Yeah, I just typed it all up and slapped a title on it. I wrote it because I've been here for a little time and I'm white...I feel so left out with...
I really liked this poem! I think it was great and from the heart, great write.
Through the Eyes of a White Man...yeah that's right.
This life seems stuck in automatic
Patience on "E" I'm estatic
The abuse unbarrable
That was a great poem UFO. That had to take some serious elbow grease from the heart. That was sweet. GREAT JOB BRO!!!!!!!!
keep working on your poems...they will get better with time. This is good though, just needs more depth and whatnot. Good job on tryin bro.
thanks for the props bro, I really apperciate the reply's from all of you.
Good job, I liked this piece.
why thank you sole.
Ever have a dream that you wish was true?
Ever feel like drinking when you were blue?
Have you ever done something you regret?
Who hasn't, not one...
Good poem man. I liked it alot, keep up the good writes.
This poem screams emotion from the depths of a soul, I loved this poem.
hrmmm...good job if it was your own writting.
good job. That must have taken some soul to write.
First: Good poem, I hear ya man, I've been there it hurts and the burden is heavy on your shoulders. Second: Give it to God to deal with, I learned...
Thank you for your reply's. I don't get why they stuck it at the bottom. Thanks for the uppty mind~$oul
I really digged this poem! It's full of so much power it's crazy. I think you did an awesome job and keep up the good work!
The moonlight is so captivating
The day passes, and my life is fading
Stuck in overdrive
How long will we be alive?
We choose a choice in what...
I thought it was very good. I think the poem expresses alot!
In this poem I saw a person with emotions bottled inside. The emotions spilled across the paper very nicely. I enjoyed the read.
Your words scream help from the depths of your soul. I hear your crying plea. Good job with the write.
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