#02 Tha Talent vs #15 Patriarch

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i don't rap to get a rep
i got a rep because i rap

friday by 12!? yikes

but im checkin in

they say i'm a thorn in the side of society
with no propriety
so people act like something died in me
as if my pride can be
something that vanquished years ago
as if i'm a failure at living
as if my tears don't flow
- all because i am homeless
...
and let me tell you why i'm homeless
let me tell you about a time when hope just
bloomed from me...bounced into you
i was a success story...
...not a sinful youth
i would swim in truth
i would dive in life
but then it happened
...
pregnancy was a bitch to me
and as my stomach grew larger
it only extended my misery
...i wish i had an abortion
but my relgious convictions just ended up forcing my fortunes
to turn...
the tides shifted the day my water broke
i got cold glances in church
in school
even at home
...my mother had always called me the angel of the family
but now she couldn't stand me
when i walked in she ran, she
couldn't even look at her only daughter
she couldn't even look at her granddaughter
she called it a mistake
of course it was
the baby daddy's gone now
scared, swore he come
but he never did, he never saw her shining face
he never saw her skin glistening like blinding rays
from the sun...
she was my sun...life revolved around her
dropped out of school, slowly i evolved around her
slowly i became her mother
not just the woman that gave birth to her
i found true worth in her
there was no reason to be on this Earth but her
...
death was a bitch to me
cradling my baby daughter...watching her head bleed
staring at my mother...watching her eyes scream
...i asked her what happened
she said she didn't know
i knew
i chose not to tell her...but i knew
and i knew that one day i'd find truth
that one day God would explain to me what did i do
but i had to leave...it was obvious i wasn't wanted.
gave my baby daughter's lifeless body a kiss
and went hunting
for a job...
...anyone hiring an uneducated black girl?
of course not
so now i'm on the streets, shit i'm past real
i'm past all the people that laughed at me
i'm past all the family that proved they aren't family
and i ain't into much of crimes, just a life
so i'll sing my song for you all...just one time
...
society is a thorn in my side
i tried and they gave me no reason for pride
i cried and they gave me a heckle, while scofting
and it's gotten to the point where i can't afford my cup of coffee
and i just want a penny for my thoughts...

So much for Pat..

Tha Talent - Advances to Round 2