1. Doc Richards (2-2) vs. 2. John Hensley (14-2) vs. 2.5 Premonition (13-3)

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  1. Super.

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    Failure To Recognize Or Abide By ANY Of These Rules Will Result In The Given Penalty That Regulates The Rules. And Continuous Bitching, Whining, And Excessive Complaining Will Result In Your Termination From the Tourney or possibly RBL Until A Mod See's Fit For You To Return.
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  2. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    thats 20-2



    16?

    8 for each of yuh


    and lets make it a pic battle, make shit interesting
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  3. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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  4. stickman

    stickman music entrepreneur

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    16 is straight
    but fuck a pic battle
    no one is good at them
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  5. Count Von Demik

    Count Von Demik I Have My Own Cereal

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    [look]


    im usin pics, im cool
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  6. hotboy

    hotboy Guest

    it says doc richards is 2-2
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  7. Monstar

    Monstar animal thug

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    shit's a popularity contest..

    let the dickriding commence, yall need to get ya head's right
    I came to battle, you 2 are competing for Prom King on a web site
    someone shoulda told Demik canadian kids'll get killed
    cause that Eh game he's bringing ain't got shit to do with skill
    this chubby bastard won't make it through the storm
    if there's a method to madness...
    it explains why Demik's reaction to losing is so fuckin uniform
    ...and John's more like a fuckin slutty bitch
    or secret service for the vice pres., he's known to sec-ure dick
    fuck it, I'm the one who's style you jock you goof, damn..
    & I'm the one takin it back to basics while John's still in boot camp
    now back to Akademik, for real this cat's so lame
    all his aliases are the reason for half of these wack no names
    John thought I would be the chicken in this match
    someone shoulda told Hen not to count his eggs before they hatched
    this Richards kid is sensitive, he got a total bitch style
    n' I done pissed off the Doc so much... I use the bridge now
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  8. ledge end

    ledge end Epitome of Realness

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    cool beans
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  9. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    monsters a bitch for pulling hisverse
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  10. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    Okay.
    You ain't a champ, everybody knows this kid's weak.
    Cuz if AIM ever got stopped....so would his win streak.
    ^^True or not? either way you'll get murdered sooner.
    Cuz i'll strangle you with the grape vine..
    ..and confrim the rumors.
    No skills, no girls, it can't be shown any clearer.
    See, i got puss all over me...
    ...but then again so does your mirror.
    Mr. 'won every tourney'...what an accomplishment.
    Still the only check you ever got, came out positive.
    As for stick?
    Next line i'll list his skills, cuz i respect his rhymes.
    He's:
    ....hmmmm wait a second......nevermind.
    Demik? harder to take down, but yea....he's bad
    But all i gotta do to get stick to drop is hand him kneepads.
    Demik loves himself, but he'll leave with ruptured health.
    You're ya biggest dickrider...so no point tellin u to fuck yourself.
    You ain't a problem, honestly, dude's a distraction.
    Whenever i try to sum up your verses...
    ...i wind up doin subtraction.
    Just give me the title, i'm a force that you can't stop.
    Stick just wants to take demiks belt....to see his pants drop.
    Enough of ya'll. i'm droppin this bitch, cuz you're through.
    Sorry for the ass rippin stick...maybe Doc'll stitch it for you.
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  11. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    THE CHAMP IS HERE

    survival of the fittest, John's what extinction's for
    only way you'll see 'Star dumb' is if I'm drunk & I don't drink no more- from Monstar's original verse

    WHAT.THE.FUCK.LMAO



    this kids honestly tryin? he aint tellin shit..
    for fucks sake
    he posted on a specific name to make one of his lines relevant
    mon's the faggot in battle, known to throw a bitch or two
    my cliches are winnin battles?
    that canadian line clinched it for you
    blowin ya welfare on net connects, you aint smart kid
    when you pinch a penny so much
    your account wanna press sexual assault charges
    mon's gettin put under wraps, you get smothered and hit
    fuckin loser
    most publicity on the name? when you gave blood's brother the shit
    john'll be gunnin, but in the end will be ghost ill bet
    Cause runnin from competiton's, the only workout he gets
    you aint got punches to land, miss and get beat
    cause im pissin all over the john- like i forgot to lift the seat
    stick to the text, its best, we dont want this geeks noise
    you unknown
    last time i saw the name, it was votin for me at b-boys
    everyone else get respect naturally, no need to make that stiffer
    so while john differs and begs
    --the rest of us just beg to differ



    now gimme back my belt
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  12. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    jeah, lets see who wins.

    this chubby bastard won't make it through the storm
    if there's a method to madness...
    it explains why Demik's reaction to losing is so fuckin uniform

    heh, witty.

    now back to Akademik, for real this cat's so lame
    all his aliases are the reason for half of these wack no names

    truth.

    John thought I would be the chicken in this match
    someone shoulda told Hen not to count his eggs before they hatched

    feelin it.

    John:

    ^^True or not? either way you'll get murdered sooner.
    Cuz i'll strangle you with the grape vine....and confrim the rumors.

    niiiiiice.

    No skills, no girls, it can't be shown any clearer.
    See, i got puss all over me......but then again so does your mirror.

    lmfao.

    Demik loves himself, but he'll leave with ruptured health.
    You're ya biggest dickrider...so no point tellin u to fuck yourself.

    hah.

    Just give me the title, i'm a force that you can't stop.
    Stick just wants to take demiks belt....to see his pants drop.

    seen it befo. ariz had a similar line..


    demik:

    this kids honestly tryin? he aint tellin shit..
    for fucks sake
    he posted on a specific name to make one of his lines relevant

    lmao.

    mon's gettin put under wraps, you get smothered and hit
    fuckin loser
    most publicity on the name? when you gave blood's brother the shit

    ouch.. truth.

    stick to the text, its best, we dont want this geeks noise
    you unknown, last time i saw the name, it was votin for me at b-boys

    lolol.

    everyone else get respect naturally, no need to make that stiffer
    so while john differs and begs --the rest of us just beg to differ

    coo.



    close battle, nothing too exciting, but as per amount of lines quoted, demik wins.


    vote - demik
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  13. Super.

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  14. Oliver_Thenet

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    someone shoulda told Demik canadian kids'll get killed
    cause that Eh game he's bringing ain't got shit to do with skill
    this chubby bastard won't make it through the storm
    if there's a method to madness...
    it explains why Demik's reaction to losing is so fuckin uniform

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    Okay.
    You ain't a champ, everybody knows this kid's weak.
    Cuz if AIM ever got stopped....so would his win streak.
    ^^True or not? either way you'll get murdered sooner.
    Cuz i'll strangle you with the grape vine..
    ..and confrim the rumors.
    No skills, no girls, it can't be shown any clearer.
    See, i got puss all over me...
    ...but then again so does your mirror.
    Demik loves himself, but he'll leave with ruptured health.
    You're ya biggest dickrider...so no point tellin u to fuck yourself.
    You ain't a problem, honestly, dude's a distraction.
    Whenever i try to sum up your verses...
    ...i wind up doin subtraction.
    Just give me the title, i'm a force that you can't stop.
    Stick just wants to take demiks belt....to see his pants drop.
    Enough of ya'll. i'm droppin this bitch, cuz you're through.
    Sorry for the ass rippin stick...maybe Doc'll stitch it for you.

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    this kids honestly tryin? he aint tellin shit..
    for fucks sake
    he posted on a specific name to make one of his lines relevant
    blowin ya welfare on net connects, you aint smart kid
    when you pinch a penny so much
    your account wanna press sexual assault charges
    john'll be gunnin, but in the end will be ghost ill bet
    Cause runnin from competiton's, the only workout he gets
    you aint got punches to land, miss and get beat
    cause im pissin all over the john- like i forgot to lift the seat

    vote john......dude just came pretty solid overall.dem threw some good shit..just wasnt as consistant to me..few misses nd his quality wasnt the average merkin im used to seein him hand out.......first dude had no chance really.
    pz
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  15. Monstar

    Monstar animal thug

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    they say 3 is company... this looks like Monster & Sons


    damn, that woulda been raw..
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  16. -ChOppA STyLE-

    -ChOppA STyLE- GIT SUM GRITS AWN DAT SHA

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  17. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Monstar

    DA GOOD

    now back to Akademik, for real this cat's so lame
    all his aliases are the reason for half of these wack no names

    Not bad...I sorta like that one...gave me a chuckle.

    DA BAD

    fuck it, I'm the one who's style you jock you goof, damn..
    & I'm the one takin it back to basics while John's still in boot camp

    Didnt like this..since basic is boot camp....FYI....I'm a military brat...

    Not a great verse from you...

    John

    You ain't a champ, everybody knows this kid's weak.
    Cuz if AIM ever got stopped....so would his win streak.

    Thought that was funny

    No skills, no girls, it can't be shown any clearer.
    See, i got puss all over me...
    ...but then again so does your mirror.

    Enough of ya'll. i'm droppin this bitch, cuz you're through.
    Sorry for the ass rippin stick...maybe Doc'll stitch it for you.

    Two nice lines...pretty good verse...soem godo lines some avearge lines...cool verse

    DOC

    blowin ya welfare on net connects, you aint smart kid
    when you pinch a penny so much
    your account wanna press sexual assault charges

    Now that was a very nice line to me....

    I didnt like this

    you aint got punches to land, miss and get beat
    cause im pissin all over the john- like i forgot to lift the seat

    To me thats simple and basic...and used before in the past...a john punch..IMO

    Well this battle was okay... John probably had the most lines in one verse that I like... Doc had the line of the battle to me but only one line i really likes..and Premontion(star) not really good to me... So with cosistancy in this.. IMO

    My vote John......okay battle...
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  18. Aven Brooks

    Aven Brooks .. bladerunner ..

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    .. hmm .. tossup between john n premonition ..
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  19. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    lol....aven and his jokes
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  20. Enincy

    Enincy Whats good

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    monstar
    ...and John's more like a fuckin slutty bitch
    or secret service for the vice pres., he's known to sec-ure dick
    now back to Akademik, for real this cat's so lame
    all his aliases are the reason for half of these wack no names
    this Richards kid is sensitive, he got a total bitch style
    n' I done pissed off the Doc so much... I use the bridge now

    john
    You ain't a champ, everybody knows this kid's weak.
    Cuz if AIM ever got stopped....so would his win streak.
    No skills, no girls, it can't be shown any clearer.
    See, i got puss all over me...
    ...but then again so does your mirror.
    Mr. 'won every tourney'...what an accomplishment.
    Still the only check you ever got, came out positive.
    As for stick?
    Next line i'll list his skills, cuz i respect his rhymes.
    He's:
    ....hmmmm wait a second......nevermind.
    Demik loves himself, but he'll leave with ruptured health.
    You're ya biggest dickrider...so no point tellin u to fuck yourself.
    You ain't a problem, honestly, dude's a distraction.
    Whenever i try to sum up your verses...
    ...i wind up doin subtraction.
    Just give me the title, i'm a force that you can't stop.
    Stick just wants to take demiks belt....to see his pants drop.

    doc
    blowin ya welfare on net connects, you aint smart kid
    when you pinch a penny so much
    your account wanna press sexual assault charges
    everyone else get respect naturally, no need to make that stiffer
    so while john differs and begs
    --the rest of us just beg to differ



    i felt that john took this one with fair ease.. he just outpunched his opponents with fresher wordplay. i was feelin monstar a little bit more than doc.. overall though, i would def say john took this witht he better & more consistent verse.


    v/john
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