not sure if no-showing signs me out, but sign me back in please
just tailor your verse so the rhymes pop more because people are too lazy to find them sometimes if you rhyme in an unorthodox fashion.
The caliber of writing delivered is in a different class. Pent is more polished obviously. Wording is smooth and clear, just a more appealing read....
so what I gather from this blather is shadow masterbates in a relaxed state while watching tac sate his appetite with a hefty plate of stacked dicks...
had a falling out with my lady sunday
spent all week writing a letter to salvage the relationship
last night she called me to talk things out....
My mood ring reads dark blue
I was ‘special’ she said, she just needed to wrap me
That Idea is dope to me, I could write a story just off that.
Neo believes Matrix moment.
Last half of the final paragraph
sprints to a finish
leaving you... a bit breatheless
Pats on the back for good effort doesn't birth stars.
When the booing gets to a certain level at the Apollo the performer is unceremoniously yanked...
Some good ones here... some cliche...
Try these out:
K ill J ake and J ason A nthony
I hate Police to Death
and Jason's just an ant to me.
But since I'm flipping names
Separate names with a comma.