont read the votes, im usually the odd one out on votes, lol.

    just looked at my vote, and i honestly dont remember writing it was a tight battle, if anything, my description of the verses means its a poor battle, i seriously dont remember writing that. strange.
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  13. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    this really wasnt much of a content for me. WG had him in spades, really. that springfield line, the no show opener, the closer, nice guys finsh last, nintendo, ruining leagues...all those lines were downright DISGUSTING. Serv had the pilates line and the looks like hell line...that was about it.
    VOTE = WILLIE GALLO
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  14. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    versus

    No hate towards Willie, he was decent, he just used too many concepts I've seen many times before; plus he didn't flip them hard enough to wow me. Serv on the other dropped a few ill haymakers, no bullshit everything I quoted made me laugh or say damn that was clever. And for everybody hating on this battle as a whole, y'all niggas silly, anyway Vote - Servical.
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  15. RYDOGG

    RYDOGG I've been a Beast b

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    swagger jacking fraud, your mentality's a loser
    he so fake and frail... a smack from reality would bruise him
    you don't party, but its hard to tell if you remained sober
    Willie can stay shit face'd... without the headaches and the hang overs

    vs.

    should apologize for your style..n still you chose to boast instead
    we all know nice guys finish last...so i cant figure out why you havent posted yet
    doc got cheated out of a draw n im just talkin honest...
    but with me? you best HOPE you can open the door to a tie like a walk in closet

    servical edged this one in my eyes beccause his punches hit harder

    vote - servical
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  16. Porno_Lady

    Porno_Lady Educated and Beautiful

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    hes a KNOWN faggot, no doubt this loser loves gettin men yo
    crouched down, blowin for a load, like you broke your super nintendo

    and


    he should be fixin his health, hygiene's taken a real dip to the south...
    his smile looks like springfield elementary took a field trip to his mouth

    Are the standout ones from Willie's verse, I felt he had a decent verse, the elementary line was original, a few of his lines were stretched and that threw off the flow of the verse



    from servical

    i do this for fun, you do this for sport, but you'd still fall out the race
    just look at your verse... even your body of work is outta shape


    and


    and i know the problems you have, you see them when you wake
    cause your bitch looks like hell, and you face your demons everyday


    were a couple of the bars I was feeling from Servical, but I gotta be honest, I didn't feel his lines had a lot of "punch" in them. I felt both could have came better, but what won it for Willie for me was I felt Servical had lines that were just overall weaker than willie's worse lines,

    swagger jacking fraud, your mentality's a loser
    he so fake and frail... a smack from reality would bruise him
    you don't party, but its hard to tell if you remained sober
    Willie can stay shit face'd... without the headaches and the hang overs
    has he ever had any opposition in his career ? never...
    his resume so little, he would'nt get hired at a volunteer center
    ^
    like, that was just filler/weak lines altogether to me, I expected both to come better, but this is just inexcusable for a champ, at least IMO

    so my vote goes to =

    Willie Gallo
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  17. Rated-Are

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    ya shits choppy, i wont impeach this cats flow though...
    cause 6-1's a great record
    but what would you do if the league didnt have no shows?

    seen that blowin nintendo shit before
    .. i think from square.
    u flipped it badly.

    should apologize for your style..n still you chose to boast instead
    we all know nice guys finish last...so i cant figure out why you havent posted yet

    doc got cheated out of a draw n im just talkin honest...
    but with me? you best HOPE you can open the door to a tie like a walk in closet
    ^that shit was freshness.

    again he posts trash...RM loses cred erytime you do this routine...
    this faggot has talent for NOTHING aside from flipping concepts and ruining leagues


    all the above is what i liked from Gallo.


    so no wonder them lines is stretched so badly and oddly
    instead of batteling, he wrote the instruction manual for pilates
    LOL .. OMFG.
    never seen a pilates diss.

    you don't party, but its hard to tell if you remained sober
    Willie can stay shit face'd... without the headaches and the hang overs

    he be getting robbed so often, people done it to him casually
    so if you bank'd on a win, then this is money in the bag for me

    after that shit got blah ..

    vote - Willie ..
    Serv
    one extra .. i wouldn't have been able to vote ..
    i dont vote ties .. this shit was close.
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  18. Rezor_X

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    LINES OF THE BATTLE



    Willie
    he should be fixin his health, hygiene's taken a real dip to the south...
    his smile looks like springfield elementary took a field trip to his mouth

    again he posts trash...RM loses cred erytime you do this routine...
    this faggot has talent for NOTHING aside from flipping concepts and ruining leagues




    SERV
    so no wonder them lines is stretched so badly and oddly
    instead of batteling, he wrote the instruction manual for pilates


    you don't party, but its hard to tell if you remained sober
    Willie can stay shit face'd... without the headaches and the hang overs

    and i know the problems you have, you see them when you wake
    cause your bitch looks like hell, and you face your demons everyday


    Vote = SERV

    His verse had more humor in it, and a few more quoteables. He was more consistent. Willie had the springfield line... other then that, there wasn't much to quote. The walk in closet was cool but I don't think it was enough to take the belt.
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  19. .JackCottey.

    .JackCottey. El Bee See Veteran

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    V./ Serivical


    swagger jacking fraud, your mentality's a loser
    he so fake and frail... a smack from reality would bruise him
    you don't party, but its hard to tell if you remained sober
    Willie can stay shit face'd... without the headaches and the hang overs
    has he ever had any opposition in his career ? never...
    his resume so little, he would'nt get hired at a volunteer center


    vs.


    he should be fixin his health, hygiene's taken a real dip to the south...
    his smile looks like springfield elementary took a field trip to his mouth
    again he posts trash...RM loses cred erytime you do this routine...
    this faggot has talent for NOTHING aside from flipping concepts and ruining league



    Servical took this one, but it was close. To me it just seem like the concepts were there, but the flow was strecthed for some of the bars. Serv came with a consistant verse that hit hard enough to take the win.
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  20. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    7-5 serv
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