#02 Tha Talent vs #15 Patriarch

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  1. Vern Acular

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  2. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    i don't rap to get a rep
    i got a rep because i rap
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  3. Gummo

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    friday by 12!? yikes

    but im checkin in
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  4. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    they say i'm a thorn in the side of society
    with no propriety
    so people act like something died in me
    as if my pride can be
    something that vanquished years ago
    as if i'm a failure at living
    as if my tears don't flow
    - all because i am homeless
    ...
    and let me tell you why i'm homeless
    let me tell you about a time when hope just
    bloomed from me...bounced into you
    i was a success story...
    ...not a sinful youth
    i would swim in truth
    i would dive in life
    but then it happened
    ...
    pregnancy was a bitch to me
    and as my stomach grew larger
    it only extended my misery
    ...i wish i had an abortion
    but my relgious convictions just ended up forcing my fortunes
    to turn...
    the tides shifted the day my water broke
    i got cold glances in church
    in school
    even at home
    ...my mother had always called me the angel of the family
    but now she couldn't stand me
    when i walked in she ran, she
    couldn't even look at her only daughter
    she couldn't even look at her granddaughter
    she called it a mistake
    of course it was
    the baby daddy's gone now
    scared, swore he come
    but he never did, he never saw her shining face
    he never saw her skin glistening like blinding rays
    from the sun...
    she was my sun...life revolved around her
    dropped out of school, slowly i evolved around her
    slowly i became her mother
    not just the woman that gave birth to her
    i found true worth in her
    there was no reason to be on this Earth but her
    ...
    death was a bitch to me
    cradling my baby daughter...watching her head bleed
    staring at my mother...watching her eyes scream
    ...i asked her what happened
    she said she didn't know
    i knew
    i chose not to tell her...but i knew
    and i knew that one day i'd find truth
    that one day God would explain to me what did i do
    but i had to leave...it was obvious i wasn't wanted.
    gave my baby daughter's lifeless body a kiss
    and went hunting
    for a job...
    ...anyone hiring an uneducated black girl?
    of course not
    so now i'm on the streets, shit i'm past real
    i'm past all the people that laughed at me
    i'm past all the family that proved they aren't family
    and i ain't into much of crimes, just a life
    so i'll sing my song for you all...just one time
    ...
    society is a thorn in my side
    i tried and they gave me no reason for pride
    i cried and they gave me a heckle, while scofting
    and it's gotten to the point where i can't afford my cup of coffee
    and i just want a penny for my thoughts...
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  5. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    So much for Pat..
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  6. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    Tha Talent - Advances to Round 2
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