#1 CONTENDERSHIP MATCH!!! - 3. Richard Corey 12-2 v. 4. Sur 5 ILL 7-0

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  1. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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  2. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    Here we go...26-30 (big boys limit)


    (for some reason, my browser won't let me cut and paste addresses...so I'm going to just list the battles on which I voted...sorry)

    Dough Jordan vs. Nu-Sense
    vector vs. Klobb
    Nebs vs. Strike
    Butler vs. R A Y
    Cane vs. Trioptix
    EA sports vs. thesynthesis
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  3. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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  4. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    it's time to bring back the rhyme...




    I got these pussies in my grip! Lyrically bombin’ ya fam!
    Sur.’? Fuck ‘em I got him ‘eatin’ out’ the palm of my hand!
    Anatomically scan for movement, let the Howitzer buck…
    Ya winning streak done ‘ben’ over’…it’s about to get fucked!
    Just for your ‘info…Red’ ya lyrics? Rarely, this geeks miniature
    I burn Sur.’s posts from the feet, and lyrically ‘heat signatures’!
    I awkwardly, awfully dance with rhymes, so scratch ya record
    Fag can’t ‘think outside the box’ … like Paltrow after Seveni
    Cuz he’s a faggot clone of a clone…ain’t no hoping for him
    a Fracture fraction of Calefaction…
    with semi-colons on the end!
    I’m sneakin’ this bitch! ~ 24 lines for him means12 punches?
    But my ‘set-ups’ are ill so I Punk’d him ~ Speaking of which…
    I’ll take him up on a plane…and before I blast and shoot ya
    ask if ya wanna see the gun-‘butt or fly’ like Ashton Kutcher…
    Rich opens wounds and ‘burns the gaseous’ like Dirigible flames
    Leave ya neck stretched like the wordplay of your original name!
    Sur. 5 ill? THE FUCK?! Yeah I got it, but how wack can you get?
    So I’ve come ‘end to the Force’… just like Police Academy 6!
    And ‘stop the funny business!’ His ‘ass’ll leave with hurt sores’
    But then again…check out the size of the meat that Surf’ boards
    every big cahuna, Sur.’s rode! Cocks just find his ass cheeks
    And he gets his ‘face fucked’ more than botched-up rhinoplasty!
    7-0? Ain’t getting’ 8… like weak stomachs and meals fortified
    with porcupine quills!
    For Dick, he’ll ‘go down quick’ like organized kills!
    Intrical topics with intricate rhymes mincin’ thru invincible objects
    Send ya wack ass home…I bean-town’s tossin’ missles and rockets…
    Can’t get wit’ this bitch! You can barely spell, I’m descriptive with it
    You ain’t ill! You’re wack name was about as (sic) as you’ll get…
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  5. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    READ THIS PLEASE!!!



    I awkwardly, awfully dance with rhymes, so scratch ya record
    Fag can’t ‘think outside the box’ … like Paltrow after 'SEVEN'


    this isn't an edit...just a correction...pz.
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  6. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    This Motherfucker's 25?!?



    This faggot is Elderly; And Sur surely whooped him early;
    I'm pulling out all the stops conversely he's pushin thirty;
    Sur's the face of terror; I'm never wrong or shaken ever;
    I'll leave 'Cor-wrecked', Flawlessly without making errors;
    In a vacant era, Sur's claimin the title, flowin with force;
    While the closest Rich'll get to 'Arraign' is going to court;
    Noone supports this geek, but my style happens to rock;
    This is such child's play; Even Fakulty is jacking the box;
    You're graspin my crotch; Ya Islamic? ya breath I'll take;
    But nobody believes in Rich, since Cor-on a test of faith;
    Dissect his face, Sur's in First place, But this Nerd's gay;
    & 'puts' 'quotation' 'on' 'everything' 'not' 'just' 'wordplay';
    The herb claims 3 areas in location get this bitch a map;
    Then again...his home is the type with a hitch attached;
    Skip the crap; if You dropping flames, I'll massacre that;
    Sur-Ender? Nah, It's just what you'll do after the match;
    Your tactics are wack, I said 24 & He still drops a novel;
    Claim DC? must be the reason ya ain't notched a Marvel;
    He's lost his marbles & is balding; a hat ya fond to wear;
    Even the chip on his shoulder gets lost in the fallen hair;
    Mauled this square & angels are coming so go to church;
    He's fearing a brush with death, but a comb over worse;
    I'm Showing Purity next...Ya embracing Obscurity's text;
    Nig's trying to pay his dues, with social security checks;
    You're worried and vexed, old ass, steady your gimmick;
    I 'drop-heat'...ya SO old ya can 'drop-dead' any minute;
    Lemme just finish this off; the verse is the goon's proof;
    but his shit was so forced it was induced by prune juice;



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  7. Nu Sense

    Nu Sense .::Bay Areas Finest::.

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    Skip the crap; if You dropping flames, I'll massacre that;
    Sur-Ender? Nah, It's just what you'll do after the match;
    Your tactics are wack, I said 24 & He still drops a novel;
    Claim DC? must be the reason ya ain't notched a Marvel;
    ^^best lines i saw from sur 5ill

    shit was hot..sum parts were a bit Blah..
    but nice strucuture an ya verse is like
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    perfect is wut im tryna say..how do u structure it liek that..
    but good shit..
    from rich too.. if i battled u id come harder then wut sur5ill put down..
    shit was clean from u both..thought id see better tho at the Contendership match u cats are suppose to be the secobd best paiired up to battle..

    Vote...Sur 5 Ill
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  8. the fakulty

    the fakulty New Member

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    sur 5 ill was on point pretty much the whole way through
    a very good read...
    fakulty line, cor wrecked, marvel, sur ender...
    I liked alot of lines.

    richard your verse threw me off a little at some parts
    and the wording wasnt that great, some lines were a tad forced.
    paltorow line was my favorite. not many i liked thoa. decent verse

    sur took this with more witty concepts.
    good battle thoa.

    vote/sur*5*ill
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  9. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    vote=sur

    he just killed it.......he still has the best wordplay on the net, none of that forced bullshit u see from everyone else......that bayou line and those elder jokes gave you my vote.....originality is a beautiful thing, u got that down easy......rich your shit was tought and some of your concepts were dope but sur got this
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  10. Hal Jordan

    Hal Jordan One Hal of a Writer

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    vote = sur....nicer verse, felt it more.....


    Richard..hit me on aim,

    jusbIaze420


    holla
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  11. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    omg at richey core


    yall musta not seen some of the shit i saw in there.... sur man that was a fucking disgustingly nice verse, but RC is a beast with that one.


    vote - RC. too many hidden punches, inner bar multis, and ridiculous wordplay.
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  12. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    same thoughts


    i got corey winning this, that verse was crazy raw......sur came aight, but i got reeeeal bored 6 lines in.......


    corey made me say, sur got his hands full......sur made me say corey got a mouthful...of my verse cuz he ate it
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  13. Fatal Words

    Fatal Words .........

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    V- Corey

    He edged this barely, I liked both verses but Corey had dope wordplay..crazy shit. Sur came with laughs..so it was a hard decision but I got corey winnin this too.
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  14. PULITZER!

    PULITZER! That Dude

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    that equal line shit is fuckin pathetic
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  15. Da Vocal Hitman

    Da Vocal Hitman Nuck if ya buck

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    dizam when is Calefaction coming back????? Cuz this was a pretty weak title bout here.....although Sur took this by a mile or two, quite possibly more then that even, this battle in general still wasn't up to par with some of the more recent champ matches.

    just my 2 centz

    pZ!
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  16. Yuno Alwin

    Yuno Alwin ..as usual

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    how da fuck does this cat make his verse so damn symetrical? lol
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  17. K Dub G

    K Dub G New Member

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    i like the both sur and corey but imma give my vote to sur he had like a comical laugh when he spit like eminem and i like that
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  18. Jacent

    Jacent mister work

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    ^^^lol@his vote

    V/ Corey

    Corey...that shit was dope..i was feeling throughout the entire verse...wordplay was dope...a lot of hidden punches..thats all pretty much i can say..good shit

    Sur...i liked ur structure but like HV said..got pretty bored with that verse...even though there was some bright spots..but just not enough to take Corey's verse
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  19. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    okay, since I know we're not counting one-sided, one sentence votes

    4-3 my way...

    synthasis, I'll hit you sometime during the week, I'm in the library now...pz
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  20. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    neither had a style I really dig both a lot of skill ill lines incredible wordplay punches everything but I dont laugh or even smile doesnt even bring a funny image to mind...jus a lot of playin around with words and stuff... good shit equal bout...but I dugg corey more
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